Talk:Kyle the Hedgidna/@comment-209421-20180606062959

OK, so.

On reading the history; I'm impressed by the level of detail you've gone into this. To some degree, I'm feeling a bit of a Fire Emblem: Fates vibe (and if that is not intentional, I want to take this time to pat myself on the back because I kinda left a story thread there along those lines). As a fan of Fire Emblem? I like it a lot, and it's clear where you've taken parts and made them your own, which I very much applaud.

That being said, so far the history really feels like it's an overview. Some parts feel like they could be fleshed out more, even for a little more detail. I understand that'd be better to explore in stories and roleplays, but still.

Now, on a formatting side, maybe it could use some subheadings; I'm not entirely sure on that. So far, it's looking solid, I'm looking forward to seeing more.