Talk:Krys the Alicorn

Love it?
I like her! Question, does she like dragons? I like pie, you know why? It&#39;s pie flavored (talk) 22:43, September 1, 2013 (UTC)

How 'bout... no?
Sorry Piano, but one thing both I and several other veteran users have noticed that the majority of your characters are just a bit too... Guh, I'd hate to use this word, but for lack of a better one: "perfect." They seem to lack any real character flaws to make them relatable, they seem to succeed in everything they attempt, thier abilities are generally scaled up to the furthest point you believe you can justify... Oh, and don't get me started on thier *sighs* "popularity."

I'm just not sure just what you expect people who have more experience creating more engaging characters to see in them. Now I'm not trying to go out and attack your works, it's clear that you put a great deal of effort into creating their pages, it's just that I... Dont get it? Are those the words I'm looking for? *shrug* Best I can think of right now. Regardless, if you've the time... Would you mind explaining to me just why we're supposed to like these characters, why we'd become emotionally attached to thier well-being after engaging in a slice-of-life RP with them? Like I said, I just don't get it. I lack a soul!! ^^ 21:25, December 2, 2013 (UTC)

I'm with this guy....
I think Hunter has a point. After reading about Krys, I'm a little scepticle about having my character fight against Krys in the Bloodied Hands Tournament. Can&#39;t spell distraction without action! (talk) 20:04, February 1, 2014 (UTC)

Comments?
I like her.Great RP too~Cyclonestar

Talkplay?
Krys is sitting on the park bench.

Raven walks up to Krys.Nitrogen218 (talk) 00:57, April 30, 2014 (UTC)

Krys stands up, and looks at him. "Um, hi. You don't seem very familiar.... you new to town here?"

"I would say so, yeah. I kinda got lost after a recent "run-in" with unwanted company."Nitrogen218 (talk) 01:45, April 30, 2014 (UTC)

"But anyway, I believe we should set that factor aside for now. Name's Raven, Raven the Cyberhog to be exact."

Krys: My name is Krystal Avril Escavirlno. You could call me Krys. [She sits down next to Raven.] Who is this unwanted company?

Raven: That, in firm understanding, would be a run-in with Conbot Sentries, and I,m not talking about sentry gunturrets either.

Krys: If you want, I could help you buzz them off. Are they anywhere nearby?

Raven: No, and also, you must be crazy. The sentries I'm talking about have arched backs, which enable them to roll around like a ball, a minigun under the armor and on of their shoulders, a blaster, a tail that extends up to 9 meters and fires corrosive gas clouds, and they favor firing from elevated positions.(out of breath) wow was that ever a mouthful.

But, I guess if you want to tag along, I don't mind it at all. But be careful, some sentries Are like spies, you never know where they are

Raven:(ear springs up, starts looking around.)

Krys: It won't be hard, if you haven't noticed. I'm magic. [Her horn lights up and she lifts up a tree.]

Raven: most impressive. If you say so, then alright.(Raven suddenly looks to right a sees something coming and pushes Krys out of the way) Krys, look out!!

Raven: (gets trapped in an electric net) Aaaaaaaaaaauuuaaaagggh!!!(nearing shutdown) ah, dang it.

Krys: [Her horn lights up her usual color. Suddenly, blue magic ribbon swirls around Raven and encloses around him. Suddenly, the ribbon disappears, and Raven is very tiny, as of that, he could escape from that electric net.]

Raven: (runs out of the net) Shocking, that's what I think.

(Sentry takes aim at Krys)

Raven: Krys, find cover, its gonna shoot!!!

Krys: No worries. I got this. [Her horn lights up and a magic light blue semi-circle shield surrounds her from horn-to floor. Raven is in the spell.] Don't worry, it's my safe-guard spell.

Raven: (pulls out Mk25 Nexus rifle and retuturns fire on the sentry) Eat this, you psychotic ggunturret!!

(Sentry is defeated after being shot multiple times)

Raven: that's the 12th sentry today!

Krys: [Her horn lights up. Suddenly, magic powerful blasts come out of her horn.]

Raven:stop. I think it's dead.(Approaches the sentry and kicks it)

Raven: we're good. It's dead. How the heck did this thing even find me?

Krys: I don't even know. Now what to do.... [She snaps her fingers.] While your here, want me to show you around Mariala City? The safe-guard spell will protect you.

Raven: lead the way.

Krys and Raven walk into the city.

Krys: Where's your favorite place to go? I'm sure Mariala City has it.

Raven: I do not know, but it is okay if you show me around to some people you know?

Krys: Oh, sure thing. I know just the person.

Krys and Raven walk up to a rather fancy place.

Krys: This is 17 Cherry Tree Lane. One of my closest friends lives here. [She pushes the elevator button and it opens.] Watch your step.

Raven: I see. It is really a nice place. So tell me, what does this person specialize in doing?

Krys: This one's a fashion star. She is a designer and model for fashion. But, she also takes gymnastics and is taught Street Fighting... her name is Christina. I forgot this elevator was a staircase inside a door....

