Talk:Vegas the Fox Hybrid

Cute! ^-^ It Reminds Me Of A Character I Was Going To Create For A Game, So Do You Want Vegas In It Instead? Enter The Portal - The Cake Is A Lie 13:39, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Vegas is AWESOME. Bring it on   or ya meet my sword! 18:43, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

I Fixed A Small Bug You Can Ask Me Anything... The Question Is, Can I Answer It? 19:30, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Aw... what a cutie! Awesome Fursona, Vegas!

She&#39;ll come back... one day. 18:23, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Davis: I hate Sonic... Listen to your heart...  and keep going forward...  15:53, July 23, 2011 (UTC)



I wonder how Johnny reacts to Vegas? :P   "Rainbow Dash"  ---- "Ohai thar." 04:19, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

'Johnny: Who? :o

Vegas: Teh shiz :D

Thank You Everyone!
Im sorry I'm still obsessing over this ;w;

But I felt it was necessary to thank you all for the support on her page! I still can't belive Vegas won due to all of my inactivity which would be one of the main reasons why I would think she DIDN'T deserve it, and I would like to specifically thank Isaiah for nominating her in the first place! All of you are just amazing thank you!

;.;
I feel like Im missing things in her article....

Who is messing with the wiki?
Everything is getting removed then revised who is DOING that its getting tedious T.T

A vandal is removing all the content from the page and I'm undoing his edits. We don't need no education! We don't need no thought control!  21:04, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Is there a way to get him removed? Ban the IP adress or someting?

Contact an admin, and he/she should ban him/her. We don't need no education! We don't need no thought control!  21:07, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Review~
I'll have to do it at some point later today. First thing I noticed was the very well-done reference picture. I'm sure that this will be a good article to review --火星 'Wages'War 14:35, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Why thank you ^^ Although I didn't draw the picture, another artist drew it, I'm glad you'll at least find this pretty good to review :) VegasFox 16:01, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

{C Wow, she looks great.=)My power is my life.  I fight for freedom.  21:48, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Alright~
Review time! I'd like to start out by saying, again, that I think her profile picture is certainly one of the nicest I've seen on this site. Sure, someone else drew it, but they drew what you designed, and I think the design is what is interesting, here (most "OC"s I've seen here are hedgehogs).

Ok, I usually do reviews as I read, so I may be a bit on the weird side as I type this.

First thing I noticed is the conflicting description; a neutral character who really doesn't have a (...) but believes what she does is good.. While I understand what you're trying to say here, it'd help if you said something more like "Neutral, but leaning towards good" instead of "No real side, but believes she's good. Not an issue really, I'm just pointing out something that I'd change.

Now then, her infobox! these are usually fun. That's all fine, too, but then we come across "African American" as her "nationality". Now I'm sure that's not how the Sonic universe works. Again, these aren't problems, but I don't fully understand it, either.

Her power seems to be fairly balanced. Runs on emotion, so it's certainly a rare occurrence in the Sonic universe. Also a nice addition in the "heritage" section. Nothing truly overpowering at all, just some useful skills. I like~

Next up is personality. Oh boy, now here's a problem. You gave her about 12 different personality types, saying she's "Dark and Mysterious" and then "Loud and Fun". That there would be fine under circumstances, but then there's "Calm, with a temper" and "emotionally reserved" that conflicts with what you've already said about her. I'm sure you have a reason for why she has so many different personality traits, but I'd appreciate it if you'd elaborate on what circumstances bring out these traits, otherwise she just seems like she's suffering Multiple Personality Disorder, and we can't have that on our hands, can we?

Large family, but (a lot) better than "HOMG SHE'S SONIC'S AND TAIL'S SISTER AND SHADOW IS HER COUSIN AND ..." which I've come to expect from OCs. Now that is a lot of friends, rivals, and enemies, and I'd appreciate it if you'd elaborate on each of them. For example; why is she an enemy of Dark Gaia? Have they even met? A little bit on each would be nice, though I'd appreciate individual sections for characters like Dark Gaia, where it would make little sense otherwise.

Now then, storytime. I can't help but go 'Wat' in regards to the Eggman part in the story. I don't know, but just something about the backstory here just...doesn't look like I should take it seriously. It reminds me almost of a 'wham' episode than a serious backstory. And the problem is that I don't know what's actually wrong, so I can't help with suggestions on how to 'fix' it. Sorry. The rest of the story makes sense, so I have no problem there.

