User blog comment:Awkwarddingo/Awkward Reviews by a Dingo/@comment-7637833-20140317234754/@comment-11848168-20140318003548

Alright then. I'll do Lockdown for now. I promise you Deadline is second on my short list. Like I said, I'll do this in categories.

First, is his appearance. His fur really does make me think of a hyena, which is good. Him being a hyena also compliments his personality, but I'll get to that later. His choice of attire does fit his cowboy theme,  although I have a few things to refer to specifically. Firstly, is his choice of weaponry. The ranged weapons I really like, the revolver and shotgun combo is not only practical in a firefight, but also fits the western theme. The melee weapons are a bit odd for a cowboy, especially the scimitar, which originates in the middle east. His switchblade is also unorthodox, but less so than the scimitar. When people think "switchblade", they think of 1950 greasers. I did some research, and there is a switchblade called the stockman used by western folk, so this is just a matter of being specific

Next is his personality. You were just about spot on with the hyena's sense of humor, since hyenas are known fornthier laugh, of course. I also liked how you made him a cowboy, but not one of those stereotypical lone rangers I see all too much. Him being a goofy ladies man worked its way into both his cowboy and hyena themes. Also, seeing what happens to him was fun to read. As a side note, I imagine him being that one guy in a saloon sitting at a table telling a wild story while fellow cowboys laugh whenever a joke is told.

To be honest, I don't have much to say about his history. It looks much like many other ones I read. A goofball somehow climbing the ranks until he finds his ultimate partner. I will go into his and Deadline's relationship later with Deadline's review. You should probably expand a bit if you can. I'm a lover of the perfect balance of quality and quantity. This lacks a bit of quantity, but its quality is pretty decent, to summarize his history.

His skills are pretty nice. I see him leaving some blood here, mangled bodies there, and a nice coat of paint with some organic confetti. I apologize for the morbid description. His ability to climb is also useful for someone of his caliber, but not to get a better view. Probably because of an annoying gunner on the roof. When I see him as a brawler, I think of the videogames where I came in, shotgun blazing. Good times. Gooooood times. Furthermore, his driving skill and quick getaways on vehicles go back to his cowboy roots, with daring horse chases and train robberies. Lockdown's martial arts skills seem to be something you just put in there, which isn't necessarily a bad thing, but I can't help but think you put that there to make him less hopeless in a hand to hand combat situation.

I like what you did with his weaknesses. You covered both social and combat mishaps. You should put emphasis on his drinking, kind of making it his maxima culpa, or greatest fault. His combat weakness, yet again, reminds me of some gaming times I have had, like unloading a whole magazine on a large target until the gun goes *click*, or until I load a double barreled shotgun with only one shell.

I don't have much else to say. I have yet to see a bad trivia section, and his theme songs describe him greatly.

Final verdict: Awkward Dingo gives you a loaded shotgun/10

IGN gives you a 4/10, because you did not bribe them beforehand. (This in no way reflects my liking for this character)

Stay classy, and ask me if you get confuzzled.