User blog comment:Awkwarddingo/Awkward Reviews by a Dingo/@comment-4232858-20140317235038/@comment-11848168-20140319021557

Ok...this guy will take some time. At least you made the first part easy for me. *cracks knuckles*

First off, the detail. I'll review them bullet to bullet.


 * pretty cool. Never heard this before, so as far as I know, this is a nice original idea.


 * don't have much to say about that, except that he was probably picked on at a young age.


 * you actually thought of a deterrent to overpowered mind reading OCs such as the two I made. Very clever.


 * I'm ambidextrous, too, and more of a lefty....


 * I've seen this done several times before, including both OCs and official published comics. I can't blame you for not wanting your character to die, though.


 * Well...that's a nice little tidbit of info...


 * Nice for the first two, but I don't wanna know what he does with the umbrella.


 * "festered into a demon named" WHAT? WHAT IS THE NAME!? *head explodes*


 * this guy must be a delight at parties.


 * adds a sort of classiness to him. Pretty good bit there.


 * now this I have seen before, but this is still fairly well written. From Meet the Robinson's, "I have a big head and little arms"


 * nothing to say. Everyone has their moments.


 * like I said, he must be great at parties!


 * ironic he is so invasive to others but so protective about his past.


 * he is a SPACE FISH

Good work giving us some bits of background info that is mostly entertaining but with some overused pieces, like being immortal, no matter how indirect it may be.

Next up: Abilities! I will rate them like the details, bullet by bullet


 * Now that is just bloody scary. Sorry about the pun. Had to go out on a limb there. *shot*


 * special little power to have that I honestly have never witnessed in an OC until now.


 * if you could explain red miles, that would be great.


 * reading the future/time travel is always tricky business. Writers need to come up with their own ideas for it as long as it is not bullocks, which this is not. Still a bit confusing, but no writer can make time travel simple.


 * I heard of a cold heart, but this is ridiculous. Just kidding. Using the coldness of space as a weapon? Good idea.

Some fine powers and abilities here. And none of them are op, with the exception of reading the future, but even that has some limits. As said before, would you kindly explain red miles for me whenever you can?

Next on the list is his history, with his origin being Superman but with a twist. The failed experiment, crash landing after fleeing a planet, and being raised by an outsider sound all like the man of steel, but the end result, not so. We got a purple larva which must have looked adorable for a thirteen year old girl to pick up. I like how his powers never fully manifested early in his life like most others, while his interest in machines is what really shined. His evolved brain development was a good way to explain his ability to make household drones and eventually build a company from almost nothing. Not many people can do that in their teens, let alone before. The foreshadowing of his death was interesting, and him not being able to access his true power was another much welcomed change in pace. About selling his soul, this sounds interesting. I would love to see you go into more detail with him and his trip to the hell or wherever the soul swindler lives.

Time for his personality! Yay! His early life sounds like he behaved much like a child should, so I was surprised when I saw this. I thought he would be as dark as he is now. His later personality sounds like too many people I know, including a friend at school, but reminders should never be a bit thing, and this isn't. I really like his antihero mindset. There to save the day, but only if he benefits.

I'm gonna skip stats if you don't mind, but I will say they are well thought out. Here is what I think of his weaknesses. They are well thought through. He has plenty of weaknesses to make him not all powerful, which could have easily happened with this guy. His little unsuited self is quite humorous to think about, if you don't mind me saying.

Im not an art critic, so I won't touch those pictures with an in depth discussion, but I really like his little self. Quite adorable.

With that, it is time for the overall verdict. I have decided not to do the so and so out of ten from now on. Instead I will give points, which will be delivered to you. You get points for every day between now and half life 3's release. Have a good day, and ask me if you have questions. PEACE