Talk:Violet the Hedgehog (CS)/@comment-32220816-20180622224018/@comment-32220816-20180623002903

You're right. I need to give constructive criticism instead.

One, her design is too generic and plain, I think you could spice it up. Two, her name is also really boring, but we have a character named Blaze, so that can pass. Her backstory is really unoriginal, and it makes her a worse character. The fact that it's the only really "unique" thing about her makes it even worse. 5The Dark Form idea is overly edgy, and the fact all her friends use it puts me off. There are far too many typos, the Relationships section is far too boring and rushed, and her personality is the stereotypical older sister.