User blog:Hikaruyami-having fun*/Article Review

Hi everyone,with this blog,I'll be reveiwing your pages that needs work.I'll put the info of the page and a warning as well for it.I'll also ask users how they plan to improve their page with thir permisson.I'll be reveiwing 5 pages once every week.And with that,let's get to the reviews!

Last week articles of 11/7/11
 * Solar the Hedgehog(NeroTH)
 * Phineas the Hedgecrane
 * E.A.L
 * Chuchu the Pikachu
 * Kazuko Shinbou

Last week articles of 11/14/11
 * Sunset Hill
 * Yaka Ammy
 * Gaynor Croker the Fox
 * Nightmare (NME)
 * Power 1 Emerel

Last week articles of 11/21/11
 * Bretta the Leopard
 * West Mobius
 * Infera Vol
 * Nazo Unleashed
 * Maria Robotnik(Cy-Fox)

Last week articles of 11/28/11
 * Byron the Unicorn
 * Twilight the Wolf
 * Perfect Dark Metal Sonic
 * Shadow Android X2
 * The Perfect Queen

Last week articles of 12/5/11
 * Drakonsu
 * Shadow's Kids
 * Marine Turbine
 * Christina The Fox
 * Glutton badnik

Last week articles of 12/12/11
 * Legend Wing
 * Pintor's Five Stage Hands
 * Razz the Bat
 * Fleece the Lamb
 * Zack the hedgehog

Last week articles of 12/19/11
 * Seven Swords Dance
 * Manina
 * Emecosmo
 * Juliet the cat
 * Sonic Heroes: Emeralds of Nightopia

Last week articles of 12/26/11
 * Creator of the Sonic XL series
 * Nouka
 * Lily
 * Cassidy the Hedgehog
 * Bulma the Bat

Last week articles of 1/2/12
 * Super Sonic Heroes
 * Ales the Hedgehog
 * Boomer
 * Silver the Hedgecat
 * Catherine Ogmore Pritchard

Last week articles of 1/9/12
 * Reidak the Hedgehog
 * Lorreta Minovia
 * Bloody Amy: The Gore Begins
 * Rollercoaster
 * Dark Elvis

Last week articles of 1/16/12
 * Wendigo 'Digo" Ecchidna
 * Calico the hedgehog
 * Bureru the Giant Leopard Moth
 * Kindness the Hedgehog
 * Jin the Chameleon

Last week articles of 1/23/12
 * Psychic Test Potion
 * Mariah the Cat
 * Shadow and Rouge's Magic Show
 * Dark Nebula
 * Blast the Cat

Last week articles of 1/30/12
 * J.J the Hawk's present give away
 * Crystal Sonic
 * Rage Uppercut
 * Monica the hedgehog
 * D.J. the Hedgecat

Last week articles of 2/6/12
 * Leonidas the Magician
 * Thunder the hedgehog
 * Black Light Virus
 * Metal Element Armor
 * Blaze the cat's secret

Last week articles of 2/13/12
 * Derm the Dark Chao
 * Terro the Hedgefox
 * Pirate Academy
 * Icicle The Hedgehog
 * SwordHeart

Last week articles of 2/20/12
 * Sarah the Hedgecat
 * Shuhei the Android
 * Dark Dagger
 * Star The Blitzhog
 * Triforce Sonic

Last week articles of 2/27/12
 * The Story of Sarah
 * Leet the Fox
 * Xenlon the Necrohog
 * Clade the hedgehog
 * Selene the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 3/5/12
 * Maimuna Maiba (Blessed Grave)
 * Jupiter the Cat
 * Shade The Fox
 * Italic the Wolf
 * Steven The Evil Cannon

Last week articles of 3/12/12
 * Misa the Seedrian
 * Tommie the hedgehog
 * Chaos Storm the Hedgehog
 * Joe the Racoon
 * Jadyn the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 3/19/12
 * Razzago The Wolf
 * Devion the Vamphog
 * Sonic 20th Anniversary
 * Maheera the Dark Blue Chamelon
 * Abyss the Mouse

Last week articles of 3/26/12
 * Rachel the Hedgehog(2011 tv series)
 * Dan the Coyote
 * Artie B. Prower
 * Blast the robohog
 * Mike the Red Panda

Last week articles of 4/2/12
 * Nala-re the Echidna
 * Muste the Wolf
 * Metal Maddness
 * Shildonic the Hedgehog
 * Super Sapphire Vegas

