User blog comment:Detective SkullWolf/Character Critique Requests/@comment-5987421-20140228031313/@comment-27765057-20140304180726

Let's talk Starlight the Hedgehog. I was originally just going to do Nikki again, but I remembered that I did that in the Winter Awards.

I actually have a question about her appearance: Does her green highlights on her hair glow? I'm getting that impression from some of her pictures. Nothing else to note about her appearance, as she looks fine.

Now for her history. I would've liked an explanation as to how she ended in an orphanage. You could talk more about her life at the orphanage, that way we could sympathize with how she misses her friends. This could also bring up an explanation as to why she was easily so successful her first time at school (perhaps she read a lot of educational books at the orphanage). Also, it doesn't really talk about her new family much. I see potential from talking more about them and their relationship with her.

Now, as for her powers...well...she doesn't really need them. I think she could go perfectly fine without them, and the history never really explains where she got them from. I think you should drop them and leave her with her scientific skills and inventions.

Moving on to her skills, I like how unlike other inventors she has trouble getting her inventions to work. This makes perfect sense since she is still in school. Maybe sometime after she finishes school she meets up with a more experienced inventor and learns under his/her ropes.

That's basically it. Her page is pretty well made, and the only things I see that need improvement is stretching out her history a bit and possibly dropping her powers.