Talk:Metal The Rogue

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Is my character good enough?  Hotter than the sun in the middle of July.  Sending out your army but you still can't win, listen up silly boy cuz I'm gonna tell you why.  I burn. Can't hold me now. You got nothing that can stop me.  14:50, November 26, 2013 (UTC)

Part 1
Astrid: [Is 14 years old and is wandering around Station Square, thinking of what to do.] Bored, bored, bored...

[Metal is seen in an alley way, nearby, cornered by three G.U.N. soldiers. They appear to be holding guns, and they have them aimed at Metal. Metal seems to be about 11 year old, and has brown hair.]

Metal: "Somebody help!"

Astrid: [Hears the yelling from Metal.] Huh? Somebody needs help. Well, I guess that's one way to cure boredom. [Runs in the direction of the yelling.]

[One of the soldiers fires a bullet into Metal's arm. Astrid should of heard the gunfire.]

Soldier 1: Shut up, already. Nobody is going to save you.

[Metal appears to be scared.]

Astrid: Oh no. A gun? [Arrives at the alleyway and sees the three soldiers and Metal. She walks up behind them.] Hey!

Soldier 1: [He turns and glares at Astrid.] Hey, your not G.U.N...what are you doing here.

Astrid: Uh... I'm here to stop you! [Is trying not to reveal that she came here out of boredom. She also feels quite intimidated by the soldier.]

Soldier 1: You think? Make one move, and I shoot the boy over there. [He points his gun to Metal.]

Astrid: Uh... you're soldiers, aren't you? Aren't you, um, supposed to help people?

Soldier 1: He escaped, what else am I meant to do? Not chase him down?

Astrid: Huh? Has he done something bad? [Looks at the scared Metal.]

Soldier 1: Possibly destroyed some property of G.U.N...

Astrid: Wait... uh, how can he 'possibly' destroy something? It's either he destroyed it or he didn't.

Soldier 1: We don't know. That's why we gonna question him. Until he escaped.

Astrid: You've scared him. [Tries to hide in her hoodie.]

Soldier 1: And?

Astrid: [Tries to be confident.] Wow. You're so mean. He's only a kid.

Soldier 1: I don't care if he's a kid..he still is a criminal, he is a street fighter and he blows up G.U.N. property!

Astrid: [Hides again.] Well, then why don't talk to his, um, parents?

Soldier 1: We don't know where his parents is!

Astrid: Stop yelling at me! [Is upset.]

Soldier 1: I will not. You can't defeat us.

Astrid: Maybe if I had my bow I would...

[He punches one of the soldiers, the other two fire at him, and he dodges to the side. He then punches the other two to the ground, and kicks the guns away. He clenches his shoulder in pain and looks over at Astrid.]

Metal: Hi...?

Astrid: That. Was. Awesome. [Snaps back into reality.] Uh, hi.

Metal: Are you with G.U.N? Who are you?

Astrid: I'm Astrid. Don't worry, I'm not with G.U.N. I'm only 14.

Metal: Oh okay. I'm Metal. Nice to meet you.

Astrid: [Sees him clenching his shoulder] You okay?

Metal: I should be alright..

Astrid: Oh, okay. Do you want me to take you back to your house?

Metal: I don't have a house, Astrid..I live out here.

Astrid: You don't have a house...?

Metal: No. I got kicked out by my parents at a young age with my brother..

Astrid: Th-That's so mean...

Metal: My parents didn't really care about me cause I'm a hybrid. [He points to his wolf ears.]

Astrid: Oh. I think hybrids should be treated better.

Metal: They aren't treated better..

Astrid: They need to be. [She thinks.] Do you want to stay around mine for a while?

Metal: If that's okay with you.

Astrid: Yeah, it's fine. My uncle might not agree, but I'll make him come around.

Metal: At least you have a house. [Metal sighs.]

Astrid: Yeah... Well, let's go then.

Metal: [Metal walks off following Astrid.]

Part 2
[A few years later...]

[The two of them have been trapped in a warehouse by Raiden after Metal was injured by him.]

Astrid: The walls are too thick and the door is sealed tight. Hm. Maybe there's a way out through the roof.

Metal: [Looks over at Astrid.] You don't expect me to climb up there with this wound, do you? [He sighs.]

[Raiden's voice is heard nearby.]

Raiden: They think can escape, can they? [To the soldiers, outside the warehouse.] Shoot them on sight if they come out...

Astrid: [Hears him.] He just got his soldiers killed.

Metal: He's got alot.

Astrid: He's got a lot to kill.

Metal: I know. We need to get out of here....there should be a underground floor under here. We should be able to get out though that.

