Thread:GalaxyWorld27/@comment-33279589-20180328074546/@comment-32712012-20180330091015

GalaxyWorld27 wrote: i did some edits on bianca's age and Azmaria's page with bianca. and Madoka's trivia thing. Thanks for the edits! Those fixed some of my problems, but not all of them, so here are my updated analyses of the articles: That's the end of this report. Hopefully this will be at least as helpful as my previous reports!
 * Yuki: I know that you didn't ask about her this time, but I feel compelled to give input, for the following reason: The Personality section is actually worse than before, as you approximately doubled the size of the section when it was too large as it was. Furthermore, most of the information that you added to it probably would be better off in the History section. Nothing else got worse, and the infobox improved, so it isn't all bad, but you should seriously reconsider what's in Yuki's Personality section before adding more to it.
 * Azmaria: Much better than before. The Relationships section makes sense now, and the Age section is a bit more useful. I should mention that you still haven't explained how Azmaria will forever be 3 years old, but other than that, the article's pretty good now.
 * Madoka: Fine before, still fine now. There's not much more for me to say than that.
 * Bianca: While you have added a lede (which is nice) and fixed up some other minor things, you still haven't clarified what Bianca and Azmaria's relationship is on this page in the way that you did on the Azmaria page. Clearing that up here would be useful. Aside from that, nothing got worse here, so it's still fairly good.

GalaxyWorld27 wrote: Actually you can help me out dude on editing two other pages. So...how exactly do you want me to help? Should I just give ideas, should I actually step in and edit the pages as I see fit, or should I do something in between? Whatever you want me to do, I'm happy to at least try to do it, but I'd like to understand what you're asking me to do.