Talk:Sonic Maniax/@comment-32712012-20170816043919

This game looks really great! It has a lot of fun things in it that I would like to see for myself in an actual video games, such as the springs and shields.

I have a few suggestions about the article. As always, you are under no obligation to take any of my suggestions, but I would appreciate if you would consider them. The suggestions are listed below:
 * It would be nice if the characters could bring Vanilla back to life when they restore the planet. Considering that they have the power to recreate an entire planet, I think that there wouldn't be any technical difficulties in doing so, and it would help to avoid the game ending on a sad note. (Of course, if that's what you were going for, by all means do not take this suggestion.)
 * After the zone list, you wrote:
 * As stated before, the game also includes zones that you can unlock via the Emblems. ==Special Stages. In total, there are 14 main special stages for the character to play. However, there is two types of special stages.
 * ...followed by information about the special stages. If you meant to make "Special Stages" a header, you might want to consider writing:
 * As stated before, the game also includes zones that you can unlock via the Emblems.
 * ==Special Stages==
 * In total, there are 14 main special stages for the character to play. However, there is two types of special stages.

If you want to take any of my suggestions, some but not all of them, all of them, or none of them, feel free.
 * I'm guessing that a lot of readers of this article don't know what a "continue" is, so it might help to explain what a Continue is and/or link to this article.
 * Instead of having a "Shield" Shield and a "Bronze Shield", you might want to consider having something like turning the "Shield" Shield into a "Bronze" Shield and turning the "Bronze" Shield into a "Silver" Shield.
 * Since there is already a "Lead" Shield and a "Bronze" Shield (as well as possibly a "Silver" shield, if you take the previous suggestion), you might want to turn the "Metal" Shield into a more specific type of metal, such as an "Iron" Shield. This would prevent people from being confused as to why there are both "Metal" Shields and specific types of metal Shields.

Again, nice game! If someone actually made this game, I would definitely consider buying it.