User blog:Hikaruyami-having fun*/Article Review

Hi everyone,with this blog,I'll be reveiwing your pages that needs work.I'll put the info of the page and a warning as well for it.I'll also ask users how they plan to improve their page with thir permisson.I'll be reveiwing 5 pages once every week.And with that,let's get to the reviews!

Last week articles of 11/7/11


 * Solar the Hedgehog(NeroTH)
 * Phineas the Hedgecrane
 * E.A.L
 * Chuchu the Pikachu
 * Kazuko Shinbou

Last week articles of 11/14/11
 * Sunset Hill
 * Yaka Ammy
 * Gaynor Croker the Fox
 * Nightmare (NME)
 * Power 1 Emerel

Last week articles of 11/21/11
 * Bretta the Leopard
 * West Mobius
 * Infera Vol
 * Nazo Unleashed
 * Maria Robotnik(Cy-Fox)

Last week articles of 11/28/11
 * Byron the Unicorn
 * Twilight the Wolf
 * Perfect Dark Metal Sonic
 * Shadow Android X2
 * The Perfect Queen

Last week articles of 12/5/11
 * Drakonsu
 * Shadow's Kids
 * Marine Turbine
 * Christina The Fox
 * Glutton badnik

Last week articles of 12/12/11
 * Legend Wing
 * Pintor's Five Stage Hands
 * Razz the Bat
 * Fleece the Lamb
 * Zack the hedgehog

Last week articles of 12/19/11
 * Seven Swords Dance
 * Manina
 * Emecosmo
 * Juliet the cat
 * Sonic Heroes: Emeralds of Nightopia

Last week articles of 12/26/11
 * Creator of the Sonic XL series
 * Nouka
 * Lily
 * Cassidy the Hedgehog
 * Bulma the Bat

Last week articles of 1/2/12
 * Super Sonic Heroes
 * Ales the Hedgehog
 * Boomer
 * Silver the Hedgecat
 * Catherine Ogmore Pritchard

Last week articles of 1/9/12
 * Reidak the Hedgehog
 * Lorreta Minovia
 * Bloody Amy: The Gore Begins
 * Rollercoaster
 * Dark Elvis

'''Last week articles of 1/16/12
 * Wendigo 'Digo" Ecchidna
 * Calico the hedgehog
 * Bureru the Giant Leopard Moth
 * Kindness the Hedgehog
 * Jin the Chameleon

Psychic Test Potion Maker:Jack "BtR" Saxon:
The Psychic Test Potion is a concoction that tests the mediumship of those claiming to be necromantic. It was used in the witch-trials of the 1600s to locate witches.

Appendices
In cauldron of clay, combine;
 * A pich of salt
 * Herbs mixed - Thyme, Sage, Basil, Morjaram
 * Chocolate melted
 * and
 * Water chilled

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Mariah the Cat Maker:Nero
Mariah is a 12 year old girl with a possible crush on Temporal

Temporal the Fox
Temporal has known Mariah since she was 7 months old,

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Shadow and Rouge's Magic Show Maker:76.118.20.24
After that day in the museum Shadow went for a walk in town.

Shadow: Wow its such a beautiful day today I wonder what I should do.

Shadow then passed by a poster.

It said: On May 20th Magician Rouge will be doing her magic show.

Shadow: Wow. Real neat. I'd like to see that.

It was May 19th. That meant that the magic show was the next day. Shadow went to the ticket both.

Shadow: One ticket for Rouge's magic show.

Ticket window guy: Here you go

And handed Shadow a ticket and then Shadow paid him.

Next day

Shadow: The show starts at 2:00 and its 12:00. I'd better be on my way.

At 2:00 Shadow went to the show. He got in the front row. Shadow was real impressed with Rouge's magic. It was close to being time to end the show.

Rouge: For my last magic trick I'll need a volunteer from the audience.

Shadow: Can I go?

Rouge: Sure.

So Shadow got on the stage.

Shadow: So What do I have to do?

Rouge: Get in that box.

Shadow: Okay.

So Shadow got into the box. Rouge closed the box and said her magic words. And when she opened the box Shadow was gone. Then Rouge went over to another box and said her magic words and opened that box and there was Shadow.

Shadow: Wow. How did you get me from that box to this one?

Rouge: Magic. Thanks for volunteering for my final act.

Shadow: You're welcome. I enjoyed it.

The End

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Dark Nebula Maker:Chembur
Dark Nebula is one of DarkSpirit's three advanced Shadow Beasts

Appeareance
Dark Nebula wears a white Cloak and a white Top Hat to conceal his body. he is nothing but an Eye, that uses Dark Matter to shape himself. he is always followed by three small Stars.

Combat
Dark Nebula can change color, which color he chages to, is the element he can use:

Red : Fire

Green : Electricity

White : Ice

he can freely control his three Stars, which can cause major Damage.

Trivia

 * He is based of the final boss of Kirby Squeak Squad, who is also named Dark Nebula

Theme
"Dark Mind theme" (main theme) (the Battle part begins at 2:10) thumb|100px|right

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Past
Blast grew up in a fairly rich family, well indowed by the economy of Elementia. He had a normal life as a rich person, yelling at butlers, complaining when the sauna was a few degrees too hot, and beheading waiters for not putting some of those umbrellas in his drinks. One day, on his sixteenth birthday (and after he put a few dozen butlers into the dungeon) he met a girl named Hydra. She was highly obsessive and was hydrokinetic. They dated for a few years before Blast, tiring of her obsessive nature, broke up with her. However, not in the normal way. He was scared (as he was a rich person) that Hydra would kill him, so he used the excuse of going to the army. Sure enough, Hydra pledged to kill him before her life ended, and ever since that day, he's been on the run. While in service, Blast offended the Elementian government and is now a wanted outlaw. Blast grew to grow fond of explosives and carries at least 36 grenades on him, in case Hydra, or the Elementians ever tracks him down.

Abilities
Well... he has grenades. Oh, and pyrokinesis. Also, when Blast was younger, before he went to the military, his father gave him a ruby whistle that could summon a dragon.

Friends and Enemies
Blade the hedgehog is an aqaintenence (not a friend) of Blast. Hydra is an enemy of course, and Summer the Hedgehog harbors a dislike of him. Luna, who is sort of like Summer's guardian angel, seems to like him well enough, but then again, she likes everybody. Flare, Blade's sidekick, hates Blast.

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