Talk:Burn's Story : Chapter 1 ; Lost Past and New Future!/@comment-32712012-20170729032018

This article has amazing potential! I'm looking forward to seeing it evolve.

I would like to remove some of the large number of spaces in-between words and punctuation marks (e.g. "memories ," -> "memories,"). May I give that a try?

I'm also slightly surprised at the fact that Burn knows that his own page exists. Has he somehow gained self-awareness like Mimic?

Anyway, nice page! If you ever want to add more, I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with it.