Talk:Malevolence the Kitsune

Nice work! :D since she is a fox...well....I know someone that'd go a bit nuts :3 Tails  6000  02:52, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Talkplay: Devion becomes Malevolence's Minion
Devion:(looking through his closet, all of the outfits are the same a pair of grey gloves that show his fingertips and boots)Hmmmmmm tough choice....(grabs a pair and puts them on)

(Unnoticed, a pair of malicious red eyes watches him from the shadows.)

Devion:(looks around for a comb and gel)

(Later, when Devion is fully ready...)

Devion:(goes outside, he feels someones presence)

(There is an evil chuckle that seems to come from all around him.)

(Gotta go! See you!)

Devion:H-hello!?

(AWWWW)

(There is a sudden flash of black, and Malevolence steps out of the darkness, smiling evilly.)

Devion:W-whoa...

Malevolence: You're Devion, aren't you?

(Malevolence's voice is the most wonderful voice Devion has ever heard. It's almost... hypnotic...)

Devion:Y-yes...(lost in her beauty)

Malevolence: I heard you'd like to... serve me, for want of a better term. Is this true?

Devion:(unable to speak he nods)

Malevolence: How much do you want it? I can't just... hire, I suppose... anyone. You have to be... devoted.

Devion:You don't know the half of it...I've wanted to for quite a while...

Malevolence: (looks at him) Really now?

Devion:.....(nods)

Malevolence: (smiles, chuckles) So you want this more than anything?

Devion:Y-yes..

Malevolence: Good. (teleports them both into what appears to be a very small castle throne room)

(Whenever devion gets a chance he stares at her in admiration)

Malevolence: (smiles, tendrils of her hair wrap around his wrists and ankles) If you're sure you want this, then let's begin..

Devion:I'm ready...

Malevolence: Good. (the hair-tendrils hoist him up into the air, and Malevolence floats to be on eye level with him)

Devion:<_< >_>(gets kinda nervous)

Malevolence: (chuckles) Don't worry... it'll all be over in a second... and then you'll be mine... that's what you want, isn't it?

(Malevolence's voice has become even more hypnotic than before.)

Devion:Yes....yes it is..

Malevolence: (smiles, bone claws grow from her fingertips) It might hurt a little... but that's okay, isn't it? As long as you're with me?

Devion:(nods)

Malevolence: Good boy. Now look at me. (lifts his chin up so their eyes meet, begins to hypnotise him)

Devion:(gets hypnotised)]

Malevolence: Feels good, doesn't it? (slowly places her bone claws on his chest)

Devion:(resisting an urge to kiss her because he wishes to conseal his crush on her)

Malevolence: (drags her claws down his chest to leave an M-shaped wound, which burns with evil energy)

Devion:(without her noticing he sniffs her hair and looks away before she notices)

Malevolence: This is where it starts to get painful. (touches the M-shaped wound, it begins to hurt badly)

Devion:(Screams in pain)AAAAGHHHHHH!

(However, the pain soon goes away.)

Malevolence: (lifts his eyes to hers again) Enjoy that?

Devion:Not most of it...

Malevolence: (hurt look) But you said you'd do anything...

Devion:Please don't be upset...I will...please don't be upset

Malevolence: (smiles evilly) Okay then... (hypnotises him again) Will you do anything I say?

Devion:Anything your heart desires

Malevolence: (places a hand on his chest, and the M fades, and Devion feels a drowsiness sweep over him.) Now be a good boy and go to sleep.

Devion:(falls asleep)

Malevolence: (sends a few pulses of energy through his unconscious body, then sits down and waits)

Devion:(slowly wakes up, opening one eye, and then the other)

Malevolence: (smiles evilly)

Devion:(sees Malevolence,thinking)I don't think this plan is going to work...

Malevolence: What plan? I can read minds, you know. But you're mine now. So what plan are you thinking about?

Devion:O_O I'm screwed.....I'd rather not tell....

Malevolence: Hmm...

Devion:Please don't hurt me.....

Malevolence: Why would I do that to my favourite servant?

Devion:F-favorite?

Malevolence: None of my others have shown near as much devotion as you did.

Devion:Oh... That kind of favorite

Malevolence: What do you mean, that kind of favourite?

Devion:Oh, forget it.

Malevolence: Hmm... Fine then.

Devion:......

Malevolence: How are you feeling?

Devion:Good....

Malevolence: That's good... (smiles at him)

Devion:Heh....i guess..

Malevolence: I'll let you have a short rest before I present you with your first task. (turns to leave)

Devion:(goes to get some rest)

Malevolence: (leaves, but watches him) Interesting...

Devion:(heds into his room and goes to sleep)

Malevolence: (smiles evilly)

(The next day...)

Devion:(wakes up).....

