User blog comment:Sonicsmansion97/Roleplay Shout-out/@comment-1617565-20111102175649

I came. I saw. I left dissapointed. Here's why:


 * 1) There were several noticable gramar/spelling mmistakes in the plot description that hindered my understanding of what you're setting out to do.
 * 2) The way you've got your characters section set up is much more confusing than the established "Heroes, Neutral, Villians" method.
 * 3) The roleplay area isn't formated well, all the text in the section is bold and highlighted.
 * 4) There is no number four.

I will not be joining, and if you don't clean up the page the admins will most likely delete it. Just a fair warning.