Talk:Krinkinko the Hedgehog

This...could use more work. Backstory doesn't really appear to make much sense. How/why does he meet up with Sonic and Tails? Why Amy? What the heck? D:

What exactly makes him tick? Saying 'anything that gets him mad' isn't saying anything at all as you never specify what's his buttons.

Shoes? Blue and sometimes purple? Huh?? It's either one or the other or you could have just said bluish-purple. And you never say exactly what the shoes look like

As for the pic, you might want to take that down now. I mean no offense to you, but it's an eyesore. It's just sloppy Seeing as you edited this in Paint, I'll give you these pointers: don't edit high-res images with Paint. It just doesn't have the tools for fancy effects. Also, don't save images in JPEG. It slaughters the quality. Use sprite images (pixel art) and save the work in PNG format. Kaihedgie 21:54, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

I strongly agree with Kai here. this character could use a lot of work. Click Ryu's eggs! 21:56, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

Not really much of an improvement. Perhaps maybe you should have someone proofread so you can edit and improve before posting. The story with Knuckles doesn't appear to make much sense seeing as Knuckles doesn't randomly pick fights, preferring to be left alone in peace. As for Amy, why does shopping come up? I know shopping is one of the things she likes to do, but why must it come up? It's not the only thing she does.

Team Dark's story doesn't make much sense at all either. Team Dark and G.U.N. are on good terms with one another. In fact, Shadow and Rouge are G.U.N. agents. G.U.N. is a military agency that operates to serve and protect mankind, not randomly hunt furries and do crazy sh*t to them. This is a very common problem as many seem to be stuck inside Sonic Adventure 2, under the impression that G.U.N. oppresses/opposes furries. Kaihedgie 00:36, October 6, 2009 (UTC)

(The soldeir tried to kill kink because: kink tried to hide from team dark, he was secretly following team dark, the team thoght kink was some sort of spy, he got in to the secret base ,and kink was so intent in staying hidden. Team dark also thoght kink was some sort of faild experiment from the ark.)

Also with knux kink wanted to test how far knuckles would go since it was a echidna that was part responsible for kink's parent's disapearance but knuckles kept cool with all of kinks insults to knuckles but knuckles finnally snapped when krinkkinko's anger lead him into hitting the back of knuckle's head. Leading into a hard core battle!

And the back story plus the amy part is sort of a spoiler I will post it soon but if you can't wait I'll tell you if your sure you want to hear it now! --sonicfan919

This entire page makes no sense. I really think so. Flashfire  Master of   Flames  10:19, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

It's alright. You're mixing your truths with your theories 14:50, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

It's Alright. Some areas could use some more info. Like why is he a little afraid of Big? Is it because he's worried he might get flattened? Gir: YOU GONNA MAKE BISCUTS?!?!?!?!?! YOU GONNA MAKE BISCUTS?!?!?!! YOU GONNA MAKE BISCUTS?!?! YOU GONNA MAKE BISCUTS?!?!?! Zim: No Gir.......... I WILL MAKE CUPCAKES!!! 16:00, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

I'll explain it but I thought that it would be obvious that krinkinko might get crushed. Sonicfan919 19:13, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Character interaction Talkplay
He looks kinda dorky with freckles, but oterwise, he is sick!!! &quot; The &quot;  &quot; Heck?&quot;  16:02, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Krinkinko:I CAN'T HELP MY SKIN oh and thank you.

Another evaluation
I'm sorry dude, but the only thing that seems to have improved is his appearance but other details seem to be all over the place. Why does he have three crushes? Unless he's horny or something, he should be settling over one person or else it'll cause unneeded strife between those three and the blame will be placed on him.

You say he's affiliated with GUN, but the History sections (why are there two?) never mention this and of course, there isn't even an introduction between him and them in the story you posted. Err.....wait, why did those travelers randomly have sex out in the wilderness. That's kinda dangerous, not to mention irresponsible. I also have to question them eating bugs; why do they need to buy bugs when they're probably surrounded by insects in such an environment. And, there's not really a past to tell Kink if he's lived it and remembers every second of it. If it was about his parents, that would be somethin' else.

Anyway, I can't see how he loves peace if he spends half the day ranting incoherently and punching anything that moves and doesn't even stop to try and calm himself down. Not to mention you turn right around and describe him as childish enough to gleefully destroy public property and goods just for the heck of it.

And now abilities.........oh you just needed to have 'Extreme speed', didn't ya. It's not even an attack, it's ab ability. What are 'Rage punch' and 'Leaf Blade'? It would be nice to have explanations for these. Overall, I have to question as to how he can be viewed as a rival to Shadow. A rival is an individual whose level of abilities are enough to challenge your own on equal footing and has a bit of an animosity with you. I'm not calling Kink weak, but he doesn't really strike me as an equal to a being who can bend space and time seemingly at will.

