Talk:Dinah the Hedgehog

So, what do you all think so far?--  "Lamp oil, rope, bombs?"  ---- "You want it?" 08:10, November 14, 2010 (UTC)

She's a good character, great idea for being the female counterpart of dismal  Temporal ' the ' Fox  08:10, November 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Nero ^^--  "Lamp oil, rope, bombs?"  ---- "You want it?" 08:12, November 14, 2010 (UTC)

your welcome Ryu ^^  Temporal ' the ' Fox  08:13, November 14, 2010 (UTC)

cool! Tails 6000  23:33, November 14, 2010 (UTC)

Interaction RP

 * (Interact with this chara here)

Jeremy: *walking around whistling* hmmm it's been a long time...where's dismal? I bet he's kinda busy picking flowers :)

(Somewhere nearby, Dinah is trying to hide from Toxic and Chet...)

Jeremy: hmm...maybe I'll do something in case he's lost...... *coughs up a mystery egg and he gains funny glasses with a nose and fake mustache and wears it* hmmm I always wanted a nose...well...now to find dismal...wherever he is *walks off*

(Back with Dinah, she is peering out from behind a tree, when suddenly, Toxic grabs her tail!)

Dinah: AAA-(Chet the Hawk puts a hand over her mouth)-*muffled cries*

Jeremy: *still whistling now hearing it* huh? someones in trouble? man I missed that smell of heroism *breaks the glasses and zooms off*


 * (Twist:don;t worry he's technically gonna try and find the source of this first before beating the 2 trolls to death)

Chet: Hold still, girly! This won't hurt a bit!

Dinah: *muffled* S-Stop it!!

Toxic: Shut up! [spanks her hard]

Dinah: *muffled yell of pain* [stiffens instinctively]

Jeremy: *skids to a halt* okay if this involves dismal being kidnapped by trolls again I'LL BEAT THEM TO DEATH FOR MY BEST FRIEND! *zooms off a lot quicker*

Toxic: That hurt, didn't it?

Dinah: *frightened nod*

Toxic: Good. [spanks her hard again]

Dinah: *muffled yell of pain*

[Chet grips the front of her raggedy top.]

Chet: Let's get rid of this nasty old thing, shall we? [rips the top off with ease]

Jeremy: *now behind a bush wondering what the trolls are doing* I bet they're caning him with broken bamboo......okay that's it.... *coughs up a few ice eggs*

[Toxic grins and rips off her skirt as well. Dinah lets out a muffled yell of terror, and Toxic grabs her butt, squeezing hard.]

Dinah: *muffled* S-Stop it!! P-Please!!

(Suddenly...)

Jeremy: *pops from the bush* HEADS UP! *tosses 2 of the ice eggs in the air* you only got a matter of time before ya....wait.....well nevermind but still let go of whoever you idiots are torturing!!!!!

Chet: S***!! Run!!

[They throw Dinah to the ground and flee.]

Dinah: Uhn!!

(She rolls over onto her side, gingerly holding her bruised and throbbing rear, whimpering.)

Jeremy: *walks up to her* you okay miss? I'm looking for a hedgehog named dismal, have ya seen him nearby?

Dinah: *gasp* [crawls away quickly]

Jeremy: ??? don;t worry I'm a good friend...and before ya ask I don;t treat women like how those 2 nutjobs did....do not worry

Dinah: (Cowering against a tree) G-Get away...!!

(She suddenly remembers she is naked, and covers her chest with both arms as well as squeezing her legs together, blushing heavily with embarrassment.)

Jeremy: 0_o' hmmm well if ya need me just call....but....you look so familiar like dismal or something...you one of his relatives?

Dinah: GO AWAAAYY!! (starts sobbing)

Jeremy: *walks off* maybe she's in trauma due to being abused by trolls or something :/ wait.....dismal is tortured....that girl is tortured....what can that mean???????

(A bit later...)

Jeremy: *still pacing* okay I can;t figure this out...either she's dismal's relative...or she's dismal's female self.....the relative is most believable in my opinion..... oh man I haven't been this confused since I was between a cliff and an angry troll..... wait I did that before I jumped off the cliff no seriously I'm getting tired of my own confusion.....might as well put MYSELF in danger to find dismal........I hope I do though.......

(a few minutes of brainstorming Later)

Jeremy: okay I think I got a plan....... *accidentally freezes himself with an ice egg* eep....

(Back with Dinah, she's trying to find somewhere to hide so no one can see her naked.)

Dinah: *shivering a bit*

(Suddenly...)

???: Where ya think you're going, girly?

'Dinah: !! [turns around]

[Chet tackles her to the ground!]

Dinah: AAAAAAGH!!

Chet: [Grins] Didja miss me, b****? [pins her arms to the ground]

Dinah: S-Stop it!!

[Toxic then appears, putting a hand over Dinah's mouth.]

Dinah: *muffled cry of protest*

Temporal: Hey Toxic, you know your annoying right?

Toxic: ? (looks up at Temporal) What do you want?

Temporal:*Being Sarcastic* Oh I don't know, maybe I want to be beat up.

