User blog:Hikaruyami-having fun*/Article Review

Hi everyone,with this blog,I'll be reveiwing your pages that needs work.I'll put the info of the page and a warning as well for it.I'll also ask users how they plan to improve their page with thir permisson.I'll be reveiwing 5 pages once every week.And with that,let's get to the reviews!

Last week articles of 11/7/11
 * Solar the Hedgehog(NeroTH)
 * Phineas the Hedgecrane
 * E.A.L
 * Chuchu the Pikachu
 * Kazuko Shinbou

Last week articles of 11/14/11
 * Sunset Hill
 * Yaka Ammy
 * Gaynor Croker the Fox
 * Nightmare (NME)
 * Power 1 Emerel

Last week articles of 11/21/11
 * Bretta the Leopard
 * West Mobius
 * Infera Vol
 * Nazo Unleashed
 * Maria Robotnik(Cy-Fox)

Last week articles of 11/28/11
 * Byron the Unicorn
 * Twilight the Wolf
 * Perfect Dark Metal Sonic
 * Shadow Android X2
 * The Perfect Queen

Last week articles of 12/5/11
 * Drakonsu
 * Shadow's Kids
 * Marine Turbine
 * Christina The Fox
 * Glutton badnik

Last week articles of 12/12/11
 * Legend Wing
 * Pintor's Five Stage Hands
 * Razz the Bat
 * Fleece the Lamb
 * Zack the hedgehog

Last week articles of 12/19/11
 * Seven Swords Dance
 * Manina
 * Emecosmo
 * Juliet the cat
 * Sonic Heroes: Emeralds of Nightopia

Last week articles of 12/26/11
 * Creator of the Sonic XL series
 * Nouka
 * Lily
 * Cassidy the Hedgehog
 * Bulma the Bat

Last week articles of 1/2/12
 * Super Sonic Heroes
 * Ales the Hedgehog
 * Boomer
 * Silver the Hedgecat
 * Catherine Ogmore Pritchard

Last week articles of 1/9/12
 * Reidak the Hedgehog
 * Lorreta Minovia
 * Bloody Amy: The Gore Begins
 * Rollercoaster
 * Dark Elvis

Last week articles of 1/16/12
 * Wendigo 'Digo" Ecchidna
 * Calico the hedgehog
 * Bureru the Giant Leopard Moth
 * Kindness the Hedgehog
 * Jin the Chameleon

Last week articles of 1/23/12
 * Psychic Test Potion
 * Mariah the Cat
 * Shadow and Rouge's Magic Show
 * Dark Nebula
 * Blast the Cat

Last week articles of 1/30/12
 * J.J the Hawk's present give away
 * Crystal Sonic
 * Rage Uppercut
 * Monica the hedgehog
 * D.J. the Hedgecat

Last week articles of 2/6/12
 * Leonidas the Magician
 * Thunder the hedgehog
 * Black Light Virus
 * Metal Element Armor
 * Blaze the cat's secret

Last week articles of 2/13/12
 * Derm the Dark Chao
 * Terro the Hedgefox
 * Pirate Academy
 * Icicle The Hedgehog
 * SwordHeart

Last week articles of 2/20/12
 * Sarah the Hedgecat
 * Shuhei the Android
 * Dark Dagger
 * Star The Blitzhog
 * Triforce Sonic

Last week articles of 2/27/12
 * The Story of Sarah
 * Leet the Fox
 * Xenlon the Necrohog
 * Clade the hedgehog
 * Selene the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 3/5/12
 * Maimuna Maiba (Blessed Grave)
 * Jupiter the Cat
 * Shade The Fox
 * Italic the Wolf
 * Steven The Evil Cannon

Last week articles of 3/12/12
 * Misa the Seedrian
 * Tommie the hedgehog
 * Chaos Storm the Hedgehog
 * Joe the Racoon
 * Jadyn the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 3/19/12
 * Razzago The Wolf
 * Devion the Vamphog
 * Sonic 20th Anniversary
 * Maheera the Dark Blue Chamelon
 * Abyss the Mouse