Astrid: Yeah, leave quietly.

Metal: Yes, maybe.

[Raiden walks in, with a few of soldiers, they seem to be holding a tranquilizer guns.]

Raiden: Now, give up. I have you now!

Astrid: Damn it...

Metal: What do we do?!

Raiden: Just give up.

Astrid: [Whispers.] Find the exit. I'll keep him talking. [To Raiden.] So Raiden, how have been?

Raiden: [Fires a tranquilizer at Metal.] ....[Then glares over at Astrid.] Your not getting anywhere.

Astrid: Try to stay awake Metal. And as for you Raiden, why do you have this obsession with trying to experiment on Metal? He's just going to escape and you know it. Either that or go on a killing spree.

Metal: [Is unconscious from the tranquilizer.]

Raiden: He can't escape if I have him restrained and that he can't use his powers, can he? As for you. Your gonna suffer worse...

Astrid: Oh you just try me.

Raiden: He's not even fully broke yet. [He fires a tranquilizer at Astrid.]

Astrid: You... [She slowly pulls out her bow and fires an explosive arrow before falling to the ground.]

Raiden: [Drags Astrid away into a room, and throws Metal in there after. He locks the door, and walks away.]

[A few hours later...]

Metal: [Wakes up, and looks over at Astrid.] Astrid!

Astrid: [Groans.]

Metal: Talk to me...

Astrid: Ugh... I feel horrible... Did he freaking tranquillize me...?

Metal: Yes, he did....[Metal looks down, and notices his hands are tied up with rope.] Yeah, I think he deactivated my powers too...

Astrid: [Looks around.] Took my bow and dagger too...

Metal: "We need to get out of here."

Raiden: [Walks in.] Who wants experimentation first? [Goes over to Metal, and pulls out a needle, he injects it into Metal's arm.] Well then. [He then looks over at Astrid.] How about you..? Or Metal?

Astrid: I think Metal's had enough of your experiments.

Metal: I'm fine...[He growls and dark aura appears round him.]

Raiden: Well, Metal. Seems your annoyed at me..your probably kill everyone after, and I cannot allow that. [looks at Astrid.] Enjoy, being killed by him.

Astrid: A lot of people are going to hate you for this Raiden.

[Metal breaks free of the rope, and goes to hide behind Astrid, whimpering in fear. He hugs her.]

Raiden: Hmm. I don't care.

Astrid: So you don't care if you die?

Raiden: Not really. My friends can revive me. Now then. I need Metal for a minute and I'm finished with him. [To the soldiers.] Kill them both after..

Astrid: Such a kind and generous man...

[Metal seems to be terrified of Raiden.]

[Raiden walks over with a needle, and jabs it into Metal's arm. He takes it out and walks out.]

Astrid: Do you know what was in the needle?

Metal: N-No...[Metal seems to be crying, and is hugging Astrid.]

Astrid: Don't worry. We'll make it through this. [Sighs.] I wish Ember was here.

Metal: I-I hope I don't die...[Metal seems really upset.]

Astrid: I will not let him kill you.

[A soldiers walks up with a rifle, he fires a few shots at Astrid and Metal jumps in the way. He then collapses in pain, and the soldier fires keeps firing shots at him, to make sure he's dead.]

Astrid: You... It's your lucky day. You've just earned a one way ticket to hell... [She stands up.] And you know why?

Soldier: Cause he's your friend?

[Metal gets up, his wounds seems of healed and he looks annoyed, he grabs the gun, and breaks it in half. He then punches the soldier to the ground, and places his clawed foot on his chest.]

Astrid: Not just that. [She kneels down beside the soldier.] I think you've annoyed him.

[Metal stabs him with his claw and leaves him to die.]

Metal: We're going..[He smiles then walks off, his hair seems to have a light blue streak through it, his eyes and markings seems a light blue colour too.]

Astrid: Good. Lead the way. [She follows.]

Metal: Do I look any different? [He goes round a corner and up stairs.] Or do I not? I heard Raiden say something about my weird power or something..[He walks up, and tears open the warehouse door, with hardly any force, he quickly grabs Astrid's Bow and Dagger and gives it to her.]

Astrid: Thank you. [She takes her bow and dagger.] And yes, you do look a bit different. You seem to have blue streaks in your hair.

Metal: Okay then. I'm not waiting round for Raiden to show up. I'm leaving now...

Astrid: So am I.

Metal: [Metal walks out.] Astrid, where do we go from here?

Astrid: Away from here.

Metal: Okay, whatever. [He walks off, a fair distance.]

Astrid: [She follows.]

Metal: [Metal smiles, and hugs Astrid.]

Astrid: [She hugs him back.]