Board Thread:Article Critique/@comment-5128292-20150923220753

Okay let us begin this...

Hey Peoplez, It's your friend TyeTH, Today I decided to reboot my Critique Request for my character Tye. After I took others advice and update my characters page. I'm still working on the history though, most of it will be posted after I finish my story the Wheel Of Fate (which will be like a few months from now). But Overall all I would just ask that you would critique him.


 * Spoiler* Before anyone ask how has being demonic affected his world, well basically many didn't really know about from where he is at until the end of the story and people probably would view him arm as an anomaly. And continue on with their lives. Right after they named him and the others the heroes of the storm.

Please may I have constructive criticism or quality criticism. Also can you write something about his other pages (except the theme songs.

Thanks if you can Criticize my page. 