User blog comment:SapphireFlower64/Rebooting My Character/@comment-1806960-20151014011948

Welp, I suppose I can throw in my 2 cents. I did RP with this character, and this change you're making caught my attention.

Now, this is an incredibly positive change you're making. Having royal blood and Chaos powers are both... well, cliché to say the least and having both is certainly eyebrow raising.

I'm not the least bit sure what she looked like before, but this seems like a good design as far as I can tell, not that I'm good at perceiving such a thing that well.

One thing I will advise is that you tread carefully with her having sun based powers and being part cat as some can point out similarities with Blaze and look down on her. Even though there is a clear difference with solar powers and fire powers, that's just my opinion and something to potentially take caution with.

All in all, it sounds like you have a solid start to a great character. All she really needs to have a perfect start is a well defined personality and reasons on why she attained her powers and weaponry (and perhaps why she prefers it plus how efficient she is with it). Having a not so tragic back story could help too. Not at character's parents must be dead or absent, although I'm guilty of doing such with a majority of my characters. I personally don't make it a crucial part of their character to justify such an action.


 * exhales deeply*

Well, I think I rambled on for a bit more then I thought. I hope what I've said helps you. Sorry if anything I said sounds too harsh. I just like to try and help out ^^;