User blog:Jack "BtR" Saxon/Review

Does this plot make sense? I'm not sure if it is too complicated or not...
 * The Goddess of Night, Nyx, grows jealous of Hemera, Goddess of Day, and plans to bring the world into an everlasting age of nighttime. To do this, she sends her son to stop the sun from rising (the world is partly controlled by belief and, as thousands of years ago it was believed that animal sacrifice on the winter solstice makes the sun come up, Christmas is held as a variant of sacrifice) by stopping Christmas.