User blog:Wh!te$tar/Fan fic. Please comment! :D

I made a Digimon Fanfic, and alot of people liked it, but there's not much actiovity there. So would you guys tell me what you think? Of the characters, plot, how it ties into the original series? I expect constructive critisism so I can take bad comments. Here it is. Digimon: Spirits Edge