Board Thread:Article Critique/@comment-4010751-20160331223218/@comment-24350564-20160728204555

Ami670 wrote: I've redone Melissa so much and so far nobody really commented on her. All the time she was reviewed (I know, because she was an overpowering Amy recolor at the time lol). But I just want to know how I did with her, and what I can do to improve her. Don't worry, I won't flip out if you give constructive criticism (trust me, back then I did lol).

Please and thanks. I would say she's average. The neon green shorts really make my eyes bleed, though. :c