Thread:Leeprower1012/@comment-32712012-20170901064754/@comment-32712012-20180214230637

Looks good. There are just two things that I want to point out:
 * 1) You didn't mention that all of the parts of the DT-1 that you didn't describe are black.
 * 2) The idea of having a contained rip in the fabric of reality as a power source confuses me. Can I talk to you about this in the chat?