Last week articles of 4/9/12
 * New incoming charectes
 * Evo(MXL)
 * The Hedghog King
 * Jack The Flying Squirrel
 * Korin Alexander

Last week articles of 4/16/12
 * Golden-Chucks
 * Freeopolis Freedom Fighters
 * Venus the Bandicoot
 * Sonoc Return(Real Fangame)
 * Darth Hidious or Cyber Poison

Last week articles of 4/23/12
 * Mecha Storm
 * Book of Eternal Leadership
 * Eclipeces The Dark
 * Ringo the cat
 * Sonic the Hedgehog:Sorcery and Aliens

Last week articles of 4/30/12
 * Alexis Depardieu Coolette
 * Altatude Kiki
 * Ichigo the echidna
 * Pablo the Fox
 * Heartless Twilight

Last week articles of 5/7/12
 * Kay the Fox
 * Alice the Dog
 * Un-Named Character:Help?
 * Dusk The Hedgehog
 * Alien Mezaruga

Last week articles of 5/14/12
 * Evio the hedgehog
 * Ardic the Polar Bear
 * The Decline
 * Horn the Eagle
 * Mimi the rabcat

Last week articles of 5/21/12
 * Leo-Rouge Conflict
 * Ultragamma the Hedgehog
 * Flame the Hedgehog
 * Reptillious LXXXVII
 * Abia the Koala

Last week articles of 5/28/12
 * Twigoon
 * Rush the Hedgehog
 * Light
 * The Commander
 * Wolf

Last week articles of 6/4/12
 * Cyraza
 * Inferno the Hedgehog
 * Galahad the Hedgehog
 * Bronze the Hedgehog
 * Flash the Basset Hound

Last week articles of 6/11/12
 * Eddie the Lizard
 * Super Evil Eris
 * Lightning The Light
 * Hikaru the Hedgehog
 * Toyko Academy

Last week articles of 6/18/12
 * Shahooter-Parkview Conflict
 * 12A7-BOT
 * April Fox
 * Shadin The Hedgehog
 * Transparency the Dragonfly

Last week articles of 6/25/12
 * Mad-Matrix
 * Amy Rose (Blue Twilight's Universe)
 * Liefield the Hedgehog
 * Sonic the Hedgehog (Adventure Universe)
 * June the Armadillo

Last week articles of 7/2/12
 * Twil the Fox
 * Jex Islands
 * Sonic Heroes OPERATION VIZO
 * Project Tundra
 * Echo the hedgehog

Last week articles of 7/9/12
 * Hincho the Rabbit
 * David the cat (Shaymin2348's Original Character)
 * Solar the hedgehog
 * Strike the Hedgehog
 * Violet the Cat

Last week articles of 7/16/12
 * Acid the Hedgehog
 * Airu the Seedrian
 * Cassie Flora
 * Jupiter the Hedgehog
 * Space Brick

Last week articles of 7/23/12
 * Final Five
 * Sonic Unleashed 2: Gaias
 * Breeze the Hunter
 * Super the Echidna
 * Alsh the Eagle

Last week articles of 7/30/12
 * Silver Sonic 3 (Jet Booster Silver Sonic)
 * Shadow and Maria Reunited Story
 * E-Series Robots (Sonic Underground 2)
 * Wave the Witch
 * Bob the Tiger

Last week articles of 8/7/12
 * Bethany The Fox
 * Pseudo-vocabulary
 * Everette the Mosquito
 * The Other Birdies
 * Sonic heros 3 divine being Rise of glory edition

Last week articles of 8/13/12
 * Sonic ZX:Virus Deletion
 * Tails: The Tails doll
 * Team Elya
 * Ickly The Fox
 * Xiang the Echidna

Last week articles of 8/20/12
 * Sonic In A World Of Light And Dark!
 * Kari the Fox
 * Emmy the Chao
 * Clouds
 * Sonic Generations Quest

Last week articles of 8/27/12
 * Weruioh the Hedgehog
 * Princess Diamond Christian
 * Dia the Hedgebird
 * Glider The Cyber Echidna
 * Team mephiles

Last week articles of 9/3/12
 * Coal the Wolf
 * Sarah the fox
 * Phoenix the Swallow
 * Sonic the Hedgehog Film Franchise
 * Saber the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 9/10/12
 * Sonic Snowboarding XD
 * Brackenfire
 * Owen The Hedgehog
 * Dark Super Sonadver
 * Lamp the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 9/17/12
 * Bio - Drazo
 * Jail Break
 * Mario And Sonic Generations
 * Wechnia (Ashura's Legacy)
 * Early Emerald Town

