User blog:Hikaruyami-having fun*/Article Review

Hi everyone,with this blog,I'll be reveiwing your pages that needs work.I'll put the info of the page and a warning as well for it.I'll also ask users how they plan to improve their page with thir permisson.I'll be reveiwing 5 pages once every week.And with that,let's get to the reviews!

Last week articles of 11/7/11
 * Solar the Hedgehog(NeroTH)
 * Phineas the Hedgecrane
 * E.A.L
 * Chuchu the Pikachu
 * Kazuko Shinbou

Last week articles of 11/14/11
 * Sunset Hill
 * Yaka Ammy
 * Gaynor Croker the Fox
 * Nightmare (NME)
 * Power 1 Emerel

Last week articles of 11/21/11
 * Bretta the Leopard
 * West Mobius
 * Infera Vol
 * Nazo Unleashed
 * Maria Robotnik(Cy-Fox)

Last week articles of 11/28/11
 * Byron the Unicorn
 * Twilight the Wolf
 * Perfect Dark Metal Sonic
 * Shadow Android X2
 * The Perfect Queen

Last week articles of 12/5/11
 * Drakonsu
 * Shadow's Kids
 * Marine Turbine
 * Christina The Fox
 * Glutton badnik

Last week articles of 12/12/11
 * Legend Wing
 * Pintor's Five Stage Hands
 * Razz the Bat
 * Fleece the Lamb
 * Zack the hedgehog

Last week articles of 12/19/11
 * Seven Swords Dance
 * Manina
 * Emecosmo
 * Juliet the cat
 * Sonic Heroes: Emeralds of Nightopia

Last week articles of 12/26/11
 * Creator of the Sonic XL series
 * Nouka
 * Lily
 * Cassidy the Hedgehog
 * Bulma the Bat

Last week articles of 1/2/12
 * Super Sonic Heroes
 * Ales the Hedgehog
 * Boomer
 * Silver the Hedgecat
 * Catherine Ogmore Pritchard

Last week articles of 1/9/12
 * Reidak the Hedgehog
 * Lorreta Minovia
 * Bloody Amy: The Gore Begins
 * Rollercoaster
 * Dark Elvis

Last week articles of 1/16/12
 * Wendigo 'Digo" Ecchidna
 * Calico the hedgehog
 * Bureru the Giant Leopard Moth
 * Kindness the Hedgehog
 * Jin the Chameleon

Last week articles of 1/23/12
 * Psychic Test Potion
 * Mariah the Cat
 * Shadow and Rouge's Magic Show
 * Dark Nebula
 * Blast the Cat

Last week articles of 1/30/12
 * J.J the Hawk's present give away
 * Crystal Sonic
 * Rage Uppercut
 * Monica the hedgehog
 * D.J. the Hedgecat

Last week articles of 2/6/12
 * Leonidas the Magician
 * Thunder the hedgehog
 * Black Light Virus
 * Metal Element Armor
 * Blaze the cat's secret

Last week articles of 2/13/12
 * Derm the Dark Chao
 * Terro the Hedgefox
 * Pirate Academy
 * Icicle The Hedgehog
 * SwordHeart

Last week articles of 2/20/12
 * Sarah the Hedgecat
 * Shuhei the Android
 * Dark Dagger
 * Star The Blitzhog
 * Triforce Sonic

Last week articles of 2/27/12
 * The Story of Sarah
 * Leet the Fox
 * Xenlon the Necrohog
 * Clade the hedgehog
 * Selene the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 3/5/12
 * Maimuna Maiba (Blessed Grave)
 * Jupiter the Cat
 * Shade The Fox
 * Italic the Wolf
 * Steven The Evil Cannon

Last week articles of 3/12/12
 * Misa the Seedrian
 * Tommie the hedgehog
 * Chaos Storm the Hedgehog
 * Joe the Racoon
 * Jadyn the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 3/19/12
 * Razzago The Wolf
 * Devion the Vamphog
 * Sonic 20th Anniversary
 * Maheera the Dark Blue Chamelon
 * Abyss the Mouse

