Talk:Genjirou the Ninja/@comment-2221250-20160406210425

I took a look over the article. It's surprisingly well detailed. I would love to see if finished.

Sadly, here come the criticisms:

First, while the multiple super forms (one for every Chaos Emerald) makes sense, it does look a tad bit sloppy. Just my opinion.

Second, he seems to take the fact he can't feel any more rather well. Generally, losing a sense tends to be one of the causes of the "Cybernetics Eat your Soul" trope (a trope I am normally against, except in very specific circumstances). As Pain and Touch are actually seperate senses, it's possibly to feel no pain while still "feeling".

My suggestions for improvement: Work on the sense of touch thing. Maybe make it so he has a reduced sense of touch instead of none whatsoever (because honestly, having no sense of touch generally causes more problems than it solves, and logically, a society capable of making advanced combat cyborgs should be able to replicate at least some sense of touch) Also, finish the page. I look forward to what will come out of this.

Have a happy day.