User blog comment:SapphireFlower64/Character's Backstory/@comment-10290971-20151011214315

I think for an outline, it works pretty good, though I do think there are other ideas you could talk about as well, like how her relationship with her parents before they passed, and possibly talk about her friends and siblings (if she has any siblings, that is).

Other than that, just going into detail about what you already put seems fine. Things like, how she saw her powers, describing the terror of her chaos powers, the horror of her parents deaths, and the Near-Death experience she had, could all potentially lengthen her backstory a good amount.