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Dr. Eggman - In the Agent Sonic anime movie, he is the main user of the object. In the movie, he devises a plan to use the extreme flatulence that it causes in missiles to destroy the ozone layer. Sonic the Hedgehog - In Agent Sonic, Sonic takes the serum multiple times throughout the movie, but gets it taken away almost everytime. After being kidnapped by Eggman, he, along with Stealthy, Stella, Tails, and Knuckles, is unknowingly fed the serum, and is used to make the fart missiles. The last time he gets it, he escapes with it successfully. While hiding from an army of Egg-robo, Sonic starts hallucinating the serum as a chili dog, and unknowingly starts eating it. After noticing what he's actually eating, he then devises a plan to eat the serum, and escape the island before Eggman clones the serum. After finishing the serum, he goes as far as he can go and destroys the Flatulab with a giant fart.

Powers
When consumed, it will cause the user to bloat up from the extreme gas that starts forming in the stomach, and fart it out with such force that it can knock down buildings.

History
After eating a sweet potato and farting, Dr. Taterspud tried to make a type of sweet potato that wouldn't make you fart, however while working on it, he accidentally created a sweet potato jelly that did the exact opposite, cause large amounts of flatulence. After Dr. Eggman devised a plan to destroy the ozone layer, Taterspud and Eggman were in a huge dispute, which ended up in Eggman succeeding in getting the serum. After Sonic took the serum, he ate all of it and destroyed Eggman's flatulab with a giant fart.

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Slyther the Hedgehog Maker:Oskarmandude
Slyther is one of the prototypes (near final) of the Ultimate Lifeform, this character is owned by Agent-Pudding

Background Story
Not much is known about Slyther's past. He was once engaged and had a child but when they were killed, he Volunteered for the Slyther Project in an attempt to make his life mean something. The Aim of Project Slyther was to find an infinite energy source for the Shadow/Ultimate Lifeform project. But the Project went wrong and it resulted in Slyther being put into cryo sleep, 3 years later just after the death of Maria Robotnik and right before doctor gerald was captured, he programed Slyther's cryotank and rewrote his memory so that, if Shadow ever failed his mission, Slyther's tank would open and he would attempt Shadow's mission (but the crash screwed up his programming) but as Shadow fell from the ARK to earth, his memorys of maria and other friends of shadow (mainly amy) his memory implant failed and when his cryo pod was launched from the ark, he lost all memory and was found by Oskar the Bat.

Mission
None, now lives his life like a normal hedgehog.

Abilities
As stated before, much like Shadow's but slightly weaker in every way.

Forms
Super Slyther

Slyther is now yellow instead of white, his 2 bottom quills are slightly tilted up and his stats are increased.

Hyper Slyther

Basically Super Slyther with flashing fur and increased stats.

Dark Hyper Slyther

Looks like his Super form, except that his fur is grey, his skin is grey and his eyes, streaks and shoes flash in rainbow colors.

Friends:
Oskar the Bat, Prickle the Porcupine, Crystal the Cat, Gamist and more.

Rivals/Enemies:
None, yet...

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Dolly the Cow Maker:Carmencecille13
Dolly the Cow is a cow that helps out Sonic during the events of Sonic Triple Trouble in the Mobius Redrawn universe. She is based on the American advertisement for the game and named after Dolly, the cloned sheep.

Appearance
Dolly's a white cow with black spots. She wears a strap on her face and has blonde hair.

Personality
Dolly is kind and helpful and says she knows trouble when she sees it. She shows a form of compassion even for her enemies, as shown at the ending of the arc. She's a bit of a country person compared to a city person, but she doesn't mind. She's gotten used to being milked.

History
Dolly met Sonic at her ranch and begged him to defeat Knuckles as he had robbed her. Sonic did, but upon Dolly learning of Knuckles' capture, she told Sonic to rescue him, thinking his capture wasn't fair. After the story, it's assumed Sonic and Dolly hung out together a lot.

Abilities
Dolly can speak fluent Japanese.

Skills
She has enhanced speed, though not on par with Sonic.

Weaknesses
Dolly will lose it when her stuff is stolen.

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Roleplay:WEAR GREEN! Maker:Speedyblue
This is a free join roleplay. You can include your OC in this story. Go ahead, don’t be shy!