Last week articles of 9/24/12
 * The Power Gamble Casino
 * The FoXRoX Fellowship
 * The Fusi Chronicles
 * Sonic Reqluenish
 * Brenna the Wolf

Last week articles of 9/1/12
 * Gold Chaos Emerald
 * Run at the Speed of Sound
 * Nova Jr.
 * Miley Prower
 * K'nuckles The Cat

Last week articles of 10/8/12
 * Lucy The Fox
 * Cera the Hedgehog
 * Clover the Hedgehog
 * Ethan The Porcupine
 * Defaran

Last week articles of 10/15/12
 * Sonic Generations
 * Sonic Reborn
 * Sonic Universe(TV Series)
 * E-52 ToolBoxer
 * Nilly L.

Last week articles of 10/22/12
 * Alfred The Wolf
 * Cortanna"Courtney" the Lynx
 * Sonia the Wolf
 * Mayor Of Jule
 * Nilly L.

Last week articles of 11/5/12
 * Cloud The Hedgehog
 * Hood
 * May the seedrian
 * Metal .G.R.E.E.N.
 * Jerry the sluglemur

Last week articles of 11/12/12
 * Roy the Chthronian
 * Sonic N Tails
 * Sir Didadad
 * Bethany the Hedgehog
 * Lok-Jaa

Last week articles of 11/19/12
 * Fear factor zone
 * Sonic Brawlers Theme Song
 * Bombboom the Hedghog
 * Moon sceptre
 * T.A.T.T

Last week articles of 11/26/12
 * Metal Amy
 * Siren the Hedgehog
 * Gopher
 * Machinery Stockholm
 * Sonic: Infinity/Pairbond

Last week articles of 12/3/12
 * Ninja the Chamelon
 * Lily Turtle
 * Gopher
 * Machinery Stockholm
 * Sonic: Infinity/Pairbond

Last week articles of 12/10/12
 * Kaleb The Hedgehog
 * Konic
 * Haast Eagles
 * Zetsu (Sonic and Naruto series)
 * Martin the Fox

Last week articles of 12/18/12
 * RustyPorcupine QuartzHedgehog
 * Rosalina the Wolf
 * Stela The Mouse
 * Galactohn the Giant Echidna
 * Black Knight

Last week articles of 12/25/12
 * Shadow and Reign
 * Sonic Flash
 * Tornado At Midnight
 * Makayla the Cat
 * Gray the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 12/31/12
 * Sir Destructias
 * Team Boom
 * Virus Run
 * OS-X
 * Larry the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 1/7/13
 * Ashley The Hedgehog
 * Graduate Cartoons Amy anti scene differences
 * Chris Canty
 * Rosalinda Chao
 * The Hedgeblob

Last week articles of 1/14/13
 * Rallen's Worst Day Ever
 * Ocean the Hedgehog
 * Bright the Hedgehog
 * Ivy the Cat
 * Edward Buck the Wolf

Last week articles of 1/21/13
 * Jaz the Hedgehog
 * Noah the Hedgehog
 * Volt the Hedgehog
 * Unleashed (series)
 * Apollox

Last week articles of 1/28/13
 * Stealth the Hedgehog
 * Mason meets his match
 * Sunshine the Budgie
 * Jolon the Hedgehog
 * Diary Of a Wimpy Hybrid

Last week articles of 2/4/13
 * Fuision the hedgehog(fireflower30's universe)
 * Paddy the Bear
 * Vex the Unknown
 * Slyfer and Shift
 * Rayla Opal the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 2/12/13
 * Corrupted Storymaster
 * Virus EX
 * Delilah The Mongoose
 * Grinder Dash!!
 * Black The Hedgehog

Last week articles of 2/19/13
 * MetalSonic City
 * Terra's Journey
 * Orin the Cat
 * Brittney the Hedgehog
 * Robert the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 2/26/13
 * Corrupt Nightfall
 * Nemesis, the God of Chaos
 * Saisei 'Weruioh' Endo
 * Ember Flame the Phoedroid
 * George the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 3/5/13
 * Sonic Riders: Next Speed
 * Yolk the Cat
 * Thirteen The Lemur
 * Kuna the Soulwolf
 * Sonic Boss(App)