Toxic: Well, Chet and I are kinda busy punishing this naughty girl, but I think we can squeeze you in...

(Chet pulls out some rope, rolls Dinah onto her stomach, and ties her hands behind her back. He then ties her ankles together.)

Chet: Now don't you go anywhere, b****...[spanks Dinah hard]

[Toxic and Chet then go to face Temporal.]

Temporal:Oh I'm so scared >:P

Chet: You should be; we'll mess you up worse than we'll mess up this b****!

Temporal:Heh, you sure about that? *Does a Tail Swipe on Toxic and Chet*

(Toxic dodges, but Chet is caught off guard and hit in the stomach.)

Chet: WHOOF!!

Temporal:Let's see what you got Toxic >:)

Toxic: Very well. [pulls out rapier] En guarde!

Temporal:*Pull's his sword out* Ready!?

Toxic: [Swings at Temporal]

Temporal: *Blocks the Attack then swings at Toxic*

Toxic: (Barely manages to parry the attack)

Temporal: Not Bad, but what's the point of beating a innocent girl?

Toxic: You don't need a point to beat up a nasty, nan-hating skank!

Temporal: Hm.

Toxic: *grins* [suddenly disarms Temporal]

Temporal:Huh?!

Toxic: Ha! [grabs Temporal's tail]

Temporal:YELP!!!!

Toxic: [Pulls hard]

Temporal:YELP!!! *Whimpers*

Chet: (Still holding his stomach) Hahaha, he yelps just like the b****!

(And then...)

Dinah: L-L-Leave h-him alone, T-Toxic...!!

Temporal:*Whimpering*

Chet: Shut up, b****! [kicks her in the side]

Dinah: *cry of pain*

Temporal:*Tail Swipes Toxic in the face then tackles Chet* Leave her alone!

Chet: (Is tackled into a tree) GUH!!

Temporal:*Runs up to Dinah and unties the rope* You OK?

Dinah: U-Uhhh...

Temporal:Go, I'll take care of Toxic and Chet.

Jeremy: *now unfrozen* same with me....

Dinah: *jumps* W-Where did you come from...?! D:

Jeremy: unfrozen, used my speed to get here...now go if ya wanna live..... me and my friend will hold em off.....

(Dinah quickly runs away.)

Temporal:Hey Jer :)

Jeremy: hey temp, no time to catch up, we got a battle to fight.

Chet: Grrr...!! You morons cost us one b****!

Jeremy: and I'd rather you not emss with women..... *starts throwing rapid fire eggs towards chet without ceasing fire*

Temporal:*Runs up to Chet and tail swipes him, causing his tail to hurt more then it did* Yelp

Jeremy: temp you go heal your tail, I got this

Temporal:You Sure?

Jeremy: yeah....I faced trolls like these before while protecting dismal, this is no different...but 1 extra troll *throws 25 ice eggs in the air* heheh they better duck and cover >:)

Temporal:alright *Walking away, while quietly yelping*

Jeremy: well trolls, your frozen meat now....but more like also tenderized also! >:) *gets a hammer* now for some smacks from a mallet *attacks toxic with his mallet*

Dinah Meets J and the Racers
(With J and the racers, they are sitting in front of the campfire (although not a real campfire and they are sitting in a circle) so they can camp in the woods)

Oliver: [chuckles] I wonder if Claude has become one with nature.

Claude: [far away from the group] I heard that! You do know I'm busy eating leaves!

Oliver: Just joking!

Sander: Since when does Claude eat leaves?

J: Maybe he's a vegetarian like me?

Sander: ...Not really, mate.

J: Oh. Okay.

Rick: Where did Giorgio and Ichiro run off to anyway?

Oliver: Probably looking for Claude.

(Meanwhile...)

Claude: [munching on leaves] I'll show Oliver what I can do...

Giorgio: [sees Claude] BOO!

Claude: !!! [jumps up and grabs the branch of a tree] GIORGIO!

Ichiro: [laughs]

Giorgio: What? Can't I see you feast on your snack?

Claude: Not while you two are sneaking up on me!

(Not too far away, Toxic and a few other Trolls are looking for Dinah...again.)

Mac: [to Toxic] So Dismutt became a little girl in distress?

Toxic: For now. His female form will split from him soon, though. In about 2 days.

Mac: [chuckles]

Chet: So let's hurry and find the b****!

Mac: Yeah!

(They keep walking, and eventually find her...she doesn't see them.)

Mac: There she is!

Dinah: ?

Toxic: *grins*

Mac: [cracks knuckles]

Tantrum: Why hello there, little girl!

Dinah: !! (turns around) *whimpering*

Tantrum: GET HER!

Mac: [rushes towards Dinah] HYAH!!

Dinah: AAAAAGH!! [runs]

Toxic: Just remember; we treat her a bit differently than we do Dismal...

(Both Tantrum and Mac are chasing Dinah. They eventually catch up to her when she trips.)

Tantrum and Mac: [grab Dinah's arms and pull her away; chuckling evilly]

Dinah: *yell of terror*

(They return to Toxic)

Mac: We got her, Toxic!

