User blog:Hikaruyami-having fun*/Article Review

Hi everyone,with this blog,I'll be reveiwing your pages that needs work.I'll put the info of the page and a warning as well for it.I'll also ask users how they plan to improve their page with thir permisson.I'll be reveiwing 5 pages once every week.And with that,let's get to the reviews!

Last week articles of 11/7/11
 * Solar the Hedgehog(NeroTH)
 * Phineas the Hedgecrane
 * E.A.L
 * Chuchu the Pikachu
 * Kazuko Shinbou

Last week articles of 11/14/11
 * Sunset Hill
 * Yaka Ammy
 * Gaynor Croker the Fox
 * Nightmare (NME)
 * Power 1 Emerel

Last week articles of 11/21/11
 * Bretta the Leopard
 * West Mobius
 * Infera Vol
 * Nazo Unleashed
 * Maria Robotnik(Cy-Fox)

Last week articles of 11/28/11
 * Byron the Unicorn
 * Twilight the Wolf
 * Perfect Dark Metal Sonic
 * Shadow Android X2
 * The Perfect Queen

Last week articles of 12/5/11
 * Drakonsu
 * Shadow's Kids
 * Marine Turbine
 * Christina The Fox
 * Glutton badnik

Last week articles of 12/12/11
 * Legend Wing
 * Pintor's Five Stage Hands
 * Razz the Bat
 * Fleece the Lamb
 * Zack the hedgehog

Last week articles of 12/19/11
 * Seven Swords Dance
 * Manina
 * Emecosmo
 * Juliet the cat
 * Sonic Heroes: Emeralds of Nightopia

Last week articles of 12/26/11
 * Creator of the Sonic XL series
 * Nouka
 * Lily
 * Cassidy the Hedgehog
 * Bulma the Bat

Last week articles of 1/2/12
 * Super Sonic Heroes
 * Ales the Hedgehog
 * Boomer
 * Silver the Hedgecat
 * Catherine Ogmore Pritchard

Last week articles of 1/9/12
 * Reidak the Hedgehog
 * Lorreta Minovia
 * Bloody Amy: The Gore Begins
 * Rollercoaster
 * Dark Elvis

Last week articles of 1/16/12
 * Wendigo 'Digo" Ecchidna
 * Calico the hedgehog
 * Bureru the Giant Leopard Moth
 * Kindness the Hedgehog
 * Jin the Chameleon

Last week articles of 1/23/12
 * Psychic Test Potion
 * Mariah the Cat
 * Shadow and Rouge's Magic Show
 * Dark Nebula
 * Blast the Cat

Last week articles of 1/30/12
 * J.J the Hawk's present give away
 * Crystal Sonic
 * Rage Uppercut
 * Monica the hedgehog
 * D.J. the Hedgecat

Last week articles of 2/6/12
 * Leonidas the Magician
 * Thunder the hedgehog
 * Black Light Virus
 * Metal Element Armor
 * Blaze the cat's secret

Last week articles of 2/13/12
 * Derm the Dark Chao
 * Terro the Hedgefox
 * Pirate Academy
 * Icicle The Hedgehog
 * SwordHeart

Last week articles of 2/20/12
 * Sarah the Hedgecat
 * Shuhei the Android
 * Dark Dagger
 * Star The Blitzhog
 * Triforce Sonic

Last week articles of 2/27/12
 * The Story of Sarah
 * Leet the Fox
 * Xenlon the Necrohog
 * Clade the hedgehog
 * Selene the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 3/5/12
 * Maimuna Maiba (Blessed Grave)
 * Jupiter the Cat
 * Shade The Fox
 * Italic the Wolf
 * Steven The Evil Cannon

Last week articles of 3/12/12
 * Misa the Seedrian
 * Tommie the hedgehog
 * Chaos Storm the Hedgehog
 * Joe the Racoon
 * Jadyn the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 3/19/12
 * Razzago The Wolf
 * Devion the Vamphog
 * Sonic 20th Anniversary
 * Maheera the Dark Blue Chamelon
 * Abyss the Mouse

Last week articles of 3/26/12
 * Rachel the Hedgehog(2011 tv series)
 * Dan the Coyote
 * Artie B. Prower
 * Blast the robohog
 * Mike the Red Panda

Last week articles of 4/2/12
 * Nala-re the Echidna
 * Muste the Wolf
 * Metal Maddness
 * Shildonic the Hedgehog
 * Super Sapphire Vegas

Last week articles of 4/9/12
 * New incoming charectes
 * Evo(MXL)
 * The Hedghog King
 * Jack The Flying Squirrel
 * Korin Alexander