Last week articles of 3/26/12
 * Rachel the Hedgehog(2011 tv series)
 * Dan the Coyote
 * Artie B. Prower
 * Blast the robohog
 * Mike the Red Panda

Last week articles of 4/2/12
 * Nala-re the Echidna
 * Muste the Wolf
 * Metal Maddness
 * Shildonic the Hedgehog
 * Super Sapphire Vegas

Last week articles of 4/9/12
 * New incoming charectes
 * Evo(MXL)
 * The Hedghog King
 * Jack The Flying Squirrel
 * Korin Alexander

Last week articles of 4/16/12
 * Golden-Chucks
 * Freeopolis Freedom Fighters
 * Venus the Bandicoot
 * Sonoc Return(Real Fangame)
 * Darth Hidious or Cyber Poison

Last week articles of 4/23/12
 * Mecha Storm
 * Book of Eternal Leadership
 * Eclipeces The Dark
 * Ringo the cat
 * Sonic the Hedgehog:Sorcery and Aliens

Last week articles of 4/30/12
 * Alexis Depardieu Coolette
 * Altatude Kiki
 * Ichigo the echidna
 * Pablo the Fox
 * Heartless Twilight

Last week articles of 5/7/12
 * Kay the Fox
 * Alice the Dog
 * Un-Named Character:Help?
 * Dusk The Hedgehog
 * Alien Mezaruga

Last week articles of 5/14/12
 * Evio the hedgehog
 * Ardic the Polar Bear
 * The Decline
 * Horn the Eagle
 * Mimi the rabcat

Last week articles of 5/21/12
 * Leo-Rouge Conflict
 * Ultragamma the Hedgehog
 * Flame the Hedgehog
 * Reptillious LXXXVII
 * Abia the Koala

Last week articles of 5/28/12
 * Twigoon
 * Rush the Hedgehog
 * Light
 * The Commander
 * Wolf

Last week articles of 6/4/12
 * Cyraza
 * Inferno the Hedgehog
 * Galahad the Hedgehog
 * Bronze the Hedgehog
 * Flash the Basset Hound

Last week articles of 6/11/12
 * Eddie the Lizard
 * Super Evil Eris
 * Lightning The Light
 * Hikaru the Hedgehog
 * Toyko Academy

Last week articles of 6/18/12
 * Shahooter-Parkview Conflict
 * 12A7-BOT
 * April Fox
 * Shadin The Hedgehog
 * Transparency the Dragonfly

Last week articles of 6/25/12
 * Mad-Matrix
 * Amy Rose (Blue Twilight's Universe)
 * Liefield the Hedgehog
 * Sonic the Hedgehog (Adventure Universe)
 * June the Armadillo

Last week articles of 7/2/12
 * Twil the Fox
 * Jex Islands
 * Sonic Heroes OPERATION VIZO
 * Project Tundra
 * Echo the hedgehog

Last week articles of 7/9/12
 * Hincho the Rabbit
 * David the cat (Shaymin2348's Original Character)
 * Solar the hedgehog
 * Strike the Hedgehog
 * Violet the Cat

Last week articles of 7/16/12
 * Acid the Hedgehog
 * Airu the Seedrian
 * Cassie Flora
 * Jupiter the Hedgehog
 * Space Brick

Last week articles of 7/23/12
 * Final Five
 * Sonic Unleashed 2: Gaias
 * Breeze the Hunter
 * Super the Echidna
 * Alsh the Eagle

Last week articles of 7/30/12
 * Silver Sonic 3 (Jet Booster Silver Sonic)
 * Shadow and Maria Reunited Story
 * E-Series Robots (Sonic Underground 2)
 * Wave the Witch
 * Bob the Tiger

Last week articles of 8/7/12
 * Bethany The Fox
 * Pseudo-vocabulary
 * Everette the Mosquito
 * The Other Birdies
 * Sonic heros 3 divine being Rise of glory edition

