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Melody the Dog Maker:TeamSonicPrez
Melody is a 12- year- old sonokinetic dog. She has a pet Pichu, Operetta. Melody is kind and selfless, and as a child she was unable to control her powerful voice and everyone called her names like "Siren" and "Jynx". Melody is owned by TeamSonicPrez. She has no enemies.

History
Melody doesn't remember very much of her past. Her earliest memory is when she was 10 and her powers started. She was called up by her music teacher to sing "The Preamble" from Schoolhouse Rock as a solo. She left her music teacher and classmates weeping and begging for more.

After that everyone generally avoided her and started calling her names. The first one was "Witch." Then, when she was in sixth grade, the class had a wider vocabulary and started calling her "Jynx." Finally, in middle school the seventh grade class learned some ancient Greek myths and dubbed her "Siren."

Out of loneliness, she went to a Pokemon Pound and adopted a Pichu with a ukulele on her back. She named the Pichu Operetta. Melody started becoming a Pokemon Trainer after that, and dropped out of school to pursue her dream to be a singer and her passion as a Trainer.

Pokemon

 * Operetta (Pichu)
 * Symphonique (Eeevee)
 * Musa (Mew)
 * Tune (Mincinno)
 * Song (Umbreon)

Powers

 * Sonokinesis
 * Speed of Light
 * Childlike innocence helps her out of sticky situations
 * Calm temper. You can count on her not to get you into trouble by getting mad.
 * Developing powers over technology.

Quotes

 * "The sound of music my ass. I just like to sing."
 * "Oh, oh, oh, dear! Here, let me help. . ."

Friends

 * Bravery the Hedgehog
 * Cynthia the Echidna

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Cosmo The Seedrian(Movies) Maker:JSGWiki100
Cosmo (コスモ Kosumo?) was a main character from the anime series Sonic X. She is a female child of a plant-like alien specieswhose homeworld was destroyed by the villainous Metarex, who, in the years that followed, left Cosmo as the sole survivor of her kind. To thwart the Metarex's ambitions for universal dominance, Cosmo joined Sonic the Hedgehog and his allies in their war against the Metarex, eventually becoming a love interest for Miles "Tails" Prower. In the end however, she sacrificed herself to defeat the Metarex for good.

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Overview
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Lewis the Fox Maker:Bladez the Hedgehog
Lewis is a 12 year old fox, and Bladez the Hedgehog's best friend.

He and his friends are currently trying to defeat the evil Professor Manticore.

Personality
Lewis has one of the highest IQ's in the world, rivaled only

by Miles "Tails" Prower, Dr. Eggman, and Professor Manticore.

Because of this, he's kind of jealous of Tails and his inventions.

Lewis also loves to invent things, things that range from airplanes,

to Extreme Gear. Something to note is that Lewis scares rather eaisily,

although he doesn't like to admit it.

Lewis also thinks that he knows everything, which can get him into trouble sometimes.

Attire
Lewis' attire is made up of things he's built.

He wears anti-gravitational pulse emitting gloves and boots, which

he considers his most prized inventions. His current pair are the second ones

he made, because the first ones were activated by touch, it would slam

him into all sorts of things (which made Leo laugh), so his "Zero-Gravity Gloves/Boots 2.0" are able to detect his brain waves and thoughts, giving him complete comtrol over them

Recent Events
Lately Lewis has been building air boards, upgrading the ones

he's already made, perfecting his plane "The Gray Fox", and

doing other things that he likes.

Attacks and Abilities

 * Roll -- Standard move, Lewis can roll into a ball.
 * Spin-Ball Jump -- Lewis can roll into a ball, and jump at his enemy.
 * Flight -- Lewis can fly for a short amount of time using his anti-gravity gloves and boots.
 * Basic Combat -- Lewis has basic fighting skills.
 * Tail Spin -- Lewis can spin in a circle, and slash his enemy with his tail.
 * Gravity Slash -- Lewis can shoot waves of damaging gravity at his enemy.
 * Zero Gravity -- Once he's charged up the power in his gloves, Lewis can manipulate the gravity surronding others, meaning he can lift them up, or throw them around.
 * Homing Attack -- Lewis can lock-on to his enemies, and attack them while rolled into a ball.
 * Trained Pilot -- Lewis is a trained pilot.
 * Mechanic -- Lewis is an expert mechanic.

Friends and Allies

 * Bladez the Hedgehog
 * Leo the Cat
 * Milly the Hedgehog
 * Marcy the Echidna and Emmy the Chao
 * Crystal the Mongoose
 * Chimera the Hybrid
 * Chimmy the Hybrid
 * Delilah the Meerkat
 * Nina the Monkey
 * Molly the Hummingbird
 * Shyan the Fox
 * Trish the Tigeress
 * Grimoire "Grim" the Wyvern
 * Halley the HaeTae
 * Eli the Gizoid
 * Infinity the Ring Spirit
 * Ali the Cat

Enemies and Rivals

 * Professor Manticore
 * Booster the Gizoid
 * Eris the Fox
 * Mimi the Rabbit
 * Skeeter the Wasp
 * Dagger the Hedgehog
 * Boris the Beechidna

Themesong(s)

 * Major Tom (Coming Home)

Fun Facts

 * While Lewis is in flight, he uses is tail to steer.
 * Lewis sometimes invents things to make Tails jealous, but Tails never even hears about it.
 * Lewis' voice actor is Zachary Gordon

Gallery
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Claw "Snow" the Bat Maker:Kleptoon
WARNING! This article NEEDS to be made from scratch

Appearance
In aperance Claw is a ordinary black mobian bat. He usually wears a brown jacket, googles and black boots.

Personality
Claw is usually acting shady and "sinster" but realtive to friends he sometimes is thougful but still harsh

Powers
Chaos energy-based attacks immunity

High speed and reflex

Heat and cold immunity

Abilities
Great intelligence and biotechnology mastery

Skills
Combat with most of cutting weapons and guns

Weaknesses
He has very low immunity to pressure changes

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