Talk:Krys the Alicorn

Love it?
I like her! Question, does she like dragons? I like pie, you know why? It&#39;s pie flavored (talk) 22:43, September 1, 2013 (UTC)

How 'bout... no?
Sorry Piano, but one thing both I and several other veteran users have noticed that the majority of your characters are just a bit too... Guh, I'd hate to use this word, but for lack of a better one: "perfect." They seem to lack any real character flaws to make them relatable, they seem to succeed in everything they attempt, thier abilities are generally scaled up to the furthest point you believe you can justify... Oh, and don't get me started on thier *sighs* "popularity."

I'm just not sure just what you expect people who have more experience creating more engaging characters to see in them. Now I'm not trying to go out and attack your works, it's clear that you put a great deal of effort into creating their pages, it's just that I... Dont get it? Are those the words I'm looking for? *shrug* Best I can think of right now. Regardless, if you've the time... Would you mind explaining to me just why we're supposed to like these characters, why we'd become emotionally attached to thier well-being after engaging in a slice-of-life RP with them? Like I said, I just don't get it. I lack a soul!! ^^ 21:25, December 2, 2013 (UTC)

I'm with this guy....
I think Hunter has a point. After reading about Krys, I'm a little scepticle about having my character fight against Krys in the Bloodied Hands Tournament. Can&#39;t spell distraction without action! (talk) 20:04, February 1, 2014 (UTC)

Comments?
I like her.Great RP too~Cyclonestar

Talkplay?
Krys is sitting on the park bench.

Raven walks up to Krys.Nitrogen218 (talk) 00:57, April 30, 2014 (UTC)

Krys stands up, and looks at him. "Um, hi. You don't seem very familiar.... you new to town here?"

"I would say so, yeah. I kinda got lost after a recent "run-in" with unwanted company."Nitrogen218 (talk) 01:45, April 30, 2014 (UTC)

"But anyway, I believe we should set that factor aside for now. Name's Raven, Raven the Cyberhog to be exact."

Krys: My name is Krystal Avril Escavirlno. You could call me Krys. [She sits down next to Raven.] Who is this unwanted company?

Raven: That, in firm understanding, would be a run-in with Conbot Sentries, and I,m not talking about sentry gunturrets either.

Krys: If you want, I could help you buzz them off. Are they anywhere nearby?

Raven: No, and also, you must be crazy. The sentries I'm talking about have arched backs, which enable them to roll around like a ball, a minigun under the armor and on of their shoulders, a blaster, a tail that extends up to 9 meters and fires corrosive gas clouds, and they favor firing from elevated positions.(out of breath) wow was that ever a mouthful.

But, I guess if you want to tag along, I don't mind it at all. But be careful, some sentries Are like spies, you never know where they are

Raven:(ear springs up, starts looking around.)

Krys: It won't be hard, if you haven't noticed. I'm magic. [Her horn lights up and she lifts up a tree.]

Raven: most impressive. If you say so, then alright.(Raven suddenly looks to right a sees something coming and pushes Krys out of the way) Krys, look out!!

Raven: (gets trapped in an electric net) Aaaaaaaaaaauuuaaaagggh!!!(nearing shutdown) ah, dang it.

Krys: [Her horn lights up her usual color. Suddenly, blue magic ribbon swirls around Raven and encloses around him. Suddenly, the ribbon disappears, and Raven is very tiny, as of that, he could escape from that electric net.]

Raven: (runs out of the net) Shocking, that's what I think.

(Sentry takes aim at Krys)

Raven: Krys, find cover, its gonna shoot!!!

Krys: No worries. I got this. [Her horn lights up and a magic light blue semi-circle shield surrounds her from horn-to floor. Raven is in the spell.] Don't worry, it's my safe-guard spell.

Raven: (pulls out Mk25 Nexus rifle and retuturns fire on the sentry) Eat this, you psychotic ggunturret!!

(Sentry is defeated after being shot multiple times)

Raven: that's the 12th sentry today!

