User blog comment:Wikikinetic/Winter Awards 2018: Wiki's Votes/@comment-32712012-20180213215826

Akrivus, I re-wrote Rixon's vote, and I'd like to know what you think of it.
 * Before:
 * "In my opinion, this character is just creepy: nothing more, nothing less. For this reason, I'm downvoting this."
 * After:
 * "I find Rixon's article as a whole to be creepy. To be more specific: From the graphic description of Rixon's race's 'handler''s treatment, and of Eggman's death, to the manner in which Rixon deviously corrupts the world, causing it to fall into disrepair and decay, the article bothers me so much that it's hard for me to see the high points of this article through the creepiness of the rest of the article. For this reason, I'm downvoting this article."

Are these the sorts of changes that you were looking for? If so, I'll try to apply the same treatment to the other ones of my votes that you or I found unsatisfactory. If not, please let me know what you were looking for, so that I can work on that instead.