Rules

 * All swearing should be censored, with NO exceptions.
 * Your character is ABSOLUTELY allowed to pinch other characters if the characters getting pinched aren’t wearing green.
 * Keep everything you write PG rated.
 * If you want to include your OC, include them below and write your username next to your OC.
 * You can include cannon characters.
 * Nothing sex related is allowed! (Kissing and hugging is okay, though)
 * Minimal drinking/smoking is allowed.
 * No extreme hyper-gory violence is allowed! (Sonic type violence is allowed. Kicking and punching is allowed, too. Minimal blood is allowed, as long as said blood isn’t shown in violent ways. For example, getting pricked by a needle.)
 * ABSOLUTELY NO GODMODDING!

Characters Included

 * Rosebud-An optimistic teenaged girl, but enjoys pinching. (Speedyblue)
 * Platinum-A shy teenaged boy who has a crush on Rosebud; hates being pinched. (Speedyblue)
 * Andy-An aggressive tomboy who enjoys pinching; takes advantage of St. Patricks Day because she has green eyes. (Speedyblue)
 * Lilly-A shy girl who doesn’t believe in wearing green. (Speedyblue)
 * Speedy the Fox-Speedyblue’s fursona. (Speedyblue)
 * Lee Prower-A shy kid with odd inner voices (Leeprower1012)
 * Amber the Razor-Fox-Peppy female android. (Leeprower1012)
 * Wikikinetic: Some SFW user. (Wikikinetic)
 * Leeprower1012: Another SFW user. (Leeprower1012)
 * Speedyblue: Yet another SFW user. AND YSW user. AND VW user.

Guest Stars (Characters in other forms of media)

 * Midori Gurin (Yandere Simulator)-Annoying girl. Has bright green hair, so she doesn’t have to dress for Saint Patrick’s Day. Annoys people by sending them obnoxious emails.
 * YandereDev-The developer for Yandere Simulator. Absolutely HATES Midori Gurin.
 * Kermit the Frog (The Muppets)-OH, COME ON! HE’S KERMIT THE FROG!
 * Dreamcast Sonic-Like normal Dreamcast Sonic, but also sings songs from the Dreamcast era.
 * Kanan Jarrus (Star Wars Rebels)-Some guy who wears green armor. No idea why he's here.
 * Old Spice Man (Old Spice Commercial)-The Man Your Man Could Smell Like.
 * Jason the Egg (Element Animation)-He’s Jason! He’s an egg!!
 * Batman (The LEGO Batman Movie)-HE'S BATMAN.
 * Parappa (Parappa the Rapper)-Say alright! (Alright!) Say oh yeah! (Oh yeah!) What’cha gonna do? (What’cha gonna do?) I gotta believe! (I gotta believe!)
 * Kagamine Len (Vocaloid)-Usually doesn’t rap, but when he does, HE IS FREAKING AMAZING! (Proof can be found here: https://youtu.be/LMNol4WjcY0. You can thank me later.)
 * KAITO (Vocaloid)-Adult Kagamine Len. Practically...except he has BLUE HAIR. Only appears because my keyboard autocorrects Kaiju to KAITO.
 * Kagamine Rin (Vocaloid)-Len’s female counterpart.

Participants
Speedyblue (Y’know, that weird person who started this roleplay)

Leeprower1012

Wikikinetic

Chapter 1: HAPPY SAINT PATRICKS DAY!
Rosebud: (Wakes up. Proceeds to yawn) Happy Saint Patricks Day! (Puts on green dress instead of wearing her normal blue dress) I wonder how many people I get to pinch today?

Platinum: (Comes in, wearing a green tie. Proceeds to blush) Hi, Rosebud. You look beautiful in green.

Rosebud: (Smiles) Thank you, Platinum.

Andy: (Bursts in. Jokingly slaps Platinum with his tie) I will never stop!

Platinum: Stop!

Andy: (Pinches him) I’m gonna get you!

Rosebud: (Pinches Platinum) Yes! Yes! Yes!

Platinum: Stop! Stop!

Rosebud: (Stops. Puts Platinum’s tie back on.) Sorry...

Platinum: You know how much I don’t like being pinched!

Andy: Next year, wear a bow tie.

