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Sonic Takedown Maker:DiscoDuck
Sonic Takedown is a fighting fan-fiction game based on the Sonic franchise.

Gameplay
The gameplay takes place is generally small maps used as arenas and is in 3D scroll. The fighting is typically fast paced and depend on skill sets of the characters. Each character has a skill set that can win over the other making them unique in their own way. Each type has a separate advantages and disadvantages and can use only certain environmental objects to their aid.

There is also a small hub based on a fair. In Fair mode, the player can meet up with others and take place in daily challenges and unlock skill sets.

Online play
The game also features online play, where up to 10 players can take place in mini games and boss battles. Fights can only take up to 4 players.

Boss Battles
There are selectable boss battles in the game and are unlocked after much progress in the game. The boss fights are intentionally alot more difficult to cope up with 10 max. players in online play.

Races
Races another secondary source in the game. Small time trial events take place live and end in a few days to determine scores from all over the world, pending the prize. It can also been done in multi and free play.

Lawn Loops
Lawn loops is the first balance arena in the game where one has to fall of the arena to lose. It consists of 2 phases time by time as the opponent or player falls to a game over.

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Frosty Field
Frosty Field is the second balance arena in the game where one has to fall of the arena to lose. It consists of 2 phases time by time as the opponent or player falls to a game over.

Skill Sets
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Sonic.EXE (Burpy's Dream) Maker:Burpy's dream''
"One dead, three to kill"

- Sonic.EXE taunting Fox, Shadow of Sonic.EXE

Initially a creepypasta that gained fame on the internet, Sonic.EXE appeared in two fangames spawned from this creepypasta, as well as two parody games, and three animations(that can be found on YouTube) in which he is the main antagonist. Sonic.EXE also appeared in the Quotev fanfiction series, The Legend of Fox the Brave-created by user Burpy's Dream-as the most recurring antagonist and the worst enemy faced by the titular hero, Fox the Brave. However, his status as the most recurring antagonist was overtaken by Dr. Finitevus, who has since appeared in more stories. He will make a return in Darkness of War, set after the events of After the Blackout.

Appearance
Sonic.EXE takes the form of a blood-stained blue hedgehog, having been described to greatly resemble Sonic. He has black sclera, red eyes with bloodstains beneath them, and frighteningly sharp teeth.

Personality
Much like in the creepypasta and the fangames inspired by it, Sonic.EXE has been shown to be incredibly cruel and sadistic, taking great pleasure in tormenting his enemies any way he can. He is also shown to be hateful and vengeful as he harbors a deadly grudge against any who are kin to the fox Redstone-who defeated him during his first reign of terror-particularly Fox the Brave, who was the first descendant of Redstone to not be killed by him. He is also a bit of an opportunist, since he is willing to take every chance to cause harm to Fox's self-esteem before trying to kill him, since he caused the death of Fox's Teammate, Kairn the Coyote. == Strengths and Powers == Sonic.EXE is capable of flight and super-strength as well as possible telekinesis since he as able to send Fox's sister Sadie flying simply by glancing at her. His super strength was proven when he was shown to be able to lift Fox-who weighs well over 100 lbs.-by the throat with ease, and send him reeling with a blow to the head. Provided he has enough strength to do so, he can enter anyone's mind at any given time, mostly to torment them, like with Shane the Wolf or Fox the Brave; and he can possess anyone if he has enough strength, as he did with Argus the Wolf in the story Shadows of the Past. == General Info == Sonic.EXE originally was planned to be a recurring antagonist until he finally achieved his goal of wiping out all of Redstone's living kin, but was defeated for good in Shadow of Sonic.EXE, in a final battle against Fire Fox in Soleanna Forest. == History == Sonic.EXE was created by a creepypasta user named J.C. the Hyena before he gained popularity on the internet. In The Legend of Fox the Brave, there was originally only a simple trilogy planned, before Quotev user Burpy's Dream came up with more story plots and Sonic.EXE became a recurring antagonist.

