Talk:Book Three: The Invasion/Chapter Seventeen

Ideas section
Ok, here are the rough ideas, with no dialogue or description. They're in point form, because that's what I thought of them in.


 * Statyx and Shima power up. (forms to be decided by Kagi and Shima)
 * More banter exchanged between Hyper Sonic and Prime Scourge, with the famous line "United you stand, divided you fall" being mentioned.
 * Prime Scourge attacks, revealing Shunpo (Flash Steps from Bleach, a series that a lot of references in this chapter, mostly to do with Scourge and Blood, when the latter appears)
 * Prime Scourge defeats Chao Cloak Cookies, Excalibur-Manic and ______ Shima in that order, without any apparent effort. (Shima's form to be decided)
 * Blood arrives in his Blazing Blue form, shooting Prime Scourge a few times with a bow and arrows, then switching to his Zanpakto, Tsukiakara, exchanging more banter with Scourge.
 * Prime Scourge attacks again, managing to defeat Time Warp Silver and ______ Statyx in two moderate-length battles, although appearing unharmed again. (Statyx's form to be decided)
 * Hyper Sonic figures out some form of meaning to the previously mentioned line, powering up to Ultra and fusing with Ultra Shadow, creating Ultra Shadic. Blood reveals a Hollow mask, and enters his Heartless form, enhanced by his Blazing Blue form's power, something he nicknames the "Blue Hollow" form.
 * The three remaining combatants (Blue Hollow Blood, Ultra Shadic and Prime Scourge) continue to fight, although this time the fight appears to be a lot more balanced.
 * Chapter ends with Shadic commenting on sensing a large power approaching, as the combined minds of Shadow and Sonic come up with a plan to work on the upcoming arrival of a fresh and powerful presence to the battle as the book carries over to the concurrent battle between Will and Striker.

Ok, things I NEED before I can continue.


 * Forms for Statyx and Shima. I was thinking Hyper for Statyx, and possibly Super or Hyper for Shima, but I need the character's creator to give their own suggestion, something I did with BloodSonic for Blood's forms in this fight.

And...yeah. This section is purely for ideas for not only this chapter, but for the following chapters and the involved battles (Will vs. Striker, Will vs. Scourge (possibly Will, Blood & Shadic vs. Scourge for a while), maybe a Shadow vs. Fineventus battle in the epilogue, and also other ideas for the books after this point, the Demon Saga and following, where I have rough plans for the events, but nothing solid.

Thanks, and sorry for the wall of text.

Flashfire   Master of   Flames  07:28, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

Comments Section
Ok, THIS section is for general comments, so feel free to critique as much as you like! Flashfire   Master of   Flames  07:28, April 1, 2011 (UTC)