Last week articles of 7/30/13
 * The Federal Infrastructure Program
 * Shendark
 * Sonic's Nation
 * Sonic X Fusion: Sonic The Hedgehog vs Metal Sonic
 * Raiku The Cat

Last week articles of 7/23/13
 * Darkness "Bleed" The Demon
 * Elsa the Werecat
 * Sonic Adventure 3 ( Tanner Wood )
 * Negato
 * Twilight the Being

Last week articles of 8/6/13
 * Sonic And Shadow Two Hedgehogs Of Defenders Part 1.5
 * Sky the Two-Tailed Fox
 * The Oracle of Twilight (Game)
 * Jr.'s Brown Friend
 * Derick The Hedgdehog

Last week articles of 8/13/13
 * Realms of Chaos Ep.1
 * Calm Waters Era
 * Team Project
 * Fangame:Sonic Fanon Fighters
 * Raiku The Cat

Last week articles of 8/20/13
 * Mobius' Ultimate Tourament
 * Zone Detectives
 * Sonic GX
 * Sonic Relived
 * Sonic Quest: The Rescue, the Hunt, and the Chaos

Iceca the Echidna Maker:207.119.23.197
Iceca (Pronouncation: Ice-E-Ca) is a young, female echidna. She is the color of the lightest default blue you can get in Paint, where I created her. She is princess of the ice kingdom.

Appearance
She's a bit like a Tikal in a Amy outfit. She has bright blue eyes, the same color as Tikal's. Her eyelids are white and her fur is bright blue. Her dress is purple, with a daigonll white stripe across it. Her boots are purple as well, with a white horizantil line across them. Her gloves are white. She wears blue bracelets just above her gloves. Oh, and her Sonic Channel artwork shows her with blood coming out of her eye.

I'm gonna write the other stuff later.

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Mobius Home for Really Bizzare Mothers Maker:PaulAgnew
Have you got a mega-Momma that you're too ashamed to be seen in public with? Do they spoil your dates or get in the way of your dreams to conquor the world? Then look no further than the Mobius Home for Really Bizzare Mothers! We have everything you could ask for in a home; three swimming pools, luxury spas, and a fantastic view of the Mobius National Park that'll surely bring peace to their hearts

So if you're a criminal, terrorist, hero, or mad scientist, the Home won't look after YOU, but we'll look after THEM!

Known Members
-Momma Robotnik

Pre-war
Knuckles was born some time ago on a raid near the Island of Questioning (actually he was born on the way but you know what I mean) but nobody knows how long ago. In the year 7211 a man was caught killing another man and Knuckles' father was blamed for it. For that reason, Knuckle's father was sent to Davy Jones' locker. (Bwa-ha-ha!) Since then it's been like Micheal Jackson's death and Knuckles, out of rage, became so strong, there isn't anything known that can penetrate him but age (in fact, 5 years later, Ovi Kintobor tried to use something called the "all penetrating metal" but the effect was eventual and it only made a barely noticable scratch)

Beginings saga
He eventually grew a beard that looked like Chuck Norris's. In 7216, he was made third in command of the Freedom Fighters by Sonic. Sometime in the beginning, Knuckles lost his guard and became gullible to Kintobor. He eventually snapped out of it but before that he was roboticized twice. He went on many raids and brought back booty and he was picked to destroy some monsters because they beyond anybody's reach but his.

SA2-based saga
He was taking a vacation to Angel Island when his archrival and somewhat lovelife Rouge was stealing the Master Emerald. He knew it was his detiny to save it so he came into her way. Kintobor broke the emerald and scattered all across Mobius. Knuckles found three pieces on Angel Island and six somewhere in the Northern Isles. He eventually came to Islus Maximus (how the crap?) and help Sonic and Tails find info on where Kintobor was. They went to Aejup to find dirrections and went to the ARK and Knuckles found three pieces of the Master Emerald. After a rage with Rouge, Knuckles got all of the Master Emerald back. Once Sonic used Chaos Controll to travel to somewhere else in the colony, Knuckles helped him come to his senses. When the ARK was in the brink of commencing suicide, Knuckles had to open the final door because nobody had as much of an ability to survive underwater for a long time.

I haven't made anything past this yet. So watch out!

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Sonic the Hedgehog and the Night of Chaos Maker:
Sonic the Hedgehog and the Night of Chaos is a video game based on the Archie Sonic the Hedgehog comics numbered 79 to 84.