Rosebud: Why are you not wearing green, Andy?

Andy: I have GREEN EYES!

Speedy the Fox: Hey guys. Do wearing colored contacts count as wearing green?

Rosebud: (Pinches Speedy)

Speedy the Fox: Answer my question!

Rosebud: ...yes.

Speedy the Fox: (Puts on colored contacts)

(Lee and Amber are walking through a large park, giggling and talking to each other)

Rosebud: (Watches through window) They seem cute together.

Andy: Uggggggggh. Kill me now!

Speedy the Fox: Don’t remind me of Valentines Day! That’s another holiday for another year.

Lilly: (Walks in) Did someone say VALENTINES DAY?!

(Everyone in Rosebud’s room pinches Lilly)

Lilly: I don’t wear green!

Rosebud: Why? It’s good luck.

Lilly: Does green look good with brown to you?

Speedy the Fox: No. But here, take some colored contacts!

Lilly: (Puts on colored contacts)

Chapter 2: Not Quite Alone
(Lee and Amber are sitting on a bench, relaxing. Lee notices Rosebud watching through the window. He waves nervously)

(Amber turns) :Oh, look! Strangers watching us through a window! It's good we're not....

Lee: Yeah, we don't....

Amber: Just saying this now. People at their keyboards! We don't kiss!

Lee:......

People at Keyboards: (Disappointed) Awwwwwwww.

(Rosebud turns away because she got bored. She closes the window, closes the blinds, and goes to the kitchen)

Lilly: Hey, what are you doing?

Rosebud: Maybe we can make some green snacks? Like, green cookies.

Platinum: Does that involve...eggs?

Rosebud: Yes...

Platinum: That’s it. I’m done. (Goes outside)

(Rosebud and Lilly make sugar cookies with green frosting. They taste them, and decide it would be nice to give some to Lee and Amber. Rosebud goes back to her room, opens the window, throws some cookies toward Lee and Amber, and closes the window)

(A blue form exits Lee's hand, catching the cookies and pulling them back)

Lee: Oh, thanks!

Amber: Yeah, what he said!

(They nom the cookies)

(Rosebud smiles)

Andy: You’re lucky that the cookies didn’t get wet.

Rosebud: Oh, yes. I’m also lucky that the cookies didn’t get frozen...

Lilly: ...at least they would have melted.

Rosebud: But those green cookies were delicious. Or, midori cookies~...

Midori Gurin: Did somebody say Midori?!

Andy: Oh no.

Midori Gurin: I am...Midori Gurinu~! (Does a “cute” pose.)

Rosebud: Shouldn’t you be on your phone?

Midori Gurin: Yes. I can’t stay for long. I have to send YandereDev annoying emails non-stop! YANDEREDEV, YANDEREDEV! (Leaves)

Andy: Can we get her banned from appearing ever again?

Speedy the Fox: Right away!

Chapter 3: Let’s Find That Four Leaf Clover, Everybody!
Speedy the Fox: Oh, look! A 'rainbow! '

Rosebud: Does it have a pot of gold?!

Andy: That’s just a dumb myth.

Speedy the Fox: Y’mean like this roleplay?

Andy: '''YEAH! JUST LIKE THIS ROLEPLAY! '''

The Human Speedy: Calling this a dumb myth is an insult to dumb myths.

(I’m so sorry to everyone who participated in this roleplay.)

(Rosebud steps outside and follows the rainbow.) 

Rosebud: ...she’s back...

(Midori Gurin comes out with her phone in her hand)

Midori Gurin: YANDEREDEV, YANDEREDEV! WHEN WILL I BECOME A RIVAL?! CAN A MEMBER OF THE STUDENT COUNCIL MEMBER BE BULLIED?! (Asks more stupid questions)

Rosebud: ''I just wish that gory violence rule didn’t exist. And HOW does she keep respawning?! ''

YandereDev: Come here, Midori! Come now so I can eleminate you off screen, so Speedyblue can’t ban herself! (Drags Midori off screen.)

Rosebud: ''Good riddance. ''

Andy: (Steps outside) Hey! He’s doing my job!

(A weird banjo is heard)

Andy: What the h*ll?

