User blog comment:Detective SkullWolf/Character Critique Requests/@comment-1806960-20140303075205/@comment-27765057-20140314201041

Appearance – All I’m going to say is that I really, REALLY hope those ears are not suppose to be that close to each other. Also, I personally do not like his shoes matching the color of his fur.

History – I’m not going to question anything that involves a black hole, because scientists still do not really know much about them. I think we could use some expanding on this story, maybe he encounters new friends or enemies or discovers more about him. By himself, Graviton does not have much of a story. All we know is how he was created and that he trains a lot. I could see him settling into the plots of other characters, just to find his own purpose.

Powers –

Gyrokinesis: I suppose it makes sense for him to have this power, since he comes from spaaaaaace. He seems pretty balanced with this power, as it serves both an offensive and defensive purpose.

Conclusion – My apologies if this review seemed short, but I honestly could not find much to talk about for this character. There’s nothing on his page that requires a revision. The only change I recommend is expanding the history as it is too short. However, I do not really think that there is much more to write about this guy without throwing him into another character’s story. My score is a moon rock out of ten.