Oh dear. Super forms. I cringe at those words...Let's do this! Ok...her "Super Sapphire" form seems more like she's throwing a fit than anything, and doesn't seem to offer any benefits. I wouldn't call it a super form, but it's your call. Now then, her Howl Star and HS+ forms irk me. Not because of what they do but because "DARK GAIA" is mentioned again, and I don't remember spotting it anywhere else in the article, so it's just kind of there for no real reason from what I'm seeing. None of these seem like super forms. Label them "alternate forms" or something since they don't seem all too powerful or extravagant. They aren't bad, but I can't honestly say I'd rely on them in a battle.

I'm skipping on reviewing the "Universes" section. Not because I'm lazy (I am, but still), it's because I feel that they are just descriptive sections, so they're fine in and of themselves. I noticed a "SONIC THE HEDGEHOG" under official pairings. Come one, now. There's hundreds of male characters to choose from, most of them far more interesting as a romantic choice.

Nice counterpart. Kinda looks angry.

Trivia section is nice, but I think "Vegas is really into fantasy" doesn't need to be mentioned.

ALRIGHT THEN, TIME FOR A FINAL EVALUATION...AND THE NUMBERS ARE IN.

APPEARANCE: 8/10 {C ABILITY: 8/10 {C PERSONALITY: 6/10 {C BACKSTORY: 7/10 {C OVERALL ORIGINALITY: 8/10

FINAL SCORE: 37/50 (That's a 4/5). Not the best score, no, but it's vastly better than a great majority of the OC I've seen here.

Suggestions, Sephiroth?

"mother.. Ahem. Be a bit more organized in the descriptive parts of her profile. I get the feeling that you haven't made up your mind completely about some parts of Vegas' characterization. It's not a bad thing, but it could hurt her development as a character."

Again, one of the best I've ever reviewed. --火星 'Wages'War 23:36, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

VegasFox 00:04, January 8, 2012 (UTC)YES, I know when I was creating the Super forms I wasn't exactly sure how to go with it, it would have been hypocritcal of me to use them because I talked about how much I disliked them in other reviews but I also thought it was necessary just to give some emphasis on her, I'll have to tweak the HS and DHSV form but the Super Sapphire one can be scrapped I don't really need it.

Yeah, I've always had that problem in my writing with being disorganized, I was trying to reveal what I could here without spoiling my comic too much and without being to lengthy since I tend to ramble on, I guess I just need to fix that balance.

Writing that whole Eggman thing back story was rushed greatly I need to find a better way to describe it, its hard to take anything involving "Eggman" seriously...maybe I should change it from Circus to something else...

And again with me trying to keep things hidden and unlengthy I had no idea how to introduce the whole "Dark Gaia" thing correctly XD Its actually very important and I need to revise it definatly, thank you pointing it out!

Oh trust me when I was thinking of characters my thoughts were ranging from Ray, Geoffory St. John, Scourge, etc.

I guess I really didn't care at the moment and chose who I thought would work with the story more seeing as all of those characters are Archie characters and while the series does wrap around Archie a bit its mainly towards the games so I just wasn't too picky about who I would choose XD

I could work on the personalities definatly ;w; actually that summary is MUCH more out of date than everything else on this page so I could work on that.

Large family for a good reason...that kinda involves her Dad at fault, its difficult XD

Oh wow this was one of the most descriptive and best reviews I have ever gotten, thank you! I can finally get those tweaks fixed, I knew they were there but I just didn't know where to find them, again thank you so much! I would love to do something like this again if you ever have any other character or something~ I know my "review" probably didn't cover much, I guess its because you know how to create your characters pretty well so I couldn't find anything wrong with it myself, your review has truly helped me out here though thank you. ^^

Anytime~ --火星 'Wages'War 13:34, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Really nice drawings Vegas. Minato  Arisato  05:22, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Eh thanks but I have to say some of them aren't mine ^^; The only ones that ARE mine is the Vegas Genderbent drawing at the bottom and that one where it looks like she's in water >w>

Critque NAOW.
NO REALLY NOW. XD I LOVE reviews negative AND positive I just want some tips or some feedback please mainly because I feel like reading more opinions of others >w>