Sonic the Hedgehog
Sonic the Hedgehog begins his story the day after Chaos' release from the Black Emerald. He and Elias Acorn find Amy using the Ring of Acorn to age her appearance, making her appear old enough to join the Knothole Freedom Fighters. Sonic and Elias refused her, saying she was still a child but in an older body. They then took her to Nate Morgan, who insisted they take her with them to venture through Station Square. Sonic, after saying goodbye to his parents, and the Freedom Fighters then journey to the city, where they all split up. At nightfall, Sonic is exploring the rooftops when he notices the police and heads over to them to see what's going on. The humans are being attacked by some water monster of which they find that their weapons are useless against. Sonic decides to take it on. Both start attacking each other, Sonic using his Triple Sonic Spin (which didn't work) and the monster using melee attacks. The monster then leaped up onto a flag pole and started attacking Sonic from above. Sonic then ran around the pole causing the monster to fly off into a sewage drainer. The police came forward to congratulate Sonic, but, unbeknownst to all of them, Dr. Eggman was watching and said that Sonic may have won a battle but the war has just begun. Sonic then went to investigate with the mayor, Mr. Bullyani, who said that it reminded him of a certain legend. Searching for this legend, he and Tails went to the Mystic Ruins, not realising that Chaos was following them. They soon met Knuckles the Echidna in the jungle, and asked him what he was doing. He told them that Eggman had smashed the [{Master Emerald]], but, before he could finish his story, they were attacked by Chaos. When Eggman appeared to watch the trio fight the monster, he fed a few Emerald shards to him, making him more powerful. Fortunately, they managed to temporarily defeat him, and Chaos and Eggman fled. Onboard the Tornado, Sonic and Tails approached the airborne Egg Carrier. They managed to avoid the missiles but they had to land. Just then Tails remembered he forgot something; a landing gear! After Sonic and Tails made an explosive entry, made their way to the bridge, only to find Gamma and Eggman waiting Sonic manages to fend off Gamma by deflecting a laser back at it. He goes in to finish it when Amy steps in, stopping Sonic from going further. Elsewhere, Big finds Froggy, who caughed up an Emerald. Big notices it's like one he found earlier. Eggman steps in and snatches both, giving them to Chaos. Tails notcied that the Egg Carrier is losing altitude. Sonic tells him to go to safety with Amy while goes and finishes the fight with Eggman. When searching he finds Big who is stunned at seeing Froggy go after the Emeralds in Chaos, getting himself stuck. Knuckles then arrives. Big manged to get Froggy out with his fishing pole and walked away with Froggy. Eggman appeared, using Ice-bots to freeze Sonic and Knuckles in their tracks so that they would be easier to be digested by Chaos. Chaos then attempts to eat Knuckles, who could do nothing about his situation. Sonic notices that Chaos can't swallow the ice so he flung an Ice-bot into Chaos, which caused it to freeze up, and release Knuckles. After freeing themselves, Sonic and Knuckles smashed Chaos into ice fragments, setting off a chain reaction that was destroying the Carrier. Sonic started to head for the bi-plane but Big beat him to it. Knuckles then just grabbed Sonic and gulided out of there. Eggman appeared, using Ice-bots to freeze Sonic and Knuckles in their tracks so that they would be easier to be digested by Chaos. Chaos then attempts to eat Knuckles, who could do nothing about his situation. Sonic notices that Chaos can't swallow the ice so he flung an Ice-bot into Chaos, which caused it to freeze up, and release Knuckles. After freeing themselves, Sonic and Knuckles smashed Chaos into ice fragments, setting off a chain reaction that was destroying the Carrier. Sonic started to head for the bi-plane but Big beat him too it. Knuckles then just grabbed Sonic and glided out of there. Unbeknownst to them, the water-created being managed to survive and obtain the last of the seven Chaos Emeralds, using the negative energy to becoming Perfect Chaos. With the creature wreaking havoc in Station Square, Sonic was forced to use the remaining positive energies of the Emeralds to become Super Sonic to combat the new threat. He successfully defeated Perfect Chaos, who then returned to his confines in the Black Emerald along side Tikal. The humans in Station Square thanked the Freedom Fighters for their help.

Miles Prower
Miles "Tails" Prower starts out with the other Freedom Fighters, heading out to Station Square. Boarding his plane, with Nate Morgan as a passenger, Tails flies to the city

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S.T.A.I.N Maker:
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