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  • Thought that this board could use a bit more attention and decided to throw in a couple of my own characters. I'm not really finished writing up her back story, but I wanted to see what others thought of the direction that Checkers the Husky was going so far.

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    • I'll take a look at her page when I have the time. uwu

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    • I'm not going to drop in a full on critique (mostly because I suck at this kind of stuff), but I feel obliged to give my opinion since she was my character at one point. Despite all the jokes you make, I'm honestly really happy that you took her in. I didn't develop her very far, yet you did an amazing job. She's become much more unique thanks to you, and can we please just talk about how she got her nickname?? That's seriously adorable and at the same time it makes sense. Checkers was just a generic character but holy crap I'm so happy with all the ideas you've come up with for her, plus you have fantastic writing skills that I'm always jealous about.

      Though I do have to point out--I think she actually needs a legit reason as to why she has a scythe. I realize she's no longer a fighter, but I believe she really needs an actual reason. The scythe can even be fake, I don't know.

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    • HauntedPhantom wrote:
      I'm not going to drop in a full on critique (mostly because I suck at this kind of stuff), but I feel obliged to give my opinion since she was my character at one point. Despite all the jokes you make, I'm honestly really happy that you took her in. I didn't develop her very far, yet you did an amazing job. She's become much more unique thanks to you, and can we please just talk about how she got her nickname?? That's seriously adorable and at the same time it makes sense. Checkers was just a generic character but holy crap I'm so happy with all the ideas you've come up with for her, plus you have fantastic writing skills that I'm always jealous about.

      Though I do have to point out--I think she actually needs a legit reason as to why she has a scythe. I realize she's no longer a fighter, but I believe she really needs an actual reason. The scythe can even be fake, I don't know.

      Thanks, Starz. Also, what scythe? Corn Dog ate it.

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    • There is honestly no excuse for my lateness here.

      Okay, so since I think the main thing you've been working on here is her backstory, I'll address that:

      • First, I see one tiny little grammatical error in the first paragraph. "not longer after", that should just be "not long after." Nothing serious but I always have a habit of picking apart grammar mistakes.
      • The way she got her nickname is absolutely adorable and pretty meaningful. Cookie points for you here.
      • I do find it interesting that her biological parents want her back, although it makes a lot of sense taking the beginning of the story into consideration.

      In short, not bad at all so far. I'm very interested to see what happens next, and again I am so freaking sorry taking so long with this. qq

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