Thread:XophPsycho/@comment-30144664-20161129012617/@comment-27601199-20161130234509

"Dialouge tags are (generally) what you use to identify the speaker," Xoph explained, "That right there between theese two sentences is an example of one."

(I literally just learned about these yesterday)

Redundancy is just when something's repeated too much.

As for the pacing, you probably should. But that's your decision.