Talk:Midnight Ender/@comment-32712012-20180704092713

Nice character page! I'm looking forward to seeing where this character goes.

I have one suggestion for the page: You might want to split off the History section into its own subpage—possibly with a summary of her history here—as the 21-paragraph, 1500 word history was a bit daunting to get through for me as a casual reader who wanted to get a general idea for the character. It was ultimately worth it for me, but for those readers who would give up after a dozen paragraphs, as I considered doing, you might want to do this split-and-possible-overview.

Again, nice page! I do really like it.