First thing I'm noticing is his power having no limit. You should finish the section, because being able to control people's emotions should theoretically allow someone to take over the planet with ease.
Also, something else - when you're making Ominous' past, it makes me wonder why no one in his early life was a decent human being. Why were his parents abusive? Why didn't students help him? It just makes me wonder. Plus, why is he in trouble, but everything the bullies did before doesn't make them criminals? I like his motive, but these are the main issues I'm finding.
First, His backstory was made this way in order to give him a justified reason to think that everyone in the omniverse and beyond, including himself, was evil or had evil in them that needed to be rectified.
And second, can you give me some suggestions on how to limit his powers to control not just emotions, but morality and intentions? Also what do you mean by motive?
He, judging from his quotes, can act like a child when his ideals are not believed. This leads me to believe that he's really coming with his plan to hide the truth - he's just really guilty about doing what he did the kid.
I have the same opinion on his personality as I do his motive.
I know that the Ominous from Sonic Overload (Or "Bad" Ominous) wasn't that redeemable, but what about the "Anti-villain" Ominous (Or the one that I've already wrote a sympathetic personality for)? Do you think he should be redeem or not, and if so, why or why not? What do you think would be a fitting punishment for him if he shouldn't be redeemed? Thanks for the reply if you wanted to or already did, sorry if I bothered or upset anyone, and have a great day.
This will be what my anti-villain Ominous' new plan would be if he ever reappeared in another game, show, or any new entry or media. I hope you enjoy.
[Ominous' new plan for his goal to get rid of all of the evil and conflict in the omniverse and beyond for good is to find a way to create a machine that instantly changes the morality and conflict of everything for the good of everyone in a painless, harmless, ray of light that brings no harm to others without drawing any attention to himself or without anybody getting involved or noticing. He will try to do this in secret without doing anything that a villain (or anti-villain) usually does that draws attention to the plan or makes others upset. This include no taunting, insulting, gloating, capturing, stealing, hurting, killing, conquering, destroying, manipulating, lying, tricking, using, name-calling, etc, as it would be wrong and go against both his moral principles and overall plan. If he has minions who don't want to cooperate due to either fear, skeptism, or doubt, he will be fair and either go along with them or do it himself so that everyone is happy. He might need to do it at night if he is easily exposed during the day. He will also try to make sure that nobody will find out if spotted without lying, manipulating, hurting, destroying, etc. If he is found out and is demanded to turn off the machine, then he will. If he doesn't like the way things are going if this plan succeeds or if everyone isn't fond by its effects or results, he will turn it off immediately. His plan isn't about conquering, corrupting, or destroying anything, nor is it about hurting anybody; it's about trying to change everything for the better of everyone, including himself. In summary; his plan involves changing everything without anyone even knowing or getting involved.]
What do you think of Ominous' new plan? Does it have any flaws that he should rectify? Thanks for commenting and have a great day.