Talk:Metal The Rogue

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Is my character good enough?  Hotter than the sun in the middle of July.  Sending out your army but you still can't win, listen up silly boy cuz I'm gonna tell you why.  I burn. Can't hold me now. You got nothing that can stop me.  14:50, November 26, 2013 (UTC)

Part 1
Astrid: [Is 14 years old and is wandering around Station Square, thinking of what to do.] Bored, bored, bored...

[Metal is seen in an alley way, nearby, cornered by three G.U.N. soldiers. They appear to be holding guns, and they have them aimed at Metal. Metal seems to be about 11 year old, and has brown hair.]

Metal: "Somebody help!"

Astrid: [Hears the yelling from Metal.] Huh? Somebody needs help. Well, I guess that's one way to cure boredom. [Runs in the direction of the yelling.]

[One of the soldiers fires a bullet into Metal's arm. Astrid should of heard the gunfire.]

Soldier 1: Shut up, already. Nobody is going to save you.

[Metal appears to be scared.]

Astrid: Oh no. A gun? [Arrives at the alleyway and sees the three soldiers and Metal. She walks up behind them.] Hey!

Soldier 1: [He turns and glares at Astrid.] Hey, your not G.U.N...what are you doing here.

Astrid: Uh... I'm here to stop you! [Is trying not to reveal that she came here out of boredom. She also feels quite intimidated by the soldier.]

Soldier 1: You think? Make one move, and I shoot the boy over there. [He points his gun to Metal.]

Astrid: Uh... you're soldiers, aren't you? Aren't you, um, supposed to help people?

Soldier 1: He escaped, what else am I meant to do? Not chase him down?

Astrid: Huh? Has he done something bad? [Looks at the scared Metal.]

Soldier 1: Possibly destroyed some property of G.U.N...

Astrid: Wait... uh, how can he 'possibly' destroy something? It's either he destroyed it or he didn't.

Soldier 1: We don't know. That's why we gonna question him. Untill he escaped.

Astrid: You've scared him. [Tries to hide in her hoodie.]

Soldier 1: And?

Astrid: [Tries to be confident.] Wow. You're so mean. He's only a kid.

Soldier 1: I don't care if he's a kid..he still is a criminal, he is a street fighter and he blows up G.U.N. property!

Astrid: [Hides again.] Well, then why don't talk to his, um, parents?

Soldier 1: We don't know where his parents is!

Astrid: Stop yelling at me! [Is upset.]

Soldier 1: I will not. You can't defeat us.

Astrid: Maybe if I had my bow I would...

[He punches one of the soldiers, the other two fire at him, and he dodges to the side. He then punches the other two to the ground, and kicks the guns away. He clenches his shoulder in pain and looks over at Astrid.]

Metal: Hi...?

Astrid: That. Was. Awesome. [Snaps back into reality.] Uh, hi.

Metal: Are you with G.U.N? Who are you?

Astrid: I'm Astrid. Don't worry, I'm not with G.U.N. I'm only 14.

Metal: Oh okay. I'm Metal. Nice to meet you.

Astrid: [Sees him clenching his shoulder] You okay?

Metal: I should be alright..

Astrid: Oh, okay. Do you want me to take you back to your house?

Metal: I don't have a house, Astrid..I live out here.

Astrid: You don't have a house...?

Metal: No. I got kicked out by my parents at a young age with my brother..

Astrid: Th-That's so mean...

Metal: My parents didn't really care about me cause I'm a hybrid. [He points to his wolf ears.]

Astrid: Oh. I think hybrids should be treated better.

Metal: They aren't treated better..

Astrid: They need to be. [She thinks.] Do you want to stay around mine for a while?

Metal: If that's okay with you.

Astrid: Yeah, it's fine. My uncle might not agree, but I'll make him come around.

Metal: At least you have a house. [Metal sighs.]

Astrid: Yeah... Well, let's go then.

Metal: [Metal walks off following Astrid.]

Part 2
[A few years later...]

[The two of them have been trapped in a warehouse by Raiden after Metal was injured by him.]

Astrid: The walls are too thick and the door is sealed tight. Hm. Maybe there's a way out through the roof.

Metal: [Looks over at Astrid.] You don't expect me to climb up there with this wound, do you? [He sighs.]

[Raiden's voice is heard nearby.]

Raiden: They think can escape, can they? [To the soldiers, outside the warehouse.] Shoot them on sight if they come out...

Astrid: [Hears him.] He just got his soldiers killed.

Metal: He's got alot.

Astrid: He's got a lot to kill.

Metal: I know. We need to get out of here....there should be a underground floor under here. We should be able to get out though that.