That's an example for grammar, mainly. Even I couldn't understand what I wrote in the don't. Here's another example, this time for descriptiveness.
Don't: Smash: Spirit Blast.
Lightning, his twin brother, glanced up rainbow colored meteorite. "I dunno..if I didn't know better, I'd say it was. But isn't this just..wait..hold up..." He squinted at the meteor, trying to look as closely as he could. His eyes gradually widened as he realized; yes, it ''was'' coming towards them. "Guys..MOVE!" He yelled. Startled, all four of them scrambled out of the way. The meteor crashed into the platform, completely going through it and tearing up even more pieces of the wooden walkway above the water. The meteor and the entire platform they had been standing on, as well as an unfortunate fishing boat, had all sank down to the bottom of the sea. Standing a safe distance away, the brothers looked at the big mess where they had once been standing. They were left completely speechless. "...I think we should get on dry land." Electric finally suggested. Silently agreeing, the group moved off the docks quickly.
In the forest, The cat approached the crater in the center of the clearing. She began having memories of that one day a mysterious emerald had crash landed in the same way. That same crater was still there, and this one was almost just as deep. Looking inside, she was shocked to find a meteorite. It hummed softly, and was still glowing slightly. "What on earth...?" She asked herself. She glanced up into the sky, and saw through the trees, many more meteorites falling from the sky. "This is..." She didn't finish. She stared into the sky, wondering what was going on.
(The bracelets start to mystically glow seven colors and an oversurge of power was sent to their wielders)
the dragon glows white and dissapears and the hedgehog grows wings claws and scales other than on his face*
(All efforts to minimize the pain were thwarted and in result the pain got worse for EVERYONE and the bracelets started to get hotter and hotter)
(At the dock Lightning and his brother's bracelets started to pull the water near them and cause a large wave to come near them and the bracelet with Smash collected the air like a vacuum then the air shot out making his motorcycle move faster than usual)
Robots:Then we'll have to just kill you. (Charges large beams of energy)
"Kill him!?" Lien-DOS shrieked in utter surprise and disgust. "That is horrible!" While saying this she slowly attempted to move closer to the robots, careful to stay out of the line of their fire. But due to the size of the beams she wasn't able to get close too fast.
(One of the robots grabs her neck and starts to choke her)
As soon as Smash and Gizmo made it to the living room, A bunch of robots burst into the house by melting the walls and doors with flamethrowers. Gizmo's eyes nearly bulged out of his head. "AAHHH!! WHAT HAVE YOU '''''DONE'''''!?!?" He screamed at the top of his lungs.
Pearl tugged at her hair from both sides of her head. "While we've wasted time here, who knows what's going on in the city?"