Talk:Apocalypses Are Boring/@comment-27984457-20180515072314/@comment-27984457-20180515081339

I think, on the whole, the story is good. However, there's a few things.
 * This is personal preference, but I would have prefered it if it was longer, so we can get an idea of what's been happening in all this time. The story's length is fine as it is, though.
 * Although references are fine, there feels like there's way to many and some of them stick out in the dialogue like a sore thumb (namely the Dark Mirror one).
 * Was there anyone else in Westopolis when the void opened? If so, what were they doing?
 * Again, this is more personal preference than anything else, but I cannot imagine the characters constantly saying the dimension's full names and it's annoying to read as well. Maybe you could just call them "our dimension" or "that dimension" most of the time.

Otherwise, I like it a lot.