Thread:MaxIrvaron/@comment-5364072-20180728201128

Hello there! Since I can't comment on your blog I figured I would do this^^ Not venting or something, just giving my two cents.

'''To me, he's just a bit to similar to Sonic and Silver. He has the "I wanna kill Sonic" thing and the "I love kicking butt" thing. '''

While I completely agree with the Sonic part, reducing Silver to "I want to kill Sonic" seems kind of redundant to me^^

'''GUN seems out-of-character and evil in it, I don't think that they'd abduct people to make them superpowered. The first part of his journey to the past is reminding me too much of Silver, and when you get past that, though his goals are moral, I can't really say they're heroic.'''

I mean, it's not GUN, it's a splinter organisation, aka people who left it?

About the Silver thing, still think it's redundant^^

And well can't deny that, his article is far from complete, but I wanted some feedback already as it is right now^^

Typos are really messing up sentences, and thus making them hard to understand.

Can't say much except that English isn't my first language haha. Also he was my first article and while he is basically the main character of my universe, he's not really my favorite^^

Well that's it. Have a good day^^ 