Thread:PhantomStroke/@comment-9749276-20180524035732

I'll start this off with the big section - Powers and Abilities. The paragraph for his powers and how he generally uses them is good, and listing off some of his techniques was a good call. However, I'd like to know a more details about his swordsmanship, and particularly who this "legendary sword fighter" is. I feel like that's something worth noting, at the very least.

Next is his Personality, which I definitely feel could be further-fleshed out and explained in greater detail. Meanwhile, I've no particular comments on either his Appearance or Weaknesses, aside from maybe adding more detail to the former

Unfortunately, while he's not bad per se (I've seen worse after all), I don't think he's ready for the Awards just yet. 