Thread:MaxIrvaron/@comment-32712012-20181202223912/@comment-32712012-20181210130605

Max, it's been a week and you still haven't gotten back to me on this, so until you can, I'm just going to post the story as-is, and if we need to fix the scene, we can do that when you get a chance to do so. (Alternatively, you could comment any suggestions on that page once it's posted.)