Krys: [Her horn lights up. Suddenly, magic powerful blasts come out of her horn.]

Raven:stop. I think it's dead.(Approaches the sentry and kicks it)

Raven: we're good. It's dead. How the heck did this thing even find me?

Krys: I don't even know. Now what to do.... [She snaps her fingers.] While your here, want me to show you around Mariala City? The safe-guard spell will protect you.

Raven: lead the way.

Krys and Raven walk into the city.

Krys: Where's your favorite place to go? I'm sure Mariala City has it.

Raven: I do not know, but it is okay if you show me around to some people you know?

Krys: Oh, sure thing. I know just the person.

Krys and Raven walk up to a rather fancy place.

Krys: This is 17 Cherry Tree Lane. One of my closest friends lives here. [She pushes the elevator button and it opens.] Watch your step.

Raven: I see. It is really a nice place. So tell me, what does this person specialize in doing?

Krys: This one's a fashion star. She is a designer and model for fashion. But, she also takes gymnastics and is taught Street Fighting... her name is Christina. I forgot this elevator was a staircase inside a door....

The two walk down the steps and find a few customers in Christina's boutique. Christina is seen selling somebody a dress.

Customer: Thank you very much, Miss Transon.

Christina: Pleasure doing buisness with you. [She sees Krys and Raven.] Hi Krys!

Krys: Hi Christie. Um, this is Raven. Raven, I would like you to meet Christina.

Raven: hi, how ya doing? Nice to meet ya.

Christina: It's very nice to meet you. Would you like anything, I won't charge you since your a friend with one of my closest ones.

Raven: Hm, let's see what you got. If you don't mind of course.

Christina: Well let's see... I do have this outfit. [Christina brings out a modeler with clothes on it.] This is my Zoo York... um.... whatchamacalit! There's a zoo york tan tank with a black jacket with yellow-orange and light blue flames, white gloves, black cargo pants, black sneakers, a zoo york logoed cap, and shades! Would you like it? Like I said, no charge.

Raven: oh, wow. Is does look really good, I like the flames, shades, and the shoes. yeah, sure. It is definitely cool. Mind if I try it on?

Christina: Sure! The dressing room is right over there. [She points to a little area, with a bench, lots of hooks, and a curtain to close.] Like I said, it's all free.

Raven:(enters the dressing room, closes the curtain, and tries the stuff on) oh, wow. It looks great, actually more than that, it's awesome!

Raven comes out with the clothing on

Raven: what do you think, Krys?

Krys: Wow! You look spectacular.

Christina: Sorry, but policy states that you have to leave in your acutal clothes.

Krys: Here. [Her horn lights up and then a gift box appears.]

Raven: what's this? And thanks for the complement, Krys.

(Raven changes into his original clothes)

Raven: who's gift is it,Krys? Oh, and thanks for the outfit, Christina, I really like it, a lot.

Krys: Like Christie said, you have to take the outfit off. This gift box is to put your outfit in for somewhere later in the day.

Raven:Oh, okay.(goes to the dressing room, changes into his normal clothes, and puts the clothes in the gift box.) Thanks, Krys. Oh, and you too, Christina, for the outfit.

Raven: so, Krys, what do you want to do now while we are in the town?

Krys: Hmm.... well.... there is a McBurgerTown nearby if you're hungry...?

Raven: Yeah, sure. Let's go. I honestly have gotten a bit hungry from the fight with unwanted visitors. It was nice getting to meet you, Christina.

Krys: Alright. [Krys grabs Raven.] Her horn bursts and they teleport to a McBurgerTown.] What would you like?

Raven: A cheeseburger, please. I honestly haven't had one in a long time.Oh, and Krys, when we are done eating, and before you show around the town any further, could we talk at your place?

Krys: Sure. But brace yourself. One cheeseburger please, for Raven, and a chicken ranch salad for me.

