User blog:Hikaruyami-having fun*/Article Review

Hi everyone,with this blog,I'll be reveiwing your pages that needs work.I'll put the info of the page and a warning as well for it.I'll also ask users how they plan to improve their page with thir permisson.I'll be reveiwing 5 pages once every week.And with that,let's get to the reviews!

Last week articles of 11/7/11
 * Solar the Hedgehog(NeroTH)
 * Phineas the Hedgecrane
 * E.A.L
 * Chuchu the Pikachu
 * Kazuko Shinbou

Last week articles of 11/14/11
 * Sunset Hill
 * Yaka Ammy
 * Gaynor Croker the Fox
 * Nightmare (NME)
 * Power 1 Emerel

Last week articles of 11/21/11
 * Bretta the Leopard
 * West Mobius
 * Infera Vol
 * Nazo Unleashed
 * Maria Robotnik(Cy-Fox)

Last week articles of 11/28/11
 * Byron the Unicorn
 * Twilight the Wolf
 * Perfect Dark Metal Sonic
 * Shadow Android X2
 * The Perfect Queen

Last week articles of 12/5/11
 * Drakonsu
 * Shadow's Kids
 * Marine Turbine
 * Christina The Fox
 * Glutton badnik

Last week articles of 12/12/11
 * Legend Wing
 * Pintor's Five Stage Hands
 * Razz the Bat
 * Fleece the Lamb
 * Zack the hedgehog

Last week articles of 12/19/11
 * Seven Swords Dance
 * Manina
 * Emecosmo
 * Juliet the cat
 * Sonic Heroes: Emeralds of Nightopia

Last week articles of 12/26/11
 * Creator of the Sonic XL series
 * Nouka
 * Lily
 * Cassidy the Hedgehog
 * Bulma the Bat

Last week articles of 1/2/12
 * Super Sonic Heroes
 * Ales the Hedgehog
 * Boomer
 * Silver the Hedgecat
 * Catherine Ogmore Pritchard

Last week articles of 1/9/12
 * Reidak the Hedgehog
 * Lorreta Minovia
 * Bloody Amy: The Gore Begins
 * Rollercoaster
 * Dark Elvis

Last week articles of 1/16/12
 * Wendigo 'Digo" Ecchidna
 * Calico the hedgehog
 * Bureru the Giant Leopard Moth
 * Kindness the Hedgehog
 * Jin the Chameleon

Last week articles of 1/23/12
 * Psychic Test Potion
 * Mariah the Cat
 * Shadow and Rouge's Magic Show
 * Dark Nebula
 * Blast the Cat

Last week articles of 1/30/12
 * J.J the Hawk's present give away
 * Crystal Sonic
 * Rage Uppercut
 * Monica the hedgehog
 * D.J. the Hedgecat

Last week articles of 2/6/12
 * Leonidas the Magician
 * Thunder the hedgehog
 * Black Light Virus
 * Metal Element Armor
 * Blaze the cat's secret

Last week articles of 2/13/12
 * Derm the Dark Chao
 * Terro the Hedgefox
 * Pirate Academy
 * Icicle The Hedgehog
 * SwordHeart

Last week articles of 2/20/12
 * Sarah the Hedgecat
 * Shuhei the Android
 * Dark Dagger
 * Star The Blitzhog
 * Triforce Sonic

Last week articles of 2/27/12
 * The Story of Sarah
 * Leet the Fox
 * Xenlon the Necrohog
 * Clade the hedgehog
 * Selene the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 3/5/12
 * Maimuna Maiba (Blessed Grave)
 * Jupiter the Cat
 * Shade The Fox
 * Italic the Wolf
 * Steven The Evil Cannon

Last week articles of 3/12/12
 * Misa the Seedrian
 * Tommie the hedgehog
 * Chaos Storm the Hedgehog
 * Joe the Racoon
 * Jadyn the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 3/19/12
 * Razzago The Wolf
 * Devion the Vamphog
 * Sonic 20th Anniversary
 * Maheera the Dark Blue Chamelon
 * Abyss the Mouse

