I am sorry, but since I’m mostly inactive, I’ve stopped giving critique on this wiki. Also, I kinda find asking everyone to give critique a bit...irritating is a good way to put it. I don’t want to mean any harm by this but...I think it’s usually good to ask one or two people for an opinion on something, rather than everyone. Thanks!
I know that the Ominous from Sonic Overload (Or "Bad" Ominous) wasn't that redeemable, but what about the "Anti-villain" Ominous (Or the one that I've already wrote a sympathetic personality for)? Do you think he should be redeem or not, and if so, why or why not? What do you think would be a fitting punishment for him if he shouldn't be redeemed? Thanks for the reply if you wanted to or already did, sorry if I bothered or upset anyone, and have a great day.
This will be what my anti-villain Ominous' new plan would be if he ever reappeared in another game, show, or any new entry or media. I hope you enjoy.
[Ominous' new plan for his goal to get rid of all of the evil and conflict in the omniverse and beyond for good is to find a way to create a machine that instantly changes the morality and conflict of everything for the good of everyone in a painless, harmless, ray of light that brings no harm to others without drawing any attention to himself or without anybody getting involved or noticing. He will try to do this in secret without doing anything that a villain (or anti-villain) usually does that draws attention to the plan or makes others upset. This include no taunting, insulting, gloating, capturing, stealing, hurting, killing, conquering, destroying, manipulating, lying, tricking, using, name-calling, etc, as it would be wrong and go against both his moral principles and overall plan. If he has minions who don't want to cooperate due to either fear, skeptism, or doubt, he will be fair and either go along with them or do it himself so that everyone is happy. He might need to do it at night if he is easily exposed during the day. He will also try to make sure that nobody will find out if spotted without lying, manipulating, hurting, destroying, etc. If he is found out and is demanded to turn off the machine, then he will. If he doesn't like the way things are going if this plan succeeds or if everyone isn't fond by its effects or results, he will turn it off immediately. His plan isn't about conquering, corrupting, or destroying anything, nor is it about hurting anybody; it's about trying to change everything for the better of everyone, including himself. In summary; his plan involves changing everything without anyone even knowing or getting involved.]
What do you think of Ominous' new plan? Does it have any flaws that he should rectify? Thanks for commenting and have a great day.
Hey, Speedy. How are you? Sorry to ask this of you if you're busy or if I’m asking for so much, but can you help with song lyrics for Ominous' song “Can't Take It Anymore” if you want to. Thanks and sorry if you're busy.
I need help writing my own lyrics for Ominous that are good, fit well in a good Sonic song, and represents his personality and abilities, as well as his view on literally everything in existence, including himself.
Well, I could certainly use your feedback for my oc, Raven the Cyberhog on the Sonic Fan Characters Wiki. I have also created a blig post there regarding , what I feel at least, is the best way to critique them. That's just in case you'd like to know my personal preference to Constructive Criticism.
That's fine. Take as much time as you need. Though since the link wasnt exactly helpful, thw blog basically said to separate your feedback based on topics (Appearance, Personality, etc.) Say what you like or dont like about them, And then a collective score out of 10.
Also, please do bring in some tips to improve any of the topics if you can. Any feed feedback you provide and tips will always be appreciated.