Board Thread:Article Critique/@comment-25802802-20150308215736/@comment-4232858-20150308222317

The page itself is decent, but could use a few grammar fixes (Change "not much people" to "not many people," "was earthquakes" to "were earthquakes," etc.) Also, perhaps explain more about the locations of the island itself, like maybe some more key feaures of each section to flesh it all out more. Overall good, but could be better