Last week articles of 3/26/12
 * Rachel the Hedgehog(2011 tv series)
 * Dan the Coyote
 * Artie B. Prower
 * Blast the robohog
 * Mike the Red Panda

Last week articles of 4/2/12
 * Nala-re the Echidna
 * Muste the Wolf
 * Metal Maddness
 * Shildonic the Hedgehog
 * Super Sapphire Vegas

Last week articles of 4/9/12
 * New incoming charectes
 * Evo(MXL)
 * The Hedghog King
 * Jack The Flying Squirrel
 * Korin Alexander

Last week articles of 4/16/12
 * Golden-Chucks
 * Freeopolis Freedom Fighters
 * Venus the Bandicoot
 * Sonoc Return(Real Fangame)
 * Darth Hidious or Cyber Poison

Last week articles of 4/23/12
 * Mecha Storm
 * Book of Eternal Leadership
 * Eclipeces The Dark
 * Ringo the cat
 * Sonic the Hedgehog:Sorcery and Aliens

Last week articles of 4/30/12
 * Alexis Depardieu Coolette
 * Altatude Kiki
 * Ichigo the echidna
 * Pablo the Fox
 * Heartless Twilight

Last week articles of 5/7/12
 * Kay the Fox
 * Alice the Dog
 * Un-Named Character:Help?
 * Dusk The Hedgehog
 * Alien Mezaruga

Last week articles of 5/14/12
 * Evio the hedgehog
 * Ardic the Polar Bear
 * The Decline
 * Horn the Eagle
 * Mimi the rabcat

Last week articles of 5/21/12
 * Leo-Rouge Conflict
 * Ultragamma the Hedgehog
 * Flame the Hedgehog
 * Reptillious LXXXVII
 * Abia the Koala

Last week articles of 5/28/12
 * Twigoon
 * Rush the Hedgehog
 * Light
 * The Commander
 * Wolf

Last week articles of 6/4/12
 * Cyraza
 * Inferno the Hedgehog
 * Galahad the Hedgehog
 * Bronze the Hedgehog
 * Flash the Basset Hound

Last week articles of 6/11/12
 * Eddie the Lizard
 * Super Evil Eris
 * Lightning The Light
 * Hikaru the Hedgehog
 * Toyko Academy

Last week articles of 6/18/12
 * Shahooter-Parkview Conflict
 * 12A7-BOT
 * April Fox
 * Shadin The Hedgehog
 * Transparency the Dragonfly

Last week articles of 6/25/12
 * Mad-Matrix
 * Amy Rose (Blue Twilight's Universe)
 * Liefield the Hedgehog
 * Sonic the Hedgehog (Adventure Universe)
 * June the Armadillo

Last week articles of 7/2/12
 * Twil the Fox
 * Jex Islands
 * Sonic Heroes OPERATION VIZO
 * Project Tundra
 * Echo the hedgehog

Last week articles of 7/9/12
 * Hincho the Rabbit
 * David the cat (Shaymin2348's Original Character)
 * Solar the hedgehog
 * Strike the Hedgehog
 * Violet the Cat

Last week articles of 7/16/12
 * Acid the Hedgehog
 * Airu the Seedrian
 * Cassie Flora
 * Jupiter the Hedgehog
 * Space Brick

Last week articles of 7/23/12
 * Final Five
 * Sonic Unleashed 2: Gaias
 * Breeze the Hunter
 * Super the Echidna
 * Alsh the Eagle

Last week articles of 7/30/12
 * Silver Sonic 3 (Jet Booster Silver Sonic)
 * Shadow and Maria Reunited Story
 * E-Series Robots (Sonic Underground 2)
 * Wave the Witch
 * Bob the Tiger

Last week articles of 8/7/12
 * Bethany The Fox
 * Pseudo-vocabulary
 * Everette the Mosquito
 * The Other Birdies
 * Sonic heros 3 divine being Rise of glory edition