The two walk down the steps and find a few customers in Christina's boutique. Christina is seen selling somebody a dress.

Customer: Thank you very much, Miss Transon.

Christina: Pleasure doing buisness with you. [She sees Krys and Raven.] Hi Krys!

Krys: Hi Christie. Um, this is Raven. Raven, I would like you to meet Christina.

Raven: hi, how ya doing? Nice to meet ya.

Christina: It's very nice to meet you. Would you like anything, I won't charge you since your a friend with one of my closest ones.

Raven: Hm, let's see what you got. If you don't mind of course.

Christina: Well let's see... I do have this outfit. [Christina brings out a modeler with clothes on it.] This is my Zoo York... um.... whatchamacalit! There's a zoo york tan tank with a black jacket with yellow-orange and light blue flames, white gloves, black cargo pants, black sneakers, a zoo york logoed cap, and shades! Would you like it? Like I said, no charge.

Raven: oh, wow. Is does look really good, I like the flames, shades, and the shoes. yeah, sure. It is definitely cool. Mind if I try it on?

Christina: Sure! The dressing room is right over there. [She points to a little area, with a bench, lots of hooks, and a curtain to close.] Like I said, it's all free.

Raven:(enters the dressing room, closes the curtain, and tries the stuff on) oh, wow. It looks great, actually more than that, it's awesome!

Raven comes out with the clothing on

Raven: what do you think, Krys?

Krys: Wow! You look spectacular.

Christina: Sorry, but policy states that you have to leave in your acutal clothes.

Krys: Here. [Her horn lights up and then a gift box appears.]

Raven: what's this? And thanks for the complement, Krys.

(Raven changes into his original clothes)

Raven: who's gift is it,Krys? Oh, and thanks for the outfit, Christina, I really like it, a lot.

Krys: Like Christie said, you have to take the outfit off. This gift box is to put your outfit in for somewhere later in the day.

Raven:Oh, okay.(goes to the dressing room, changes into his normal clothes, and puts the clothes in the gift box.) Thanks, Krys. Oh, and you too, Christina, for the outfit.

Raven: so, Krys, what do you want to do now while we are in the town?

Krys: Hmm.... well.... there is a McBurgerTown nearby if you're hungry...?

Raven: Yeah, sure. Let's go. I honestly have gotten a bit hungry from the fight with unwanted visitors. It was nice getting to meet you, Christina.

Krys: Alright. [Krys grabs Raven.] Her horn bursts and they teleport to a McBurgerTown.] What would you like?

Raven: A cheeseburger, please. I honestly haven't had one in a long time.Oh, and Krys, when we are done eating, and before you show around the town any further, could we talk at your place?

Krys: Sure. But brace yourself. One cheeseburger please, for Raven, and a chicken ranch salad for me.

Cashier: 11.43

Krys; [She hands her a 20 dollar bill, and the cashier gives her the change. Suddenly, her horn lights up. a blue beam shoots from the sky. Time starts to move faster, except for Raven and Krys.

Cashier: Order up!

Krys: Thank you. [Her horn lights up again, and a blue beam shoots to the sky. The speed is back to normal. Her horn lights up and a beam shoots. A table appears.] Here's a table!

Raven: Krys, is their anything you can't do? I'm really blown away.

Krys: That's very kind of you.... but I am still only a student...

The two start to eat. A couple of minutes later...

Krys: That was sure filling...

Raven: yeah, it was...

Krys: One moment.... I just hope my horn has enough energy to perform a last spell. [Suddenly, her horn lights up and the two teleport to her house.] Here we are.... my house.

Raven: whoa, it is huge. But, it is cool.

Krys: Stand back. [She puts her horn in her horn-shaped hole. It lit up and then the a purple aura went in six corners opening the door. The two stepped into Krys's gigantic library.] Welcome to my home.... I live on the second floor.... the first floor is my library...

Raven:(whistles) this place is HUGE. I never felt so small, in a positive way of course. Do you plan on being a librarian, Krys? '_cause this is awesome.

Krys: [The two start to walk.] Actually.... this is an actual library.... I still have to earn my degree in the college of Gaudia to become a certified librarian.... most people come here and check out books. Like I said, Iive on the second floor.

Raven: oh, okay but still, cool.

Krys: So, what did you want to talk about? Back at the McBurgerTown you asked if we could talk?

Raven: yes. Well,  you know that Conbot Sentry that we encountered at the park? After we killed it, I stumbled upon this. (Shows Krys a diamond-shaped gem and gives it to her). Also,  I should tell you a bit about my past. The info I will tell you should help you understand the incident earlier.

Raven: First,that gem you're holding, is a Powercore Gem. There are only three in existence, and one of the two artifacts i'm supposed to protect. Also, oh, and this might be confusing, I am a Cyber-mobian, asemi-mobian, semi-cyberspace robot. Lastly, my mom was killed when I was five and taken to cyberspace soon after. However. Cyberspace wsd still in constant war with negaspace.

