Thread:Neoexlucky/@comment-25011242-20151013030343/@comment-10290971-20151015144234

Again, I think the only thing needs to be put there is expansion, perhaps letting his story grow. I don't know if you focus his canon on roleplays or by fanfics, or possibly both, but using those stories to allow Cerberus as a character to grow more, especially since those events could influence how he reacts to things, or how he gaisn more power.

Also two other things I forgot to mention. Think about adding a weakness section, not only does thinking about what his weaknesses are help as you write him, but writing them down can also help show that he is not perfect, you mentioned that he had some quirks since he was a hasty engineering project, show some of that, it'll make him more believable as a character that way.

I would suggest also putting some paragraphs down. Having a giant wall of text shows theres a lot, but it's much easier to stomach in doses. Like, paragraphing between him entering the portal and what he did in the Shadow Realm, as an example.