User blog comment:Detective SkullWolf/Character Critique Requests/@comment-27765057-20140228030703/@comment-27765057-20140228033534

Ask and you shall recieve.

1. I was thinking that the shirt is fine. Maybe you could swap out her shoes for something more school and give her a pair of shorts. Maybe even give her glasses.

2. Her being a boxer allows a decent attack, maybe 6 or seven? However, I still feel that her defense would be rather low since she doesn't have any kind of armor and she does look she wouldn't be able to take a heavy hit easily (don't take that as an insult). Her speed is perfectly fine. Maybe reduce her intelligence to 9 or 8? It doesn't really affect her fighting capabilities so it shouldn't be a big deal. I honestly don't know what psyche is...the other ones are fine I think. Usually having a 60-75 is my personal belief for a balanced character, but that's just my opinion.

3. That certainly does balance things out. But I still feel that she shouldn't have such a huge range. Maybe make it so that as a trade-off for having such a wide-range of magic capability, she has an increased chance of her magic simply not working. If you want to be even more original, make it so that when she uses very similar spells in succession then she has a better chance of it working.