User blog:Puppy1/Story

Okay I wrote this story and I decided to begin putting chapters here for opinion and what it should be called so here it is:

0					            Prolong (Which isn’t that long)

Okay, you should know that my story takes place 200 years in the future, right? If you didn’t, well now you do. So in the future having “special powers” is normal, you’ve probably heard of at least one kinetic ability, you know like pyrokinesis, ability to control fire or aquakinesis, ability to control water. We all have one ability, rarely more than one. Anyway I’ll get on with the story. My name Ace, I have pyrokinesis and telekinesis.I was 10 but well something happened.

1				Fight the….guy....

“Ace….Ace….ACE!” My mom called. “Huh,” I said sleepily. “What?” “Your going to be late.” Mom said. “What?” I said, again sleepily “Your first day,” Mom said. “You know of 5th grade, the new school, remember?” “Uh, ok”. I said climbing out of bed. I got dressed in my usual clothes: some jeans and a T-shirt. I have dirty blond hair; it goes down on my neck then parts in a y position. I have grey eyes and a blank sad expression even when I’m not sad. I went down stairs into the kitchen (which is also are dining room) and ate a granola bar. Then I got into the car. Then Mom dropped me off at school. “Hi”. I said to one of the people I know from science. First we had history were we learned about the 81st president. Then we had science we saw what happened to the grass that had different gases in them. We had math then lunch, that’s when it happened. “Hello” I Said to my friend Sara. She looked like she normally did, Her Dirty blond hair with purple streaks running across the tips except in a spot on the front where it went up a bit making it look like a flame. Her hair was pulled down in a natural look. Her blue-green eyes sparkled on the side but disappeared when she sat down. “Hi” she said “What’s up?” I asked “Just the normal stuff, you know clouds, the sky, and the c-“she was interrupted by a crash. “Huh” we said at the same time There were three men. One was wearing a T-shirt and some black jeans. His hair was as black as midnight and he had a strange expression on his face. The second one was wearing a black T-shirt and some blue jeans. His expression was somewhat blank and his hair was white but not like old persons. The last one wore a dark red shirt and Blue jeans. He had an expression like he had other things to do, but didn’t mind being there and his hair was black too. “Who are you” Mrs. Mira the lunch lady demanded. The one with the red shirt replied, “So you have pyrokinesis eh? Anyway your not who I’m after. The one with the red shirt took out something. It was yellow and had 6 small holes and one big hole in the center. “This’ll take care of you all.” He said pressing a button and throwing it, then running away. The machine started to spray a purple and yellow gas that felt like steam. I suddenly felt drowsy. “Wha-“I couldn’t finish my sentence, I fell onto the floor, but didn’t feel a thing. I could see Sara and another kid falling as well. I fell asleep instantly. I heard a crashing sound, but I was still asleep.