Board Thread:Article Critique/@comment-27765057-20140914232815/@comment-25601775-20140915003847

I'm not going to drop in a full on critique (mostly because I suck at this kind of stuff), but I feel obliged to give my opinion since she was my character at one point. Despite all the jokes you make, I'm honestly really happy that you took her in. I didn't develop her very far, yet you did an amazing job. She's become much more unique thanks to you, and can we please just talk about how she got her nickname?? That's seriously adorable and at the same time it makes sense. Checkers was just a generic character but holy crap I'm so happy with all the ideas you've come up with for her, plus you have fantastic writing skills that I'm always jealous about.

Though I do have to point out--I think she actually needs a legit reason as to why she has a scythe. I realize she's no longer a fighter, but I believe she really needs an actual reason. The scythe can even be fake, I don't know.