Talk:Hikaru the Kitsune: A Second Stand/Chapter One/@comment-28110995-20170320002055/@comment-1942179-20170320020411

alright kids, this escalated into something it really shouldn't have.

As far as I'm concerned, Zeal, you WERE being slightly rude. And sort of jumping to conclusions, as well. Chica basically said that asking so many questions at once is annoying because it makes it difficult to answer. She didn't accuse you of spamming, she said you didn't offend her, she didn't even say you were flaming. Maybe she slightly implied it but that's not enough of a reason to go off on a tangent like that. She isn't even all that annoyed as far as I can see; if by anything at all it's because you let this spin out of control.

Secondly, Self righteous comments like "Do you want to be the only ones reading this?" or "I was being nice from the beginning to even read your fiction." are not necessary. Nobody's telling you to sugarcoat your words, but you don't have to be like that. I'm a writer too, and I think if someone just showed up and started correcting me out of the blue without any other comments that let me know that they like or dislike the story at all, I'd be somewhat put off by that.

As for Chica, he wasn't wrong about his criticism. All his points were sound. Being bombarded with questions and corrections may not be fun but I think all of this could have been avoided if you just went along with it. It was constructive and it'd help you improve, even if you don't like it.