Thread:Nitrogen218/@comment-32284869-20180420004140

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There's some things I wanted your input on before I began finalizing this. When I wrote this chapter, I had the idea that John would have made the deal to join forces with Vultra before the chapter began and maybe would have given one of the Raggadak Gems that she found to him so that ZeroCore would have it and be running tests on it when the invasion officially begins. (Or just happened to find it and the deal happens while the attack is underway, but in either scenario, the gem gets lost when the fighting starts) I also had the idea for a potential side plot in that John had some kind of terminal disease and made the deal with Vultra and possibly alienate ZeroCore entirely to try and save his own life.

What do you think? 