Malevolence: (walks into his room) Good morning, Devion. Sleep well?

Devion:Yes, master malevolence

Malevolence: (smiles) That's Mistress.

Devion:(embaressed)Oh...

Malevolence: It's okay.. One little mistake... Don't worry about it.

Devion:(her voice comforts him)

Malevolence: (pats him on the head)

(Gotta go! See you!)

(DANG IT!)

Devion:(blushes, but is not visible)

Malevolence: Are you ready for your first task?

Devion:Yes mistress!

Hmm...
I wonder what would happen if Malevolence went after Dismal?--  &quot;That's Mama Luigi to you, Mario!&quot;  ----*wheeze* 01:32, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm... Dunno. Talkplay? --When the rich wage war it's the poor who die... 01:39, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Okay.--  &quot;That's Mama Luigi to you, Mario!&quot;  ----*wheeze* 01:40, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Malevolence Meets Dismal
(One day, Dismal is by himself.)

Dismal: *whistling*

(He feels as if he's being... watched...)

Dismal: *whistling subsides* ..........hello...?

(There is an evil chuckle which seems to come from all around him.)

Dismal: *jumps* Wh-Who's there...?!

Malevolence: (steps out of the darkness behind him)

Dismal: *whimper*

Malevolence: You're a small one, aren't you?

Dismal: (Backs away) Uhh...uhh...

Malevolence: (a wall of shadow energy appears behind him)

(Dismal's back hits the wall.)

Dismal: *whimper*

Malevolence: Why so scared, little one?

Dismal: (Cowers away, shaking) P-Please don't hurt me...!

Malevolence: Why would I want to do that?

Dismal: Uhhhh.....*shrugs* I dunno...usually a lot of people want to hurt me...

Malevolence: (smiles evilly) Really?

Dismal: *shy nod*

Malevolence: You poor thing...

Dismal: ?

Malevolence: I can't think why anyone would want to hurt you..

Dismal: Uhh...

Malevolence: What's the matter?

Dismal: I.......I'm scared.......

Malevolence: Of what?

Dismal: ......a lot of things...

Malevolence: Are you scared of me?

Dismal: ................*lying* N-No...

Malevolence: You're lying. You are scared of me. Don't be scared of me. I'm your friend. (hypnotically)

Dismal: Y-you're...my...friend...

Malevolence: Yes, I am. Don't you feel so much better now?

Dismal: (Slow nod)

Malevolence: Good... (chuckles evilly)

Dismal: .........

Malevolence: (releases him from the hypnosis, and suddenly plunges the whole area into darkness)

Dismal: WAH!! Wh-What happened?! I-I-It g-got dark!!

Malevolence: (laughs) Afraid?

Dismal: (Cowers on the ground) I-I'm afraid of th-the dark!!

Malevolence: You shouldn't be afraid of the dark... you should be afraid of what lurks in the dark..

Dismal: H-Huh?!

Malevolence: You should be afraid of the monsters, little Dismal...

Dismal: M-Monsters?! D:

Malevolence: (laughs evilly)

Dismal: *frightened wail*

(then, a giant monster comes out of the darkness! It looks like a giant spider, but with needles for legs, and a huge mouth filled with blood-dripping teeth)

Dismal: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!!!

Monster: RAAAARRRGH!!!

(Dismal gets up and tries to run, but finds he is unable to.)

Dismal: S-Somebody!! H-H-HEEEEELP!! *starts sobbing*

(The monster pounces, jaws wide, but then the scene changes... Dismal finds himself strapped to an operating table, with evil, monstrous doctors around him)

Dismal: No...NO!! ''NO!! LET ME GOOOO!!'' (starts thrashing, but in vain)

(One of the doctors pulls out a chainsaw!)

Dismal: AAAAAAAAAGH!!

(The evil doctor lunges towards him with the chainsaw, and then everything turns to black.)

Dismal: M-M-Make it s-stop...p-p-please...!!

Malevolence: (appears two paces in front of him) Why?

Dismal: *yelp* (inadvertently wets himself) ._.

Malevolence: (laughs)

Dismal: (Starts crying)

Malevolence: Aw, what's the matter? Scared? (another scene starts up (Ryu, you do this one))

Dismal: !!

(This time, a giant zombie clown is looming over Dismal!)

Zombie Clown: Hyuck hyuck!! Wanna play a game, little boy?!

Dismal: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!!

(The zombie clown picks him up, guffawing loudly and evilly.)

Dismal: N-NO!! P-P-PUT ME DOOWWWN!! *starts crying again*

Zombie Clown: Awww, don't cry little boy! Here, have a balloon! (takes deflated balloon attached to hose and shoves it down Dismal's throat, then pumps air into balloon)

Dismal: *muffled yelling*

(His body starts to inflate!)

