Talk:Ominous/@comment-39521143-20190927195356

Ominous has an interesting personality, and seems pretty well developed in that respect. Grammar and sentence structure can use some work, but otherwise, good job! This is the sort of character I enjoy seeing, in fanfiction or otherwise. Now, in terms of history, the structuring could use more work- the history section should generally be more of an overview than the actual story (which is usually covered on a separate page.) But I do find his origins overall to be well done.

My only nitpick is him going outside at night and finding the orb. It feels rather anticlimactic to me. But that's just my personal opinion on the matter. Ominous is your character. You do what you want with him.

Overall, though, I think he's pretty good.