Well this certainly has potential. This could be a great roleplay even, if played properly. Not only will I join, but I'd like to invite my two younger brothers to this RP as well.


Also, I see that you based a lot of your rules off of my guide on Sonic Blitz. =P ~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 06:04, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. I hope you didn't mind me basing the rules off your guide. They're good rules and I wanted to see if good rules could make a good roleplay. Also this way it can be a free join and not end up a catastrophe. Sonicfan919 06:22, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

I don't mind at all. I'm happy to see someone using them. I hope they work out. I'll be helping to enforce them myself.~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 06:30, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. Sonicfan919 06:38, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Can i join

Is it just me, or does this plot sound a lot like Sonic Riders: ZeroG? Regardless, I think I might join this one, just to get my lesser used characters some action. My function is not my purpose. My purpose is to complete my function. ~Xi 19:39, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'm reluctant to let you join, Mason, even though this isn't even my RP. I hear you have a bit of a history with bad roleplays, and I'm not expecting a sudden change of pace here.~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 19:43, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Also why would you ask to join and THEN sign your name before you've been accepted?~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 19:44, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

E-113 and Smash can join but Mason, weren't you the one who made the highschool roleplay? If so then no,you can't join at the moment. 99.88.84.147 19:46, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, that was me. I was also the one who just did the SFX Sonicfan919 19:47, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, That was indeed Mason's doing.


Also, like E-113 said, I'm taking this chance to get some of my lesser used characters into the spotlight. Namely Thunder and his brothers.~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 19:52, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

May I please join this?"I watch you from nowhere, You see nothing but mystery, "I hide in plain sight. The General of the Greatest Uknown Army, never to be known but known by all." 19:54, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

May i join please?Dayton the hedgehog 19:57, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Okay so Mason no, just no. Stay away from this roleplay. Oh, but pleaase vote on the awards blog.

Gale, I'm a little neutral about you in the Quest for the Galactic rings Gale wasn't about to give his ring away and the only reason we got it was because he gave it away but fine I guess.


@New user:I'm taking it this is your first roleplay so go ahead, enjoy your first experiance. Sonicfan919 20:10, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry. <=("I watch you from nowhere, You see nothing but mystery, "I hide in plain sight. The General of the Greatest Uknown Army, never to be known but known by all." 20:12, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

It's okay, like I said you can join. Sonicfan919 20:13, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Just so you know, I'll be watching all of you. I don't want this roleplay getting out of hand, so be sure to follow the rules! ~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 20:19, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

What the heck? Why did Alasdair randomly say here we go? Is he Mario or something? I would think he would be more alarmed or something. Sonicfan919 20:19, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, that edit conflict confused me. =/ ~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 20:24, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Umm when do i joinDayton the hedgehog 20:32, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Just find a legitimate time to join in. I'd suggest starting with your characters' reaction to the meteors crashing.~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 20:34, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'm somewhat amused at the differences in our entrances. My writing makes it look like the roleplay's gotten a pretty big start, and has started to progress within the story, but I only just introduced my characters. Maybe this is why I run into so many edit conflicts.~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 20:46, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, you know I just realized that I should definitely add Gizmo, as he would most likely be the one to inform my group of the meteors power.~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 20:52, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

given that three character have a demon weapon, is it ok if i speak the weapons from time to time? 'Fear my Undead army or become their lunch! Your choice really. 20:56, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Sure. Lemme' guess the three a Droget, Krinkinko and Alasdair right? Sonicfan919 20:59, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

aye that be them. i'll try keep to the rules if i do.

Oh, and guys I want you to edit your posts to make the characters more realistic and not just say one word.


Seriously if a meteor were crashing near them who would just say..Oh no. Sonicfan919 21:02, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Any problems so far Smash? Sonicfan919 21:33, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I don't understand what happened after my last edit. Specifically, this:

Dayton-driving car-Anyone out here

Alasdair: Here. Over here.

Dayton:Dude get in

Alasdair: *gets in the car* Chaos City.

