User blog:Speedyblue/Constructive Criticism

Hello. I came to ask for a little thing called constructive criticism. Why I ask is because I feel that I am not doing well enough on my projects, and besides, EVERYONE needs some constructive criticism. Here is my list of projects:

Characters
Lilac “Rosebud” Wood (And all her sub-forms)

Platinum Foehn

Andy Wood (THIS ONE NEEDS SO MUCH CRITICISM!!!)

Fanfiction
The Less Mediocre Sonic Fanfic

Games
Sonic Divide

Shadow the Hedgehog 2: PAINFULLY EDGY! (OW DE EDGE!!!)

Thank you for your time!