Kermit the Frog: ''Why are there so many songs about rainbows? And what’s on the other side? Rainbows are visions, but only illusions. And rainbows have nothing to hide. So we’ve been told and some choose to believe it. I know they’re wrong, wait and see. Someday we’ll find it, the Rainbow Connection. The lovers, the dreamers, and me~. ''

Rosebud: Oh my! A singing frog! ''Who said that every wish would be heard and be answered, when wished on the morning star? Somebody thought of that, and someone believed it, and look what’s it’s done so far. What’s so amazing that keeps us stargazing, and what do we think we might see. ''

Kermit and Rosebud: ''Someday we’ll find it, the Rainbow Connection. The lovers, the dreamers, and me~. ''

(Andy smashes the banjo over Kermit’s head)

Rosebud: But his singing is good!

(Lee and Amber are watching the cross dimensional maelstrom going on in front of them)

Rosebud: Oh, it’s them again! Hello, other OCs! What are your names?

Lee:...... What's an OC?

Amber: Original character. Hi! I'm Amber! This is Lee!

Rosebud: Hi, Amber and Lee. My name is Rosebud! This is Andy!

Andy: (Rolls eyes in disgust)

Amber: OK, hi!

Lee: How did I get in this mess?....

Andy: (Whispers to Lee) You and I are the same in the way that...

(Dreamcast Sonic comes out with a guitar)

Dreamcast Sonic: ''...We have our own styles and we won’t change! You are filled with evil, and I am not! There is no way I can lose~! ''

Andy: D*mmit! I meant that we both hate the situation we’re currently in!

Rosebud: ''Can’t hold on much longer! ''

Dreamcast Sonic: ''But I will never let go! ''

Kanan Jarrus: I hope not. It's a long way down.

(Everyone stares at him)

Kanan Jarrus: What? I'm wearing green.

(Kanan disappears through the fourth wall)

Wikikinetic: Official Jedi business. You can all go back to your drinks.

(Wikikinetic disappears through the fourth wall too)

Rosebud: A magical fourth wall exists!

Andy: Speedy should stop putting italics on the word ''magical. ''OH, COME ON!

Speedy the Fox: Y’know what’s truly ''magical? ''Four leafed clovers. GO. FIND. ONE.

Andy: But that’s impossible!

Rosebud: Nothing is impossible ''if you try. ''

Lee: Good idea, I'm outta here.

(Lee and Amber leave to try and find the four leafed clover)

Rosebud: Hey! Wait for me!

(Rosebud runs after Lee and Amber. Andy runs after Rosebud.)

Chapter 4: The Italics Strike Back.
''Andy: WHAT?! The title of this chapter is in '''ITALICS?! '''Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! ''

Amber: I could make the whole font for this chapter wonky?

''Andy: Hey, why don’t you have italics, Amber?! ''

''Rosebud: True villian of the story: The WRITERS. ''

Speedyblue: That’s right. Isn’t it, Leeprower1012?

Lee: Who?

Leeprower1012: Me

(Lee stares blankly at the sky)

Leeprower1012: Hang on, give me.... one second..

Amber: Well, that's something.

''Rosebud: Oh wow! '''BOLD TEXT! Well, we would LOVE to stay and chat, but we gotta find that four leafed clover. '

Speedyblue: But that’s impossible!

Old Spice Man: Anything is possible when you wear Old Spice Cologne. I'm on a horse.

Jason the Egg: No! Anything is possible with me in your fridge!!

(Jason poofs cheese from nowhere)

Kanan Jarrus: Who is that kid?

Jason: I'm Jason! I'm an egg!

Speedyblue: Oh well. That’s what happens when you make a roleplay that’s SUPPOSED to be stupid.

Midori Gurin: Yeah, since YandereDev keeps murdering me, I respawn every time! Go play Midori Forest!

Batman: NOOO. I DON'T WANNA DO THAT.

Jason: Yay! Now I can leave!

(Jason explodes into confetti)

''Rosebud: He was funny. ''

''Andy: FALSE! And this is starting to get trippy. ''

(Parappa the Rapper enters the scene)

''Andy: No! Too weird! Too trippy! EVACUATE! '''EVACUATE! '

(Parappa turns on a boombox)

Parappa: Let me hear you say “alright!”

''Rosebud: Alright! ''

Parappa: Let me hear you say “oh yeah!”

