Board Thread:Article Critique/@comment-26053663-20150329223405/@comment-4232858-20150329224639

The concept of her switching personalities as well as powers based on her gems is pretty creative. It also helps that her strength does have flaws based on them, keeping her balanced in those regards. One thing I would probably change though, is the comparison's between her hair and Goku's, as well as that one mention to Super Sonic, you might want to put that in trivia instead, while detailing the hair in the personality. It's generally not a good idea to compare your character designs to others, unless for art reference.

Overall, it's a pretty good page. Has a few flaws, but hey, nothing's perfect. I can see it getting a few votes in the awards (adding a picture would probably help too, but art takes time and practice, so no need to rush)