User blog comment:Wh!te$tar/ Training Grounds part 1: Writing/@comment-4883076-20121006192318

heres mine

THE DEATH OF LAGOS SAUSKE AND KING

Lagos was laid down on a flat boulder,his arms and legs broken,he was covered in several wounds and his staff was sna p ped,his eyes were o pen,but they were slowly closing,a shaking hand was edging over to a halve of the staff,he grabbed it weakly and threw it at the assilant,King,the s pear managed to stab his core,but just barely,but that was enough to reo pen a fatal wound,King then finshed Lagos off with a deadly strike from his sword,Lagos' neck was slitted,and he slowly closed his eyes and died peacefully,King then stumbled back,the s pear was still stuck in his wound,he fell on his knees,then colla psed on the gravel,he s pat out some blood,then died

there you go,and this is the first time I use story format