Talk:Melissa the Hedgehog/Archive

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[looks at rule number three] Well, constructive criticism doesn't qualify as "not nice" because its trying to improve the page, soooooo I guess I'm safe. :3 Here's a list of things I feel warrant some improving: [inhales deeply]


 * 1) Her back-story is generic, plain and simple. The only glimmer of originality I see in her past is her Diabetes, something many people never consider to give to their character. Other than that, she's like a combination of Shadow and Maria in terms of history.
 * 2) Her skill levels are much too high. I mean, seriously, rating her at a 100/100 is just begging for people to flame her. Tone her back a bit.
 * 3) "Oldest of the hedgehogs"? Bah, there's thousands of hedggies older than her out there. In fact, I've one that is roughly a century and a half, (He currently doesn't have a page, though. I'm trying to work on my characters with pages first.) so that claim is instantly null and void.
 * 4) Her gun, what kind of gun is it? I'm not looking for brand and model, I'm just looking for a style. Is it a hand-gun? Is it a rifle? Shotgun? SMG? Chain gun? Cannon that can destroy the world? Please, specify so readers can get a better mental picture of who she is. (Yes, choice of gun can be used to figure out more about a person.)
 * 5) Superforms: More information requested. Why? Because just saying she has these superforms is much too vague. What do said forms do? How do they look? Does the form alter her behavior in any way? Do they add any weaknesses? (Yes, some forms add weaknesses.)
 * 6) Her normal-form's powers. Give more info on them, like how she acquired them, what they allow her to do and how she tends to use them.
 * 7) There is no number seven.

I do realize that there's quite alot listed above, but these are simply comments and suggestions to prevent more negative comments from users, because, lets face it: That third rule you've listed won't stop trolls and haters. They'll comment however they wish, whenever and wherever they wish. Odds are, however, you'll attract less of them if you follow a bit of my advice.

But the choice is yours, I force you not.

Vi'ti myvyr bu  tirth set dalton.  15:18, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

First off, she's the oldest of MY CHARACTERS Aly the Seedrian  I'm no ordinary seedrian!  00:50, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

And second, off, If you cant say anything nice, don't say anything at all. You dont seem to follow rules, eh? Aly the Seedrian I'm no ordinary seedrian!  00:51, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Addressing your replies in order:


 * 1) That is an excuse, and a rather poor one at that. My oldest character, Hunter the Fox is currently going through yet another overhaul, which proves that old characters may be improved upon.
 * 2) Constructive criticism is inherently nice in nature, as it contains advice on how to better whatever it is receiving the criticism. So yes, I was following the rules.

Vi'ti myvyr bu  tirth set dalton.  02:15, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

It was a good call to use the alternate universe idea, to avoid the problem of "where's she been all this time?" And true, the backstory is unoriginal, but the end result is SO DIFFERENT from Shadow! In fact, Melissa is a very believable character. And to all you people, three words. HATERS. GONNA. HATE. Panic the Wolf 23:36, November 8, 2011 (UTC)Panic the Wolf

Very good ^^ How'd you do the picture? It's amazing. Hope and despair...  always balance out to zero...  23:59, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

@User:Nefereti (Uh, I didnt make it. Gamergirl made it for me ^^ Mephiles the Werewolf  I am the shadow of the moon at night  21:16, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely. Another character who seems to think that being a violent, near-psychotic misandrist equals feminism.

"Stay away from Missy or I'll castrate you with my BARE hands, jerk!"

How is this character supposed to be even remotely sympathetic? -cobweb

Yeah... Person above me, doesn't your page say you're just here briefly to talk to some person? Please go away and insult a bad recolor or something. Panic the Wolf 19:50, January 2, 2012 (UTC)Panic the Wolf

My complaints/constructive critism,

1. Oldest hedeghog, ai? I have what, all of my hedgehogs are older than her.

2. Keeps her weight a secret huh, much like Amy.

3. Story is so similar to Shadow's it isn't funny, and it even has some Archie comic's thrown into it aswell.

4. Perfect stats, huh? Not even some gods have it that high, and I am pretty sure that they would whoop her @$$ so easily it isn't funny.

5. Uh... ripping off so many things here, personality needs alot of work, and alot of hypocrasy, he doesn't tolerate rudeness and cruelty, yet she swears and threatens people?.

6. OC x FC, need I say more? And there is only 1 Fc couple there aswell.

7. Uh, is as fast as Sonic, has all of Silvers powers, multiple types of kinesis and can turn into a werewolf? I believe the correct term is werehog, and this a very Mary-Sue character to far.

8.Again, OC x FC, married to Shadow? You know how many people are married to Shadow? Alot more than you could count on your fingers.

9. No wonder she is mistaken for Amy Rose, she is a recolour of Amy Rose! Seriously, draw, then rewrite your page, the cousin of Silver? Another Fanon x Canon relative.

