Board Thread:Article Critique/@comment-4010751-20160331223218

I've redone Melissa so much and so far nobody really commented on her. All the time she was reviewed (I know, because she was an overpowering Amy recolor at the time lol). But I just want to know how I did with her, and what I can do to improve her. Don't worry, I won't flip out if you give constructive criticism (trust me, back then I did lol).

Please and thanks. 