User blog:Sunny the Hedgehog/Scary Story 1: White Death

I (User:Sunny the Hedgehog) discovered a new talent! I have the ability to use a scary story idea, and create my own story based off the idea/legend!

This story is called "White Death", which is based off of the legend of the White Death.


 * It was a bright, sunny day. Sure, it wasnt as bright as yesterday, but it was about just as good.
 * Zhane loved sunny days. She always went outside to hang with her friends on those kinds of days.
 * But Zhane suspected something....weird. It seemed as if the days were getting worse and worse. She didnt feel as happy as she used to be.
 * So she decided to search the internet that day.
 * Did I mention Zhane loved scary stories? Well, she did. She loved anything scary. On weekends, she'd always find something to scare herself (or her friends) with. Today, she went on her favorite scary-stories website.
 * Strangely, she came across a new story. The website didnt get new stories that often. She tried to click on it, but it wouldnt let her. A message popped up, and said that the story was blocked.
 * Being very smart when it comes to computers, and being her curious self, she did what she could to read the story.


 * After hours on end, she finally hacked it. She finally got to see the "Forbidden Story". She was amazed at the title. "White Death". "Interesting...", Zhane thought. She read the story from top to bottom, but there was a few lines that she kept reading over again:


 * “She knocks once for you skin, which she’ll use to patch her own decaying flesh. Twice for your hair, which she’ll gnash between her teeth. Three times for your bones, which she’ll fashion into clubs. Four times for your heart, which she’ll tear out of your chest. Five times for your teeth, which she’ll polish and keep in a box. Six times for your eyes, which she’ll pluck out one by one. Seven times for your soul, which she’ll swallow whole.”


 * This sent chills down Zhane's spine. How strange....Zhane never felt that way. She soon found out that it wasnt only the story that gave her chills....it was also the fact that her bedroom door was open.


 * Zhane knew better. She knew that this "White Death" was just a story. But she couldnt help but think that it was just more than a story...but a warning.


 * The next day was worse. Zhane got an evil feeling. She wanted to tell the story of the White Death to a bully in school. A bully that always messed with her, and teased her. His name was Duke. Zhane expected to see him today, since today was Duke's "lunch money collecting day".


 * And Zhane was right. Duke did come to get Zhane's lunch money. But Zhane was reluctant to give it to him. Confused, Duke yelled "You trying to fool me or something?! I'm not that dumb...well, I'm not dumb at all...but I KNOW you're trying to pull something here!"


 * Zhane smiled evily, like a Chesire Cat, almost. "No, I just want to tell you a story.". Confused, Duke was reluctant to hear the story. So Zhane told him, then left when she finished.


 * She went home, care free. Zhane tried to go outside, but as soon as she stepped out to the porch, it started to rain. "Oh well, It's late anyway...", she said. So she got ready for bed.


 * The next day, the weather was worse. Zhane thought nothing of it though. As usual, she got ready for school, got some french toast, and watched the news.


 * What she saw, joyed her spirit, yet shocked her.


 * It was Duke. He was dead. His parents went out shopping last night, when they came home, Duke's bloody corpse was lying on the couch. He had skinned alive and ripped apart.


 * Zhane was joyed. She was so happy that she would no longer be bullied! She went to school and told her best friend, Jamie.


 * "Did you watch the news?! Duke wont be bullying us anymore!!!"


 * "Who?"


 * "Duke! Dont you remember all the times he took my lunch money, and backhanded you?!"


 * "Zhane, I think you've gone crazy."


 * "....no....this....this cant be...!"


 * Zhane, not caring what anybody thought, ran home. Everywhere she looked, she saw....a little girl.


 * She had finally got home, and then passed out.


 * She woke up. In bed. "It..it was just a dream *sigh of relief*". But, it was afternoon. Zhane thought it was nothing, so she went to watch TV.


 * After a few hours, her parents still werent home. She thought nothing of it, and continued watching TV.


 * Then the TV turned static.


 * "Strange", thought Zhane.


 * The next thing that happened...well....lets just say that there were seven knocks on the front door.


 * Finally, Zhane's parents arrived home. They thought everything was normal. They called Zhane's name. No answer...


 * They thought she was out with her friends, and they trusted her. After all, Zhane is (or should we say was) in High School.


 * But, there was an absolutly horrible smell coming from upstairs.


 * Steadily, her parents crept upstairs. They gasped from the sight they saw.


 * Zhane was ripped in two. Her eyes were missing, and her hair was ripped out. She was halfway skinned. Blood was splattered all over the walls.


 * Zhane's parents went downstairs in shock. They couldnt stand the sight.


 * All of a sudden, the computer turned on. A scary story popped up, titled "White Death"...


 * The two parents read the story, top to bottom. They realized they were reading the story on Zhane's computer. It was the last thing she looked at on there before she died.


 * "Nonsense" thought the parents. This couldnt be how their daughter died! Not like this.


 * That's when they heard a knock at the door...