Talk:Ayi/Creation/@comment-28110995-20160728174659

There are multiple issues that I have found that possibly should be fixed in order to clarify your page a little more:

1. Could you provide the names of the deities that 'created the moon?

2. How was one of the deities consumed by corruption, meaning what caused this to happen? Did the very corruption that consumed the deitiy consume the moon?

3. Where did the spirits (Eldas) come from? Did they exist at the time before the deities disappeared?

4. It is interesting that acknowledgement that the information was "false" was made. However, why did they want to experiment the inhabitants? Did they want to prove something to the disappeared deities?

This is just a few suggestions to your page, that perhaps, you can resolve to make your page much better. :)