Last week articles of 3/26/12
 * Rachel the Hedgehog(2011 tv series)
 * Dan the Coyote
 * Artie B. Prower
 * Blast the robohog
 * Mike the Red Panda

Last week articles of 4/2/12
 * Nala-re the Echidna
 * Muste the Wolf
 * Metal Maddness
 * Shildonic the Hedgehog
 * Super Sapphire Vegas

Last week articles of 4/9/12
 * New incoming charectes
 * Evo(MXL)
 * The Hedghog King
 * Jack The Flying Squirrel
 * Korin Alexander

Last week articles of 4/16/12
 * Golden-Chucks
 * Freeopolis Freedom Fighters
 * Venus the Bandicoot
 * Sonoc Return(Real Fangame)
 * Darth Hidious or Cyber Poison

Last week articles of 4/23/12
 * Mecha Storm
 * Book of Eternal Leadership
 * Eclipeces The Dark
 * Ringo the cat
 * Sonic the Hedgehog:Sorcery and Aliens

Last week articles of 4/30/12
 * Alexis Depardieu Coolette
 * Altatude Kiki
 * Ichigo the echidna
 * Pablo the Fox
 * Heartless Twilight

Last week articles of 5/7/12
 * Kay the Fox
 * Alice the Dog
 * Un-Named Character:Help?
 * Dusk The Hedgehog
 * Alien Mezaruga

Last week articles of 5/14/12
 * Evio the hedgehog
 * Ardic the Polar Bear
 * The Decline
 * Horn the Eagle
 * Mimi the rabcat

Last week articles of 5/21/12
 * Leo-Rouge Conflict
 * Ultragamma the Hedgehog
 * Flame the Hedgehog
 * Reptillious LXXXVII
 * Abia the Koala

Last week articles of 5/28/12
 * Twigoon
 * Rush the Hedgehog
 * Light
 * The Commander
 * Wolf

Last week articles of 6/4/12
 * Cyraza
 * Inferno the Hedgehog
 * Galahad the Hedgehog
 * Bronze the Hedgehog
 * Flash the Basset Hound

Last week articles of 6/11/12
 * Eddie the Lizard
 * Super Evil Eris
 * Lightning The Light
 * Hikaru the Hedgehog
 * Toyko Academy

Last week articles of 6/18/12
 * Shahooter-Parkview Conflict
 * 12A7-BOT
 * April Fox
 * Shadin The Hedgehog
 * Transparency the Dragonfly

Last week articles of 6/25/12
 * Mad-Matrix
 * Amy Rose (Blue Twilight's Universe)
 * Liefield the Hedgehog
 * Sonic the Hedgehog (Adventure Universe)
 * June the Armadillo

Last week articles of 7/2/12
 * Twil the Fox
 * Jex Islands
 * Sonic Heroes OPERATION VIZO
 * Project Tundra
 * Echo the hedgehog

Last week articles of 7/9/12
 * Hincho the Rabbit
 * David the cat (Shaymin2348's Original Character)
 * Solar the hedgehog
 * Strike the Hedgehog
 * Violet the Cat

Last week articles of 7/16/12
 * Acid the Hedgehog
 * Airu the Seedrian
 * Cassie Flora
 * Jupiter the Hedgehog
 * Space Brick

Last week articles of 7/23/12
 * Final Five
 * Sonic Unleashed 2: Gaias
 * Breeze the Hunter
 * Super the Echidna
 * Alsh the Eagle

Last week articles of 7/30/12
 * Silver Sonic 3 (Jet Booster Silver Sonic)
 * Shadow and Maria Reunited Story
 * E-Series Robots (Sonic Underground 2)
 * Wave the Witch
 * Bob the Tiger

Last week articles of 8/7/12
 * Bethany The Fox
 * Pseudo-vocabulary
 * Everette the Mosquito
 * The Other Birdies
 * Sonic heros 3 divine being Rise of glory edition

Last week articles of 8/13/12
 * Sonic ZX:Virus Deletion
 * Tails: The Tails doll
 * Team Elya
 * Ickly The Fox
 * Xiang the Echidna

