Talk:Renegade the Hedgemorph

Review VegasFox
Alright! So this is Renegade?

Okay, so already, I'm not liking something.

"Renegade is a sort of layed-back, mysterious character, with a Shadow the Hedgehog past"

Do not do that, he should not have a past the same or similar to someone else we all know, and you also shouldn't mention it. It completely pull away from the originality factor and makes it seem like you're trying to copy.

I read his history and I can't see how he has a Shadow past at all unless I'm missing something. I like your originality in the whole "Morph Race" thing, THAT is actually something interesting and I would love to see you get into more detail about his life there, how the race lives, and what is normal and abnormal there.

And when I ask how the Morphs Live I mean things like rules, regulations, living arrangments, how they get education, etc.

Also, do you think you could explain his life when he first began living on Mobius and when he first met his friends? You could do so much with his life story if you are just willing to work hard at making it original and different from usual, already I'm curious about the Morphs and I want to know more about them. I also want to know if they affected Renegade's life negatively or positively. With a little work this character could be a lot better :)

I had very little to work with but I actually think I had enough to give some good tips,

I like Renegade, he is bit on the tipsy side though and could be improved personality and story wise, his design is great (Even though I would personally perfer not to use the doll maker) you could do a lot with him if you are willing to work hard at it :) I give him... a 5.4 out of 10 a little work and alterations and I think this character would be great :)