Joshua The Hedgehog
The page meets standards and all, but with no Relationships or History on his page, I can't really care for him.
Oh that is because i am still writing his history (It is going to be long).Now the why he has no yet relationships is because am still working on characters he well meet in the future.
Well, then besides grammar, there's nothing much to critique.
I think it's very good. I love the character design! I would change a few things though...
1) I think that instead of saying intelligent characters, I would say opponents and/or mobians/people.
2) When his power is to be able to do crystalkinetic skating, instead of saying it damages it's feet, I would say that it can slowly cost frostbite and/or hypothermia.
3) His powers would either be crytalkinesis and/or cyrokinesis.
What do you think?