Cashier: 11.43

Krys; [She hands her a 20 dollar bill, and the cashier gives her the change. Suddenly, her horn lights up. a blue beam shoots from the sky. Time starts to move faster, except for Raven and Krys.

Cashier: Order up!

Krys: Thank you. [Her horn lights up again, and a blue beam shoots to the sky. The speed is back to normal. Her horn lights up and a beam shoots. A table appears.] Here's a table!

Raven: Krys, is their anything you can't do? I'm really blown away.

Krys: That's very kind of you.... but I am still only a student...

The two start to eat. A couple of minutes later...

Krys: That was sure filling...

Raven: yeah, it was...

Krys: One moment.... I just hope my horn has enough energy to perform a last spell. [Suddenly, her horn lights up and the two teleport to her house.] Here we are.... my house.

Raven: whoa, it is huge. But, it is cool.

Krys: Stand back. [She puts her horn in her horn-shaped hole. It lit up and then the a purple aura went in six corners opening the door. The two stepped into Krys's gigantic library.] Welcome to my home.... I live on the second floor.... the first floor is my library...

Raven:(whistles) this place is HUGE. I never felt so small, in a positive way of course. Do you plan on being a librarian, Krys? '_cause this is awesome.

Krys: [The two start to walk.] Actually.... this is an actual library.... I still have to earn my degree in the college of Gaudia to become a certified librarian.... most people come here and check out books. Like I said, Iive on the second floor.

Raven: oh, okay but still, cool.

Krys: So, what did you want to talk about? Back at the McBurgerTown you asked if we could talk?

Raven: yes. Well,  you know that Conbot Sentry that we encountered at the park? After we killed it, I stumbled upon this. (Shows Krys a diamond-shaped gem and gives it to her). Also,  I should tell you a bit about my past. The info I will tell you should help you understand the incident earlier.

Raven: First,that gem you're holding, is a Powercore Gem. There are only three in existence, and one of the two artifacts i'm supposed to protect. Also, oh, and this might be confusing, I am a Cyber-mobian, asemi-mobian, semi-cyberspace robot. Lastly, my mom was killed when I was five and taken to cyberspace soon after. However. Cyberspace wsd still in constant war with negaspace.

Krys: A powercore gem... although I admit it is quite rare to see a cyber-mobian..... I understand. But be warned.... I know 3 people who are always looking for gems for their evil plots.... there names are Mimi, Jamie and Chloe. [Her horn lights up and a hologram model of the three are showing.] God knows what they're using it for.... if those 3 interfere with the cyberspace-negaspace war..... let's just say it'll be a.... nobody wins. I'll protect the gem..... and you can take it back whenever you want.

Raven: hmhmhmhmm.. Really? I see. But the war was over when I escaped, but the final war was honestly the tip of the iceberg. Nega supreme has ordered my capture and execution, but what he doesn't know is that I'm immortal because of my immortalitizer. Unfortunately, it in a weak level, as it was created, be advised though,  the conbot army has migrated here, they range in different ranks. Conbots, Big Rigs, Sentries, anything. Not only that, Several enemies of mine seek them as well. Metal Raven, Warlord, Vultra, And Ken Kintobor are aligned with the militia. Should those four mix with Mimi, Jamie, and, Chloe, this will be more ugly than anything else.

For both parties, though, the gems tend to fling themselves great distances, like the chaos emeralds, but with only three, it proves as a greater challenge.

Raven: But tell me, what do you know about Mimi, Jamie, and Chloe?

Krys: Okay... let's see... did you ever use a brand called "AngeLotion"?

Raven:Not at all, no. Why's that? Is that something they use? I have seen it, heard of it, but never bought or used it.

Krys: They say it makes your "skin feel beautiful". However, whoever uses it is given nightmares..... and haunt people. And then there was Jamie's "Default" Control Shampoo which was actually a Mind Control Shampoo..... and don't get me started with their evil destruction devices....

