Talk:Fem Grief/@comment-4232858-20150806185821/@comment-4232858-20150807024022

It's not that the way the character acts is the issue, but how you neglect to describe what that is and how you use the term "girly" as a descriptive scapegoat term for her personality. Nothing is inherently feminine or masculine, and using such terms to describe personalities (physique is kind of justified by genetics but that's a different story) is not only bad writing but also either mysandry or mysogyny (depending on which gender is used.)

If anything, the fact that you have so many characters in general with the same size-changing powers over and over again is an even bigger (no pun intended) problem. That shows that you as a writer are afraid of doing things differently and only settle for slight variations rather than being diverse and interesting. You really need to break the proverbial box and be creative. It kind of works here in that she's an alternate version of an already-existing character to be fair, but the point still stands that you need to tone down your macrophilia obsession for a bit and, once again I say, be creative.