Talk:Storm the fox

Two Nitpicks, so far.

First off the super cancer. While that technically can explain a scale of high speed singular being evolution, it really seems out of place, since Cancer is the malfunction in cells and the removal of their hayflick limit, which causes them to reproduce repeatdly. That means she may as well be shedding off skin while she walks. (Both disgusting and horrifying.)

Second, she has categories of both a Tragic Villain and a Pure Evil one. Those do NOT go hand and hand; Pure Evil would be someone who was evil for no reason other than it amused them, and not under some form of corruption or mind control; You can't realyl become pure evil, you need to already be it.

Or at least IMHO.

Anyway, Ican't say much else, but I may come back later when it is finished. You kill it We kill it more!  20:34, April 19, 2014 (UTC)