Raven: Hm....... Well,  that is a bit clever, but they seem to pull off rookie stunts, from a glance. Only to turn the gullible people into hostile members. Nefarious, just nefarious.

Krys: Yup. So now what?

Raven: Let's continue strolling around the town. Perhaps we could meet other locals, and hopefully find any info about the gems' locations. Also we should be careful if any activity of our enemies rouse around.

Krys: Okay.... where do you want to go?

Raven: Well, let's see. Who else do you know in this city? What do the other people do around here?

Krys: Let's see.... there's Arthur, one of my other unicorn friends....

Raven:Let's pay him a visit.

Krys: There's just one problem... he actually lives in the next town over, in Tamaruin City...

Raven: okay, then.vthen we should stay in this town. Because, the militia can track where we have been, if I remember correctly, and can follow us wherever. Let us hope we find all three gems before things get ugly.

Krys: Let's see. Where would you think you'd find an emerald?

Raven: The gems sometimes fancy a place that had a very high amount of electric energy. Other times, it is random. I even found the blue gem in a river outside mobotropolis once. Since this one is the red stone, the yellow and blue stones could be anywhere. We start where there is a high amount of electricity.

Krys: Somewhere on the boarder of Mariala City and Palisde Town, there's a power generation building. It holds the most electricity in Mariala City...

Raven:Let's go, then. If we can it. But I have doubt's that it--

(Distant noise)

Raven: What was that?

Krys: I dunno.... whatever it is, it can't be good!

Raven: Let's check it out

Krys and Raven run towards the noise and they find it.

Krys: What is that?

???: long time, no see,  Cyberhog. My irritating copy

Raven: (recognizes the voice) Metal Raven!!

M.R: Hmph. Who's yyour deadbeat of a friend?

Raven: ...

Krys: I'm Krys the Unicorn. What are you? A metal trash heap?

M.R.: None of your concern.

Raven: why are you here, anyway?

M.R.: (Shows them both that he has the Blue Powercore Gem.) Lookin for this, meat bags?

Raven: what?

Krys: [Her horn lights up and the Powergem levitates out of Metal Raven's hands into Krys's.] Thank you. [Raven and Krys both carry on.]

M.R.:[Attacks Krys from behind and reclaims the gem, and attempts to escape, leaving Raven to chase him.]

Raven: runs to match M.R.'s speed. Give us back that gem!

M.R.: [activates his rocket shoes] Back off, kid. I'm not alone.

Raven[slows down, let's m.r. get far enough, and jumps from rooftop to roof top to catch up, when he did, he leaps onto him to try to force out of his hands]

M.R.:[maintains flight, but is forced to battle him on the clocktowers to determine who gets the gem] You are rather irritating.

Raven: Sorry to burst that bubble, but I think I'm more cooperative than irritating.

[The counterparts clash. Raven tries to spin dash M.R., but each shot gets blocked. M.R. dashes to the left and sucker punches Raven. Raven tries to uses Electro punch from bbehind, but M.R. uses his roundhouse kick to take him out. Raven finally lands a blow to head when he used Hydro cannon,  which minorly scrambles monitor view. M.R. gets normal view and uses the power of the gem to become Neo Metal Raven, Raven absorbs it too and becomes Nitro Raven. The two attack with equal power, but Nitro Raven gets hammered by M.R.'s missile strike. Raven is badly beaten up in the fight, forcing him  to turn to normal. Raven takes a near death stance.]

M.R.:you still flight for the weak, Scrap-Wad. Once we are done, I'll visit your friend, Krys. The tale of her agonizing death SHALL ECHO ACROSS THE COSMOS!!(Knocks him to the floor of the roof top, and tears out his immortalitizer, stores the gem in his chest, and sends Raven falling to die. M.R. quickly escapes.)

Krys: Raven... would you like your friend to die?

Raven: n-n-no....but my time ticked away. Kreeik du'Tqhan (translation: my immortality is gone, my time on Mobius is over. Find it.) ( he dies right in front of her.)

