Forum:Rate My Characters Please?

I was reading some of the other people's Comments towards originality and god-modded characters, I am serious about my characters being innovative and original since SEGA and Sonic The Hedgehog were the game company and game series that inspired my love for video game character designing, I'm 23 and I'm not too proud to seek the opinions of others, Firstly I'd like the opinion on blight advice on possibly how to organize his profile better and possibly story critique/advice, secondly I guess his Rival Nix, the others as well but these two first and foremost since they are the two founding good and evil side Characters. Thank you for your time ^.~