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Dragonbane Legends: The Story of the Dragons: (paragraph 1)

"don't get lost in the market Trex" said Sameul Dragonbane to his youngest son. "we have to find Endac. he must be at the weapons shop". The two walk into Drango's Weapons and the first thing they see is the Red Dragon wings protruding from an 18 year old kid with a little Dragon on his Shoulder. (Pyromancer was about 16 about now instead of his usual 30 year old demeaner)"Endac what are you doing.....don't you think you have enough sword back at home with you running a smithing job?" Endac turns around "yes father your right, but i was just buying Trex a mace so he can have many proficences." he kneels to give his brother the weapon. Trex (who was 14) takes it and starts swinging it. "awesome." he says just barely missing a shelf. "watch where your swinging that Trex" his father tells him then he turns to Endac "we need to head home now if you want to be able to pack up what supplies we need to get to the Royal court of His Majesty King Shylorn". Endac replies "come on dad he's your best friend and you still call him his Majesty?". "yes and so should you Endac" "but come on, i've known him since he was my age (18) he still thinks of me as his nephew". Sameul smiles "then you should count yourself lucky. now come on, your mother is waiting for us". Endac pays Dragno and they leave the Shop.

what happens next is that one their way home they get attacked and easily beat the enemy.......but this is the first paragraph =D......what do you think?