Krys: Gaah! No way... This has to be fixed. [Her horn lights up and a ray shoots at Metal Raven and he explodes.] I have to recharge for a long time.... but I choose my friends over my magic!!! [She gulps and tries to perform her spell. Her horn lights up her usual color and then it turns red. A rainbow glow comes from her horn. From there, a white orb appears and a double helix with the colors of a raibow form. Raven's soul is grabbed from heaven and is sent back inside him.]

Raven: guuuugh..... I'm alive? And my immortalitizer is back in place? KKrys?

Krys: Yes. I shot a beam at Metal Raven causing him to explode. You are now immortal again. However, I saved you with my Life Spell.... unless I head home to my horn recharger, I can't use my magic...

Raven: Grab on and don't let go.

(Krys grabs onto Raven and runs at ultrasonic speed. As the two left, Metal Raven's pieces rained down from the sky. Somehow, M.R. reconstructs himself and teleports away with the blue gem.)

M.R.: hmhmhmh.....I guess there is a little good things at the end of a fight. Powercore Control!!

(M.R. teleports away.)

Krys: [Holds up the blue powercore emerald.] When we were at my house... I had time to make a decoy emerald behind my back. This one's real. You're Metal friend has a fake emerald.

Raven: Excellent. But, if Metal Raven came at me like that, what about your enemies? One thing I wonder is what is going on with our enemies now....

Krys: My house isn't very far from here. Hold on one second. [She dashes towards her house, unlocks her door, goes to her horn recharge station and gets her energy back. She then teleports back to Raven.] There we go. Now... let's go onward.

Krys and Raven continue their way to the power generation building.

Raven: wait, I'm picking up an encrypted signal. Curious, it's coming from the power station.

(Translates encryption)

Raven: It doesn't seem to be strong, maybe its weak at this area.

(As they got closer, the signal got stronger)

Raven:(starts getting an eerie feeling as they get closer.) It seems like the signal is originating from the inside of the station. I feel ad though someone's watching us. Don't you, Krys?

Krys: Yessir.

Raven and Krys run towards the power generation tower.

Raven: how much closer are we to the station. Krys?

Krys: Not very far!

Krys and Raven make it, but the door was suspiciously locked. Raven pounds on the door, but no response. Krys and Raven tried forcing the door open, which worked.

Raven: The signal.. It's coming from.... That room, to the right!

Krys: Right! [The two run into the room. Apparently there are a bunch of electrical wires hidding a yellow glow.]

Raven: this is it. (Raven and Krys walk up to retrieve the gem, when a guard of the tower comes walking in.

Guard: Hey you two shouldn't be here!

(They examine him, but find out he Is dressed unlike a guard.)

Raven: Sir, sorry if this is off, but why are you like that?

Mayor: [He walks in.] Krys? You shouldn't be here.

Krys: Mr. Mayor. I'm terribly sorry but-

Mayor: But nothing.

Krys: There's a gem that we are looking for and it's behind those wires.

Mayor: Can't you just make gems appear from your horn or something?

Krys: Mayor that's not how it works.

Mayor: Guard. They're fine. Continue with your search.

Krys: Thank you, mayor.

Mayoir: Good day, Miss Mariala. [He walks off.]

Krys: Now... let's find that emerald.

Krys uses her magic to magically see through the wires. She then spotted a yellow powercore gem. With her horn, she makes the gem levitate into Raven's hands.

Raven: alright, now we got--

(The door slams behind them, and becomes locked. Krys tried using magic to force it open, but it was sealed with anti-magic\anti-Kinetic barrier. That's when a gray smog fills up the room, knocking Krys, Raven, and the Mayor out. Eventually, Krys wakes up with the Mayor in room, Krys notices that there is anti-barrier surrounding them, along unusual robots that surround. Meanwhile, Raven awakes in an airtight container, awaiting convergence to negaspsce power. Krys further examines and finds that they are in a space station.)



