Thread:GalaxyWorld27/@comment-33279589-20180327234349/@comment-32220816-20180327235403

Bianca is an incredibly flawed character, both in-universe and for her page in general. In-universe, she doesn't seem likeable at all - I don't get what makes her a decent friend, and the only reason she even has Azmaria is because Azmaria is (seeming) like a huge pushover. Plus, the "touches her friend's breast" thing sounds perverted - there really aren't many points given on this wiki for trying to sound "sexy," and I'm using that term really loosely. As for her page, it is incredibly short, and you need to put a History. It isn't "cool" for people to know nothing about her past, so either fill it in or make it later. Anyway, I don't like anything about Bianca.

As for Yuki, first of all, her picture seems kind of strange, with her head looking extremely messed up. But other than that.... Yuki is easily the best character you've made. Well done. (But PLEASE, fix Azmaria and Bianca. One decent character won't save a continuity.)