Appearances
Shows where the characters have made an appearance.

Roleplays
None=== Fanfictions === The Legend of Fox the Brave Sonic.EXE only appeared in the Fox the Brave vs. Sonic.EXE saga, also appearing in the prologue of the story Nero's Madness, and is the main antagonist of the story Zorro's Nightmare. In the story A Brother's Search, he makes a minor speaking cameo when he taunts Michael, taunting him that Austin might not care about him while the young dog is thinking that his brother would want to rescue him from imprisonment.

Other Appearances
None==

Relationships with Other Characters
=== Characters by the same creator ===

Family
None

Friends
None Enemies === ---Redstone the Fox ---Fox the Brave ==

Victims
A list of various characters that died or were wounded either directly or indirectly because of him.

Killed Directly

 * Andrew the Fox: Murdered in Soleanna Forest
 * Dahlia the Fox: Murdered in Soleanna Forest
 * Unknown Fox(Redstone's great-grandchild): Possibly murdered directly by him
 * Wolfpaw: Murdered in Soleanna Forest
 * Kairn the Coyote: Murdered in Lamarkie Forest
 * Rocket the Fox: Murdered in Soleanna Forest
 * Jagged Cliff: Murdered and disemboweled on Bygone Island
 * Jagged Fang: Murdered and disemboweled on Bygone Island
 * Tai the Charizard: Killed by projectile meant for Fox
 * Manuel "Manny" Sanchez: Murdered in New Ninjago City

Killed Indirectly

 * Unknown Fox(Redstone's great-grandchild): Possibly murdered indirectly by him
 * Torch the Fox: Shot by Eggman's robots
 * Snow the Fox: Shot by Eggman's robots
 * Swiftstar: Died of broken neck
 * Garrett the Fox: Died of wounds from battle with possessed Argus the Wolf
 * Redstone the Fox: Died of illness caused by exhaustion
 * Argus the Wolf: Killed by Garrett

Injured/Wounded Directly

 * Leaf Fur: Crushed hind leg
 * Ember the Fox: Lost an eye
 * Rocket the Fox: Scarred neck
 * Fox the Brave: Slashed flank
 * Ash the Wolf: Slashed face and belly
 * Eli the Jackal: Slashed back
 * Cody the Wolfdog: Shredded ears and slashed neck
 * Sleet the Fox: Slashed from throat to belly

Injured/Wounded Indirectly

 * Ferrell the Fox: Maimed by possessed Argus the Wolf

Trivia
As mentioned before, Sonic.EXE was originally planned to have his final appearance in Revenge of Sonic.EXE, the third story in a trilogy, but more ideas were thought up, and he became a recurring antagonist until Shadow of Sonic.EXE, which was his final appearance. Sonic.EXE, Dr. Finitevus, Infinite, Dr. Eggman, and Mephiles the Dark are all recurring antagonists who are not original characters for the series.
 * He did, however, receive two mentions and had a brief speaking cameo:
 * First: In Hunt for a Storm Fighter by Austin Smith when he's reminiscing to himself
 * Second: In The Lost Fox, when Fox thinks about his dreams no longer being haunted by the demon since his defeat.
 * Third: In A Brother's Search, while unnamed, Sonic.EXE taunts young Michael Smith when the white-furred German Shepherd Dog is thinking that Austin would want to rescue him while he is imprisoned by Finitevus.
 * This was again changed, with his true final appearance being in Darkness of War, which will be set from Fox's perspective once more.
 * Sonic.EXE is a creepypasta created by JC the Hyena
 * Finitevus is a villain from the Sonic the Hedgehog Archie Comics released in the US and is owned by Ken Penders, a former writer
 * Dr. Eggman, Mephiles, and Infinite are all owned by SEGA.

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Caine the Eagle Maker:ThePuffyDalek
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Izanamihime Maker:Jerrycuff
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Moskita the Mosquito Maker:Dragonempeorslayer
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