Last week articles of 8/20/12
 * Sonic In A World Of Light And Dark!
 * Kari the Fox
 * Emmy the Chao
 * Clouds
 * Sonic Generations Quest

Last week articles of 8/27/12
 * Weruioh the Hedgehog
 * Princess Diamond Christian
 * Dia the Hedgebird
 * Glider The Cyber Echidna
 * Team mephiles

Last week articles of 9/3/12
 * Coal the Wolf
 * Sarah the fox
 * Phoenix the Swallow
 * Sonic the Hedgehog Film Franchise
 * Saber the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 9/10/12
 * Sonic Snowboarding XD
 * Brackenfire
 * Owen The Hedgehog
 * Dark Super Sonadver
 * Lamp the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 9/17/12
 * Bio - Drazo
 * Jail Break
 * Mario And Sonic Generations
 * Wechnia (Ashura's Legacy)
 * Early Emerald Town

Last week articles of 9/24/12
 * The Power Gamble Casino
 * The FoXRoX Fellowship
 * The Fusi Chronicles
 * Sonic Reqluenish
 * Brenna the Wolf

Last week articles of 9/1/12
 * Gold Chaos Emerald
 * Run at the Speed of Sound
 * Nova Jr.
 * Miley Prower
 * K'nuckles The Cat

Last week articles of 10/8/12
 * Lucy The Fox
 * Cera the Hedgehog
 * Clover the Hedgehog
 * Ethan The Porcupine
 * Defaran

Last week articles of 10/15/12
 * Sonic Generations
 * Sonic Reborn
 * Sonic Universe(TV Series)
 * E-52 ToolBoxer
 * Nilly L.

Last week articles of 10/22/12
 * Alfred The Wolf
 * Cortanna"Courtney" the Lynx
 * Sonia the Wolf
 * Mayor Of Jule
 * Nilly L.

Last week articles of 10/30/12
 * Zane the hedgehog
 * Leaf the Hedgehog
 * Django the cacoon
 * Zenrion the Slytherin (Story)
 * How delix hated sonic at first

Cloud The Hedgehog Maker:NatalieTheWolf
"Hey! What about me?!"

- Cloud the hedgehog

HISTORY: Cloud history is nothing much, She grow up normaly, had no troubles in life... Yet. She grow up wanting the next hot wheels toy! she didn't like barbies, she wanted a toolbox! not make up! shes a tomboy and is very nice! Shes not afraid to stand up though! but can put up a very tiny fight! Right now, Boom and Cloud are in a relationship! <3 cloud likes it!

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Hood Maker:Yorobot
Hood the Bee is a character created by Yorobot. It is a male bee who appears in the fanfictions Mobian Cop Bad Cop and Heroes From an Old World. He has also gained a lot of popularity toward his own creator as he has since been used in many RPs.

Mobian Cop Bad Cop
Hood fulfills the role he had been made for; he is the coroner at Four-Lakes Police Department. He is very useful to Alexis and Shadow as he investigates all bodies brought to him, might they be in pieces or physically undamaged. He investigates the first body brought to him and finds out many things, such as the origin of the injury at the back of the victim`s head, and also a tattoo bleeding on a part and not on the other, figuring out the non-bleeding part has been done after the man`s death.

Later, he has to investigate a blown-up body, but thanks to the teeth he could figure out who it was; it was not another man as expected by Alexis and Shadow but actually a woman. He also mentions figuring out about another case`s problem; apparently a woman tried to kill her husband with an arsenic cake, but it didn`t work as he fell unconscious after a hard hit behind the head.

It is revealed at the end that he might have found love with a landscape painter

Heroes From an Old World
Hood follows Alexis everywhere in HFAOW. He seems not to be important, but maybe later on he might have to investigate a body. He is constantly with Alexis as they travel around Mobius to find clues about Sonic`s disappearance. His biggest success as of now is to have helped Alexis capture Scourge and Fiona Fox.