Krys: A powercore gem... although I admit it is quite rare to see a cyber-mobian..... I understand. But be warned.... I know 3 people who are always looking for gems for their evil plots.... there names are Mimi, Jamie and Chloe. [Her horn lights up and a hologram model of the three are showing.] God knows what they're using it for.... if those 3 interfere with the cyberspace-negaspace war..... let's just say it'll be a.... nobody wins. I'll protect the gem..... and you can take it back whenever you want.

Raven: hmhmhmhmm.. Really? I see. But the war was over when I escaped, but the final war was honestly the tip of the iceberg. Nega supreme has ordered my capture and execution, but what he doesn't know is that I'm immortal because of my immortalitizer. Unfortunately, it in a weak level, as it was created, be advised though,  the conbot army has migrated here, they range in different ranks. Conbots, Big Rigs, Sentries, anything. Not only that, Several enemies of mine seek them as well. Metal Raven, Warlord, Vultra, And Ken Kintobor are aligned with the militia. Should those four mix with Mimi, Jamie, and, Chloe, this will be more ugly than anything else.

For both parties, though, the gems tend to fling themselves great distances, like the chaos emeralds, but with only three, it proves as a greater challenge.

Raven: But tell me, what do you know about Mimi, Jamie, and Chloe?

Krys: Okay... let's see... did you ever use a brand called "AngeLotion"?

Raven:Not at all, no. Why's that? Is that something they use? I have seen it, heard of it, but never bought or used it.

Krys: They say it makes your "skin feel beautiful". However, whoever uses it is given nightmares..... and haunt people. And then there was Jamie's "Default" Control Shampoo which was actually a Mind Control Shampoo..... and don't get me started with their evil destruction devices....

Raven: Hm....... Well,  that is a bit clever, but they seem to pull off rookie stunts, from a glance. Only to turn the gullible people into hostile members. Nefarious, just nefarious.

Krys: Yup. So now what?

Raven: Let's continue strolling around the town. Perhaps we could meet other locals, and hopefully find any info about the gems' locations. Also we should be careful if any activity of our enemies rouse around.

Krys: Okay.... where do you want to go?

Raven: Well, let's see. Who else do you know in this city? What do the other people do around here?

Krys: Let's see.... there's Arthur, one of my other unicorn friends....

Raven:Let's pay him a visit.

Krys: There's just one problem... he actually lives in the next town over, in Tamaruin City...

Raven: okay, then.vthen we should stay in this town. Because, the militia can track where we have been, if I remember correctly, and can follow us wherever. Let us hope we find all three gems before things get ugly.

Krys: Let's see. Where would you think you'd find an emerald?

Raven: The gems sometimes fancy a place that had a very high amount of electric energy. Other times, it is random. I even found the blue gem in a river outside mobotropolis once. Since this one is the red stone, the yellow and blue stones could be anywhere. We start where there is a high amount of electricity.

Krys: Somewhere on the boarder of Mariala City and Palisde Town, there's a power generation building. It holds the most electricity in Mariala City...

Raven:Let's go, then. If we can it. But I have doubt's that it--

(Distant noise)

Raven: What was that?

Krys: I dunno.... whatever it is, it can't be good!

Raven: Let's check it out

Krys and Raven run towards the noise and they find it.

Krys: What is that?

???: long time, no see,  Cyberhog. My irritating copy

Raven: (recognizes the voice) Metal Raven!!

M.R: Hmph. Who's yyour deadbeat of a friend?

Raven: ...

This is just to separate these from the talk play.
Sorry, gotta go to school, but I' ll be back when possible see you then.Nitrogen218 (talk) 10:41, April 30, 2014 (UTC)

Sorry gotta get to bed, but I'll be tomorrow. See ya.Nitrogen218 (talk) 02:27, April 30, 2014 (UTC)

G'night. ♪Pianoteen♪ 02:37, April 30, 2014 (UTC)

Alright, I'm back. We can continue if you want.Nitrogen218 (talk) 10:20, April 30, 2014 (UTC)

Gotta get to bed, I'll be back tomorrow, piano. Goodnight.Nitrogen218 (talk) 02:08, May 1, 2014 (UTC)

A'ight. G'night. ♪Pianoteen♪ 00:12, May 2, 2014 (UTC)

See ya later, piano. And thanks for being a good friend, too. I reall y enjoy this talkplay.Nitrogen218 (talk) 02:06, May 2, 2014 (UTC)

Krys's Eyesight
I don't know about you, but from where I come from, using glasses is definitely not a sign that she has above-average eyesight. Chamesthehero (talk) 15:23, March 1, 2014 (UTC)

Just gonna expand on that by saying that I don't think she'd wear glasses if her eyesight is average, because average eyesight still means you can see fine. Glasses are worn to help you actually be able to see/ see more clearly, so I'd have to say they'd be worn if their eyesight was below average.  Goomytastic♫  15:39, March 1, 2014 (UTC)

Both of you make very good points... (I already made the change for Chame's argument...) However, Krys doesn't always wear glasses. Her eyesight is average.... however, Skull made a suggestion about maing Krys wear glasses. I think it'd be good because she'd have better concentration when making clothes and reading. ♪Pianoteen♪ 18:19, March 2, 2014 (UTC)