Roleplay talk:A Meteor Story

Well this certainly has potential. This could be a great roleplay even, if played properly. Not only will I join, but I'd like to invite my two younger brothers to this RP as well.

Also, I see that you based a lot of your rules off of my guide on Sonic Blitz. =P ~Smash The Echidna~ http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100421224452/sonicfanon/images/0/04/Smash_life.png 06:04, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. I hope you didn't mind me basing the rules off your guide. They're good rules and I wanted to see if good rules could make a good roleplay. Also this way it can be a free join and not end up a catastrophe. Sonicfan919 06:22, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

I don't mind at all. I'm happy to see someone using them. I hope they work out. I'll be helping to enforce them myself.~Smash The Echidna~ http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100421224452/sonicfanon/images/0/04/Smash_life.png 06:30, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. Sonicfan919 06:38, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Can i join

Is it just me, or does this plot sound a lot like Sonic Riders: ZeroG? Regardless, I think I might join this one, just to get my lesser used characters some action. My function is not my purpose.  My purpose is to complete my function.   ~Xi  19:39, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'm reluctant to let you join, Mason, even though this isn't even my RP. I hear you have a bit of a history with bad roleplays, and I'm not expecting a sudden change of pace here.~Smash The Echidna~ http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100421224452/sonicfanon/images/0/04/Smash_life.png 19:43, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Also why would you ask to join and THEN sign your name before you've been accepted?~Smash The Echidna~ http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100421224452/sonicfanon/images/0/04/Smash_life.png 19:44, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

E-113 and Smash can join but Mason, weren't you the one who made the highschool roleplay? If so then no,you can't join at the moment. 99.88.84.147 19:46, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, that was me. I was also the one who just did the SFX Sonicfan919 19:47, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, That was indeed Mason's doing.

Also, like E-113 said, I'm taking this chance to get some of my lesser used characters into the spotlight. Namely Thunder and his brothers.~Smash The Echidna~ http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100421224452/sonicfanon/images/0/04/Smash_life.png 19:52, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

May I please join this?"I watch you from nowhere, You see nothing but mystery, "I hide in plain sight. The General of the Greatest Uknown Army, never to be known but known by all." 19:54, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

May i join please?Dayton the hedgehog 19:57, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Okay so Mason no, just no. Stay away from this roleplay. Oh, but pleaase vote on the awards blog.

Gale, I'm a little neutral about you in the Quest for the Galactic rings Gale wasn't about to give his ring away and the only reason we got it was because he gave it away but fine I guess.

@New user:I'm taking it this is your first roleplay so go ahead, enjoy your first experiance. Sonicfan919 20:10, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry. <=("I watch you from nowhere, You see nothing but mystery, "I hide in plain sight. The General of the Greatest Uknown Army, never to be known but known by all." 20:12, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

It's okay, like I said you can join. Sonicfan919 20:13, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Just so you know, I'll be watching all of you. I don't want this roleplay getting out of hand, so be sure to follow the rules! ~Smash The Echidna~ http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100421224452/sonicfanon/images/0/04/Smash_life.png 20:19, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

What the heck? Why did Alasdair randomly say here we go? Is he Mario or something? I would think he would be more alarmed or something. Sonicfan919 20:19, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, that edit conflict confused me. =/ ~Smash The Echidna~ http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100421224452/sonicfanon/images/0/04/Smash_life.png 20:24, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Umm when do i joinDayton the hedgehog 20:32, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Just find a legitimate time to join in. I'd suggest starting with your characters' reaction to the meteors crashing.~Smash The Echidna~ http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100421224452/sonicfanon/images/0/04/Smash_life.png 20:34, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'm somewhat amused at the differences in our entrances. My writing makes it look like the roleplay's gotten a pretty big start, and has started to progress within the story, but I only just introduced my characters. Maybe this is why I run into so many edit conflicts.~Smash The Echidna~ http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100421224452/sonicfanon/images/0/04/Smash_life.png 20:46, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, you know I just realized that I should definitely add Gizmo, as he would most likely be the one to inform my group of the meteors power.~Smash The Echidna~ http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100421224452/sonicfanon/images/0/04/Smash_life.png 20:52, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

given that three character have a demon weapon, is it ok if i speak the weapons from time to time? ' Fear my Undead army or become their lunch!  Your choice really.  20:56, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Sure. Lemme' guess the three a Droget, Krinkinko and Alasdair right? Sonicfan919 20:59, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

aye that be them. i'll try keep to the rules if i do.

