Board Thread:Article Critique/@comment-1942179-20141117194048

Being the main character of his own game, I think getting some critique on Splice is probably of higher priority than even Smash. Probably. Of course, it's also because of his game that I've withheld a lot of information about his background/origin story; about 70% of it, actually.

On that note, I do feel that what is there needs some revisions. I haven't looked at it in a while, but I feel like something probably sounds dumb in it. 