Board Thread:Article Critique/@comment-4364032-20150923231025

Hey guys, Gameandfight here. I'm asking on Critique on my character Rik. I'll accept any kind of opinion short or long. Rik has been on this Wiki for 4 years under full construction, and he'll be in construction for quite a while. so if there's anything great or bad I have on the page. I'm all ears. 