User blog:Hikaruyami-having fun*/Article Review

Hi everyone,with this blog,I'll be reveiwing your pages that needs work.I'll put the info of the page and a warning as well for it.I'll also ask users how they plan to improve their page with thir permisson.I'll be reveiwing 5 pages once every week.And with that,let's get to the reviews!

Last week articles of 11/7/11
 * Solar the Hedgehog(NeroTH)
 * Phineas the Hedgecrane
 * E.A.L
 * Chuchu the Pikachu
 * Kazuko Shinbou

Last week articles of 11/14/11
 * Sunset Hill
 * Yaka Ammy
 * Gaynor Croker the Fox
 * Nightmare (NME)
 * Power 1 Emerel

Last week articles of 11/21/11
 * Bretta the Leopard
 * West Mobius
 * Infera Vol
 * Nazo Unleashed
 * Maria Robotnik(Cy-Fox)

Last week articles of 11/28/11
 * Byron the Unicorn
 * Twilight the Wolf
 * Perfect Dark Metal Sonic
 * Shadow Android X2
 * The Perfect Queen

Last week articles of 12/5/11
 * Drakonsu
 * Shadow's Kids
 * Marine Turbine
 * Christina The Fox
 * Glutton badnik

Last week articles of 12/12/11
 * Legend Wing
 * Pintor's Five Stage Hands
 * Razz the Bat
 * Fleece the Lamb
 * Zack the hedgehog

Last week articles of 12/19/11
 * Seven Swords Dance
 * Manina
 * Emecosmo
 * Juliet the cat
 * Sonic Heroes: Emeralds of Nightopia

Last week articles of 12/26/11
 * Creator of the Sonic XL series
 * Nouka
 * Lily
 * Cassidy the Hedgehog
 * Bulma the Bat

Last week articles of 1/2/12
 * Super Sonic Heroes
 * Ales the Hedgehog
 * Boomer
 * Silver the Hedgecat
 * Catherine Ogmore Pritchard

Last week articles of 1/9/12
 * Reidak the Hedgehog
 * Lorreta Minovia
 * Bloody Amy: The Gore Begins
 * Rollercoaster
 * Dark Elvis

Last week articles of 1/16/12
 * Wendigo 'Digo" Ecchidna
 * Calico the hedgehog
 * Bureru the Giant Leopard Moth
 * Kindness the Hedgehog
 * Jin the Chameleon

Last week articles of 1/23/12
 * Psychic Test Potion
 * Mariah the Cat
 * Shadow and Rouge's Magic Show
 * Dark Nebula
 * Blast the Cat

Last week articles of 1/30/12
 * J.J the Hawk's present give away
 * Crystal Sonic
 * Rage Uppercut
 * Monica the hedgehog
 * D.J. the Hedgecat

Last week articles of 2/6/12
 * Leonidas the Magician
 * Thunder the hedgehog
 * Black Light Virus
 * Metal Element Armor
 * Blaze the cat's secret

Last week articles of 2/13/12
 * Derm the Dark Chao
 * Terro the Hedgefox
 * Pirate Academy
 * Icicle The Hedgehog
 * SwordHeart

Last week articles of 2/20/12
 * Sarah the Hedgecat
 * Shuhei the Android
 * Dark Dagger
 * Star The Blitzhog
 * Triforce Sonic

Last week articles of 2/27/12
 * The Story of Sarah
 * Leet the Fox
 * Xenlon the Necrohog
 * Clade the hedgehog
 * Selene the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 3/5/12
 * Maimuna Maiba (Blessed Grave)
 * Jupiter the Cat
 * Shade The Fox
 * Italic the Wolf
 * Steven The Evil Cannon

Last week articles of 3/12/12
 * Misa the Seedrian
 * Tommie the hedgehog
 * Chaos Storm the Hedgehog
 * Joe the Racoon
 * Jadyn the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 3/19/12
 * Razzago The Wolf
 * Devion the Vamphog
 * Sonic 20th Anniversary
 * Maheera the Dark Blue Chamelon
 * Abyss the Mouse

Last week articles of 3/26/12
 * Rachel the Hedgehog(2011 tv series)
 * Dan the Coyote
 * Artie B. Prower
 * Blast the robohog
 * Mike the Red Panda

Last week articles of 4/2/12
 * Nala-re the Echidna
 * Muste the Wolf
 * Metal Maddness
 * Shildonic the Hedgehog
 * Super Sapphire Vegas

Last week articles of 4/9/12
 * New incoming charectes
 * Evo(MXL)
 * The Hedghog King
 * Jack The Flying Squirrel
 * Korin Alexander

