Talk:Hikaru the Kitsune: A Second Stand/Chapter One/@comment-28110995-20170320002055/@comment-28110995-20170320013054

Preposterous. I was being nice from the beginning to even read your fiction. I'm a writer, too, and I know what actual criticism is. It's called constructive criticism. Flaming, unfortunately, is not critisism, so I don't see where you got that idea. I did not "abuse" you in any way. I was just asking questions, for goodness' sake!

And, see these "annoying" questions as going easy on you. I would have had this page filled with real criticism if I could, but I knew that would be annoying for both you and me. Again, sorry for offending you, and I will just, ya know, no longer say anything and just pretend your fiction is always perfect (when my conscience is telling me it's not).

Good day, "nice girl."