User blog comment:Wikikinetic/Winter Awards 2018: Wiki's Votes/@comment-27984457-20180303213227/@comment-27984457-20180305064605


 * In terms of the tone:Well, it should really be lighter at the start, because no one's done anything evil yet. However, there's a few things to suggest the tone will turn darker, but i'll look into it.
 * In terms of the details:I don't really, at least from my point of view. The only things that are mentioned are characters that don't appear in the story and accents of all things, none of which drive the story forward.