Talk:The Black Cards/@comment-25627885-20151217141327/@comment-4211788-20151222090940

All of your criticisms will be taken into consideration. You have given me the key to continue and clean up the story and fine tune the page a bit.

While I can't edit the page now (it's competing for best group right as we speak), I can give you an explaination as to how the three members got word of said incident. They never really caught onto Gerome's want to escape, they simply wanted him dead by said point. There was no legal sense in anything and in court, the black cards would fail to win the rights to the company had they done their disposing of him or if they forced him to sign the rights. You would get massively sued for that haha.

It's not needlessly dark to be frank. The main concept of these characters is to pop off and show that you can have a kind demeanor, great recognition of what you do, but have an underlying pinch of evil. The Black Cards aren't good, in fact they were never meant to be. They're selfish actors who play a role in persuading the world to keep giving them hard cash. They concept was to hide evil and dark tidings with bright curtains and comforting sights. It's suppossed to evoke a bit of mystery and questioning of morality between the characters and what they do.

Also preformances are described on character pages, but now that you mention it, we do need to go more in depth with what each character does and explain how that draws the crowd.