User blog comment:Famotill/Jiyuu Na Oukoku/@comment-1775303-20100505001335

OH! FAMO! I forgot an important little detail in my critique: Do not just throw in all of your character's personalities into the story too early on. That also narrows the chance of character development. Show some parts of their personality, then hide the rest for the appropriate time and slowly unfold it to the audience.