Board Thread:Article Critique/@comment-26053663-20150602002846

Just asking for a critique of Clock-Watch The Clockwork Hedgehog. Please tell me what you think. Keep in mind that this is a relatively new page, and I have yet to work out all the kinks and history. I'm in the middle of writing a fanficiton that will explain many of the holes in the background of my character.

Thank you! 