Talk:Ayi/Royal Family/@comment-28110995-20160728175432

There are multiple issues that I have found that possibly should be fixed in order to clarify your page a little more:

1. How long did Queen Arven rule? How was she the kindest leader in history? What part history is this (the Soman history, I assume)?

2. Did King Elias and King Kretos rule at the same time?

3. Could you elaborate on the personalities of the leaders a little more?

4. Plus, this is the page about the "Royal Family", correct? Did Queen Arven have siblings (meaning that King Elias and King Kretos would have aunts or uncles)? Is Queen Arven's parents (the grandparents) still alive? Who was the husband of Queen Arven (at least in order for her to have twins)?

This is just a few suggestions to your page, that perhaps, you can resolve to make your page much better. :)