User blog comment:Wikikinetic/Winter Awards 2018: Wiki's Votes/@comment-4988763-20180308223722/@comment-32712012-20180309191726

Thank you for letting me know! I'll respond to your points here:
 * About the neutrality: When I said that it gave its personal opinion, I was referring to these three sentences:
 * "This jackal also has beautiful red-colored eyes, maroon-colored hair, and bronze-colored fur on her chest and skin."
 * "When it comes to having a womanly figure, Arna is unfortunately below-average. Her chest size is minimal, though her hips and bottom are what she has to offer best."
 * [Arna] also has beautiful red-colored eyes implied that her eyes are, well, beautiful (which is subjective). Also, Arna is unfortunately below-average and her hips and bottom are what she has to offer best indicate that Arna's "assets" are smaller than they should be and that the parts that are larger are better somehow. This is also an opinion, and therefore is not neutral. Like I said, I prefer for the article not to judge something like this, so it bothers me that you're telling me—in a manner that pretends to be objective—how attractive you consider Arna to be. (For reference, I actually have this problem with most of your characters articles, though it's especially pronounced in the female character articles, which consistently mention how above or below average the characters are in terms of their "assets". The male characters sometimes have this too, but it's harder to pinpoint.)


 * Here's the confusing bit in the personality section:
 * "In addition, she has no qualms mercilessly pummeling anyone she hates to impose dominance or humiliate them, and she has since gained quite the infamy around Station Square as its most dangerous delinquent."
 * Specifically:
 * "she has no qualms mercilessly pummeling anyone she hates to impose dominance or humiliate them"
 * I actually have no idea what this means, but it seems really important. Could you help me understand what this is supposed to mean?


 * About the History section: First of all, I'm not actually a first-time reader of your pages; rather, I'm specifically not thinking about any information that I might have seen on any of your other pages when judging this one, because I specifically only judge each page based on what's on the page in question. Also, it wasn't actually the events that you explained that didn't make sense. Here's what didn't make sense:
 * Ever since she was a child, she was also the strongest among them due to her naturally-acquired crystal powers. This naturally made her stand-out from the others, which, as a consequence, isolated her out of fear.

The isolation, in turn, made Carnage apathetic towards others, which made her embrace the belief her strength was the only redeeming quality she had.
 * So she was really strong, got isolated because of it, and that made her apathetic towards everyone else. I get that. But how did she then decide that this thing that everyone hated her was the only redeeming quality that she had? I don't get it.

If you can help me with my first three questions, that would be very helpful.
 * About the Creation and Development section: It doesn't actually have the same weight as the others, and I can't actually pinpoint what I found problematic with it, so I'm going to simply remove it from my vote to solve those two problems.

Again, thank you for letting me know what you found problematic with my review. Constructive criticism is always helpful.