Last week articles of 8/13/12
 * Sonic ZX:Virus Deletion
 * Tails: The Tails doll
 * Team Elya
 * Ickly The Fox
 * Xiang the Echidna

Last week articles of 8/20/12
 * Sonic In A World Of Light And Dark!
 * Kari the Fox
 * Emmy the Chao
 * Clouds
 * Sonic Generations Quest

Last week articles of 8/27/12
 * Weruioh the Hedgehog
 * Princess Diamond Christian
 * Dia the Hedgebird
 * Glider The Cyber Echidna
 * Team mephiles

Last week articles of 9/3/12
 * Coal the Wolf
 * Sarah the fox
 * Phoenix the Swallow
 * Sonic the Hedgehog Film Franchise
 * Saber the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 9/10/12
 * Sonic Snowboarding XD
 * Brackenfire
 * Owen The Hedgehog
 * Dark Super Sonadver
 * Lamp the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 9/17/12
 * Bio - Drazo
 * Jail Break
 * Mario And Sonic Generations
 * Wechnia (Ashura's Legacy)
 * Early Emerald Town

Last week articles of 9/24/12
 * The Power Gamble Casino
 * The FoXRoX Fellowship
 * The Fusi Chronicles
 * Sonic Reqluenish
 * Brenna the Wolf

Last week articles of 9/1/12
 * Gold Chaos Emerald
 * Run at the Speed of Sound
 * Nova Jr.
 * Miley Prower
 * K'nuckles The Cat

Last week articles of 10/8/12
 * Lucy The Fox
 * Cera the Hedgehog
 * Clover the Hedgehog
 * Ethan The Porcupine
 * Defaran

Last week articles of 10/15/12
 * Sonic Generations
 * Sonic Reborn
 * Sonic Universe(TV Series)
 * E-52 ToolBoxer
 * Nilly L.

Last week articles of 10/22/12
 * Alfred The Wolf
 * Cortanna"Courtney" the Lynx
 * Sonia the Wolf
 * Mayor Of Jule
 * Nilly L.

Last week articles of 11/5/12
 * Cloud The Hedgehog
 * Hood
 * May the seedrian
 * Metal .G.R.E.E.N.
 * Jerry the sluglemur

Last week articles of 11/12/12
 * Roy the Chthronian
 * Sonic N Tails
 * Sir Didadad
 * Bethany the Hedgehog
 * Lok-Jaa

Last week articles of 11/19/12
 * Fear factor zone
 * Sonic Brawlers Theme Song
 * Bombboom the Hedghog
 * Moon sceptre
 * T.A.T.T

Last week articles of 11/26/12
 * Metal Amy
 * Siren the Hedgehog
 * Gopher
 * Machinery Stockholm
 * Sonic: Infinity/Pairbond

Last week articles of 12/3/12
 * Ninja the Chamelon
 * Lily Turtle
 * Gopher
 * Machinery Stockholm
 * Sonic: Infinity/Pairbond

Last week articles of 12/10/12
 * Kaleb The Hedgehog
 * Konic
 * Haast Eagles
 * Zetsu (Sonic and Naruto series)
 * Martin the Fox

Last week articles of 12/18/12
 * RustyPorcupine QuartzHedgehog
 * Rosalina the Wolf
 * Stela The Mouse
 * Galactohn the Giant Echidna
 * Black Knight

Last week articles of 12/25/12
 * Shadow and Reign
 * Sonic Flash
 * Tornado At Midnight
 * Makayla the Cat
 * Gray the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 12/31/12
 * Sir Destructias
 * Team Boom
 * Virus Run
 * OS-X
 * Larry the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 1/7/13
 * Ashley The Hedgehog
 * Graduate Cartoons Amy anti scene differences
 * Chris Canty
 * Rosalinda Chao
 * The Hedgeblob

Last week articles of 1/14/13
 * Rallen's Worst Day Ever
 * Ocean the Hedgehog
 * Bright the Hedgehog
 * Ivy the Cat
 * Edward Buck the Wolf