And done, and none of that "If you can't say something nice, don't say nothing at all" jazz, because this is constructive critism, not a insult, so you can improve your page and get less constructive critisim. Have a good day! ^^ Watashi ha saigo no ejji, omega desu! 05:49, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Forget it, I'm critqing this character no matter what you find offensive, this character needs A LOT of work.

This will be short and sweet.

1. You already know how I feel about your FC X OC pairings, at LEAST choose ONE character, they are all ridiculously out of character, she is NOT that beautiful so she should not be grabbing this many guys under her belt.

2. Recolor, I can't say anything else.

3. Conflicting personality, She is either sweet or angry she can't be both, crazy and energetic but can also be really smart? Choose one. Swearing and being rough is NOT sweet whasover so I'm going to go with she is a rough and agressive character.

4. Guh her powers, why does she have super speed? And a rip-off pio-piko hammer so that you can freely recolor over cool Amy pictures to make her look cool? So she can also control elements, AND has Silver's powers, AND turn into a werewolf for no apparent reason? You had better choose one power that is ridiculous.

I'm sorry for being harsh but so far everyone has said what I need to say and you aren't even LISTENING to them, I'm also sorry to say I can't give this character a score because there isn't anything I like about her, she needs a lot of work done and you need to take the time to look at what everyone has been telling you and consider on improving upon it or else you character is going to get A LOT of hate in the future :I VegasFox 17:06, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

[Looks over list of recent improvements] An IQ of 399? Really? Are you trying to get more hate for her? That's 99 points over Eggman's estimated IQ! The Crusader hath return-ed! 01:16, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Whats with G.U.N killing people who did noting bad?99.39.245.10 03:35, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

When did she turn into a werewolf?99.39.245.10 23:34, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Okay guys. Did I improve her a little? Please be honest. I kinda fixed her up a bit N  X  Hilda  01:50, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Honestly? Not really, sorry. You took away that werewolf thing, and that was good because it was plain ridiculous, but that's all you did, really. She's still in love with a Canon Character (and he loves her back!), she has way too many powers, too many guys (namely the Canon ones) have fallen in love with her, her backstory is boring, and that fact that she is related to Silver (Again, Canon character), just irritates me. Also, she's still very much a recolor, and I'd suggest either changing her design or at least using a base. To help you, try to fill out this template (You can only check off one in each category):

Powers:

- Psychokinesis

- Super Speed (not Sonic fast, though)

- Controlling Fire

- Controlling Water

Weapon Skills (your character can only have one main fighting weapon. Choose wisely):

- Hands

- Hammer

- Gun

- Sword/Katana

- Knife/Dagger

Relationships with canon characters (I'm going to be nice and let you choose who you want your character to have a close relationship with. ONE. This includes both romance and family relationships. Other relationships with canon characters must be minor and platonic):

- Shadow

- Silver

- Sonic

- Mephiles

- Other

Please don't take this to offense. I'm just trying to be a helpful anonymous user! 173.79.231.31 01:22, September 13, 2012 (UTC)

(one of the few times I've ever seen an anonymous user trying to be constructive, and actually succeeding.) Though it's rather restricted, It's a good example of the steps you should take into improving this character. I also suggest reading this as well.~Smash The Echidna~  02:40, September 13, 2012 (UTC)

Was it really that constructive? Well then, time to get a username. And I intentionally made it pretty restricted because I feel that Aly needs to improve on her characters a lot (No offense, Aly, you seem like a creative kid). Maybe it was too big of a step, though...?OmegaCheese (talk) 22:26, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

Perhaps, but it was a good first edit. Welcome to Sonic Fanon Wiki, while we're at it. ~Smash The Echidna~  22:31, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks. Pleased to meet ya.

And if that's the case, then I'll give her a few more options:

-She can have two physical abilities instead of one, so as long as they're sensibly balanced. In other words, she can't be Sonic-Fast and have the strongest telekinesis powers you can imagine. She can be, however, as fast as Silver and have telekinesis powers about 75% as strong as his.

-She can be skilled in two weapons as long as they are similar. For example, a knife and a sword.

Hope that gives you a little more freedom OmegaCheese (talk) 02:15, September 15, 2012 (UTC)

=Talkplay= This section is a talkplay. Please do not add you comments here. Thank you ^^

Melissa meets Jack the Hedgehog & Patricia the Skunk
Jack & Patricia: (Walking together)

Jack: Wow, it's another beautiful day at the Park

Patricia: Yeah, it's soo beautiful out here. I really love smelling the flowers (smells the Flowers) Ahh, they smell beautiful.

Jack & Patricia: (hears noise)

Jack: Whats that?!

Patricia: I don't know. Buts its coming from behind those bushes.

Jack: You sure?

Patricia: Lets look!

Melissa Meets Bluray
Bluray: *Running By With Back Pack*