Talk:The Lilac Saga/Pilot Season/@comment-32220816-20180501165124

Alice doesn't seem relatable at all, and is making me want something bad to happen to her. She seems to be just there in order to be an obstacle, with a lack of character. Comedy or not, I think you should refrain from having a character only be there to be a nag (like Chi-Chi in Dragon Ball, she got horrible reception), so... yeah. Just my thoughts. (Plus, Alice seems dumb. If anything, Platinum is a good influence on Lilac.)