User blog comment:CrimsonFlame2K/SFW Summer Awards 2018 - Wait, Crim?! Where the hell did you come from?!?/@comment-32712012-20180727225434

Hi Crimson! I wanted to ask two questions about Cosmic Reboot to try to figure out what I can improve the story. I'm not to try to make you change your vote; I don't want you to do that, as I'm sure it was based on what's actually in the story, so my explanations of it shouldn't change your vote. I just want to know exactly what's wrong with it so we can try to work out how I could make it make more sense after the voting ends.

Question 1: you mentioned that "the pacing is kind of whack". Could you explain exactly where there are problems with the pacing, and why? I'm willing to believe that there's something wrong with the pacing, but I'm having trouble figuring out where.

Question 2: You mentioned that "Infinite being there alongside Iblis [raises] several questions". I'm very curious to know what questions are raised by this so that I can answer them properly. (In all honesty, they may even be ones that I didn't think to ask myself, so they may help me figure out more interesting things about the story than I would have done otherwise.)

If you get a chance to answer these two questions, that would be greatly appreciated! If not, I understand; voting in the Awards takes a lot of effort, and people often have real-life obligations, so if you can't answer this, I'll understand why.