Overall, clear up your details and try to revise or rewrite the article to a more neutral, wiki tone. This means avoiding to use terms like 'whole wide world' or 'bbfl' and without showing blatant bias. Kaihedgie 02:04, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Krinkinko his past was explained by the elder, he loves peace but he can't ever achieve it, the G.U.N. thing is explained in Krinkinko the hedgehog's story. I'll answer the other questions in a sec. Sonicfan919 02:07, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

He's shadow's rival because he's jealous that shadow is better than him in missions. They had Krinkinko in the jungle because they ran away from their villages which were going to kill them both for seeing eachother even though it was forbidden. His crushes are explained in the Roleplays/ fanfics they appeared in. You should be able to search the ability and leaf blade....wel I thought you could catch on. Sonicfan919 02:09, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Probably the reason he can't achieve peace is because he's prone to causing trouble as stated in the profile. Being jealous of someone doesn't count as a rivalry. Not only does Shadow not view Kink as a rival but Kink himself does not possess enough power to be on equal ground with him.

No I couldn't catch on because you never bothered to explain any of these things in the profile article itself. I don't know who or what Kink is. I have not followed his story (which even I did, wouldn't have helped since that too, is full of errors and plotholes). The reader isn't suppose to guess at things. They have to be explicitly told what's going on and why. You need to explain what kind of relationship is going on between him and the mentioned character. I shouldn't have to go through the hassle of making sure what you said is right unless you cite your sources, which means telling what story and what chapter/section. Kaihedgie 02:24, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

See Krinkinko the hedgehog's story, Roleplay: The wal-mart wars, Roleplay:Shadow Crystal cloud tournament,Roleplay:Memory troube,Roleplay:The troll chronicle's Roleplay:A christmas snowday, and Roleplay:Surviving on a desrted island if you want to follow the story and understand more. Sonicfan919 02:27, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

He is a very interesting character. I don't see anything wrong with him. There are some spelling errors on his page though. But overall, I find him fascinating.&quot;Riding the Wave is Skeith, the Shadow of Death, to drown all that stands.&quot; 22:38, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

He looks fine to me.Hikaruyami-having fun* 23:17, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Hm... out of a 1 to 100, I'd give it a 92. WrathOfTheNerd9000 05:32, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Could you explain why? I would like to improve this page. (If you look up at previous comments you'll see why) Sonicfan919 05:35, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Coll character 919, it's well thoguth out but one peice of advice ... get rid of that HUGE chunk of blank area on the page, i sorta got confused as to where the rest of the words were ^-^* ... oh, and can you give me feedback on my fursona Flab please? Oh Christmas Ham, Oh Christmas Ham, What a lovely Sandwich you will make 05:50, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Krink is all right I guess and has a good dark form with a nice decent powerful attack.MetalTheWolf 18:16, December 23, 2010 (UTC)MetalTheWolf

I think Krinkrinko the hegehog is a good story. I like Droget the best because he almost never does mean things. I also think hes funny. I think you should give Krinkrinko some more clothes and weapons. Other than that I think you did a good job. SPARTA FOREVER 19:05, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Thats a pretty kick ass story ya got there. Ultimate Dude  127  20:40, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Pretty good&quot;Guess Who?&quot; 22:11, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Cool, but I think it can use better description :l I am The Jay Master!   Make me brownies!!  22:13, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

It's a pretty good page, the layout is good. The table's are good. (I admit that I don't know how to make those tables) However, for the appearance in Roleplays it would be best if you put the roleplay name in a large heading above the information. Violence is the answer! 23:20, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

RE: Feedback
Not sure what to say really. Despite having so many crushes, can't think of any criticism. -- Guyviroth - My Heart Will Explode 00:52, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

It's good, but it needs a lot of work. First of all, there were so many typos. I lost count of how many times you called him Kink. Second, the backstory; you need to go a lot more in depth, and get rid of the second History section. It basically just repeated what the first one said. Third, the video of his first theme was flagged for copyright, so you should probably get rid of it. And the space above the video section was enormous. Long story short, it's just a lot of common mistakes. Nothing wrong with the information. E-113:Xi 02:25, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

Kink is Krinkinko's nickname. It's also an editor nickname to save time. Sonicfan919 02:30, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

I think this is cool and all (it's even more complete than Duan's!), but it could be improved. Long story short, 7/10. Para Goomba 348 03:38, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

The article's OK, but you need to improve your spelling. Character is OK too.Fair field fencer F F F  09:18, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

Opinion
Flesh out strengths and weaknesses. Expand his relations. My only real problem with this article is that it is yet another hedgehog. There are so many species out there to work with.--火星 'Wages'War 05:55, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

Opinion
Nice character. Although, it didn't make that much sense to me when I read how you said leaves are under his shoes for grinding. So they're just stuck to his feet?

ThoughtfulTikal 06:24, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Well since his shoes arn't made for grinding the leaf on the bottom of them make it smoother for him. Sonicfan919 06:57, December 28, 2010 (UTC)