Talk:Depths of Dimensions/Part 2J (SO)/@comment-32220816-20180508211312/@comment-32712012-20180508220948

Is it OK if I put in a turn earlier? Based on Tranq's personality, he would have thanked Elias for staying, and then would have gone and tried to start looking around for ways to escape after the portal closed. This could be easily be expressed by me simply adding one of him thanking and going off to search after Elias says that he'll stay, at which point I could then add one at the end here of Tranq coming back and responding to Sneer, allowing you to end the roleplay. However, if I can't put a turn like this in earlier, I'll have to work out something else...