Oh, and guys I want you to edit your posts to make the characters more realistic and not just say one word.

Seriously if a meteor were crashing near them who would just say..Oh no. Sonicfan919 21:02, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Any problems so far Smash? Sonicfan919 21:33, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I don't understand what happened after my last edit. Specifically, this:

Dayton-driving car-Anyone out here

'''Alasdair: Here. Over here. '''

Dayton:Dude get in 

'''Alasdair: *gets in the car* Chaos City. '''

Dayton:we need to got some other Survivors first 

The main thing I don't understand is the whole Survivors thing. What is he talking about? This isn't some sort of apocolypse or anything. ~Smash The Echidna~ http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100421224452/sonicfanon/images/0/04/Smash_life.png 21:37, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

EDIT: Lol, I see we both caught onto the same thing at the same time. Nice.~Smash The Echidna~ http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100421224452/sonicfanon/images/0/04/Smash_life.png 21:37, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, that's more or less word for word what I said. Sonicfan919 21:41, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I know, right? XD~Smash The Echidna~ http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100421224452/sonicfanon/images/0/04/Smash_life.png 21:44, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

hey guys i know it's a little late but can i join this RP? i haven't donw one in ages--Find the Life Flame, There you will find my Destiny. 23:14, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

It's not really late. The RP's just started.~Smash The Echidna~ http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100421224452/sonicfanon/images/0/04/Smash_life.png 23:13, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

cool thx ^-^--Find the Life Flame, There you will find my Destiny. 23:14, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not really in charge here, though, so wait for Sonicfan's approval.~Smash The Echidna~ http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100421224452/sonicfanon/images/0/04/Smash_life.png 23:15, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Use proper grammer and your in. Sonicfan919 23:23, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Is this a free Join? If so, you know what I'm going to ask HS664 Do you feel the Chaos?! 23:24, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Okay guys I'm back you can start again now. Sonicfan919 23:24, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

No it's not a free join. H664 I'm not sure if I should let you in or not. Sonicfan919 23:25, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

SHADOW! Use proper grammer and punctuation! Sonicfan919 23:26, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

i never RP without good Grammer--Find the Life Flame, There you will find my Destiny. 23:26, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Oh really than how come that "I" in the beginning of your sentence wasn't capitalized and why don't you use periods? Sonicfan919 23:29, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I don't mind much. See ya round. HS664Do you feel the Chaos?! 23:30, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can I join this? I told you! I told you!   23:49, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I remember you saying you weren't sure about letting me join. If you do come to a decision tell me. HS664 Do you feel the Chaos?! 23:56, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

iv got quite interested so imma gonna ask can i join. ' Fear my Undead army or become their lunch!  Your choice really.  00:07, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Only if you use proper grammer and punctuation which you just didn't. Sonicfan919 00:09, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Does that mean I can join, since I did use proper grammar? I told you! I told you!   00:11, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry my good man, i'm quite capable of that. ' My Shadow Forge is powered by Dark Matter.  00:13, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah I guess you can join just follow the rules and don't randonly appear. Also be sure to be descriptive. Sonicfan919 00:24, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Who deleted my post, and why? (Frozen scorp)

Because you need to ASK to join! Sonicfan919 02:01, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Okay guys before we start part 2 let's give or feedback on part one. Sonicfan919 02:03, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

hey guys gotta goto bed so can you pause it please?--Find the Life Flame, There you will find my Destiny. 02:09, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Can I join, please? (frozen scorp)

Okay like I said we need to voice our opinions on part one before we start part two. I'll go first.

We had a few slip ups like the whole apocalypse thing and bad punctuation and grammer but overall I think we did pretty good. Sonicfan919 03:17, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Anyone? Sonicfan919 04:37, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

To be honest, The only parts that REALLY made sense were yours and mine. Alasdair was acceptable, The Black Hedgehog was..I dunno, I was kinda iffy about it. And Dayton randomly got a car. I don't know where or why. Put more description in your posts, people! You make it confusing with your one-liners! Do you see the MASSIVE difference between your parts and mine? I removed my parts just to see the length, and my parts take up roughly 65% of the whole chapter. I take the time to explain what is going on with my characters, meanwhile you guys just have one line. One sentence per edit. You guys need to take the time to describe what you're doing, like I did. At the very least work like Sonicfan.~Smash The Echidna~ http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100421224452/sonicfanon/images/0/04/Smash_life.png 04:38, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Okay I see where your going with this we need to be more descriptive. In the next chapter I hope this improves and I'm letting Dayton off easy since this is his first time. Sonicfan919 04:42, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I suppose it is. But still, try to work with us here. If you really need an example, then here.

