Talk:Ayi/@comment-28110995-20160728174139

There are multiple issues that I have found that possibly should be fixed in order to clarify your page a little more:

1. Give a brief description to how Mobius' ecology is like. For the most part, many of the people on the Wikia may not be familiar with the Sonic the Hedgehog series (excluding me), so they need that background knowledge.

2. Explain how Queen Soma was a "good-willed" queen.

3. "Artefact" is spelled as "artifact".

4. You should explain why Soma got split into 4 regions. Since that the twins were fighting together (which means two people), it would be assumed that Soma would split into two regions. However, the explanation can fill that up on how two went to four.

5. The region of Vax is a little mystery, because you left it as "uninhabitable". Could you explain how the region is important in comparison to the other regions? Also, can you explain the regional influence that each of the regions have on one another?

This is just a few suggestions to your page, that perhaps, you can resolve to make your page much better. :)