User blog:BlazingLeopard/Character Critiquing - Astrid

Astrid the Fox
Now, I'm not really sure if many people will see this but still, I'll give it a shot. I saw that character critiquing was start to become more popular so I decided I'd give it a try. No, this is not because I want to be seen or noticed, this is mainly because I want to improve my characters based on information and opinions that people give me. Anyway, on to the character.

Now, as you can see, I've linked the title to my character known as Astrid. If you want to, can you please tell me anything that you feel that I could improve on in the article. But be nice. I would like for people to be using constructive criticism as well.

I specifically chose Astrid because I feel that she is my best character so far, so I want to make her the best that I can make her. Anyways, you may begin critiquing! If you want to. :)