Thread:GalaxyWorld27/@comment-33279589-20180328074546/@comment-32712012-20180404020105

Thanks for the responses, and for trying to make Yuki's article better (which, I should say, is working)! Let me address your points separately: "Azmaria was created by Madoka The Light 3 years ago. Her skills is that she is immortality and don't age according to Madoka. Madoka consider Azmaria as her daughter. Azmaria is currently 3 years old and she has remain that age since and afterwards. However, She has a body of a 15 year old." As you can probably see here, since you've already said the details about her age by the time one gets the the sentence saying that she is 3 and will be 3 forever, the sentence saying that she is 3 and will be 3 forever is not necessary to understand that she is immortal and doesn't age, since you've already said that. As such, I would like for you to remove this bolded sentence from her Age section, the one shown below: "Azmaria is currently 3 years old and she has remain that age since and afterwards." Anyway, thanks for all of the help!
 * On Azmaria's age: I understand that Azmaria is immortal and can't age, and that that is an important aspect of her character. However, you already said that in her age section. I'm going to quote her age section here, underlining the sentence where you said that she is immortal and can't age and bolding the sentence that I want for you to remove:
 * About Yuki's powers and skills: To put it very simply, what I would like for you to do with her powers and skills is to remove all of her powers and skills, only leaving Hand Sonic, as Hand Sonic is powerful enough that it being the only power/skill in her arsenal already makes her a force to be reckoned with.
 * About Yuki's trivia: I'm not quite sure what you want me to help you with there. Could you clarify that?