Just so you know what it is, here's a pic--

Krys: What in Animorph?! [Her horn lights up.] I'll get you out of there.

(Krys escapes with only the mayor, Raven was in a separate room that had an anti-barrier not only surrounding the room, but also the entire station. Raven comes to in a panic)

Raven: Dangit. Wait.. Krys?!!?, mayor????!!!,

(Raven hears familiar laughing, Vultra, M.R., Warlord, and Ken Kintobor walk in.)

Raven: You?!!? Why are you here?

Ken: oh, just preforming an....experiment. Let me explain, as part of an omega-class secret, we made friends with team fashion and devised a little plan to eradicate you and fulfill the quest of Negaspace. But first, you'll be converted into a nega bot and forced to maintain control of this shuttle, because in T-minus 3 hours, all the parts to the conquer weapon will be complete, and we will rain un matched firepower, utterly decimating Mariala City. Then, once all the defenses have been crushed, the milita will turn the town into a fortress, leaving the power building to be comm station between here and in the city.

Vultra: but don't worry, robot. Team fashion will keep your friends busy.....making a mockery of your name.

Warlord: once all parts are in place, we call all Negaspace forces to the planet, and conquer it.

Raven: Question, how is all that possible while I'm here?

Ken: no worries, we just delete the last 30 mins of what you just heard with this. This won't hurt a bit.

They zap him with the memory killer, and start the convergence. After a while, convergence has completed and begin phase two.

Warlord: start the second part, team fashion, now!!

Krys: Gah! We forgot Raven! Dang it!

Mayor: Calm down, Krys.

Krys: Calm down? Calm down? CALM DOWN?! Don't you know what they're trying to do? They're going to OBLIVERATE Mariala City!

Mimi: Ding ding ding, ugly one.

Krys: Mimi!

Mimi: Hey you've got smarter- since you were the retard too.

Krys: What have you done with Raven?

Jamie: Don't bother. Ken and Warlord are working on their plans.

Mayor: What plans do you think you have for Raven?

Chloe: Good question, Mayor McCheese.

Mimi: It's not that bad. They're only going to only obliverate them. And besides. [Transforms into Krys] I'll make sure they do just that!

Krys: Gaah! Why does this have to be so complicated. How did they even lock him in there?!?!?!

Mimi: [Transforms back into her own self.]

Chloe: Easy peasy! Metal Raven has a big red button that closed the barrier.

Mimi and Jamie: CHLOE?!?!?!

Krys: Huh? [She smirks and winks at the mayor.] Mayor, please reason with these...... children.

Mayor: As you wish, Miss Mariala.

Jamie: You only wanted ugly people to get that reward. And as for you Krys: People like you should go to jail for being ugly!

Mayor: That's not very nice of you. For all we know we could banish you from the city.

Krys: [Uses her magic to become invisible behind the mayor.]

Mimi: What was that?

Mayor: You aren't seeing reason here. You need to stop making lotions and

The mayor goes on and on completely distracting Team Fahsion. Krys's horn lights up.

Meanwhile, back in the room Ken and raven are in.

The red button to release Raven suddenly lights up purple. It pushes down on it's own using Krys's magic. The airtight cage suddenly breaks open.

Ken:(claps his hands) bravo, Krystal, braavoo. Neo Raven, ERADICATE HER!

Raven:_confirmed, attacking now.

(Raven is now fighting Krys, with anti-barrier surrounding him.)

Ken: this should be interesting.

(The alarm sounds)

Warning! Breach in the deck detected, all personnel respond.

Krys: I thought this would happen. [She walks up to Raven. Her horn shines and blasts with her usual color. She then touches Raven's forehead with her horn. Sooner or later, he regained his memory of the friendship between him and Krys.]

Raven: what? Krys what is going on?

The messenger reports.

Attention: all parts re-linked, blast power 100%. Signaling militia now.

Raven: oh, c'mon!! That wasn't even three hours!!