Dayton:we need to got some other Survivors first


The main thing I don't understand is the whole Survivors thing. What is he talking about? This isn't some sort of apocolypse or anything. ~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 21:37, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

EDIT: Lol, I see we both caught onto the same thing at the same time. Nice.~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 21:37, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, that's more or less word for word what I said. Sonicfan919 21:41, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I know, right? XD~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 21:44, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

hey guys i know it's a little late but can i join this RP? i haven't donw one in ages--Find the Life Flame, There you will find my Destiny. 23:14, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

It's not really late. The RP's just started.~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 23:13, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

cool thx ^-^--Find the Life Flame, There you will find my Destiny. 23:14, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not really in charge here, though, so wait for Sonicfan's approval.~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 23:15, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Use proper grammer and your in. Sonicfan919 23:23, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Is this a free Join? If so, you know what I'm going to ask HS664 Do you feel the Chaos?! 23:24, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Okay guys I'm back you can start again now. Sonicfan919 23:24, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

No it's not a free join. H664 I'm not sure if I should let you in or not. Sonicfan919 23:25, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

SHADOW! Use proper grammer and punctuation! Sonicfan919 23:26, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

i never RP without good Grammer--Find the Life Flame, There you will find my Destiny. 23:26, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Oh really than how come that "I" in the beginning of your sentence wasn't capitalized and why don't you use periods? Sonicfan919 23:29, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I don't mind much. See ya round. HS664Do you feel the Chaos?! 23:30, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can I join this? I told you! I told you! Itoldyouitoldyou.png 23:49, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I remember you saying you weren't sure about letting me join. If you do come to a decision tell me. HS664 Do you feel the Chaos?! 23:56, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

iv got quite interested so imma gonna ask can i join. 'Fear my Undead army or become their lunch! Your choice really. 00:07, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Only if you use proper grammer and punctuation which you just didn't. Sonicfan919 00:09, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Does that mean I can join, since I did use proper grammar? I told you! I told you! Itoldyouitoldyou.png 00:11, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry my good man, i'm quite capable of that. 'My Shadow Forge is powered by Dark Matter. 00:13, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah I guess you can join just follow the rules and don't randonly appear. Also be sure to be descriptive. Sonicfan919 00:24, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Who deleted my post, and why? (Frozen scorp)

Because you need to ASK to join! Sonicfan919 02:01, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Okay guys before we start part 2 let's give or feedback on part one. Sonicfan919 02:03, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

hey guys gotta goto bed so can you pause it please?--Find the Life Flame, There you will find my Destiny. 02:09, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

May I join this? (frozen scorp)

Okay like I said we need to voice our opinions on part one before we start part two. I'll go first.


We had a few slip ups like the whole apocalypse thing and bad punctuation and grammer but overall I think we did pretty good. Sonicfan919 03:17, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Anyone? Sonicfan919 04:37, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

To be honest, The only parts that REALLY made sense were yours and mine. Alasdair was acceptable, The Black Hedgehog was..I dunno, I was kinda iffy about it. And Dayton randomly got a car. I don't know where or why. Put more description in your posts, people! You make it confusing with your one-liners! Do you see the MASSIVE difference between your parts and mine? I removed my parts just to see the length, and my parts take up roughly 65% of the whole chapter. I take the time to explain what is going on with my characters, meanwhile you guys just have one line. One sentence per edit. You guys need to take the time to describe what you're doing, like I did. At the very least work like Sonicfan.~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 04:38, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Okay I see where your going with this we need to be more descriptive. In the next chapter I hope this improves and I'm letting Dayton off easy since this is his first time. Sonicfan919 04:42, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I suppose it is. But still, try to work with us here. If you really need an example, then here.

Also Alasdair was godmodding because htrough ALL that pain he was just shrugging it off. Sonicfan919 05:00, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

So should I delete his part or simply modify it? Sonicfan919 05:04, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Example of descriptive roleplaying

Here's an example of Do's, Don'ts, and preferred. I know some of you like script format, but I'd prefer if you used story format like me.

Don't: Sonic: i leik chlidawgs, lulz *gobles 10235t343830850 hcildiogs** *burqs lowdly adn maeks a durr faec*

Do: Sonic: I like Chili dogs, haha. *takes a mouthful of his chili dog, and swallows.* Mm-*burps* Oh, excuse me.

