User blog:Hikaruyami-having fun*/Article Review

Hi everyone,with this blog,I'll be reveiwing your pages that needs work.I'll put the info of the page and a warning as well for it.I'll also ask users how they plan to improve their page with thir permisson.I'll be reveiwing 5 pages once every week.And with that,let's get to the reviews!

Last week articles of 11/7/11
 * Solar the Hedgehog(NeroTH)
 * Phineas the Hedgecrane
 * E.A.L
 * Chuchu the Pikachu
 * Kazuko Shinbou

Last week articles of 11/14/11
 * Sunset Hill
 * Yaka Ammy
 * Gaynor Croker the Fox
 * Nightmare (NME)
 * Power 1 Emerel

Last week articles of 11/21/11
 * Bretta the Leopard
 * West Mobius
 * Infera Vol
 * Nazo Unleashed
 * Maria Robotnik(Cy-Fox)

Last week articles of 11/28/11
 * Byron the Unicorn
 * Twilight the Wolf
 * Perfect Dark Metal Sonic
 * Shadow Android X2
 * The Perfect Queen

Last week articles of 12/5/11
 * Drakonsu
 * Shadow's Kids
 * Marine Turbine
 * Christina The Fox
 * Glutton badnik

Last week articles of 12/12/11
 * Legend Wing
 * Pintor's Five Stage Hands
 * Razz the Bat
 * Fleece the Lamb
 * Zack the hedgehog

Last week articles of 12/19/11
 * Seven Swords Dance
 * Manina
 * Emecosmo
 * Juliet the cat
 * Sonic Heroes: Emeralds of Nightopia

Last week articles of 12/26/11
 * Creator of the Sonic XL series
 * Nouka
 * Lily
 * Cassidy the Hedgehog
 * Bulma the Bat

Last week articles of 1/2/12
 * Super Sonic Heroes
 * Ales the Hedgehog
 * Boomer
 * Silver the Hedgecat
 * Catherine Ogmore Pritchard

Last week articles of 1/9/12
 * Reidak the Hedgehog
 * Lorreta Minovia
 * Bloody Amy: The Gore Begins
 * Rollercoaster
 * Dark Elvis

Last week articles of 1/16/12
 * Wendigo 'Digo" Ecchidna
 * Calico the hedgehog
 * Bureru the Giant Leopard Moth
 * Kindness the Hedgehog
 * Jin the Chameleon

Last week articles of 1/23/12
 * Psychic Test Potion
 * Mariah the Cat
 * Shadow and Rouge's Magic Show
 * Dark Nebula
 * Blast the Cat

Last week articles of 1/30/12
 * J.J the Hawk's present give away
 * Crystal Sonic
 * Rage Uppercut
 * Monica the hedgehog
 * D.J. the Hedgecat

Last week articles of 2/6/12
 * Leonidas the Magician
 * Thunder the hedgehog
 * Black Light Virus
 * Metal Element Armor
 * Blaze the cat's secret

Last week articles of 2/13/12
 * Derm the Dark Chao
 * Terro the Hedgefox
 * Pirate Academy
 * Icicle The Hedgehog
 * SwordHeart

Last week articles of 2/20/12
 * Sarah the Hedgecat
 * Shuhei the Android
 * Dark Dagger
 * Star The Blitzhog
 * Triforce Sonic

Last week articles of 2/27/12
 * The Story of Sarah
 * Leet the Fox
 * Xenlon the Necrohog
 * Clade the hedgehog
 * Selene the Hedgehog

Last week articles of 3/5/12
 * Maimuna Maiba (Blessed Grave)
 * Jupiter the Cat
 * Shade The Fox
 * Italic the Wolf
 * Steven The Evil Cannon

'''Last week articles of 3/12/12
 * Misa the Seedrian
 * Tommie the hedgehog
 * Chaos Storm the Hedgehog
 * Joe the Racoon
 * Jadyn the Hedgehog

Razzago The Wolf Maker:WinterKey
'A Galaxy Leaders' true strength doesn't come from powers, breaking emblems or training. You need to have to believe in yourself, and always think of the galaxy. - Razzago to Hikarla, MultiVerse Problem!'''

The only wolf who has an ability to turn into a Super Flare form, Razzago is a holder of a lot of fire powers. Surprisingly, he does not look like a wolf.

Razzago The Wolf- Backstory
Born to be one of the Seven Galaxy Leaders, Razzago seems very serious in looks, but when you actually meet him, he is very calm. He leads the galaxy of Elementus, which consists of Aquarius, Solar, FireVolcan, Iceast, and Earth-lo-jin. He is seen as one of the strongest galaxy leaders, but he never fights ANYBODY unless necessary. His true power is concealed within his Fire Emblem. He only breaks it if one of the Seven Galaxy Leaders are in trouble, or if Elementus is being threatened.

Debuts
Razzago is seen in some roleplays. According to WarioWare: D.I.Y Microgames, he is the sonic fan character most seen in sonic fan character games on Wario Ware: D.I.Y. He is also featured in the Winter Key.as one of the main protagonists/

Appearence
Razzago has red spiky hair. He wears a red cap. He also has golden eyes with blue/black goggles on his head. His usual clothes consist of a grey jacket that has red stripes, and grey trousers with a red square slip into four. He wears White and red shoes.

Personality
Razzago is a calm, nice person who always finds a way to help the galaxy, and helps it.

Dark Forces attack Elementus!
Razzago was one day standing in front of Elementus just to act like a barrier, as Alfia was as well. Suddenly, he was ambushed by a dark cloud. He was so ticked off that somebody would just ambush him like that, he broke his Element Shard of Fire and went to Dark Flare mode. He tried to attack it, but all of his attacks just passed through. he asked for Alfia's help, so she joined him and helped him beat the force. They defeated it easily, but some of it swept into the Elementus Galaxy. The forces only attacked Aquarius and Solar. Razzago decided that these forces should be put to a stop, so he called him a meeting with MetanigoXS.

Extreme Gear
Razzago is a decent competitor on extreme gear, not good and not bad. Although if he thinks he is going to lose an VERY important race, he'll go insane and will activate a fire barrier around him, crushing his opponents as he goes past them one by one.

Transformations
Super Flare

Glowing Fire

Dark Flare

Emblem Shard Broken Form

Pain Transformation.

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Devion the Vamphog Makeer:NightFreak
Devion is a 24 year old grey and red Rektilian Vamphog

Personality
Devion can be very crazy and stalkerish. This happens to be because he was dropped as a kid. He can also be very loud and may randomly outburst. During times of great need he can be very serious yet he cracks jokes for comic relief. He also gets very nervous around girls for some reason.

Abilities
Devion is both pyrokinetic and spectrakinetic. It is unknown how he gained these abilities.

Appearence
Devion has grey fur with red markings on his body. He also has black spikes on his arms and legs with red golves and black boots with red tips. His eyes have no pupils nor irises and his mouth appears to be stiched shut but can still speak(this trait is shared by him and his brother Istladion.

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Sonic 20th Anniversary Maker:Kasei
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Maheera the Dark Blue Chameleon Maker:NinjaZane
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Abyss the Mouse Maker:ChaosSlash
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