Board Thread:Article Critique/@comment-3027456-20150424224507

As I was posting the epilogue to Lone Wolf, I thought, "Hey, why not see what other people think?" So I decided to post one of these critique request thingies. Anyway, I just want to know what you think of plot, if there are any plot holes in it, how I could improve my writing, etc. Also, it'd help me if any criticism is constructive. I actually do want to improve stuff, yeah? Cool.

Here's a link. Save's you having to type stuff up above. 