Preferred:

Sonic gave his friend an amused grin. "I like Chili dogs." He assured with a hearty laugh. He took a mouthful of his chilidog, munching happily on it for a few moments before swallowing. "Mmm-" He suddenly let out a loud burp. With a sheepish grin, he scratched the back of his head. "Oh, Excuse me."

That's an example for grammar, mainly. Even I couldn't understand what I wrote in the don't. Here's another example, this time for descriptiveness.


Don't: Smash: Spirit Blast.

Do: Smash: Spirit Blast! *throws a punch towards so&so in slow motion, but then breaks out into a high speed seconds before impact, causing a bright flash and powerful knock-back if it hit.*

Preferred: Smash concentrated most of his energy into his next attack, and threw a punch towards Mr. Target's face. He began moving in slow motion, glowing brightly as he was leaving a trail of afterimages. Suddenly he broke out into his normal speed and delivered the blow. A bright flash would occur, blowing the target back if it were successful. "That's...what I call a Spirit Blast."

You see how much better informed people can be if you just describe what it is you're doing? It's not that hard, really. ~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 04:47, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Oh right, I forgot about that. That's not acceptable, then.~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 05:02, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Tell him first. Also don't worry about posting down here. It's easier this way.~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 05:05, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

So should we start part two? Sonicfan919 05:10, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I suppose we could.~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 10:20, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

so script style is acceptable and story style is prefferred. im not very good at story style. 'My Shadow Forge is powered by Dark Matter. 10:31, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

alright i get it....--Find the Life Flame, There you will find my Destiny. 11:39, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

is it too late to join? Shinobi Path--The first of the Six 12:59, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

(*Facepalm* I can't believe I didn't notice that "no canon characters" thing. I'm sorry! Anyway I'll be doing story format because honestly, this is the first site I've ever been on that even does script format. I told you! I told you! Itoldyouitoldyou.png 14:15, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

No Numbuh. It's not too late to join you and Marx can both join. Sonicfan919 16:21, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

How on Mobius did you come up with this Idea? Good Luck on this becoming a good Roleplay. HS664 Do you feel the Chaos?! 16:35, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

im gonna add a couple of villains. should I state their purpose on the RP? Shinobi Path--The first of the Six 16:36, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

@H664:..........


@Numbuh:Yes. Sonicfan919 16:38, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I added Snap! Shinobi Path--The first of the Six 16:52, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm...should I add Jonik? Sonicfan919 16:53, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

that's what i was hoping for Shinobi Path--The first of the Six 16:55, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Okay,I'll add him. Sonicfan919 16:56, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Well, this has been moving pretty fast. Hopefully I didn't miss much. My function is not my purpose. My purpose is to complete my function. ~Xi 17:09, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Nope, you didn't miss much just read part 1 to find out what's goin' on. Sonicfan919 17:35, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Smash is it alright if I put your preferred and incorrect format in the rules? Sonicfan919 19:50, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Be my guest. I'd be glad if you did.~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 19:53, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

So far so good. Sonicfan919 20:24, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I really hope I'm not annoying you but can I please join? I'm sorry but the tension is driving mad. HS664 Do you feel the Chaos?! 20:29, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, Marx your doing just fine but the others. Dayton you need to be more descriptive and not just put one word and the others you guys need to use capital letters and punctuation! Sonicfan919 20:49, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

What?"I watch you from nowhere, You see nothing but mystery, "I hide in plain sight. The General of the Greatest Uknown Army, never to be known but known by all." 20:50, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

im failing in the punctuation bit i think, i know im using capitals. Forge master Shadow-Flare 20:55, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Your not right now! Sonicfan919 20:57, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

But I do. <=("I watch you from nowhere, You see nothing but mystery, "I hide in plain sight. The General of the Greatest Uknown Army, never to be known but known by all." 20:58, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

sorry. i tend not to use capitals on a talkpage. Forge master Shadow-Flare 21:07, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Any ways we should wait for Smash he shouldn'tget left behind. Sonicfan919 21:08, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

That I understand."I watch you from nowhere, You see nothing but mystery, "I hide in plain sight. The General of the Greatest Uknown Army, never to be known but known by all." 21:09, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry that took so long.~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 22:06, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

It's okay. Take all the time you need. Sonicfan919 22:14, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Please see last comment under my name. HS664 Do you feel the Chaos?! 23:56, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I read it I'm just not sure if you should be in this remember Roleplay:Crystal Madness? Sonicfan919 23:58, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I can't say I remember. Please Refresh my memory. I can't remember much.

