Board Thread:Article Critique/@comment-3002957-20150430155345/@comment-3002957-20150430204407

Ellyaely wrote: While I'm taking a little break from this paper I'm writing, I'll try to see if I can be constructive~

It is a little hard for me to imagine the design currently. Obviously this will be remedied once he's actually drawn so it's not a huge concern anyway. When it's finished, I'll keep in mind that he's supposed to be a mish mash of several creatures. +3 points for dragon stuff, aheh~

I like the quality of the character! It does strike me as strange that this character enjoys making foes scream, causing them pain, etc, yet with his "current" story he makes sure not to involve innocents. But that is probably all part of internal confusion or something, so again, it's something that's probably not even a problem.

Gotta start working again now, sorry D:

Yeah I will have a drawing up soon for the first bit. XD As for his personal enjoyment of causing pain and screaming. It is something that if behind closed doors and not hiding who he truly is. He would relish in it. But in a area where he has to watch for his image. He needs to shift how he acts to maintain a mask. If things don't line up right for his goals, he won't partake in it. All he cares about is controlling situations and being in power to "protect" Serumbra. If he has to take dirty killer tactics he will. If he has to join with heroes and stop baddies he will. So long as any action he takes does not hurt his image and ultimately helps him.