Talk:Apocalypses Are Boring/@comment-27984457-20180515072314/@comment-32712012-20180515083122

Thanks for the comments! To respond to them: Anyway, thanks for the feedback, and I'm glad that you generally liked it! I'll try to work on fixing the second and fourth bullet points so that it'll be even better.
 * Did you mean to say when you said that you'd want to know what's been happening there? Because that's the dimension that this story takes place in, and basically nothing has happened there for the last 15 years, so there wouldn't be much to say. If you actually are wondering what's been going on in, that's in the domain of another story that I'm thinking of writing.
 * Thanks for pointing out the Dark Mirror reference's obviousness. I noticed that that one was too obvious, but somehow that wasn't on my mental list of things to fix when I put up the story, largely for a reason that I can't explain properly but that's irrelevant. I will try to work on making that less obvious.
 * I'm sure that there were lots of other people in Westopolis at the time, but I don't think that they would have been in the right area, or, if they were, I'd rather not have to go into what they thought, as that would get in the way of the story.
 * When Mr. Jones says the dimension names, that was supposed to look kind of weird and jargon-y, but if that's too painful, I can change it. I never want for my stuff to look painful.