Board Thread:Article Critique/@comment-27765057-20141109230646

The original concept behind this character was that he was meant to be a revision of an old character, Demente the Energyhog (funny thing how we went from made-up hedgehog hybrid to stag beetle). Didn't really turn out that way, though, and I decided to make up my own unique character. Being a bard who tells stories, I found it fitting that his own story be told in poetic form, but to be honest I am not sure if I like it and I may write it up as I normally would have.

Tell me what you guys think of this character overall. I'd appreciate it, and it doesn't have to be an entire review this time. A couple sentences of feedback will do. 