Board Thread:Article Critique/@comment-1942179-20141202024709/@comment-25627885-20151217143006

Well, for pearl I do see that she's somewhat overshadowed by her sibling, which is a shame.

Hinestly, other than the issue with her being overshadowed by Smash and the Sandy issues I really can't find anything wrong.

However, if you want to fix the overshadowing issue the only thing I could really suggest is to make a few story arcs of hers where smash isn't around and go into more detail on her struggles. That, and you may need a foil villain for Pearl.

(More will be coming soon as i'm doing this during school owo)