User blog:Neoexlucky/Let's critique Neo!

Okay so I want Neo to be the best he can be. Eventually I want to do a blog post with all of my characters but since Neo's the only one with character development so far, I've decided to do a test run with him.

Now by best he can be I mean I want his page to be better. I want other people's advice on him so I can improve and work on my weaknesses. That being said I am taking critiques on his character. Pretty much anything goes but I do have a few rules to keep in mind. So yeah, if you guys have anything at all to have me expand upon, or anything like that please let me know! Thanks for your time guys!
 * 1) Please be respectful and nice. I'm looking for help and insulting me or the character in rude ways aren't going to do anything. So please try to stay nice here.
 * 2) Don't say anything getting original, non-doll, pictures. I'm terrible at art and currently in a waiting line for my character to get drawn. (Offering to draw me a picture would be pretty much an automatic yes.)
 * 3) ...No that's pretty much it....

An character is here:

Neo Tranquil the Fox