Last week articles of 4/16/12
 * Golden-Chucks
 * Freeopolis Freedom Fighters
 * Venus the Bandicoot
 * Sonoc Return(Real Fangame)
 * Darth Hidious or Cyber Poison

Last week articles of 4/23/12
 * Mecha Storm
 * Book of Eternal Leadership
 * Eclipeces The Dark
 * Ringo the cat
 * Sonic the Hedgehog:Sorcery and Aliens

Last week articles of 4/30/12
 * Alexis Depardieu Coolette
 * Altatude Kiki
 * Ichigo the echidna
 * Pablo the Fox
 * Heartless Twilight

Last week articles of 5/7/12
 * Kay the Fox
 * Alice the Dog
 * Un-Named Character:Help?
 * Dusk The Hedgehog
 * Alien Mezaruga

Last week articles of 5/14/12
 * Evio the hedgehog
 * Ardic the Polar Bear
 * The Decline
 * Horn the Eagle
 * Mimi the rabcat

Last week articles of 5/21/12
 * Leo-Rouge Conflict
 * Ultragamma the Hedgehog
 * Flame the Hedgehog
 * Reptillious LXXXVII
 * Abia the Koala

Last week articles of 5/28/12
 * Twigoon
 * Rush the Hedgehog
 * Light
 * The Commander
 * Wolf

Last week articles of 6/4/12
 * Cyraza
 * Inferno the Hedgehog
 * Galahad the Hedgehog
 * Bronze the Hedgehog
 * Flash the Basset Hound

Last week articles of 6/11/12
 * Eddie the Lizard
 * Super Evil Eris
 * Lightning The Light
 * Hikaru the Hedgehog
 * Toyko Academy

Last week articles of 6/18/12
 * Shahooter-Parkview Conflict
 * 12A7-BOT
 * April Fox
 * Shadin The Hedgehog
 * Transparency the Dragonfly

Last week articles of 6/25/12
 * Mad-Matrix
 * Amy Rose (Blue Twilight's Universe)
 * Liefield the Hedgehog
 * Sonic the Hedgehog (Adventure Universe)
 * June the Armadillo

Last week articles of 7/2/12
 * Twil the Fox
 * Jex Islands
 * Sonic Heroes OPERATION VIZO
 * Project Tundra
 * Echo the hedgehog

Last week articles of 7/9/12
 * Hincho the Rabbit
 * David the cat (Shaymin2348's Original Character)
 * Solar the hedgehog
 * Strike the Hedgehog
 * Violet the Cat

Last week articles of 7/16/12
 * Acid the Hedgehog
 * Airu the Seedrian
 * Cassie Flora
 * Jupiter the Hedgehog
 * Space Brick

Last week articles of 7/23/12
 * Final Five
 * Sonic Unleashed 2: Gaias
 * Breeze the Hunter
 * Super the Echidna
 * Alsh the Eagle

Last week articles of 7/30/12
 * Silver Sonic 3 (Jet Booster Silver Sonic)
 * Shadow and Maria Reunited Story
 * E-Series Robots (Sonic Underground 2)
 * Wave the Witch
 * Bob the Tiger

Last week articles of 8/7/12
 * Bethany The Fox
 * Pseudo-vocabulary
 * Everette the Mosquito
 * The Other Birdies
 * Sonic heros 3 divine being Rise of glory edition

Last week articles of 8/13/12
 * Sonic ZX:Virus Deletion
 * Tails: The Tails doll
 * Team Elya
 * Ickly The Fox
 * Xiang the Echidna

Last week articles of 8/20/12
 * Sonic In A World Of Light And Dark!
 * Kari the Fox
 * Emmy the Chao
 * Clouds
 * Sonic Generations Quest

Last week articles of 8/27/12
 * Weruioh the Hedgehog
 * Princess Diamond Christian
 * Dia the Hedgebird
 * Glider The Cyber Echidna
 * Team mephiles

Last week articles of 9/3/12
 * Coal the Wolf
 * Sarah the fox
 * Phoenix the Swallow
 * Sonic the Hedgehog Film Franchise
 * Saber the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 9/10/12
 * Sonic Snowboarding XD
 * Brackenfire
 * Owen The Hedgehog
 * Dark Super Sonadver
 * Lamp the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 9/17/12
 * Bio - Drazo
 * Jail Break
 * Mario And Sonic Generations
 * Wechnia (Ashura's Legacy)
 * Early Emerald Town

Last week articles of 9/24/12
 * The Power Gamble Casino
 * The FoXRoX Fellowship
 * The Fusi Chronicles
 * Sonic Reqluenish
 * Brenna the Wolf

Last week articles of 9/1/12
 * Gold Chaos Emerald
 * Run at the Speed of Sound
 * Nova Jr.
 * Miley Prower
 * K'nuckles The Cat

Last week articles of 10/8/12
 * Lucy The Fox
 * Cera the Hedgehog
 * Clover the Hedgehog
 * Ethan The Porcupine
 * Defaran

Last week articles of 10/15/12
 * Sonic Generations
 * Sonic Reborn
 * Sonic Universe(TV Series)
 * E-52 ToolBoxer
 * Nilly L.