Also Alasdair was godmodding because htrough ALL that pain he was just shrugging it off. Sonicfan919 05:00, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

So should I delete his part or simply modify it? Sonicfan919 05:04, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Example of descriptive roleplaying
Here's an example of Do's, Don'ts, and preferred. I know some of you like script format, but I'd prefer if you used story format like me.

Don't: Sonic: i leik chlidawgs, lulz *gobles 10235t343830850 hcildiogs** *burqs lowdly adn maeks a durr faec*

Do: Sonic: I like Chili dogs, haha. *takes a mouthful of his chili dog, and swallows.* Mm-*burps* Oh, excuse me.

Preferred:

Sonic gave his friend an amused grin. "I like Chili dogs." He assured with a hearty laugh. He took a mouthful of his chilidog, munching happily on it for a few moments before swallowing. "Mmm-" He suddenly let out a loud burp. With a sheepish grin, he scratched the back of his head. "Oh, Excuse me."

That's an example for grammar, mainly. Even I couldn't understand what I wrote in the don't. Here's another example, this time for descriptiveness.

Don't: Smash: Spirit Blast.

Do: Smash: Spirit Blast! *throws a punch towards so&so in slow motion, but then breaks out into a high speed seconds before impact, causing a bright flash and powerful knock-back if it hit.*

Preferred: Smash concentrated most of his energy into his next attack, and threw a punch towards Mr. Target's face. He began moving in slow motion, glowing brightly as he was leaving a trail of afterimages. Suddenly he broke out into his normal speed and delivered the blow. A bright flash would occur, blowing the target back if it were successful. "That's...what I call a Spirit Blast."

You see how much better informed people can be if you just describe what it is you're doing? It's not that hard, really. ~Smash The Echidna~ http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100421224452/sonicfanon/images/0/04/Smash_life.png 04:47, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Oh right, I forgot about that. That's not acceptable, then.~Smash The Echidna~ http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100421224452/sonicfanon/images/0/04/Smash_life.png 05:02, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Tell him first. Also don't worry about posting down here. It's easier this way.~Smash The Echidna~ http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100421224452/sonicfanon/images/0/04/Smash_life.png 05:05, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

So should we start part two? Sonicfan919 05:10, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I suppose we could.~Smash The Echidna~ http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100421224452/sonicfanon/images/0/04/Smash_life.png 10:20, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

so script style is acceptable and story style is prefferred. im not very good at story style. ' My Shadow Forge is powered by Dark Matter.  10:31, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

alright i get it....--Find the Life Flame, There you will find my Destiny. 11:39, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

is it too late to join? Shinobi Path- -The first of the Six 12:59, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

(*Facepalm* I can't believe I didn't notice that "no canon characters" thing. I'm sorry! Anyway I'll be doing story format because honestly, this is the first site I've ever been on that even does script format. I told you!  I told you!   14:15, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

No Numbuh. It's not too late to join you and Marx can both join. Sonicfan919 16:21, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

How on Mobius did you come up with this Idea? Good Luck on this becoming a good Roleplay. HS664 Do you feel the Chaos?! 16:35, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

im gonna add a couple of villains. should I state their purpose on the RP? Shinobi Path- -The first of the Six 16:36, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

@H664:..........

@Numbuh:Yes. Sonicfan919 16:38, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I added Snap! Shinobi Path- -The first of the Six 16:52, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm...should I add Jonik? Sonicfan919 16:53, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

that's what i was hoping for Shinobi Path- -The first of the Six 16:55, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Okay,I'll add him. Sonicfan919 16:56, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Well, this has been moving pretty fast. Hopefully I didn't miss much. My function is not my purpose.  My purpose is to complete my function.   ~Xi  17:09, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Nope, you didn't miss much just read part 1 to find out what's goin' on. Sonicfan919 17:35, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Smash is it alright if I put your preferred and incorrect format in the rules? Sonicfan919 19:50, August 22, 2011 (UTC)