User blog comment:Wikikinetic/Winter Awards 2018: Wiki's Votes/@comment-27984457-20180303213227

In terms of the review of ADKON:
 * I know there are a few punctuation errors, I need to get round to fixing those. Also, I've never understood why people downvote for grammar even though it is the one thing you can edit during the awards.
 * I never really planned on giving it a lighthearted tone. There's some stuff in the first few chapters that would suggest otherwise, but not a lot, so fair enough. It ultimately depends on what you're into in terms of Sonic, and if you don't want it to be dark, then fair enough.
 * Any details I put in are (mostly) explained later. As the story isn't finished yet, not all of them are explained.
 * Chapter 6 is cringey...specifically?
 * I'm not sure if you read correctly into Rugal. Yes, he's done some bad things, but he's never really seen as an antagonist.
 * Ice's bad punctuation is kinda the whole point of him. It's meant as part comic relief and partly to make him seem a little more creepy on occasion. It's worked in the past, anyway.
 * The scene with Kable is supposed to set up what kind of antagonist he is, ie. manipulative.
 * Chapter 15's lighthearted? Well, it's a fight scene, I guess.

Anyway, i'm glad that someone's gone over it with a critical eye. Thanks for the review.