Talk:Neferet the Dark

Well, I was asked to do a lil review of the character.

I think she's... great. It's a shame there's no pic of her yet, but it's probably one of the only characters where I've seen time-based abilities that weren't too overpowered. The whole "I stop you and shoot you many times for a few seconds" is a bit much, but it can be counterable somewhat. I don't tend to judge a character based on personality or character because those don't cause issues in a roleplay; the powers do, which as said are good for me. I like the Doctor Who reference; very nice ^^ -- Guyviroth -   I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for what I'm not..  22:25, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you Guy. I really wasn't expecting her to be too good. When my dad's scanner works, I'll be putting a picture of Neferet ASAP. And for the Nebulus Barricade I'm thinking you're talking of, Neferet isn't a quick shooter; prefering accuracy over speed, so it'd probably be only 1-5 'well-aimed shots'. Thanks for being honest and a good critic ^^ Nefereti 22:31, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Well, thanks for not being a snob and not lashing out for my honest criticism ^^ -- Guyviroth -   I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for what I'm not..  22:32, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oks, Battle Theme is up. All that's missing is a picture, which I can't get!! >.< She needs to meet some peoples too ._. Nefereti 22:45, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool =D She's great. It'll be interesting for Alasdair to confront her. You know how he is."I watch you from nowhere, You see nothing but mystery, "I hide in plain sight. The General of the Greatest Uknown Army, never to be known but known by all." 22:49, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Oohh. Might be interesting then XP Would you do battle   with a Dark Witch?  23:18, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Yep."I watch you from nowhere, You see nothing but mystery, "I hide in plain sight. The General of the Greatest Uknown Army, never to be known but known by all." 23:19, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm I guess i could have a character meet her. Did you have anyone in mind? -- Guyviroth -   I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for what I'm not..  23:21, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

@Guy: Preferably, someone I know of some degree, maybe XP

@Gale: I'll check his page, you may start if you wish. Would you do battle  with a Dark Witch?  23:28, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

A more upgraded page is on SonicFanonCentral Wiki."I watch you from nowhere, You see nothing but mystery, "I hide in plain sight. The General of the Greatest Uknown Army, never to be known but known by all." 23:29, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

I need some more moveset/attacks for her... any ideas? Would you do battle  with a Dark Witch?  16:06, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm Iunno. I'll get back to you if I can think of anything. Oh and, any character in mind that you'd like to meet with Neferet? -- Guyviroth -   I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for what I'm not..  16:56, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Anyone who'll be able to put up with her personality, and maybe shed a slight bit of light in her life *shrug* something along those lines. Would you do battle  with a Dark Witch?  17:02, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm... I think I have a character who'll be an interesting contrast. -- Guyviroth -   What I've felt, what I've known, sick and tired I stand alone.  17:10, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Neat. :P You want to start or I? Would you do battle   with a Dark Witch?  17:18, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Bleh, got a picture up. Unfortunatly it was *shudder* a base. Would you do battle  with a Dark Witch?  20:28, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

nice character...really nice. i also like the pic--I am the Knight of Shadows, Slowly Floating into Oblivion. 20:41, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

hey Saku wanna do a TP--I am the Knight of Shadows, Slowly Floating into Oblivion. 21:10, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

So, who'd you have in mind, Guyviroth? Would you do battle  with a Dark Witch?  22:08, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I'll let you start. My character's called Modeo. -- Guyviroth -     What I've felt, what I've known, sick and tired I stand alone.  22:08, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

[giggles] Ok :P same format as usual? Would you do battle  with a Dark Witch?  22:11, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yup, same as usual ^^ -- Guyviroth -     What I've felt, what I've known, sick and tired I stand alone.  22:12, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Neferet meets Alasdair
Alasdair: *flash jumping through trees*

[Neferet is sleeping under a tree, a book beside her]

Alasdair: *jumps across her tree*

Neferet: *ears prick up, she opens her eyes slowly* ...Who disturbs me..?

Alasdair: *stops and listens*

Neferet: ..*Gets up* Who ever that was.... come out...

Alasdair: *pops out of the tree and lands* Hello.

Neferet: ! *shoots a bolt of darkness at him*

Alasdair: *blocks it off easily* Calm down, Neferet.

Neferet: ..How'd you know my name?!

Alasdair: My own ways.

Neferet: I don't like stalkers or creeps... *she takes out Ares, her black pistol and points it at Alasdair*

Alasdair: *draws Quetzalcoatl, an Electric Needle Gun and aims it at her* I wouldn't try it. I'm not a stalker. I know of every mobian, mainly becuase of my ties with King Sonic. Now, drop the gun.

Neferet: ..No. *shoots at him*

Alasdair: *grabs the bullet out of mid-air* You wouldn't beleive my trainer. Now, please stop trying to shoot me.

Neferet: *growls* Give me a reason why I should stop... you can't hurt me.

Alasdair: Well, thats debaitable. I don't need to give you anything. Goodbye. *jumps into the tree and prepares to flash step*

Neferet: ..Tch. *puts Ares away and sits down under the tree she was previously near, taking off her jacket, revealing a mark partly on the right side of her neck, back and arm* (like this)

Alasdair: *looks at her mark* Hmm.........Interesting.

Neferet: ...*too busy checking out her mark to see if it had changed to hear him*

Alasdair: *studies the mark, as his mind scans through the possiblities of it.*

Neferet: It's stinging slightly... probably because I used my time magic earlier on in the day...

Alasdair: Of course. It's a the Time Travelers mark. I have miniture form on my back, and Karson has his own form of one on his arm. The Lion and Coyote marks.

Neferet: Bah! I thought you were leaving! And it's not like yours.... it's a symbol of being a High Priestess of Nyx... it's how I got some of my magic.

Alasdair: I have to know things somehow. I know it's not like mine. *jumps down* Mine is on my back only, a Lion pouncing halfway through a mirror. My friend has a Coyote howling at the sun, inside a stopwatch design. He and I both are time travelers. He more than I, but, I'm...............a bit different than other Mobians.

Neferet: Same as I, but that is not really important. Shouldn't you be on your way?

Alasdair: I've got nowhwere to go. I don't really care where I go. *looks next to him* General. *salutes*

(A man in a trench coat with similar looks to Liam Nesson, walks out from behind the tree) Hello Alasdair. *looks at her* Neferet.

Neferet meets Modeo
Neferet is sitting down in the plains of a cherry blossom meadow. She sat under one of the trees, while her companion, Xio, sits on her lap, washing himself. "There's no one here today, which I'm glad for..." Neferet said to Xio in a dull tone of voice. "Don't say that, or someone will come" Xio mumbled while licking his fur. Neferet shrugged and put her arms behind her head, against the tree.