Talk:Chrai the Hedgehog

Placeholder Review VegasFox
Alright,

So, as soon as I "Queen" my brain shut down, only because having a royal character is very usual, I don't hate them but seeing them all the time can bother people sometimes, keep that in mind.

Okay, so escaped from home, lived in the forest, met a dude...all the things that usually happen, that little beginning bit is a bit cliche, just saying that now. Then I continued to read on and got interested when I read that the little campsite soon grew into an entire villiage THAT was original and THAT was what I was waiting for, something original, somehing that is rarely thought of or done. And while things like this HAVE been done before, it isn't done often so that was a good thing :)

What I don't understand is that if she wanted to live normal, why did she go straight back to living royally a few years later? It seems a bit like a plot mistake and it needs to be sorted out and fixed.

Again with exteremely talented royal people, keep her abilites limited, the fire powers are alright but she shouln't have any forms in my opinion if she is royalty. Why? Because royal people are VERY picky and refuse to fight normally, that's why they hire knights...or guards... and things like that, if anything a type of form that involves any form of offensive attacking wouldn't go through the royal family's blood.

Alright, so aside from my nit-picking Chrai is a fairly good character, she isn't good, but she isn't bad either, there are a few things here and there that could be fixed or improved but my opinions on her stay neutral, I give her a 5.5 out of 10