Talk:Disco The HedgeFox/@comment-25083225-20180416150033

Regardless of who he looks like, there’s still a bunch of problems with this character.

1. He has no history/backstory.

2. There are no negative aspects to his personality and he has no character flaws. You’ve listed that he’s “nice and friendly” but what are his faults? The inability to swim is not a character flaw.

3. The color palette is atrocious. You need to distribute the colors and brighten them up, otherwise he’s the color of grass stains and toothpaste

4. He’s a 23 year old that acts like a 12 year old: he dislikes broccoli, rap music, and alcohol... Most reasonable adults don’t make a big deal about things that mildly annoy them.

Finally, your YouTube friend ripped you off, this is a trace of a 3D rendered image of Sonic with added bands and a tail. This is obvious due to the lack of shading, making it look far bloated in certain regions that would normally have light or shade.

Oh and Sonic Forces isn’t a good game, mediocre at best. Don’t use this as inspiration. Most of us here make up original worlds and stories. I’ll be back later to redesign this character in my art style to show how easy it would be to give this character a distinct look, because their criticism that he looks too much like Sonic is legit. You won’t get anywhere and you’ll get laughed at if you don’t take constructive criticism into account.

5. His abilities are generic and either heavily borrow from Sonic’s moveset or wisp powers. This is boring.

6. The fact that he plays Real-life games and watches real shows is starting to make me think that this character is a self-insert. This is generally frowned upon.