Fanfiction talk:The Collapse/Chapter 1

...why

why a talkpage?

The comments system is so much better!

uhg, anyway

So chapter one's finished, I guess. Though there's obviously room for improvement, so if anyone has any suggestions, feel free to voice them!

'' and i'll get on game to give the fanfic namespace comments... ''

"Let the disaster begin" -XophPsycho- 19:12, April 9, 2018 (UTC)