Last week articles of 1/21/13
 * Jaz the Hedgehog
 * Noah the Hedgehog
 * Volt the Hedgehog
 * Unleashed (series)
 * Apollox

Last week articles of 1/28/13
 * Stealth the Hedgehog
 * Mason meets his match
 * Sunshine the Budgie
 * Jolon the Hedgehog
 * Diary Of a Wimpy Hybrid

Last week articles of 2/4/13
 * Fuision the hedgehog(fireflower30's universe)
 * Paddy the Bear
 * Vex the Unknown
 * Slyfer and Shift
 * Rayla Opal the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 2/12/13
 * Corrupted Storymaster
 * Virus EX
 * Delilah The Mongoose
 * Grinder Dash!!
 * Black The Hedgehog

Last week articles of 2/19/13
 * MetalSonic City
 * Terra's Journey
 * Orin the Cat
 * Brittney the Hedgehog
 * Robert the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 2/26/13
 * Corrupt Nightfall
 * Nemesis, the God of Chaos
 * Saisei 'Weruioh' Endo
 * Ember Flame the Phoedroid
 * George the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 3/5/13
 * Sonic Riders: Next Speed
 * Yolk the Cat
 * Thirteen The Lemur
 * Kuna the Soulwolf
 * Sonic Boss(App)

Last week articles of 7/30/13
 * The Federal Infrastructure Program
 * Shendark
 * Sonic's Nation
 * Sonic X Fusion: Sonic The Hedgehog vs Metal Sonic
 * Raiku The Cat

Last week articles of 7/23/13
 * Darkness "Bleed" The Demon
 * Elsa the Werecat
 * Sonic Adventure 3 ( Tanner Wood )
 * Negato
 * Twilight the Being

Last week articles of 8/6/13
 * Sonic And Shadow Two Hedgehogs Of Defenders Part 1.5
 * Sky the Two-Tailed Fox
 * The Oracle of Twilight (Game)
 * Jr.'s Brown Friend
 * Derick The Hedgdehog

Last week articles of 8/13/13
 * Realms of Chaos Ep.1
 * Calm Waters Era
 * Team Project
 * Fangame:Sonic Fanon Fighters
 * Raiku The Cat

Last week articles of 8/20/13
 * Mobius' Ultimate Tourament
 * Zone Detectives
 * Sonic GX
 * Sonic Relived
 * Sonic Quest: The Rescue, the Hunt, and the Chaos

Last week articles of 8/27/13
 * Iceca the Echidna
 * Mobius Home for Really Bizzare Mothers
 * Knuckles the Pirate
 * Sonic the Hedgehog and the Night of Chaos
 * S.T.A.I.N

Last week articles of 9/3/13
 * Ace the Fox
 * Turbo the hedgehog
 * James Wesley the Doberman
 * The Lord of The Rings (Sonic Parody)
 * Dennis the Namatakeian

Last week articles of 9/10/13
 * Neon The Rainbow-Glow Hedgehog
 * Sonic and the Secret Rings II
 * Code of Banishment
 * The Spirit of the Chaos
 * Disney's Robin Hood Sonic Style/Epilogue

Last week articles of 9/17/13
 * Sonic the Hedgehog (2012 series)
 * Reef the Raccoon
 * Super marcus
 * Jacob the Hedgehog
 * Rocketfist the Echidna

Last week articles of 9/24/13
 * LA-02A "Galaxy"
 * Ignite
 * Sonic the Hedgehog: The Seven Rings
 * Fire Deity Enjanagi
 * HUNTERS

Last week articles of 10/1/13
 * Kate the Cat
 * The Rise of Mephiles
 * Storyline
 * Ice Deity Hyougami
 * Mors Rourke

Last week articles of 10/8/13
 * Trolls Unleashed
 * Sonic Velocity
 * The Birth of Kay the Fox
 * Jas the Cat
 * Princess Hawaii Forseaishi Kitten Istality The Third

Last week articles of 10/15/13
 * Chef Excellence the Hedgehog
 * Dion
 * Chaos Soul
 * The Skydrop Squad (OCs)
 * Sonic and Knuckles: Lost

