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Green Quill Maker:Pemuler the Pemuler
The Green Quill will come to you and steal all of your things... It is no ordinary boat, it lives, it breathes, it sings. The songs of death and melodies of sorrow, It could come today, or possibly tomorrow...

--Stanza one of Diana the Echidna Seer's prophecy about Ioh.

The Green Quill is the boat Ioh the Porchupine used in his brief career as a pirate. It was presumed destroyed when Captain Blackspine took it over after killing Ioh. The phrase 'Green Quill' is a pun of 'Green Hill', the first ever zone in Sonic history. Sonic gets confused when Tails announces that they will be going to Green Quill Zone for the Swordfighting tournament in Sonic 5; Goods and Evils.

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Characters
Dr.Eggman (Dr. Eggman rox 2)

Dexter (Dr. Eggman rox 2)

Amy (Dr. Eggman rox 2)

Sonic (Dr. Eggman rox 2)

Daniella (Dr. Eggman rox 2)

Silver(Dr. Eggman rox 2)

Blaze(Dr. Eggman rox 2)

Shadow(Dr.Eggman rox 2)

Metal Sonic(Dr. Eggman rox 2)

Tails doll

Cold the Hedgehog(Tailsman67)

Skate the Hedgehog(Tailsman67)

LT the Mouse(Tailsman67)

Lisa the Iguana (played by Tailsman67)

Xestep the Halfbreed Hedgehog(Tailsman67)

Rules
Please don't tipe fast I don't want to get kicked out of my own Roleplay

Part 1: the Jelous and the lovestruck
Dr.Eggman:You'll never stop me sonic. Not with the power of Metal Sonic

Sonic:Dexter Tails I'll take this one (hits Metal Sonic)

Dexter:You now Sonic It's pretty lucky you have a copy

Dr.Eggman: You win this round sonic but lets see how your friend handles this.The TailsDoll

Tails:I can do It I'll be brave

Dexter: Yeah go Tails Woo you rock

Tails:(hits the Tailsdoll)

Eggman:No. Uh you win this round sonic but I'll be back

Sonic:that was too easy

Dexter:huh ya too easy

Sonic:wait a minute your Jelous dexter

Dexter: what huh huh no

Sonic:Ok then I'll leave now

Dexter:ho He almost found out that I'm Jelous

Sonic: ha you really fell for that

Dexter:Come on again. OK fine I'm Jelous you have a copy

Sonic: uh accualy I have 2

Dexter:even worse

Tails: I though you had like 5

Dexter:wait I got an Idea were did Eggman go

Sonic:that way

Dexter:see ya(runs off in the direction Eggman went)

Amy:SOONICC!

Sonic: see ya tails (runs off)

Amy: why does Sonic run off like that

(Amy: does Sonic not like me mabe I should test his love for me by runing away and seting up cameras)

Tails: uh Hi Amy

Amy:Bie Tails got to go find Sonic

(Later) Dexter:Eggman I need you for a secend

Eggman: what is it now Dexter

Dexter: would you make me a life form copy

Eggman:fine but It will take a little while

Dexter:I'm Ok with that

(That night)

Amy:This really is the right thing to do. If It works My dreams will come true if It doesn't Well I'm all ready runing away I hope this works

(in the morning)

Sonic: time to do the old rutine hey I wonder why that camera is doing there. hm I'll probaly invite a few friends after I eat some chilly dogs

(After Sonic ate some chilly dogs)

(Sonic picks up the phone)

Dexter:You're not gona belive what just happend

Sonic:What is it

Dexter:Eggman is making me a life form copy

Sonic:WHAT

Dexter: yeah he looks really cool so far

Sonic:Dexter where are you

Dexter:the Egg shuddle Eggmans new flying base

Sonic:Sorry Dexter wrong number

(hangs up on him)

Sonic:time to call Skate

(calls skate)

Sonic: Skate have you seen Amy?

Skate:Nope!

Cold:Zzzzzzzz

Sonic:is Cold there?

LT:(Wakes Cold)Wake up dude.

Cold:(Wakes up)I'm up.

Sonic:I found a camera in my house and I have a plan to get rid of it

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Knuckles the Echidna (GreenKnight24's Universe) Maker:GreenKnight24


Appearance
Knuckles is a buff, red echidna. He usually wears white boxer gloves with spikes coming out of the knuckles and red and green shoes. He also has a whit crest on his chest, right below his neck.

Personality
Knuckles is rough and tough. He doesn't take to insults kindly and will smash the problem instead of thinking it thorugh. He is not keen on accepting new people, and is gullible. Even though he is not the smartest of his friends, he still wants to do everything he can do to protect them.

History
Knuckles thinks he was born on Angel Island, but he does not know for sure. One day, Eggman tricked him into fighting Sonic and Tails. After everything was sorted out, however, the three became good friends, with Sonic and Knuckles becoming something of rivals when they are pursuing the same goal.

One day, Eggman dropped a bomb onto Station Square, obliterating the once proud city. From there, he began building his empire, renaming the city, "Robotropololis". He took on his old name of Robotnik and proceeded to take over the world.

When Sonic and Tails ran into Sally Acorn and her friends, they decided to take refuge on Knuckles' floating island because it was the only place Robotnik can't destroy. Knuckles didn't like the idea at first, preffering to be by himself. But after seeing the destruction that Robotnik has caused, he decided to let them stay so they can defeat Robotnik.

Powers
Knuckles has control over the master emerald. He can use this power to track the other chaos emeralds and use the emerald's power to do other stuff, like making a giant shield protecting Angel Island and teleporting people down onto Mobius.

Abilities
Knuckles is among the strongest of his friends. He can lift boulders and badniks with ease. He also has the ability to track down the chaos emeralds.

Skills
Knuckles is the best fighter when it comes to combat. He can easliy take down several badniks with a few punches.

Weaknesses
Knuckles is gullible and will easily fall for someone's tricks. Smarter people, like Tails or Dr.Robotnik, can take advantage of this (although Tails doen't do this often, only when it's necessary).

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Mobtropolis Maker:Indytig10
Mobtropolis is a city on Mobius. Only Mobians live there.

Locations in Mobtropolis
Feel free to add your own locations to Mobtropolis!

Eris's House
The previous house of Eris the Hedgehog.

Galvin's House
This is Galvins house.

Eris' Lab and House
Eris' current residence. It is located around the northwestern area of the city.

Mobtropolis Mall
The largest mall in on Mobius. It is home to several stores.

Inventor's World
One of Eris' favorite stores. It has all of the supplies an inventor would ever need. It's rather small. It's selection includes tools, parts, models, light bulbs, and pipes, along with many others.

Mobtropolis Eats
A restraunt that serves casual foods, such as french fries, burgers, hot dogs, etc.

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Jezz the Hedgehog Maker:
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