Last week articles of 10/22/12
 * Alfred The Wolf
 * Cortanna"Courtney" the Lynx
 * Sonia the Wolf
 * Mayor Of Jule
 * Nilly L.

Last week articles of 11/5/12
 * Cloud The Hedgehog
 * Hood
 * May the seedrian
 * Metal .G.R.E.E.N.
 * Jerry the sluglemur

Last week articles of 11/12/12
 * Roy the Chthronian
 * Sonic N Tails
 * Sir Didadad
 * Bethany the Hedgehog
 * Lok-Jaa

Last week articles of 11/19/12
 * Fear factor zone
 * Sonic Brawlers Theme Song
 * Bombboom the Hedghog
 * Moon sceptre
 * T.A.T.T

Last week articles of 11/26/12
 * Metal Amy
 * Siren the Hedgehog
 * Gopher
 * Machinery Stockholm
 * Sonic: Infinity/Pairbond

Last week articles of 12/3/12
 * Ninja the Chamelon
 * Lily Turtle
 * Gopher
 * Machinery Stockholm
 * Sonic: Infinity/Pairbond

Last week articles of 12/10/12
 * Kaleb The Hedgehog
 * Konic
 * Haast Eagles
 * Zetsu (Sonic and Naruto series)
 * Martin the Fox

Last week articles of 12/18/12
 * RustyPorcupine QuartzHedgehog
 * Rosalina the Wolf
 * Stela The Mouse
 * Galactohn the Giant Echidna
 * Black Knight

Last week articles of 12/18/12
 * Shadow and Reign
 * Sonic Flash
 * Tornado At Midnight
 * Makayla the Cat
 * Gray the Hedgehog

Sir Destructias Maker:98.81.2.161
Sir Destructias is The Sonic And The Black Knight Veirson Of Josh The Hedgehog

He Has Most Of Josh`s Powers.

He Was Born To Sir Gaiwan And His Wife.

He Is One Of The Strongest Knights.

Weapons
Destructia Uses The LongSword Ragnell Which Can Banish Darkness.

It Can Control Fire And Teleport To Destructias.

It`s Fire has A Few Powers Like Burning Through Steel.

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Team Boom Maker:Legion The Hedgehog
If you want your character to join just ask on the talk page.

Members
Speed: Boombomb the Hedgehog

Flight: Sonicstar3000

Power: Sparks The Hedgehog (Team Leader)

Themes
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Virus Run Maker:Cosmic The Hedgehog
This Issue has no Knuckles Story only Sonic and Tails.

Sonic Story
Setting: 2 Miles out side of Green Hill Zone

With the Darkness inn the Sky Sonic and XL were Star struck. they did not know what to say. the Robotnik Empire found there home and was ready to strike. "We have to stop them." Said Sonic in a low voice. "What are you crazy they out number us by at least 1000." Said XL. "I Don't Care...'''I'M NOT GOING TO LET HTEM DESTROY MY HOME." '''Sonic Yelled as he ran off. "W...Wait Sonic I...I'm comeing to."

Setting: Green Hill Zone

The Robotnik Fleet was moving torwards Sonic's Home. "We have to stop them. and i have a Plan." Said Sonic. "Well I do to and sence i know the Fleet inside out i think that we should go with mine." Said XL. "Ok What is it." "Ok You Take out the Defense Grid on the West side of the Fleet. I'll Desract the Fleet Guards. Then You'll take out the East Deffence Grid. Next you'll Infilltrate The Fleet and Bring me a Bomber 8000 from the Armory. you'll then Return in.Destroy there main computer with a cherry bomb 100 from the armory. jump out of the control room window and i'll fire off the Bomber 8000 at the FLeet Lead Ship. then We'll whatch the Fire Works. Go tit." "Got it." Sonic Went off at the Fleet. Sonic Destroyed both Defence grids got the bomber and deleivered it. then Robotnik came out with the Egg Walker Again. "I Wornes you Sonin but now i'll have to kill you to." Said Robotnik. "I Don't think so Eggman. Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha get it Egg man because he looks like an egg. oh i crack myself up." "Shut Up Hedgehog." Robotnik Fires some Lasers. Sonic dodged them. XL Charged at the Fleet he ramed the Engin. "Good Bye Sonic i Hope you find another good hero and if you see Cherry tell her that i Love He......................................" XL Was Destroyed as the Fleet Exploded. "NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XL." Sonic Sat there looking at the Sky "Why Him Why Him"...

