Thread:XophPsycho/@comment-32347223-20170929223934/@comment-27601199-20171027113649

Hey, it's been a while since we've talked about this, and I've meant to sooner, but now seems like a good time.

You've definitely improved, however there's one thing I would like to bring up: surnames and titles. Surnames / last names should always be capitalized as they are proper nouns- for instance: the last name Prower.

Titles, specifically character's titles, should be capitalized as well due to being part of the character's name- for instance: Sonic the H edgehog, Xophtré the P sychopath, etc. However, instances outside of a character's name should be lowercase. "The c at turned to face him. 'Excuse me, Mr. W olf?' she asked."

Also, words in a story's title should be capitalized as well, exeption being in small words such as "the", "is", "for", etc- unless they are the first word. So, "Team Boom: Youthful Heroes", "Wake the Wind", "The Collapse", etc.

Lastly, and this isn't as big of a deal but I feel like you should be aware: when one character speaks, then another character speaks after them, 99% of the time you should separate the clauses- otherwise it becomes confusing as to who's speaking.

"'So, what should we do tonight?' she asked.

'I'm not sure,' he responded."