Talk:Garrit The Homicidal Honey badger

Just by skimming through this, I can see tons of spelling and grammatical mistakes, which make it really hard for me to be able to keep reading. Past that, the page's formatting is just bad. Most of one section is italicized, but then the rest isn't, and another section is written out as a heading. "Fast" is not a power. That counts as an ability.

The spelling and grammar really make this page very difficult to read. There are so many all over the place that I'm sure anyone else reading it would be as confused as I am. "Electorloction" is not a word at all. The thing about nails on a chalkboard is completely out of place since that part is saying something about blood. Being a slave and having to take medicine are not physical traits, so I don't see why they would be in the section that I believe is for his appearance.

And now, onto the backstory. Oh, so every kid in his school can beat up someone and none of the staff cares, but as soon as he hits someone, hitting people is against the rules? People don't seem to know how schools work. Also, you seem to be confusing amnesia with an anesthetic.

This backstory appears to be nothing but a Freudian excuse.

In conclusing, before you go around the wiki mocking how unoriginal and effortless everything is just because of tiny things like age, look at your own stuff. This character is bad and badly written as a whole. ♥ Come on and fight me, you cowards!   I run from nobody! ♥ 16:04, July 26, 2014 (UTC)