Board Thread:Article Critique/@comment-1942179-20141202024709

The only thing about Pearl that I know needs more delving into is her experiences in raising Sandy--which I decided I would hold off on until I finish writing the earlier episodes in my series. Other than that, I don't see anything else to improve on, so I'd like a second opinion, I suppose. Being Smash's little sister, she probably is a bit overshadowed by her celebrity of a brother in comparison. 