Thread:Williamcost/@comment-1981371-20160128074213/@comment-26780692-20160128193302

I did. I just added detail so people can get a clearer picture of what's going on. The scene would probably be shorter in reality, although I do understand your point. Also, another reason why there's so much detail is also because I do make books, or at least they're in the process. So, I have to describe them for the reader to get an image in thier mind. But, thanks for the feedback. The names just randomly pop into my head.