User blog comment:XophPsycho/I Take Art Requests, You Know./@comment-26053663-20170707011137/@comment-25083225-20170707041241

I took a look at Plat's page and it seems like the main issue with the presentation is not her eyelashes, but her proportions. The fully colored pic on the page has a rather blocky upper body in comparison to most females, who generally have more of  a triangle shape. Same with the lineart: she has broad shoulders in that pic which give her a more masculine shape. The main advice I can give concerning the art style is simply to draw bigger. It'll let you flesh out details more and fix mistakes. When you put the "base" down for anatomy, don't draw in squares and connect them, use circles for the head, chest, and waist and connect them with natural, flowing lines and from there, you can work on details in the shoulders and figures that will help discern them. I may not be the best artist on this site, but I used to have the same problem when it came to drawing the different sexes.