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Christian Mitchel the Cat Maker:AnnabelleRich
This Character belongs to Asia C. AKA AnnabelleRich

Christian Mitchel Main Bio
Name: Christian Mitchel

Age: 17 1/2

Gender: Female

Species: Cat

Weapons/Abilities: Considering she's a sports finatic, she has a giant tennis racket to fight with...Not to mention remarkable speeds. As one of the more quiet members of Team Popular, she usually has a better chance at winning fights and matches due to her determination and will to conquer her enemies.

Personality
Christian is quiet, and doesn't usually care what other people do, as long as they don't mess with her friends no matter what they do to others. This laid back cat is sports orientated, thanks to her family history of athletes. She's more into sports fashion than anyone else, and more active than any other Popular besides Lola Stewart. Though she may seem like a scrawny, alluring teenage girl like Kristy Summers and Annabelle Rich, she hides some serious muscle under those designer clothes.

Backstory
To everyone else, her backstory is unclear, yet the Populars know all about it. Her mother was a trouble maker, and cheated on Christian's father with some other homeless drunkard. When the truth was revealed, Christian's dad not only kicked her out, but took EVERYTHING. The houses, the cars, all of their kids, Christian with her older brother and younger brother. Afterwards Christian heard of rumors that her mom had been robbed on the street, and most likely molested afterwards. For her, it was difficult to grow up with at least 3 other guys and no girls, but that's when she met Kristy, her BFF. She is a very close friend of Kristy and the two have known each other from pre school up until Christian moved away during middle school. They were reunited in a place called Danielle High School when she was able to finally move back to her home town. Like Kristy and Annabelle, she's a mean girl. But not the fashionista kind. More of the bullying beat 'em up kind...Which puzzles the mind considering she's so quiet, and not to mention she's more likable... But she's still a Mean Girl all the way. Kristy introduced Christian to Annabelle and the Populars and she was instantly invited in, replacing Lola's spot in the top three controllers of the group.

In the Present Day...
During the time that the Populars made their way up on the social ladder, Christian made her way into DHS as the new girl, making her an instant target for The Populars. Kristy couldn't believe her eyes- her childhood friend Christian in front of her once more- and they were both speechless. This more quiet 3rd in command Popular is a sight to behold. Outside she seems like a regular Popular, but on the inside she's her own version of Serena Williams, ready to take down the competition! Being the Championship tennis player around, no one would dare mess with her, unless they want a tennis rackett to the face. Being one of the more calm Popular's, it takes patience to anger, and she also seems to have a higher tolerance for Alex's group. On a personal note, she seems to usually be in her thoughts, and is not as mean as Annabelle or Kristy, but just goes along with whatever they want to do willingly.

Quotes
"I don't know...what do you think?"

"Honestly, I don't care..."

"What a freak..."

"You wanna go?"

"I'm sleepy..."

"Do you mind...?"

"No time! I'm late for practice!"

"Anna, you are so totally right!"

"I'll shove my tennis racket so far up your-...!"

"Up yours, Dip Sh!t!"

"Right of way, a$$hole!"

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Leopardo "Duzzel" the Vampire Maker:Pandora89
EARLY LIFE

As a boy, Leopardo didn't have any friends and he felt like his family didn't love him. Leopardo ran away and disguised himself as cat.

FOUND BY SONIC

Years later, Leopardo was later found by Sonic in the Great Forest while in his kitten form. Leopardo was given the name Duzzel by Sonic and lived with him for 10 years. When Sonic lost his memory, Leopardo stayed by his side even though Sonic didn't remember him.

EXPOSED

Leopaedo turned back into a vampire when Sonic's past was revealed. Sonic later found out Leopardo's true origins but didn't mind having a vampire friend, instead thought it was cool.

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Sonic Kidz (series) Maker:ScotchmerJa
This is all made up by me. Cool, is this not? Sonic Kidz is a series of children's science fiction musical films that features what Mobius would be like in the future. Manik Acorn is the main protagonist of the series.
 * 1) Sonic Kidz
 * 2) Sonic Kidz 2
 * 3) Sonic Kidz 3
 * 4) Sonic Kidz 4
 * 5) Sonic Kidz 5
 * 6) Sonic Kidz 6
 * 7) Sonic Kidz 7
 * 8) Sonic Kidz 8
 * 9) Sonic Kidz 9
 * 10) Sonic Kidz 10

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Vas Maker:Kaelinrules
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Sonic X the movie Maker:Miles Tails Prower
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