'''Last week articles of 4/16/12
 * Golden-Chucks
 * Freeopolis Freedom Fighters
 * Venus the Bandicoot
 * Sonoc Return(Real Fangame)
 * Darth Hidious or Cyber Poison

'''Last week articles of 4/23/12
 * Mecha Storm
 * Book of Eternal Leadership
 * Eclipeces The Dark
 * Ringo the cat
 * Sonic the Hedgehog:Sorcery and Aliens

'''Last week articles of 4/30/12
 * Alexis Depardieu Coolette
 * Altatude Kiki
 * Ichigo the echidna
 * Pablo the Fox
 * Heartless Twilight

Kay the Fox Maker:112.203.90.20
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This article does not meet current wiki standards, as stated here. Please edit it this and adhere to these polices within three to five days, or the article will be deleted. If you are unable to do so, put Construction template at the top of the article so as to mark it as incomplete. If you require further assistance or have any questions, please ask a more experienced User.--Hikaruyami-having fun* 01:08, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Alice the Dog Maker:SallyGirl
Alice the Dog is the third main female character and the genius of the team "8 Freedoms", she is one of Mina's best friends and is a loyal friend to Mina and the others, Alice also is in love with Tyler the Porcupine and is unware of Max the Mouse's feelings for her. She is the youngest member of the team and only member without siblings. She has a IQ of 960.

Profiles

 * Race: Golden Retriever


 * Gender: Female


 * Ages: 12 - 14


 * Brithday: Oct 12


 * Blood Type: AB


 * Favorite color: Orange


 * Favorite Food: Oranges, Turkey bacon, Spicy curry rice, spinach, ham


 * Hobbies: playing chess, doing homework, reading all type of books, fixing anything, doing her jobs, helping others


 * Crush: Tyler the Porcupine


 * Rival: Rock the Hedgefox


 * Enemy: Eggman


 * Family: Hector the Dog (father), Alicia the Dog (mother/deceased), Dan the Dog (uncle), Lee the Cat (stepmother)
 * Pet: none


 * ID:77777700004565


 * Occupation: High School Student/Student council chairman, hero


 * Sport: Track and field, Judo, karate, tennis


 * Powers: Psychokinesis, Psychic powers


 * Likes: school, getting good grades, her friends, Tyler


 * Dislikes: Heart "huggin" Mina, People who get her angry, being skinny


 * Theme Song: Fly on the Wall by Miley Cyrus

History
Alice the Dog is the only child and only daughter of the master of Psychokinesis, Alicia the Dog and a famous assassin name Hector the Dog, she was born in Downunda and lived a happy life with her family, until that day her mother had a heart attack while taking Alice to a park, when she reach the hopstial it was too late, Alicia died, this made Alice and her father heartborken that someone they love is gone from their lives forever, after saying good bye to her, Alice meet Tyler, the son of her father's friend and they became closed friends.

Years later, Alice is the smartest girl in high school and is the sudent council chairman and hall mator, she also captian of the judo and karate team cause of her good grades and leadership, she is in the chess club and computer club do to her being smart and the science club. Alice studies how to use her Psychokinesis well and can see into the future with her psychic powers.

When her home is in danger, Alice join the freedom fighters to stop Eggman from hurting the people.

Personality
Alice is a average-looking bookworm, genius girl, but is also a tomboy in heart, she is clam, spunky, kind, helpful, very serious, perky, super intelligent and tough girl, who fellow the rules (even if she have to break them) and never afraid to speak her mind, she also very responsible and a bit lazy, but she takes her job serious, being her team best mecha mechanic she make any weapon, because of this she always get kidnap by Eggman to create the best robot, but is save by her friends, she loves Tyler and he made her smile when they were children, but does get jealous when he around other girls and feel worried about him when he upset and loves to see him smile. She worried about her body and looks, being skinny, flat-chested, have big hands and tall, she seem to can't match her two friends, with Heart being the prettiest girl, Mina who come from a middle class family, having pretty good looks and then their her, who have average looks, but she don't let that get to her cause she say she loves herself just the way she is.

Alice can be a bit klutzy and sometimes she daydreams, which she say, "it help me get something out of my mind and back to my work". She loves math and science.

Appearance
she has fine rusty blond hair put up in a ponytailed with the side of the her hair curls up, she wear black glassess that look like grandma glassess, but thay don't have the string on it, she wears a orange shirt with a star on it with a white shirt under it, green shorts and wears long white socks and orange boots that reach her shorts, she has royal green eyes that look sleeping but she not sleepy and has three eye lashes on top and three on the buttom. she don't wear gloves and she a bit tall, slim and thin. she has a frackles on her face.

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Un-named Character:Help? Maker:DuskoriontheDarkPrince
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Dusk The Hedgehog Maker:KajinKnight26
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Alien Mezaruga Maker:Zombiejiger
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