Last week articles of 8/13/12
 * Sonic ZX:Virus Deletion
 * Tails: The Tails doll
 * Team Elya
 * Ickly The Fox
 * Xiang the Echidna

Last week articles of 8/20/12
 * Sonic In A World Of Light And Dark!
 * Kari the Fox
 * Emmy the Chao
 * Clouds
 * Sonic Generations Quest

Last week articles of 8/27/12
 * Weruioh the Hedgehog
 * Princess Diamond Christian
 * Dia the Hedgebird
 * Glider The Cyber Echidna
 * Team mephiles

Last week articles of 9/3/12
 * Coal the Wolf
 * Sarah the fox
 * Phoenix the Swallow
 * Sonic the Hedgehog Film Franchise
 * Saber the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 9/10/12
 * Sonic Snowboarding XD
 * Brackenfire
 * Owen The Hedgehog
 * Dark Super Sonadver
 * Lamp the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 9/17/12
 * Bio - Drazo
 * Jail Break
 * Mario And Sonic Generations
 * Wechnia (Ashura's Legacy)
 * Early Emerald Town

Last week articles of 9/24/12
 * The Power Gamble Casino
 * The FoXRoX Fellowship
 * The Fusi Chronicles
 * Sonic Reqluenish
 * Brenna the Wolf

Last week articles of 9/1/12
 * Gold Chaos Emerald
 * Run at the Speed of Sound
 * Nova Jr.
 * Miley Prower
 * K'nuckles The Cat

Last week articles of 10/8/12
 * Lucy The Fox
 * Cera the Hedgehog
 * Clover the Hedgehog
 * Ethan The Porcupine
 * Defaran

Last week articles of 10/15/12
 * Sonic Generations
 * Sonic Reborn
 * Sonic Universe(TV Series)
 * E-52 ToolBoxer
 * Nilly L.

Last week articles of 10/22/12
 * Alfred The Wolf
 * Cortanna"Courtney" the Lynx
 * Sonia the Wolf
 * Mayor Of Jule
 * Nilly L.

Last week articles of 11/5/12
 * Cloud The Hedgehog
 * Hood
 * May the seedrian
 * Metal .G.R.E.E.N.
 * Jerry the sluglemur

Last week articles of 11/12/12
 * Roy the Chthronian
 * Sonic N Tails
 * Sir Didadad
 * Bethany the Hedgehog
 * Lok-Jaa

Last week articles of 11/19/12
 * Fear factor zone
 * Sonic Brawlers Theme Song
 * Bombboom the Hedghog
 * Moon sceptre
 * T.A.T.T

Last week articles of 11/26/12
 * Metal Amy
 * Siren the Hedgehog
 * Gopher
 * Machinery Stockholm
 * Sonic: Infinity/Pairbond

Last week articles of 12/3/12
 * Ninja the Chamelon
 * Lily Turtle
 * Gopher
 * Machinery Stockholm
 * Sonic: Infinity/Pairbond

Last week articles of 12/10/12
 * Kaleb The Hedgehog
 * Konic
 * Haast Eagles
 * Zetsu (Sonic and Naruto series)
 * Martin the Fox

Last week articles of 12/18/12
 * RustyPorcupine QuartzHedgehog
 * Rosalina the Wolf
 * Stela The Mouse
 * Galactohn the Giant Echidna
 * Black Knight

Last week articles of 12/25/12
 * Shadow and Reign
 * Sonic Flash
 * Tornado At Midnight
 * Makayla the Cat
 * Gray the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 12/31/12
 * Sir Destructias
 * Team Boom
 * Virus Run
 * OS-X
 * Larry the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 1/7/13
 * Ashley The Hedgehog
 * Graduate Cartoons Amy anti scene differences
 * Chris Canty
 * Rosalinda Chao
 * The Hedgeblob

Last week articles of 1/14/13
 * Rallen's Worst Day Ever
 * Ocean the Hedgehog
 * Bright the Hedgehog
 * Ivy the Cat
 * Edward Buck the Wolf

