Roleplay talk:Secret Discord/Part2/@comment-30144664-20170710125331/@comment-1942179-20170710175109

I don't know about Jewel's place in the story, but as for finding time to edits keep track of what's going on and who is addressing who. In this case, Smash asked Clockwork to speak, and then Clock asked for Smash to explain his story. It's very awkward for people to start having reaction shots between such points of dialog unless they are actively interrupting to say something. It's especially awkward when your post basically says that they're waiting on the other person to speak, because then it creates a moment of silence which the other person may or may not have been willing to make.

tl;dr if someone is asking someone else a question or trying to get them to do something, try not to post unless you have something significant to add or any good reason to interrupt.