Board Thread:Article Critique/@comment-3002957-20150430155345/@comment-25638472-20150430203231

While I'm taking a little break from this paper I'm writing, I'll try to see if I can be constructive~

It is a little hard for me to imagine the design currently. Obviously this will be remedied once he's actually drawn so it's not a huge concern anyway. When it's finished, I'll keep in mind that he's supposed to be a mish mash of several creatures. +3 points for dragon stuff, aheh~

I like the quality of the character! It does strike me as strange that this character enjoys making foes scream, causing them pain, etc, yet with his "current" story he makes sure not to involve innocents. But that is probably all part of internal confusion or something, so again, it's something that's probably not even a problem.

Gotta start working again now, sorry D: