Talk:Sid the Hero/@comment-27032473-20151128014333/@comment-25638472-20151128015809

You're asking us what you should change, but honestly, I have to think hard about what NOT to change, as this needs a complete makeover so badly..

This character is trying to do so many things at once and not really excelling at gripping the reader with any of them.. You've already heard the complaints from below, and I don't think just cutting 90% of his "fat" would do the trick here. I recommend thinking about balance and also about making the character interesting. In short: try again.