Ominous seems like an interesting character at first but I found his background cliche and melodramatic. I did not buy that Ominous does what he does because he was scarred from a bullying incident. Also, I feel like bullying doesn't fit in the Sonic franchise generally. Furthermore, I found it odd that he was bullied at school 10,000 years ago.
Therefore, I can not empathize with him and cannot really understand his motives. The concept of misunderstanding is a nice touch. Maybe you could build on that as his motive for revenge.
His character, abilities and appereance are all clear. Just try to avoid repeating yourself. I found that you kept mentioning him self-loathing several times.
I also found the song and lyrics surprisingly good. Well done.
Overall, the page is well written. I would suggest you do not repeat yourself, as I mentioned earlier, and avoid writing in the past tense. Use only the present tense. It's the correct way. I believe if you replaced the bullying incident with something more relevant to his misunderstanding, he would be a more well-rounded character. Maybe if he was falsely accused of something?
Thanks, Winduct. Sorry to bother you, but do you think he could be redeemed? If so, why or why not?
I mean, do you think Ominous is capable of being a redeemable villain, you know like being reformed, due to his personality, motives, and actions? If so, why or why not? Does that make sense?
Yes I believe. If he has a change of consience due to an unpredictable event of a decision he has to make. This decision will have to be based on his past. For example, like Shadow deciding to save the world because of a promise of a loved one.
What if Ominous somehow saw his mistakes because he encounters a person with a similar background/problems?
Then he would be redeemed. But do you think he should be redeemed or not? If not, then what would be an appropriate punishment for him? Sorry if I'm being rude or if you're busy, though.
No worries.
This is a personal matter, because you are the character's creator so you make the decisions. Personally, I like it when villains have a change of heart and become heroes or at least rivals/anti-heros like Shadow and Dr. Eggman.
My recommendation is for him to be redeemed and become a hero because, after all, he started out as a hero.He is also an anthropomorphic character, so it fits with the Sonic universe/lore.
Thanks, Winduct.
Do you think you can review Sid the Hero if it's not too much trouble? This is the final time I ask this. I promise.