Toxic: Good...now then...what shall we do with her?

Tantrum: Rip out her guts and feed it to the vultures?

Toxic: [Slaps Tantrum] No, you idiot! Didn't I say we treat her differently?!

Mac: Boy, what's with you and ripping people's guts out lately -_-'?

Tantrum: [sweatdrops; sheepish chuckle]

Toxic: What we do with Dinah, see, is simply humiliate and embarrass her; like this! [rips off her skirt]

Dinah: NO!!

Mac: [laughs]

Chet: Hey Mac, spank her!

Mac: With pleasure! [spanks Dinah hard]

(She lets out a yowl of pain, and Toxic and Chet laugh.)

(Back with Claude, Giorgio and Ichiro...)

Ichiro: Saa, watashi ha kare ga sore o imi shi te i nai koto o kakunin yo! (Come on, I'm sure he didn't mean it!)

Claude: [sweatdrops] Right...

Giorgio: Let's head back to the camp.

Claude: [clears throat] Right.

(The three heads back to the camp where J, Sander, Oliver and Rick are. However...)

Claude: I heard a yell!

Giorgio: We gotta rescue someone!

Ichiro: Soshite hayai! (And fast!)

(The three rushes off to find the distress sound. They come upon Toxic, Chet, Tantrum, Mac and Dinah!)

Claude: [sees Dinah] What the--?

Giorgio: Who are you guys, spanking on an innocent girl?!

Mac: None of your business, stupid!

Chet: Yeah! Piss off!

Ichiro: Dare ga, baka o okora seru watashi tachi no koto o itte iru?! (Who are you telling us to piss off, moron?!)

Mac: [sweatdrops, confused] Uhhh.... what did he say?

Tantrum: I dunno, I don't speak Chinese.

[Dinah starts struggling to escape.]

Mac: [holds onto Dinah] What's the rush, little girl?! [spanks her again]

Dinah: AAAAHH!!

Claude: Hey, leaver her alone!

Mac: Make us!

Giorgio: Gladly!

(The three tackles Mac, Chet and Tantrum so Dinah can get free)

Mac and Tantrum: WAUGH!!

Chet: GAH!!

(Dinah runs, only to get caught by Toxic.)

Toxic: You're not going anywhere, girl...

(Back with J, Rick, Sander and Oliver...)

Sander: These mates haven't returned on here...

J: I'll go check it out. You three wait here. I'll let you know when there's any danger. Chaos Control!

(J teleports away and appears in front of the bush where he sees Dinah being held captive by Toxic)

J: [in a hush voice] Who is she...? Either way, Toxic's in for it now... [teleports away again]

(Back with Toxic and Dinah...)

Dinah: L-Let me go, Toxic...!!

Toxic: [puts a hand over her mouth] I don't think so...

(Toxic wasn't aware that J was stalking behind him before he covers Toxic's mouth with his hand and stabbing him deeply onto the back of his neck with his switchblade!)

Toxic: *muffled yell*

Dinah: !!!

(J continues to stab through the back of Toxic's throat with his switchblade before it goes all the way through his throat!)

Dinah: *screams*

J: [lets go of Toxic, as he falls to the ground "dead"]

(Dinah backs away, whimpering and shaking.)

J: [puts his switchblade away and looks at Dinah] Are you okay...?

Dinah: Uhhh....

J: Say... [looks at Dinah closely] you look a lot like Dismal... but a female version.

Dinah: *nod*

J: So what's your name?

Dinah: D-Dinah...

J: Dinah, huh? I'm J, and over there is Claude, Giorgio and Ichiro.

(The three has already defeated Chet, Mac and Tantrum before "disposing" of them away by tossing them into the river)

Dinah: Uhhh....o-okay....

J: [to Giorgio, Ichiro, and Claude] C'mon guys, let's get on outta here. [to Dinah] C'mon, let's get you to safety. [his hand out to her]

Dinah: ..........(hesitantly takes J's hand)

(J leads Dinah to the camp, where Sander, Rick and Oliver are waiting. Claude, Ichiro and Giorgio follow them)

Dinah: ...........

(They all arrive back to camp)

Rick: Hey, good to see you guys again!

Oliver: [sees Dinah, who is hiding behind J] Who is she?

J: She's Dinah.

Sander: Dinah?

J: Yup.

Giorgio: One less Trolls, one less problem.

Claude: Yeah...

(Dinah looks nervous...)

J: [looks at Dinah] It's okay. They're good guys.

Dinah: O-Okay...(suddenly remembers that she is skirtless) O///O

Oliver, Rick and Sander: ! [covers each others' eyes]

Claude: Giorgio and Ichiro: !! [also covers each others' eyes]

Dinah: (Backs away, covering her lower regions, shaking) I-I'm s-s-so s-sorry...!!

J: It's fine, Dinah. [takes off his jacket and gives it to Dinah so she can hide it]

Dinah: ........[hesitantly takes the jacket]

(The racers are still covering each others' eyes)