Messenger: sucks to be you, robot. Hahahahahahahahahahah!

Raven: blows up the speaker with the laser gun. Krys, I need a favor. ( whispers it in her ear, telling her to act like she is struggling to break free, the plan will go down from there.)

Krys: [She struggles.] Aah! This things too tight! My horn needs to recharge! I really can't get out!

Raven: alright, Kintobor, where's my cut of the reward?

Ken: take the captive to the purge bay.. Lock her in a pod, and send her "home for dinner."

Raven: (gets a light bulb moment, and gets an idea.) Master ken, what about the breaching in the deck?

Ken: Oh, yeah. I'll be back.

Raven: Krys, I got an idea. I need your help to maintain control of the shuttle. Here's how it is gonna go down. First, we are gonna tackle the forces here, then I need you to head down to mariala city and evacuale it and hopefully the nearby towns, I 'll stay here and try to override the systems. Then, I'll turn the shuttle around, exposing the exhaust tanks, that' s when you use your magic to fire at them, this, should we time it right with inbound militia, it will collide the main aircraft, and then something will happen, but if you wanna stay, I'll leave this entirely up to you. But you may wanna hurry, the will be here soon.

Krys: [Gets out of restrain.] Okay... Attack forces... Evacuate Mariala City and it's borderings... Shoot Magic Beam at Exhaust tanks... I'm on it.

(Raven and Krys start to attract the attention of the Conbot soldiers onboard, and they immediately counterattack before the bots could land a hit. Eventually, they succeed, but the lock-on systems are still targeting the towns. Also the army was nearby, and time was quickly running short.)

Raven: Alright, we did it. Krys, go to the towns and evacuate as quick as you can. I'll go see what I can do.(hugs Krys) Believe me, I don't mean this in a romantic way, but if I die during this, it has been an honor meeting you and your friend. Consider this as a good luck hug, okay?

Krys: Alright. [She takes a deep breath.] Here we go. [She gives Raven a walkie-talkie. Her horn blasts and she ends up in Mariala City's City Square. Suddenly, her horn lights up very brightly. Every citizen in all of Mariala City, Tamaruin City, Starcose Town and Paliside City, teleport to the opposite coasts of the World. Krys then teleports to Lamalitropolis, where all the citizens are gathered. Everyone is curious of what is going on. Suddenly, a large podium appears with Krys standing on it with a loudspeaker. News reporters from around the world are filming.] Attention citizens of Mariala City, Tamaruin City, Paliside Town and Starcose Town. Something danergous might happen to Mariala City.

Everyone starts chattering.

Mayor: Miss Mariala, that is impossible. Mariala City has been untouched for centuries!

Krys: I'm afraid the untouched era of Mariala City might come to a close on this day.... an space shuttle the size of Mariala City itself is about to land.

Everyone starts to worry.

Krys: That's why I have brought you all here. I don't want you to die from being squashed by a gigantic space shuttle. But do not worry.... only very little damage will be done. [Her horn lights up and the shine grows huge.] So.... for a few..... days.... [Struggle and strain].... [She duplicates all four cities and puts them in the ocean.] This is your new home until I get an all clear signal.

Everyone starts to move in to the magical double of the whole place. [She gets off the podium and turns on her walkie talkie. tries to signal Raven.] Raven? Raven?Are you there?

Raven: Yes. Everything's fine. Well, when I mean by "Well" i mean by, on good terms, I mean by I have commandeered the main control system, and steer it, but, on bad terms, someone froze the missile and attack monitors, I can't stop the weapon fire, but I can steer the craft itself. However, the entire militia had a bead on the ships status. Heads up!! Missiles have launched! Repeat, missiles have launched! Cities targeted: mariala city, tamaruin city, starcose town, and paliside city. I need you to hit this shuttle when you hear the word" endgame ".

Krys. "Yessir!" Krys's horn lights up and she ends up at her house. She opens up the door, runs to the recharging station and recharges her horn. From there, she teleports to Mariala City standing on a podium, waiting for the spaceshuttle. "Raven, would 2 unicorns be more strong?" She asked, calling on her walkie talkie.

