User blog comment:Detective SkullWolf/Character Critique Requests/@comment-25345354-20140303212203/@comment-27765057-20140317221324

It seems we have an ocelot to talk about here with this character. :3

Appearance: She looks awesome and unique. Great job on designing her.

Personality: Very descriptive. I'm able to learn pretty much everything I need to learn about her personality-wise. The only thing I am confused about is whether she fits as an anti-hero (the fact she's both an anti-hero and neutral confuses me, as they are two different things). I don't see her as a person who uses powers to perform dark deeds in the name of good.

History: I really enjoyed reading this all the way through (do you plan on pursuing a career in writing? I seriously think you would be good at that, Kira). I honestly could not come up with a way for you to improve this story, so maybe you could start writing more to her story. You would not necessarily need to age her, you could create a "Future Events" section so that the next part of her story has not happened yet and could continue roleplaying with her at her current age.

Powers -

Florokineis - I'm curious as to whether this power was later added the concept of this character.

Skills

Swordplay - I'm VERY curious as to where she learned this and if her parents know about it.

Conclusion: Very well written character, Kira. You get a stolen puppy out of ten.