User blog comment:Spyken/Spyken's lazy Summer Awards 2018 votes/@comment-27984457-20180819054406/@comment-5364072-20180914143516

Let me be more clear.


 * I clearly like the narrative of your story.
 * My vote was neutral because at first I didn't really feel like fanfiction should be in this category, but I had my share of surprises. So I had other factors to decide, here it was more because of the difference in formatting. Whether I prefer one style or another was not the point here, the point was staying consistent. So it's more the fact that you alternate between having paragraphs and single lines of text. I guess those are her thoughts, but it still stood out for me.