Board Thread:Article Critique/@comment-32220816-20170709171617/@comment-32347223-20170721194246

Since you were kind enough as to review my oc. I'll critique Kennedy.

I liked the personality part of it. He sounds like what you would expect from an entity that's lived thousands of years. The story part is what threw me off, his actions in canon don't sound like the characters you're describing. A big brother figure who will kill whoever he needs to to save the day?. It doesn't sound right. But overall, I like him.