Last week articles of 1/21/13
 * Jaz the Hedgehog
 * Noah the Hedgehog
 * Volt the Hedgehog
 * Unleashed (series)
 * Apollox

Last week articles of 1/28/13
 * Stealth the Hedgehog
 * Mason meets his match
 * Sunshine the Budgie
 * Jolon the Hedgehog
 * Diary Of a Wimpy Hybrid

Last week articles of 2/4/13
 * Fuision the hedgehog(fireflower30's universe)
 * Paddy the Bear
 * Vex the Unknown
 * Slyfer and Shift
 * Rayla Opal the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 2/12/13
 * Corrupted Storymaster
 * Virus EX
 * Delilah The Mongoose
 * Grinder Dash!!
 * Black The Hedgehog

Last week articles of 2/19/13
 * MetalSonic City
 * Terra's Journey
 * Orin the Cat
 * Brittney the Hedgehog
 * Robert the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 2/26/13
 * Corrupt Nightfall
 * Nemesis, the God of Chaos
 * Saisei 'Weruioh' Endo
 * Ember Flame the Phoedroid
 * George the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 3/5/13
 * Sonic Riders: Next Speed
 * Yolk the Cat
 * Thirteen The Lemur
 * Kuna the Soulwolf
 * Sonic Boss(App)

Last week articles of 7/30/13
 * The Federal Infrastructure Program
 * Shendark
 * Sonic's Nation
 * Sonic X Fusion: Sonic The Hedgehog vs Metal Sonic
 * Raiku The Cat

Last week articles of 7/23/13
 * Darkness "Bleed" The Demon
 * Elsa the Werecat
 * Sonic Adventure 3 ( Tanner Wood )
 * Negato
 * Twilight the Being

Sonic And Shadow Two Hedgehogs Of Defenders Part 1.5 Maker:Bluesthehedgehog
Silver's fur is red. Sonic looks Silver.He's becomes a Devil.He 's forgot his mind.( Sonic & Shadow VS Silver) a long battle ends .Silver wins but there'e aren't defeated .Sonic & Shadow are arise of death.Blaze comes and says:

-Silver ! You aren't a devil or a monster. Your my friend Silver,remeber me thee are your friends.You are my friend and boy boyfriend.I love you !

(Note: Dont read with last ILY plz)

Silver comes normal.The adventurer team escapes base. In Central City Amy ,Tails,Knuckles,Rouge and Omega are goes Freedom Fighters HQ.But adventurers are comes HQ. After ten hours(23:00) Metal Sonic strikes HQ but alone.And Metal Sonic are trapped ! He opens with re-programme room. He re-programs.He comes a Freedom Fighter.In a G.U.N Base, The Chaotix goes Freedom Fighters HQ But there are under ground base.After ten minutes,There comes HQ.Knuckles weak ups.He looks Chaotix Team .After 50 minutes(00:00) Sonic transforms into werehog and kills monsters .After ten minutes,he sleeps.He wakes but his nemesises are comes:

Babylon Rouges.

To be contunied (cotunies)

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SKY.jpg the Two-Tailed Fox
Sky is a shy, blue, Fox. Although aside from her family that she never met she has a dark past.

Past
Sky was actully created by eggman nega. Although he forgot to insall the evil program, Sky had to listen to his comands. But one task was to hard. Sky had to destory Sonic and his friends. She couldn't do it. She didn't want and she rather run untill she falls over. Or atleast do somthing better than being evil also she hasn't became so used to her powers yet. Why? Because she never used them! So when she was about to be killed but she saw a cliff and just jumped off of it, killing herself. Sonic 's friends With her fate sealed she would NEVER move again...or could she?

