Roleplay talk:Secret Discord/Part1/@comment-5142578-20170626173606/@comment-5142578-20170627181427

Alright, made my edits. One in the section before Following Granite (character's introdution), and one in the splice section (now meeting the characters).

Pardon me if any of it seems. . . rough or choppy. It's been a LONG time since I've done this. And I'm still working on revamping my characters. Also, one more question: Is this RP cannon? I would think it is.