Talk:Depths of Dimensions/Part 2J (SO)/@comment-32712012-20180424225257

Hey everyone, I just suddenly noticed this conversation between Sneer and Elias, and I wanted to suggest something about it, which is:

After everyone decides where they're going to be, I'd expect that the next order of business for the would be to figure out what they're going to do next. As such, it would probably be in character for Tranq to try to get them to explore the area a bit. However, since Sneer and Elias aren't in that great shape, he'd probably strike out on his own to go explore a bit, which would leave Sneer and Elias time to have this conversation. For this reason, I'd suggest that we place some kind of a marker signaling that this conversation happens a bit later, then have the things that should have happened in between happen (while possibly also writing in the discussion as its own thing), then remove the marker.

Now, there are two other things that I wanted to say about this, which are much shorter: That is the end of my incredibly long comment. Thanks for reading it!
 * 1) If Tranq, Sneer, and Elias are going to be separated from the group and in this place by themselves, should this part be in a separate part from 2J (SO), with 2J (SO) ending when the portal closes? Although, speaking of the portal...
 * 2) I really want Tranq, Sneer, and Elias to get to stay here and find some way to work them back into the roleplay (or at least find some way for them not to die, even if they are never properly reunited with everyone else). However, that is technically still up to Max, as he plays Luna, and she and Xophtré are the only ones who could pull back the characters, but it's really Luna's decision, since Xophtré wouldn't do it if she doesn't want him to. As such, since it is technically in Luna's character to either let the heroes stay or pull them back, I will ask:
 * 3) Max, this is directed at you: Could you please have Luna not force Tranq, Sneer, and Elias to go through the portal? Letting them stay here would help reinforce the feeling that the characters can make their own decisions and forge their own paths, even if those aren't very good ones, and pulling them through would show the alternate message: that the characters are not in control of what they do (and I don't think that anyone wants to feel that; I certainly don't). Thus, to re-iterate, I would like if you could have Luna let Tranq, Sneer, and Elias stay here.