Talk:Raven the Cyberhog (Nexus Ultimatum)/@comment-6839973-20160427005413

I'm pretty sure some of you may be thinking "Didn't he already say that there wouldn't be a revamp #4 to this article? What was wrong with the third?He's a hypocrite!!! Shun him!!"(a little exaggerative, yes). Allow me to fill you in on a few things. Yes, undoubtedly, I can be perceived to be a hypocrite due to what I said in the comments of the old article; clearly stating that I wouldn't do so.

However, there is a reason as to why. I want to give you guys a full, engulfing, and rather gripping story that you would really come to love, or at the very least, like. Also, after having multiple critiques done on the previous one, I have now identified a key sour spot: The history. Also, I CAN assure you this will be it. Before I finish, let me just say, many thanks to those who critiqued on the previous one, thank you all so much for helping out. This also applies to those I asked to critique the previous one. Again. Thank you ^^.