Board Thread:Article Discussion/@comment-5008885-20130510002936/@comment-4988763-20130510024335

Well, one does not simply compare their abilities with canon characters. A character might be strong enough to take them down, but one does not simply say so directly. Some people will deem your character as a Mary-Sue, and... well... It's not a good thing.

Also, share more details about her traits! What does she look like? What is the Temple of Elements and where it is found? Who are her sisters? Details are vital, but don't spam unnecessary stuff like what type the brand of her shampoo is and such.

Regardless, it has potential in my eyes. Just work a bit hard on it. Show people that you worked really hard on that article.