Talk:Twitch the Rat

Le Critique
Okay... First of all, criticism of this character is purely from a critical standpoint and not the fact that I hate League of Legends and would like to see it burn from its foundations upwards.

Opening info it sound, despite being based on a LoL character. But whatever, that's more personal peeve than it is criticism... but you need to stop making characters based on other characters.

Physical description is... an exact description of the actual Twitch, pretty much.

No History... Oh dear.

Abilities seem basic, but again the use of Pokemon moves for a non-pokemon character is so amateurish that is seems so... y'know. Unprofessional, if you get what I mean.

Okay, we're just gonna stop there. The problem is, I'm reviewing what is essentially Twitch from League of Legends. You just haven't done anything to put a spin on it to make it your character. You've given him a pretty cool origin, despite being short, and the personality is pretty well-written too -- but I'm not even sure if that's what you've made for him or if he actually has that personality in LoL.

Overall... It's pretty bad. I read this as just a simple attempt of Copying and Pasting a character from another franchise onto this wiki, and making a few tweaks. Not even so much as a background or a history, either. But this is your attempt at it, and you asked my to critique your character. And because not much of it is yours... I'm gonna have to give it 1/10. --Godrend88 (talk) 02:36, March 18, 2014 (UTC)