''Rosebud: Oh yeah! ''

Parappa: Now let me hear you say “whatcha gonna do?”

''Rosebud: Whatcha gonna do? ''

Parappa: I need to hear you say “I gotta believe!”

''Rosebud: I gotta believe! ''

''Andy: No, Rosebud! This will only lead to trippiness! EVACUATE! '''EVACUATE! '(Turns off Parappa’s boombox, smashes it over his head, and FORCES him to leave)

''Rosebud: At least we still have Kagamine Len. ''

Kagamine Len: ねえ！ 私はラップできません！ なんで私を見ていますか？私はラップできないばかりのショタ！(Translation: Hey! I can’t rap! Why are you looking at me? I’m just a shota who can’t rap!)

Andy: You don’t have to be great; just better than Parappa. That’s all. (Hands Len a microphone, even though he has an earphone.)

Len: よかった. ここに行く. (Translation: Alright. Here goes. [BE AWARE OF THIS FOR THE FOLLOWING PART! This rap is pretty fast, so it’s hard to keep up when there’s NO TRANSLATION. However, it’s the same rap I put in Guest Stars part. So, you can keep up there.]) 今でもこの心揺らすのは、脳裏に焼きつく君のLast Smile、その幻に惑いパントマイム、踊らされ迎えた朝はCloudy Sky. 思えば遥か遥い日の出会い、笑顔の色はかがやく輝くEverwhite、だった僕の青空をみつけた日、忘れるわけないでしょ絶対に. 唇から漏れたTender Wind に、誘われるまま飛び込んだAventure、疲れ果てた頭で見た白昼夢、見せるのは記憶の底のサブリミナル. Lovely Night 奪いたくて剥いた牙、巡り巡って僕に突き刺さる今、瞳から失われたブリリアンス、その目線はどんな言葉よりも痛い.

''Rosebud: Len never disappoints his fangirls. ''

Lee: What?

Amber: It's a Japanese rap!

Lee: ....

Leeprower1012: I mixed up fonts some more. [Insert Lenny]

'' Rosebud: Well, that’s interesting. ''

Speedyblue: Reality is stranger than fiction. [Insert Lenny]

Andy: If that’s true, monsters should be eating your house.

Speedyblue: 'You better not spawn a kaiju, OR I WILL KILL YOU! ' No! Don’t autocorrect to KAITO!

KAITO: こんにちわ！ 私はカイトです！お元気ですか？ (Translation: Hello! I am KAITO! How are you doing?)

''Rosebud: Uh, fine. Thanks. ''

''Andy: This is getting too weird. ''

KAITO: あなたはこれを探していましたか？ (Translation: Were you looking for this?) (Hands over a four leafed clover.)

''Rosebud: Yes. ''

KAITO: ^ - ^ (Takes Len back to Virtual Japan)

Len: You are not my dad, KAITO!

(Lee's eyes spin in circles, unable to comprehend what is happening)

Speedyblue: Well, that rap was pretty melancholic.

(The song Melancholic starts playing.)

Speedyblue: No, not the SONG!

Rosebud: It’s Len’s twin sister, Rin! Hey, my italics are gone!

Speedyblue: More like female counterpart.

(Lee dies in a crazy font, then comes back in a flash of darkness)

Lee: wut?

''Speedy the Fox: You died in a fevered nightmare. ''

(Rin was about to sing, but awkwardly leaves the scene.)

Kagamine Rin: さよなら. (Translation: Goodbye.)

''Rosebud: Are you alright? ''

''Speedy the Fox: Does it LOOK like he’s alright?! ''

''Andy: We should end it here. ''

Speedyblue: Wait! We forgot the best part!

''Rosebud: What do you mean? ''

Speedyblue: I have to say two things: First, aren’t you glad there’s no shipping?! Second, to everyone who joined and read this, thanks...I guess. ''Goodbye, Internet! ''' I WON’T MISS YOU! '

''Well, that’s the end. Come back for Speedyblue’s Easter Roleplay! Goodbye~! Sayonara~! ''

Sequels
Yes, I made a sequel to this thing. Here, take ittttttttttttttttttttt!
 * Roleplay:Eggcellent!

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Ashlotte The Mouse Maker:FemaleSonikku
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