User blog:JakeMcleod/Sonic.Experiment Plans Episode 0 - Pilot(PLEASE REVIEW)

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'Sonic.Experiment Plans will have Episodes, unknown how many yet though. This is a mix between Sonic Colors, Generations, and Lost World. Also another mixed with a few other Sonic Titles out there, such as Sonic R, Sonic 2, Sonic The Fighters, and many others! Here's the story of "Episode 0": '

'Sonic The Hedgehog! "Rollin' around at the speed of sound. Got places to go, gotta follow his Rainbow!"doin' his thing, being awesome as ever! Jumping, running, and rolling over everything in this Mystic land of green. As it ends, our Blue hero sees a giant Mushroom-like explosion behind a few mountains up ahead, "Well I guess that's done, time to see what kind of party Dr. eggbrain came up for me this time!" Sonic says in his rather usual cocky voice, starting to charge up his speed. He DASHES along everything so quick ya just might miss him if ya blink, He pulls off some awesome tricks while dodging Boulders, somewhat small-but giant cliffs, yes. He's just that awesome! As he's runnin' up the large and wide Mountain, he sees his best foxy-buddy! Tails! Flying with Sonic, "Hey buddy! Long time no see! How's my little buddy doin'?" Sonic asks as he's running with his furry friend. "Just a-okay Sonic! I saw something explode further ahead! I'm checking it out, I see you're coming to, is that correct?" Tails replies in a rather enthusiastic tone. Sonic says "Sweet! Looks like you got an invitation to this awesome party too! Let's go! But I see a giant gap, we need to cross to see the scene! Wanna help?" Tails says excitingly "Yeah! Let's go Sonic!" Sonic jumped and hung from Tails' hands and flew across the gap, later the awesomeness was back on! Now, even Tails started pulling off stunts! How sweet! At the end, both Sonic and Tails came across a giant hole, with Purple-like aura. It seems that it sucks anything that lives in, both Sonic and Tails stay back. What's going on? Is Eggman behind this? What will Sonic and Tails do? What's the purpose of this thing? And how did this happen? Well find out next time! On SONIC.EXPERIEMENT PLANS! '



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