Thread:Hikaruyami-having fun*/@comment-6839973-20160430015718/@comment-6839973-20160506021550

Very well. First, with this favor you did, my goal is to reboot them all. I don't mean by simply bringing the pages back, I mean by starting from the ground up. A clean slate. Also, I am developing more engulfing, attractive stories for each character. It's not just that, I also felt the pages made my other characters look like active piles of junk.. But, I really, really want the rebooted characters to simply be the best they can be, which also has compelled me to ask around for criticism and critique. However, I prefer critique over criticism, mainly because of this: With Criticism, you could easily examine the rights/wrongs, offer tips and suggestions, and give a personal opinion, right? While that is all fine all dandy, there is the potential of it being "too general". What do I mean by this? Well, let's say you happen to criticize a character, and and you find something bad, but don't what it is, or how it can be improved. Such as " Oh, I found this thing that really shouldn't be there, and it is recommended that this be changed when possible. I dunno how, but it should be changed."

This, to me, is the precise equivalent of taking a shot in the dark, no sense of direction at all. But with Critique, it takes a very in-depth look at the character, going into paragraphs, offering tons of tips and suggestions for each and every section of the subject. That is why I prefer that. I will explain more tomorrow.