Thread:Hanna Tucker/@comment-27032473-20191007145026/@comment-39521143-20191009212421

Rana is a decent character, though I find what Ominous did at the beginning to be confusing. If he wants everyone to be happy, why threaten to harm others when he should know it would cause them distress? Also, Rana being a four year-old... well, I don't really see a kid her age wanting a sibling to be more mature- if anything, I could see a four year-old encouraging immaturity. These overall are my only nit-picks. Everything else looks fine.