Afterword
When the deed was done about Sky's early death Tails felt sad for her. She only lived for a week and haven't finshed getted to her powers. Tails had always help Sonic and never wanted to turn his back on him. So he just walked away with his head down, crying but not showing it. One night eggman rebuild Sky, he forgot the evil program too. Although Sky was back again she wanted to be good. Not evil. So when eggman kidnapped Sonic and his friends Sky would jump into action! The only prolem was that Sky could not escape the room she was locked in. But when she touched a door it burned down. She came running out, with all the robot marks disappearing, makeing her what she wanted to be, not a robot. When eggman saw Sky he sent his robots after her but she burned them down. She then tried to get to sonic and his friends but one thing that made her not get there...MEILPHIES. She had to fight him. So she did and she almost lost. Why almost? Because when sky puted her hand up she froze Melphies, Tail and all. She then released her new friends

Love
Sky has a crush on Tails but she didn't think he loved her.

Age
Although Sky was a robot she is Considered to be either 10 or 14

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The Oracle of Twilight
(Brought to you by the creator of Sonic chronicles 2)

This game is avaible for the PS3,Xbox 360, Nintendo wii and PS2. This game is a fan made storybook adventure set inside the greek legends and mostly based around the three most famous heroes (and my favourites) Odesueys (Spellings), Jason and Thesues. Sonic is the main character and he plays Hercules. If anyone would like to add characters, thats fine by me.

Story
The game opens up as a scroll cutscene with Sonic eating a chilli dog and a soda, a knock comes from the door. He goes to open it and sees noone. But, at the welcome mat is a mirror and a thick book. Inside is a note saying: "This mirror is the past, the book is as well. But only a touch can decide the future." and a code. "Nepo eht etag fo efil nda lla taht si tsol. Eht rewop si emoclew." He doesn't read it and tries to open the book. The cover opens with a snake head on the first page, and sucks, tries to suck him in. He grabs the mirror and the code before being completely sucked in.

He finds himself on a hard marble floor with a silverish light swirling over him. It then speaks asking him his name. He repiles it Sonic and asks where he is. The silver light tells him he is in the Marble collosuem, home of the great myths of the greek world. Sonic then asks how he got here, but the silver light doesn't listen and tells him that he is the fastest thing alive and so he could figure out by himeself. IN Progress     

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Jr.'s Brown Friend Maker:
It was a good fall afternoon and Jr was talking a walk in the park.

Jr: It is a good time when the leaves turn orange and fall off the tree. When Sarah and I play in the leaves, She blends in.

Jr then found a leaf pile.

Jr: Hey. There's one now.

Jr jumped into the leave pile

???: OOOFFF

Jr hadn't noticed he landed on someone.

Jr: Um. I'm sorry, Sir

???: Quit alright. I was just sitting under this tree when this huge pile of leaves fell on me. Then you can in.

Jr: Wow. Amazing. My name is Jr. Jr T. Hedgehog

???: Well good to meet you Jr. My name is Eli

Jr: Eli?

Eli: Yes.

Jr: I think I know someone named "Elier"

Eli: You do? I know Elier

Jr: You do?

Eli: Yes. I would also like to see him. It has been a while.

Jr smiled at his new friend.

Jr: I'll be happy to introduce you to my family and friends.

Eli: Okay.

Jr and Eli when off to find Elier. Then soon found him

Eli: Hey Elier. It's good to see you

Elier: Oh hi, Eli.

Eli: How has Chelsea been doing?

Elier: Fine. We're going to the movies tonight. Jr and Sarah are coming too.

Eli: Wow. May I go?

Elier: Yeah.

So that night, Elier, Chelsea, Sarah and Jr were waiting for Eli outside the theater. Then he came up.

Eli: Hi guys.

Elier, Chelsea, Jr and Sarah: Hey, Eli

Jr: Funny you and Elier's names sound similar.

Eli: Yep. But I heard that when you first met him you called him "Phenom"

Elier: Yes they did. But I wanted to be called by my real name.

Eli: I'll bet. Anyway what movie are we going to see?

Jr: My bad quill day

Eli: Wow. That'll be cool. I even wrote it.

Jr: Wow. But this actually happened

Eli: I know.

At the snack bar, Eli bought 2 boxes of cookie dough bites.

Sarah: You must like cookie dough a lot. Don't you, Eli?

Eli: I sure do.

Then they went to see the movie

The End

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Maker:
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