Critiques[]
(Critiques would be appreciated)
It seems like a lot of effort was put into this character, and it worked. Minus the pokemon/magical-girl bits, this feels like an actual person I could actually go out into the world and meet, at least to me. And with the aforementioned pokemon/magic elements, I can see possibilities for character development involving her becoming too powerful for her own good. The idea of her being tomboyish/raunchy gives this character a bit of personality to her that I haven't seen that often in fan-characters. For art that used bases, it looks really good. The whole "portrayed as fat by others" bit reminds me of Jane Crocker from Homestuck. The only things I find a bit off are the "flirting" idea and that there just isn't enough substance for this character to be put any higher, but hey, that's just my opinion, and what do I know about characters like this amirite I never made one. 8.7/10 well done.(As a side-note, I legitimately want to know what her wish was and how she met Nuubey and the others who contracted with it) File:Trozeiani206.gif But even the word 'Hopeless' has 'Hope' in it! And if you rearrange the letters, it spells peeslosH!. File:HattyMcHattingtonDance.gif 01:18, March 3, 2014 (UTC)
Time to review the bunny.
Appearance - I was originally going to complain that her ears are nearly as large as she is, but then I looked up a picture of an actual lopunny and the sizing is pretty close, so nevermind on that. The only suggestion I would make is possibly changing her eye color to contrast from the portion of her ears that are close to the same color and her shirt.
History - I think the fact that she's a Pokemon actually works well with this story. As Pokemon seem to be prone to fighting, it makes sense that she has that tendency as well. My suggestion is to maybe talk more about her "foster mother" or how she got into the foster home (maybe what happened to her original parents). Also, it doesn't really touch on her becoming a magical girl (though I'm assuming that is what the "One Wish" section is for and you're working on that).
Personality - Well, her personality seems pretty fleshed out. I can't really think of any suggestions for this section, which means you did a pretty good job writing it.
Powers - Too be honest, I'm really questionable about her magical girl powers. It just feels...out of place. I would suggest getting rid of them, but that's completely up to you. Other than that, her powers are fine and work well for her.
Conclusion - She's a pretty well written character. There is nothing truly negative to say about her. All that there is to do really is to expand on her history. 
Has anyone seen my bucket? 04:59, March 5, 2014 (UTC)
Re:Abilities- I have undergone the the prossess of scrapping most of her abilites, as I am moving away from the "stage magic" theme, and just makeing her more like a phantom theif.♪Food, Glorious Food ♪ 
♪Chips, Burgers and Chicken ♪
Comments[]
Awesome picture ^V^! N X Hilda 
03:21, August 18, 2012 (UTC)
Im glad you liked it, I wasnt to satisfied with the hand drawn version.
Welcome to the Bunny Club, now how about a pokemon battle? 
03:46, August 18, 2012 (UTC)
I like her appearance. I've never seen like this one before. She's so cool and pretty. Awesome! Oh, nice user name change. :) --Watch out! I'm a huge Sonic fan! 19:30, August 18, 2012 (UTC)
Dou itashimashite^^, the idea was to turn lopunny's "eyebrows" into bangs.Welcome to the Bunny Club, now how about a pokemon battle? 19:36, August 18, 2012 (UTC)
Oh My God!!! She looks like a skanky whore!!!!216.79.147.192 19:00, September 13, 2012 (UTC)
Um, how is she a whore? Shes not showing anthing shes not suposed to be.Welcome to the Bunny Club, now how about a pokemon battle? 22:06, September 13, 2012 (UTC)
She doesn't look like one. The anon was just being a troll. Cause I'm a ninja, that's why. 22:10, September 13, 2012 (UTC)
I hate trolls. THEY SUCK! >:(
Also, I like your character. She's cute, and funny. YoungOtakuNerd (talk) 01:20, October 25, 2012 (UTC)
ThanksWelcome to the Bunny Club, now how about a pokemon battle? 01:25, October 25, 2012 (UTC)
Looks professional. Frozen Scorpio (talk) 04:32, February 7, 2013 (UTC)
Awwww~ <3 I love Lopunny and Nudge is so cute x3 I think she's awesome! ;D Absol, do you like cake? 
