Talk:Nikki "Nikkell" the Hedgehog/@comment-6195340-20150717040834

This is my first review and hopefully, it'll be good.

For the ratings, I will split the review up into several sections. In each section, I will give a single rating (0/10 format) and the final overall rating will be the average of all ratings in each section.

History

For the history section, it's very well written and has a wide usage of vocabulary words. However, there are some grammatical mistakes, but are very minor and can be ignored easily. The history actually gives this character a personality, which is something most characters in the fanbase were not able to do, including my own characters.

8/10

Personality

What is good about the personality is that it was built by the backstory of this character. It actually makes the character look like a true living being capable of living in a real world. I know it might not make sense, but what I mean is that it's very well done.

9/10

Design

Nikki's design is very creative. It's also quite original, too. The headphones and the note-shaped belt buckle really showed how much she loves to write and sing music. Her color pallette and hair style are also pretty good. My favorite part of the design is that she actually got her appearance from her parents, which is something I don't usually see in a few Sonic FCs.

9/10

Powers

It states that Nikki is a pyrokinetic. She doesn't seem to look like a pyrokinetic, which is actually the problem. Usually, the appearance (or name, in some cases) could give the reader a clue on what type of powers they would have, but I, as the reader, it confused me a bit.

On the bright side, Nikki actually has a few weaknesses to balance out such a powerful ability, and that's what I like about it.

7/10

Verdict

My final rating for this character is a 8/10. The history was well-written, as well as her design and personality. However, the powers may need some improvement. You could probably add a few more weaknesses or an explanation to how she inherited fire powers. Overall, this character is amazing and you shouldn't need to worry about it for a while. :)