User blog:Wh!te$tar/My Real Fanfic

Okay, I made a fanfic on Digimon Wiki and I still am. Everyone liked it, but I wanna know what you guys think. Here's a bit of it that shouldn't be too confusing, that way you can see how dramatic I tried to make it. But don't worry, they don't use as many big words in the rest of the story as they do here. Tell me what you guys think.

“It would appear our scenario was true,” the first girl, a green haired woman said,” Epsilon is growing to godly proportions through Christine’s suffering.”

They stood in a strange world, blanketed by orange. Each girl stood on an individual, small island surrounded by flowers. But below them there was only infinite nothing. This wasn’t a part of the Digital World, more a piece of the Void between the two worlds. A light breeze went on forever as they watch each other. Each girl was the same, yet different though. While they each wore blue sailor type school uniforms, their hair was what distinguished them. One’s was green, the other’s blue, and the third had red. But they were all the same, all gods.

“Are we capable of doing nothing?” the blue haired girl asked.

“We’ve already done what we can,” the last, blue haired girl said,” We’ve stopped Epsilon from reaching Earth thus far, and even revived the Ancient Warriors.”

“We were also bold enough to bring back the children,’ the red haired one stated as the blue girl replied,” No, that was my doing. But you must concur, they were necessary to protect the new children.”

“Indeed,” the green girl said, sighing as she said,” I fear in the end, it will not be a battle of swords or shields, but a fight of wills. The will of Epsilon versus the will of corrupted humanity.”

“Then we might as well give up hope,‘ the blue haired girl said depressingly,“ Humans are frail, like flowers. A simple step, even by mistake can destroy them.”

“Yet they try so hard to be strong,“ the green girl said angrily,“ Trying to establish dominion in a foreign world, creating a god virus like Epsilon. Man should not create gods.”

“Yet we acted as gods, and gave mere children the spirits of Ten deceased Warriors,’ the red haired girl said, and she was right.

“Besides Mary,” the blue haired girl said, speaking to the green girl,’ We were once human too…before our time.”

“But we were different Trinity!” Mary said.

“…Were we so different?” the red haired girl said before Mary replied,” Of course we were Faith.”

“ Our mission is not to quarrel about the past,“ Trinity said logically,‘” Our mission now is to restore this Digital World.”

“Can we do anything?” Mary asked sadly,” Can we make this dream a reality simply by chasing it?”

“Then for what and who’s purpose are we here?” Faith asked as Trinity replied,” To defeat Epsilon and help the Digi-Destined.”

“Indeed,“ Trinity said nobly,“ Epsilon attempts to open Pandora’s box…”

“Yet we try so hard to close it…” Faith said, looking up to the sky.

“As I said before,“ Mary replied,“ In the end, we will be powerless. It will end in a battle of wills between Epsilon and humanity…”

“Is that even a fair fight?” Faith asked as Trinity said sadly,” The thread holding human hope was weaved so thin.”