Board Thread:Article Critique/@comment-4567194-20141217222056/@comment-4567194-20150112033454

Thank you for your review. Now I will make some remarks:

Firstly: The organist playing a minor key andd getting thrown in jail. I don't know if it was true, but here's a little story (Yay-- Story time!)

Back when I was in 6th grade, one of the requirements to be in my band was to play the piano/organ, and in the band, I always wanted to play the trombone. I really enjoyed playing the piano and I got used to playing the organ. I asked my music teacher about if I could maybe shadow a church accompanist. He thought it was a bad idea because he told me a story that there was a church organist who played at my church for a very long time. She tells me that the Christians believed that playing in a minor key was a sign of the devil. (Which my cousin finds stupid because he thinks everyone knows a diminished key is the scariest) So he didn't know that, so he warmed up in a minor key, and then after mass, I witnessed him getting arrested because the music director was very religious.

Long story, right?

History: Coming Soon.

I scrapped the Mariala Anime and am coming up with a brand new series reboot, due to a massive amount of new characters.

Spells: Mind control spell: You look at this in a bad way, but I look at it differently. I think that this spell is actually a really good technique against crime fighting, so that they could do whatever they want, but she doesn't do it often so everyone can make an effort.

Death Spell: Like it says, she rarely uses this one. She would only use it if it were an absolute must.

Time Spell: Believe it or not, even her life/death spell took shorter to learn than this. It took years to learn this one. (I should really add that)

And finally, the design. Krys actually has a redesign that I will add soon. It does look really nice too.

There we have it