Board Thread:Article Critique/@comment-1942179-20141029001523/@comment-1942179-20141029002947

Thanks. Just to be clear though: I'm mainly concerned about his page. Like if my descriptions and/or elaborations either drag on or don't make sense, or if I could have worded something better, etc. That's what I really feel I need feedback on.

Not saying to leave out the critique to his character, but just remember that.