Dismal: !!

Zombie Clown: Uh-oh, I should probably plug up those holes! [sticks corks in Dismal's ears, nose and butt] There!

Malevolence: (chuckles sadistically)

Dismal: *muffled yelling*

(The zombie clown pulls the balloon hose out of Dismal's mouth, making him whiz around the area, just like a deflating balloon.)

[SFX: FFFFWWWWWEEEEEEEEEOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHH]

(He eventually deflates completely, landing painfully on the ground. The corks in his ears fall out, but not the other three.)

Dismal: *nasally* Uhn!!

Malevolence: (appears before him again)

Dismal: !! (cowers away, whimpering)

Malevolence: Aw, what's the matter?

Dismal: (Starts crying, cowering away from Malevolence)

Malevolence: (chuckles)

Dismal: *nasally* W-W-Why are you d-doing this t-to me...?!

Malevolence: Because it's fun.

Dismal: *nasally* I-I'm getting out of here...! (gets up and runs away from Malevolence)

Malevolence: Oh, going so soon? (tendrils of energy wrap around Dismal and lift him into the air)

Dismal: *nasally* L-Let go!! P-Puh-please!!

Malevolence: Why? (floats up to him) It's just starting to get fun...

Dismal: *nasally* I-It hurts a-a-and i-it's s-scary! (eyes tear up)

Malevolence: Oh, really? Good...

Dismal: (Tries to pull the corks out of his nose)

Malevolence: (yanks the corks out hard)

Dismal: (Yells in pain)

(Some blood drips out of his nose.)

Malevolence: (laughs)

Dismal: (Puts both hands on his nose) *crying*

Malevolence: Aww, is the poor baby in pain?

Dismal: *sniffling*

Malevolence: (laughs)

Dismal: Why are you being so mean to me?! DX

Malevolence: Because I can. Because it's fun. Just because.

Dismal: Haven't you had enough "fun" at my expense already?!?! DX

Malevolence: Hmm... no.

Dismal: *crying*

Malevolence: Aww, don't cry. It gets better from here. For me.

Dismal: *crying/sniffling*
 * (Ryu-Maybe she should do something about the cork in his bum? >:3)
 * (What do you suggest? And are you going to edit Cryptid Chaos or not?!)
 * (Ryu-Iunno, something humiliating and painful.)
 * (Hmmm...)
 * (Ryu-This might be too ideologically sensitive, but what if she made it turn into a thorned worm or something?)
 * (Cactus?)
 * (Ryu-Yeah! Like, a living cactus!)
 * (No, wait... A PUFFERFISH!
 * (Ryu-*like M. Bison* YES!)

a question
I got a question, what could happen if a fox was to be trapped with her (in the same room or same place)

and the Fox I speak of.....twister.....since it IS halloween, I wanna give him a good scare..... is that alright with you? Tails 6000  03:22, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Well, if you want a scare, I have a much better character. --When the rich wage war it's the poor who die... 03:28, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

if it;s that hedgecrane than I already have someone for that one (Jeremy LOL)

but what I mean is.....Twister is fox, she's some sort of fox, she tries to make them talk..... well...mainly tails gave up on half the trail so it's just twister (originally both of them) I needed some other thing somehow (I doubt you;d allow her to seduce him into talking about anything secret) but all I had in mind, making him talk about secret stuff he was not to tell anyone Tails  6000  03:33, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Huh? Can you explain that again? --When the rich wage war it's the poor who die... 03:45, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Twister is a fox, malevolence is a kitsune (type of fox) she could either torture him to speaking some secret info...or seduce him nito saying the secrets...which way do ya choose? Tails 6000  03:58, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

I can do both. (cracks knuckles) --When the rich wage war it's the poor who die... 04:03, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

awesome :D *has a hand out for a hi-five* any ideas for a name? Tails 6000  04:04, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

A name for the Talkplay? Hmm... Dunno.. (high-fives you) --When the rich wage war it's the poor who die... 04:14, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

I had the name seductive torture in mind if thats okay with you..... :3 Tails  6000  04:17, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe something more straightforward, but it's good. --When the rich wage war it's the poor who die... 04:20, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

thanks....that was basically my only idea...so ya wanna sue that? Tails 6000  04:22, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Dunno, I'll think about it. --When the rich wage war it's the poor who die... 04:30, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

okay Tails  6000  04:32, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Well I didn't get a name idea, did you? Tails 6000  03:20, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

BTW If ya wanna start the talkplay in mind you can start. Tails 6000  03:48, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Talkplay: Telling the Truth

 * (Twist:got it! :D)

Twister: *whistling while listening to his ipod*

(I'll edit a little later, if it's okay with you, Twist. I'm doing a lot of things right now, sorry. :))
 * (Twist:it;s okay ^^)