Talk:The Black Cards/@comment-25627885-20151217141327

Well, I like the concept of this. A travelling circus with the main members having stage names based on cards. (I believe that those are their stage names) A little bit on the needlessly dark side of things what with three former employess basically killing their boss who was going to retire.

Logically, it would have made a bit more sense for them to force their boss to hand them legal ownsership of the circus and its remaining assets before 'disposing' of him.

Another thing was how those three former employees found out about Gerome's plan to retire with business profit, if he were that afraid of retribution. He would have done everything in his power to keep his plans a secret and how it slipped out wasn't really explained.

Another thing I find missing would be a brief description of some of their acts.

All in all, I love the concept but some fine tuning may be needed.