Just look on the talkpage oh and if you decide to read the actual roleplay then go in the history because they deleted your parts. Sonicfan919 00:05, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

That and in the Battle for Ultimate Soul Caliber, both times you tried to twist and alter the plot because of a convenient plot trinket that would have skipped out on an entire chapter/destroyed an entire plot related problem which they needed to solve otherwise. Not to mention in Crystal Madness you not only tried to skip out on a chapter, but you tried to replace it with your own, trying to get the group to leave Moon Ridge zone and go save some town that was under attack. ~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 00:08, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

So yeah,I'm really sorry H664 maybe next time. Also Smash it's your turn on this it might be a little hard to find your part but you can use word finder. Sonicfan919 00:15, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Oh.......I really can't say my words about that correctly.........Except that It will never happen again. I've also gained some roleplaying skills in that time. Gosh...... HS664 Do you feel the Chaos?! 00:18, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I know. I'm already working on my next part. I'm also glad to see that people are beginning to improve here. A little rule enforcing goes a long way.~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 00:22, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry that was me. The rise of the nine hundred and nineteenth Sonicfan 18:51, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

May I join? (Frozen Scorp)

Excuse me, but were you even allowed into this RP?~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 19:58, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Can I join,I won't add Cold?._.~Tailsman67~

Listen, Tailsman. If there is a reason why we would say no to you it is not because of your character. It's your roleplaying skills. It wouldn't matter if you used Cold or not, it wouldn't make much of a difference if your skills are not up to standards. Sonicfan and I are enforcing some strict rules here, so unless you plan to shape up, I can't say he'll let you in. Ultimately it's his decision, though, so wait for him to get on.~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 01:21, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

And for once, I'm waiting on everyone else to continue, rather than everyone waiting on me.~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 01:00, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

I had been waiting for the robots to do something. I told you! I told you! Itoldyouitoldyou.png 01:36, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

I'm mainly waiting for Dayton to finish his part and Sonicfan to come in and help continue (And confirm if that other guy who just jumped in was authorized.) ~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 01:47, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry Talisman, maybe next time. The rise of the nine hundred and nineteenth Sonicfan 20:12, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Dead already? The rise of the nine hundred and nineteenth Sonicfan 20:41, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry 'bout that. I'll try to continue soon.~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 23:32, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

I'm thinking about joining... Perhaps you could look over my character to see if i fit this quota?


Can't believe it's dead. ......... 07:03, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, I stopped getting notifications a long time ago. I was kinda overwhelmed by the amount of RP's that I'm in. (and kinda still am. ;_; ) ~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 08:09, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

It's okay. On several ocassions I participate in about three roleplays and about two talkplays all at the same time. It's very hard to get to them all (well..not really since most of the people I RP with post a million messages on my talk page saying "your turn...your turn...are you there?"). ......... 08:17, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Revival

So, anyone want to re-join? ......... 02:04, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

I guess I could. But I've been lagging behind in all my RP's but Down Under, so I dunno how active I'll be here.~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 02:06, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Wow, this seemed like such a great idea but only made it this far . HS664:That's not your vision splitting vertically, I just sliced you in half. 20:22, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Well, it kinda died for a few months, but Sonicfan wanted to revive it last week or so. So..yeah.~Smash The Echidna~ Smash_life.png 20:24, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Well, I just got back from Hades my boarding school 2 saturdays ago, so what a coincedence.... HS664:That's not your vision splitting vertically, I just sliced you in half. 20:27, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Since it's been a while and you might have matured, I'm letting you join this roleplay HS664. ......... 22:45, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

i may have to join in later as you did want to use Oerbas right? Forge master Shadow-Flare 23:13, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

If you have time to add me, it will be most efficient in a few hours 98.110.195.24 21:02, August 3, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, the above is mine HS664:That's not your vision splitting vertically, I just sliced you in half. 21:03, August 3, 2012 (UTC)

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