Thread:Juely/@comment-26780692-20151225090852/@comment-1981371-20160128070635

I've read till chapter 8, I've had my final exams these weeks so I had to focus on them. Anyway, the Blue Blur is great. I love the names you have come up with (morpolia, odjin, satio, algorgian etc), the characters are well developed and I am eager to see what the Connection between the hedgehog newcomers. I also hope to see in the end a Connection between Knuckles' vision, Odjin and the different dimensions. What I noticed, though, is that the cutscenes are way too long for in-game cutscenes, something Metroid the M suffered from according to critics. you need'nt write in so much detail the cutscenes, just, more like a summary. This is also practical because the page cannot fit much data.