Tail's Story
Setting: Tail's Labratory

"COME OUT WITH YOUR HANDS UP, MILES PROWER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Tails froze as he heard the cold robotic voice. Could they possibly be here cause they think he killed his parents. It didn't matter, they couldn't come in unless the had a warrent which they are proramed to anouce after they call your name. "COME OUT WITH YOUR HANDS UP, MILES PROWER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

'''"NO!!!!!" '''Shouted Tails.

"WE ARE COMING IN!!!!!"

"You can't" Tails shouted at the cops as he finished the last touches on his plan. "You know what...you can come in if you want." Tails jumped onto the airplane and started the Engine. The cops came in and started fireing. Tails shot the gun that was on the front of the plane around the rotters. one of the Cops got hit in the core and was destroyed. Tails' Plane came to life and flew at the other cop. The cop dodged the airplane and the plane lifted off of the ground. Tails had thought he got away before he heard the shattering voice. "TURN YOURSELF IN MILES PROWER!!!!!"

"NO!!!!!!!!!!!!" Tails shouted as he did a loopdy loop and the cop fell off. "HA, TAKE THAT YOU STUPID OFFICAL!!!!!" The Cop toke his gun and shot one of the rotters and it blew clear off of the plan. The Plan Plummeted into the Shore of an Island tails had never noticed before. Tails walk up to the water line just as the cops destroyed body washed up. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Tails screamed before he noticed that it was destroyed...

End Story
Setting: Green Hill Zone

"Huh. Looks like i should go and find someone else to help me." Sonic said to himself. BEEP!!! BEEP!!! BEEP!!! Sonic looked up at the Power detictecter machine. "Looks like there is someone on Zeley Island. a power of 600 could help. Geuss i know my next stop."...

Setting: Zeley Island

"God, i have got to get off of this island." Tails said to himself. tails looked over to the Cop body. But when tails looked he saw hat the cop was gone. He then thought to himself ''I wonder where the body went. or if it was hardwired to enter. I wonder??? Mabe somebody set a virus in him and this is the island where that genius is. Mabey i should get out of here.'' Tails looked at the forrest and said, "IS ANYBODY THERE!!!!!! HELLOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" that very second there was a rustle in the leaves us the jungle...

Setting: Angle Island Prison

Fang looked up at the guard, "Hey you," The guard looked at fang. "Yeah, you. Let me out of here." The guard resumed what he was doing. "GRRRRRRRRRRRR" Fang leaped to his cage door and pick pocketed the guard before he could get away. Fang opened the cell door silently. The Alarm sounded. "Damn I've got to get out of here." Fang bounded on the guard and to his Pistol. Fang ran to the Entrance. He took another Guard's Pistol. He ran outside. All of a sudden a giant guard bot came out of the groound. "Well, Well, Well if it isn't the big guard himself. Looks like i got a fight comeing."...

Setting: Angle Island Forrest

BEEP!!! BEEP!!! BEEP!!! BEEP!!! BEEP!!!Knuckles looked up. "That's the Jail Alarm. That means that fang is escapeing." Knuckles rushed to the Jail...

Look for the first Fang & Knuckles Story later this fall in Issue 4: Jail Break

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OS-X's History
OS-X was once an extraordinary racer. He was so renowned that during the time of the Salem witch hunt they declared it impossible for a human to win as many races as him, after his last win in the Olympics he was burned at the stake. He had wandered the Haunted Race tack for years until he caught "Wind" of the Fastest thing alive Sonic. This intrigued him, leading him out of the racetrack he followed him to Eggman's lab where she became trapped in an odd machine.

OS-X's Current situation
OS-X is currently trapped by the Dr. Eggman Robotnik. He is unable to break free of the 8 rings and the Sneakers that keep him trapped in the service of the doctor. If he were able to break free he would punish him, he currently can only race at the haunted racetrack and so Eggman has made a racing tournament hosting him as the Champion.

Abilities
Speed Trace Copies the opponent's Acceleration rate.

Energy Trace Can Warp along Energy Sources.

Synaptic Tap Links his mind to the Brain Synapse to speak through others.

Shape-Trance Can Change his Shape to harm foes or become more Aerodynamic.

Friends/Rivals/Enemies
Dr. Eggman(Enemy) Eggman-Nega(Enemy) Sonic The Hedgehog(Rival) Shadow The Hedgehog(Rival) Cream The Rabbit(Friend)

Memorable Quotes
-Does not Speak-

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Gray the Hedgehog Maker:Graythehedgehog
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