Talk:Vexx the Timewalker/@comment-26522901-20150620022325

Okay, let's focus on the bad/needs improvement parts before I praise this page.

- First of all, his personality needs to be improved. Instead of listing how he acts in specific situations, you should tell how he usually acts, how he acts around friends/enemies/acquanries/etc., desires, and emotional weaknesses. It makes the character seem a little bit dynamic. You can also have little things, like how they speak, like if they have an accent or something of the like. Right now, the personality looks... subpar.

- You should add more relationships to the page. Like, his relationship with family, friends, and all that jazz. It can give the reader the idea of how he really feels about the person and would let them know how dynamic of a character he is because he's molded by other characters besides Rova and Nikki.

- You should also put his abilities, powers, and moveset onto another tab.

- Maybe some Trivia? Even though the category's trivial (//slapped), it can give a little bit of quirky and funny insight on your character, mang. So, yeah.

Besides that, everything is good for the main page. 7.9/10, G.