Thread:GalaxyWorld27/@comment-33279589-20180328074546/@comment-32712012-20180404150922

This is another one of those edits with good parts and bad parts. The Powers, Relationships, and Trivia sections were improved in your latest edits, which is good. On the other hand, the change that you made to the Personality section actually made that section worse than it was before, as rather than removing the sentence that I asked for you to remove, you instead removed other sentences that I would have liked to have had remain in the article.

Could I edit the Azmaria article to show you what change I want made there, just as I did to the Yuki article to show you what change I wanted made there? If you don't like the changes that I'd like to make there, you can always revert them back, but I think that, like with Yuki's article, it would be easier by this point to show you what changes I want made than to explain them.

Thanks for all of the help!