Talk:Raven the Cyberhog (Nexus Ultimatum)/@comment-6839973-20160711183501/@comment-995908-20160711185411

I suppose I could, but right now I think I'll just critique his powers/abilities

So far, his Abilities look quite fair and balanced. I like the idea of his Atomic Pulse Wave being a potential suicide move, and it seems like it takes a bit of time to actually charge up as well, rather than being instantaneous.

The possession is interesting, but I feel like it'd be a bit more interesting if there was an inherent risk of his irradiating his target, but the fact that he has a hard time getting in and out at the right time, as well as the possibility of accidental possessions, helps keep the skill from being unbalanced. I am curious to know how his possession interacts with those who have specific energy signatures, such as those who have a great deal of latent Chaos energy in them.

I only question why the Wilderbeast form is called what it is, since it makes me think of this; but that's not a bad thing, just slightly confusing. The form itself is good, but are there specific weaknesses behind it, apart from the inability to distinguish friend from foe?

His weaknesses make ample sense, especially the weakness to rust and water, and are also great balance. The temperature/environment-based weaknesses are also good, and, once again, make perfect sense, and I'm assuming Fire or Water-wielders could give him problems; how does he handle humid or rainy weather, though?

I also find it interesting his he cannot adequately fight with his fists, but interesting in a good way.

I really like what you've done so far; he is strong, but also fair and balanced.