Last week articles of 10/22/13
 * Shadow and the world rings
 * Speedy Heroes
 * Weapon DeCapulet
 * Ark the celestial
 * Rigel the Hawkman

Last week articles of 10/29/13
 * Space Park
 * Sonic the Hedgehog 1 and Tails
 * Dena's Magical Ribbon
 * Sonic and the Chao Invasion
 * Dane "Pray" Richard

Last week articles of 11/5/13
 * The Camera
 * Dex the Wolf
 * M.D.F. MOBIUS DEFENSE FORCE(charaters can join)
 * Mobius Tournament/Characters/Sonic the Hedgehog
 * Zash the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 11/12/13
 * Sonic Defenders Of Mobius
 * Music Story
 * Hercurakna
 * Xenonian Species
 * Ray the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 11/19/13
 * Sonic Rivals 4
 * Sonic and the Black Knight Remake
 * Syeth The Xal
 * Final Super Forms
 * Flames the Fox

Last week articles of 11/26/13
 * Jealous Fiona story
 * Moraria (Universe)
 * Sonic the Hedgehog: Silver the Loser
 * Mutsumi the Kangaroo
 * Leos Funny Momments

Jake the Hedge-Molian Maker:JujuFish
Appearance Jake, being a cross between a rogue Hedgehog and a Mole, has 7 inch spikes covering his back. He is in excellent physical condition, although he suffers from a scar covering most of his face.

Personality
Jake, is a kind person with a hard exterior. Jake is not the kind of Hedge-Molian one would like to fight with. A powerful ally and an troublesome foe.

History
Jake's family was disfunctional to say the least, although he got along very well with his older sister Tammy-lee the Hedge-Wolf.

Powers
Jake, has multiple powers... Some known to him, and other's elude him. Some of the known powers include:

1. The ability to shoot spikes out of the back of his body at will.

2. He can regenarate his health.

3. He has control over the element Earth, (although he has yet to discover this).

Special Abilities
1. Jake can see well in the dark.

2. He can create new spikes every few minutes.

3. his padded feet make stealthy manoevres a breeze.

Skills
Jake learned how to survive the elements at an early age. This has hardened him to say the least.

Weaknesses
Jake is mortally afraid of Ghosts and Demons. If facing a ghost, apparition, or demon he would flee at sight.

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Sonic The Hedgehog: Ritual of Shadows Maker:2.100.98.8
Sonic The Hedgehog: Ritual of Shadows is a game where a new person is found. Is she on the side of the Light or the darkness? ==

Main Story
Destiney The Hedgehog is walking around when she stumbles on a portal. Out comes a black and red hedgehog. It wasn't Shadow, since it was a girl. Sonic appeared and found the hedgehog as well. The mystery continues as people wonder who's side is the mystery hedgehog is on...

Shade and Night's Story
The new hedgehog, Shade, with her brother Night explore Mobius, meeting everyone as they pass. They meet Mephiles who tricks them into believing he's a good guy and wants Shade to collect all the emeralds for him.

Team Dark's story
Team Dark are back, and they get onto a mission when they fnd out Shade has been tricked by Mephiles. They immediatly head for the location of Shade. They find her and try to persuade her to stop, but Mephiles has her under his control.

Leraku's story
A lonley traveller who wants peace, finds out about Shade and goes to investigate. He finds her with the emeralds and asks her why she has them. He knows Mephiles is behind all this, so he goes to find Mephiles to put a stop to his plan.

Final Story!
Shade has gathered the emeralds for Mephiles and Mephiles has made a army of shadow creatures. Shade realises what she has done and quickly turns good to stop Mephiles. Along with the help of Leraku and Destiney, she defeats Mephiles and finaly admits her crush on Shadow.

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Sonic Cartoons Maker:Nutter Butter
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Hvitur the Ice Dragon Maker:Shadowandsilverluv19
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When Darkness Rises Maker:71.22.167.2
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