RP World
In the RP world, Hood appears a bit later than Alexis. He is not extremely useful at first. His first appearance is in "Blind Dates" and it re-tells how he met Belle (who is someone else`s OC) and found love with her. Next he appears in the Unexpected Love Trilogy, in which he is thrown partly thanks to Belle. He proves not to be very useful as he simply spends this trip with Belle, actually not participating much into fights.

After this he appears in The E.A.S.E. Mystery, where he still lives happily with Belle. In this RP, a remote island from Earth is sent to Mobius. Hood participates in the story after they discover the scientists on this island have created a machines that changes one`s species and he tries to become a fox for Belle, while after this she becomes bee to see what she would be like with him. After they are back to normal from those experiments, they have a calm time, that is, until Hood invites Alexis to the island to try the machine; when they go back there to retrieve their true species, a plan rigged by the villains of this RP begins and they are sent to Earth. Sadly, this RP has never been finished, but an OC Interaction later shows that everything has been brought to normal.

In RP Interaction, Hood is ten years older, much like everyonwe else. He had kids with Belle; their names are Beauty and Lewis. Beauty is a foxbee who only bears fox features for teh face and the body, with the exception that she has bee wings in the back. As such she looks like a fairy. However, Lewis is not as lucky; he is also fox for the physionomy, but his fur, which should be brown, is actually striped black and yellow. He also has antennas and wings. He could be considered a freak by some, but it is not that bad actually. Hood and Belle can be happy that they have the very first foxbees ever. (Later it is revealed that waspfoxes exist however).

Personality
Hood is a great friend to be with, but he also has a few defects. For his qualities, it can be seen that he`s logical and deductive, as he can figure out most of the injuries and their origin by looking at an injured corpse. He also cares a lot for his friends. However, he has also many defects; the main one is his speech speed; He speaks terribly fast, though this gets slowly corrected thanks to Belle`s presence in the RPs.

He also has a tendency to tell adult jokes or to think a bit like a pervert, but this has also been corrected. It is also revealed that he mostly lacks a social life as the coroner work takes all his time. This has of course been corrected.

He has proven to be an excellent father toward Beauty and Lewis.

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May the seedrian Maker:Sweetnicoledeleon123
May is a seedrian girl who loves to sing.And with 2 kinds of bestfriends.She sometimes make her yellow eyes to blue.

Team


Her team is team musical and in team musical is May,Nathalia and Danica.

Friends

 * Emily the seedrian
 * Danica and Nathalie (bestfriends)
 * Mite the seedrian
 * all kinds of seedrian (except Martha)

Rivals/enemies

 * Martha the seedrian
 * Louie the fox
 * Rock the bear

Family

 * Lolly the seedrian (May's mother)
 * Celia the seedrian (May's sis)

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Metal .G.R.E.E.N. Maker:65.40.227.221
&nbsp Metal .G.R.E.E.N. is a robot clone of Green the Hedgehog.

Metal .G.R.E.E.N. was made by Green the Hedgehog

because Green was told by a bing called Mysterie the

Dark that Shadow the Hedgehog is evil and will bring

the end of the everything.When Green was told this

he made a time traveling robot called Metal

.G.R.E.E.N. to kill Shadow but after a big

misunderstanding Metal .G.R.E.E.N. bacame a Hero

and became Shadows new friend.

Metal .G.R.E.E.N. is like his master in many ways

but he also has all of Metal Sonic's powers

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Jerry the sluglemur Maker:Greenemeraldz
Jerry, the leader of the sluglemurs, is the most important sluglemur from Vercanan the land of the spirit animals.

He lives with many other sluglemurs in a large cave system buried under Vercanan in a section called The Cave of Dark Spirits. Contained in the cave are a multi-dimentional cluster of crystals that allows Jerrys tribe of sluglemurs to travel to alternate dimentions by attuning themselves to the spirit energy that radiates from them.

Jerry and his mysterious tribe frequently use the crystals to aid friends in other dimentions such as Sonic, Power Rangers and Halo.

Jerrys powers include:
 * Excellent night vision
 * Stealth
 * Mental Insight
 * Precognition

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