User blog comment:CelestialSun/Character Reviews/@comment-32788838-20120823151919/@comment-1910960-20120823155846

Soren's up first.

Apperance. He looks pretty good with a nice simple design. Perhaps you could make a reference sheet for him later, since I'm sure everyone would like to see more detail. The way you described his design is also good. I'm a bit iffy about the wings, though (not the wings themselves, just the fact that he can 'sprout' them).

Backstory. I like it. Maybe you could go into depth on the Rage Gene (in my opinion it seems like a good advantage as well as a weakness) as well as the demon part of his mother. Other than that, it's pretty good.

Abilities. Nice and balanced. However in the 'Flight' section it states "Despite not having wings..."; I thought he could sprout them from his back? Dunno, just pointing that out.

Personality is pretty solid, you could go into depth some more. Hobbies, etc?