User blog comment:Awkwarddingo/An Awkward Dingo Reviews Stuff!/@comment-5128292-20150816213922/@comment-11848168-20150817225240

Okay, my first review. For Tye The Hedgehog.


 * Appearance: The appearance is pretty basic, being honest. A red hedgehog has been done before, and so has the demonic arm thing. The first example of demonic arm I can think of is from the Webcomic TwoKinds. Good read. I recommend it. Other than that, nice touch with the demonic power containing shoes. Although there is one thing that bugs me in this section. The Soul Edge. Have you ever heard of Soul Calibur, because that is Soul Calibur.


 * Personality: There wasn't much to review here. His personality is alright, but doesn't jump at me as entirely compelling. I like that he's into "the golden rule" That's a nice touch. It does seem odd, though, that he goes with this way of life whilst being the wielder of a sacred sword.


 * History: I... This isn't what I expected when I wanted to review history. It's a history of the character's design and not the character himself. Odd.


 * Powers and Abilities: I'm going to skip weapons because, well, Soul Calibur, and go to the powers and abilities. Strength, Speed, Agility, the usual stuff given by demons rather than Earth's young yellow sun. He also received electrokinesis or whatever it's called. Like before, nothing jumps out as original or out of place. It's what's expected, which is what gets me.

Articles that jump out at you with a good surprise filled with good writing, original concepts and ideas (as original someone on a sonic fanon wiki can get, mind you). That's what I want. The thing about this article is, it's not that. It's expected. Now, mind you, I didn't see the other tabs. My review was on the main page. Now, if you want me to, I'll review his history separately at a different time.

Overall, the article was average, but had some grammatical errors and spelling errors mixed in. I recommend fixing those. Also, as the paragraph says above. Think a while on how to make your character jump out and become unique rather than another brick in the Sonic Fanon wall.