Raven: no, the tanks are already exposed, turning 19 degrees, 25 degrees,oh.... Oh no, uh, Krys, the militia is here and they are taking aim at the inhabited cities.

The shuttle's missiles start making their way to the marked locations,  and the militia started to fire on the people, but Krys hears the word to fire on the shuttle.

Raven: endgame.

Krys: [She gulps.] [Her horn lights up big, and a huge magic ray shoots at the shuttle therefore making it explode.]

The timing was perfect, the ray fires directly at the tanks, making them explode. This also allowed raven to ram it straight into the main airship.

Soldier: sir, remember that space shuttle we planed to use?

Commander: yes. Why does it matter?

Soldier: ' cause it's gonna ram into us right--

(The shuttle is rammed into aircraft. The result of that is the weapons within the shuttle to fire at the other small ships, utterly sending raining little pieces to the earth. But that wasn't the end of it, the collision forces the two ships to the Negaspace in the atomos galaxy, and they crash into it, causing a white hot explosion to occur. Unfortunately, the atomos stars go supernova, utterly destroying Negaspace! The two shuttles, the atomos galaxy, all in one move. The explosion was so big, everyone on Mobius could see it. The pieces kept raining from the sky, but Krys tried to contact Raven, but all there was, was just static.)

This is just to separate these from the talk play.
Sorry, gotta go to school, but I' ll be back when possible see you then.Nitrogen218 (talk) 10:41, April 30, 2014 (UTC)

Sorry gotta get to bed, but I'll be tomorrow. See ya.Nitrogen218 (talk) 02:27, April 30, 2014 (UTC)

G'night. ♪Pianoteen♪ 02:37, April 30, 2014 (UTC)

Alright, I'm back. We can continue if you want.Nitrogen218 (talk) 10:20, April 30, 2014 (UTC)

Gotta get to bed, I'll be back tomorrow, piano. Goodnight.Nitrogen218 (talk) 02:08, May 1, 2014 (UTC)

A'ight. G'night. ♪Pianoteen♪ 00:12, May 2, 2014 (UTC)

See ya later, piano. And thanks for being a good friend, too. I reall y enjoy this talkplay.Nitrogen218 (talk) 02:06, May 2, 2014 (UTC)

Gotta get to bed, see ya.02:05, May 14, 2014 (UTC)Nitrogen218 (talk)

Aite. G'night. ♪Pianoteen♪ 02:06, May 14, 2014 (UTC)

Gotta get to bed, g'night, piano.Nitrogen218 (talk) 02:06, May 15, 2014 (UTC)

A'ight. G'night Nitro. I don't even like leeks... 02:09, May 15, 2014 (UTC)

Nitro's gotta get to bed, I'll be back tomorrow. Nitrogen218 (talk) 02:13, May 16, 2014 (UTC)

Alright. G'night. I don't even like leeks... 02:16, May 16, 2014 (UTC)

Gotta go, see ya.Nitrogen218 (talk) 03:21, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Krys's Eyesight
I don't know about you, but from where I come from, using glasses is definitely not a sign that she has above-average eyesight. Chamesthehero (talk) 15:23, March 1, 2014 (UTC)

Just gonna expand on that by saying that I don't think she'd wear glasses if her eyesight is average, because average eyesight still means you can see fine. Glasses are worn to help you actually be able to see/ see more clearly, so I'd have to say they'd be worn if their eyesight was below average.  Goomytastic♫  15:39, March 1, 2014 (UTC)

Both of you make very good points... (I already made the change for Chame's argument...) However, Krys doesn't always wear glasses. Her eyesight is average.... however, Skull made a suggestion about maing Krys wear glasses. I think it'd be good because she'd have better concentration when making clothes and reading. ♪Pianoteen♪ 18:19, March 2, 2014 (UTC)