19:38, March 3, 2013 (UTC)
Thank you.~Food, Glorious Food!Chips, Burgers and Chicken! 20:08, March 3, 2013 (UTC)
Your welcome. ^-^ Absol, do you like cake? 20:27, March 3, 2013 (UTC)
Yeah, I never really intended for her to be "cute".♪Food, Glorious Food ♪ ♪Chips, Burgers and Chicken ♪
This character is horribly discusting, In fact, I agree with that user you called a "troll", This character DOES look like a scamp, she's not even trying to to be decent. Not to mention that it's a three-way crossover, we call that is unoriginality. Not only is it a blatant racial stereotype, but it actually looks like the creator is trying to make it discusting. If you highlight the text under likes and the white space under abilities, you can see hidden vulgar content. This must be deleted IMEADIATLY!!!208.14.248.59
Um, sorry?♪Food, Glorious Food ♪ ♪Chips, Burgers and Chicken ♪ 01:50, May 28, 2013 (UTC)
That anon put that stuff there, I just know it..... 24.58.83.171 01:59, May 28, 2013 (UTC)
He did. Power or Humanity? 02:08, May 28, 2013 (UTC)
What anon? I was gone for three days♪Food, Glorious Food ♪ ♪Chips, Burgers and Chicken ♪ 02:15, May 28, 2013 (UTC)
The first two. Not me. 24.58.83.171 02:31, May 28, 2013 (UTC)
Oh, i see that♪Food, Glorious Food ♪ ♪Chips, Burgers and Chicken ♪ 02:39, May 28, 2013 (UTC)
nice char 1+ couch potato to the extreme! (talk) 14:45, May 30, 2013 (UTC)
Good character, in terms of page and content. Unlike some of the people who posted (the trolls), I don't think she dresses inappropriately. I have to wonder how she would feel about Static Nega in the Blitz Pit World Tournament ? I guess we'll have to wait for the fight to find out.
Once again, I think she's an intersting character. Can't spell distraction without action! (talk) 19:18, June 30, 2013 (UTC)
I fail to see her connection with the Sonic Franchise. I think she's better off in a Pokemon Wiki rather than here, but that's just my opinion. Chamesthehero (talk) 23:46, August 21, 2013 (UTC)
Um, how about the fact that she is MOBIAN and lives on MOBIUS!♪Food, Glorious Food ♪ ♪Chips, Burgers and Chicken ♪ 23:49, August 21, 2013 (UTC)
Ah, I see. Well, it's not much to be honest, since judging by her appearence she looks like a Pokémon instead of a regular Mobian, but it is still something. Thanks for your time. Chamesthehero (talk) 23:56, August 21, 2013 (UTC)
She is a Mobianized Pokemon, after all.-- - POWER TO THE SOVIET PURPLE HEN - 
00:54, August 22, 2013 (UTC)
I'm fully aware of that. Chamesthehero (talk) 00:57, August 22, 2013 (UTC)
I like her, unlike the trolls on here, and Chames, there's a section on here for mobianized Pokemon, you do know that, right? I like pie, you know why? It's pie flavored (talk) 18:59, August 31, 2013 (UTC)
I guess Chames only likes incredibly overused specieses, like hedgehogs and echidnas.♪Food, Glorious Food ♪ ♪Chips, Burgers and Chicken ♪ 19:02, August 31, 2013 (UTC)
I really like the mobianized pokemon. Also, that's why my fursona (Dragonsona) is a dragon. I like pie, you know why? It's pie flavored (talk) 19:09, August 31, 2013 (UTC)
On account of user:Puella returning, I have decided to draw this character.
consider it fanart
File:Cactus gunman thing for my signature.gif ♏There's nothing girly about the Dark Magician Girl. AND ONLY REAL MEN USE WATAPON!♏ File:HattyMcHattingtonDance.gif File:Chohakkaimon by digimongif-d6g0ttr.gif 23:19, October 16, 2014 (UTC)
It took me a while to notice this, but how would Cute Charm work here? Does someone just punch her then suddenly develop a huge lust for her or what? File:Tumblr n0fomlkRmY1s1steqo1 500.gif ♏There's nothing girly about the Dark Magician Girl. AND ONLY REAL MEN USE WATAPON!♏ File:HattyMcHattingtonDance.gif File:Chohakkaimon by digimongif-d6g0ttr.gif 05:54, December 9, 2014 (UTC)
Actually, I never gave it much thought, beacause lopunny's other ability is klutz, and that would NOT work with her character, so cute charm was the only other option. 
Riolozhikaik terrasu,Vu ozhika vesh'lafot
15:28, December 9, 2014 (UTC)
Bunny wearing a top hat!
Seriously, what the heck is this? I actually want a detailed explanation of what this is. Notcreepypasta (talk) 04:55, January 30, 2015 (UTC)
Um, she was originally based on around stage magicians but is now more of a phantom thief, also its only in her magical girl atire.Riolozhikaik terrasu,Vu ozhika vesh'lafot 06:19, January 30, 2015 (UTC)