Roleplay:The Story of Burst the Hedgehog

&nbsp This is the story of a hedgehog who was born in a comet. My next ROLEPLAY. The story of this rp can be found on Burst the Hedgehog's page.

Rules
1: No Cussing (Damn Hell and Crap are exceptions)

2: No strong sexual situations. (Kissing and Making out are allowed, though)

3: Wait 3 minutes to edit.

Characters
Burst the Hedgehog

Sonic the Hedgehog

Luna the Hedgehog

Sammy Nooken

Cammie Stewart

Rocky the Rat

Finn the Wolf

Lizzy the Hedgehog

Knuckles the Echidna

Silver the Hedgehog

Jur the Hedgehog

Dana Solo

Emily the Seedrian

Suize The Cat

Fetalia the Dark

Shine the Hedgehog

Joseph teh Wolf

Brittney the Bat

Users (Will start RP after more users join)
Darkblood234

Cameron33268110 (Offline until block is over)

BunnieRabbot123

Chapter 1: In Lunatea, Before the Celestial Star strikes
(Celestial Star is slowly approaching Lunatea)

Sammy: Hey Cammie, what's that?

Cammie: I don't know.

Sonic: It's a comet.

Rocky: Wow!

Cammie: Cool.

Sonic: (Realizes that the comet is near Luna's house) Uh-oh! I'd better tell Luna! (Zooms off)

(At Luna's old house)

Luna:(Looks at the picture of her parents and her as a baby)

Finn: Nice place.

Luna: Thanks.

Sonic: (Tire screechng sound) Luna! Comet incoming!

Luna: Huh? (Goes to the window, sees the comet coming to her old house) Yikes! Let's bail! (Picks up Finn, zooms out of her house)

Chapter 2: A hedgehog?!
(Celestial Star imapcts, creating multiple firework explosions)

Sonic: Whoa.

Luna:(Puts Finn down, her family photo was about to hit the ground, but she catches it) Phew...

(A red hedgehog is in the comet)

Sonic: Whoa! Hey! Are you okay?

(No response)

Sonic: That's not good.

Luna: We gotta take him to a hospital! (Picks the red hedgehog up) Finn, you stay here. (Zooms off to a hospital)

Sonic: (Follows Luna)

(At Lunatea hospital...)

Luna:(Waits)

Burst: (Slowly wakes up) Huh? Where am I?

Luna: You're in Lunatea Hospital.

Sonic: You were inside that comet, so we rescued you.

Luna: Right.

Sonic: What was with that comet? Was it supposed to crash here?

Burst: I don't know.

Sonic: What's your name, pal?

Burst: My name's Burst. Burst the Hedgehog.

Sonic: You kind of look like Shadow.

Luna: Yeah. Except Shadow is black and red and you're all red.

Sonic: Got that right, Luna.

Burst: (Gets up.) Whew. How long was I out?

Sonic: About 7 days. Were you born in that thing?

Burst: I think so.

Sonic: OK. I'm Sonic. Sonic the Hedgehog. This is Luna. (Points at Luna)

Luna: Hello.

Burst: (Thoughts) Oh, my heavens! She's gourgeous! (No more thoughts): Hello. (Bows)

Sonic: That's a little too fancy, don'tcha think?

Luna: Yeah.

Burst: (Blushes) Sorry.

Sonic: It's ok, dude. Why don't we show you around Lunatea?

Burst: Sounds like a plan.

Luna: Okay.

Rocky: Oh come on, Sweetie Pie! Just once!

Cammie:(Tries to pull her legs off of Rocky's arms) Let go of me, you crazy rat!

Burst: What the--?

Sonic: Hey Cammie. Got a rat problem again?

Burst: Rat problem...?

Cammie: Rocky wants me to kiss him after I told him I don't want to.

Burst: I got this. (Uses telekinesis to lift Rocky out of Cammie's legs and it works)

Sonic: Whoa. Just like Silver.

Cammie: Thanks.

Sammy: How did you do that?

Burst: I guess I have telepathy. Plus, that guy must be obsessed with you, Cammie.

Sonic: Big time.

Cammie: He's been like that ever since the three of us met him at Snowy Mountain.

Sammy: And he speaks spanish.

Rocky: Si!

(A cat meowed in pain)

Cammie and Sammy:(Looked around)

Burst: What was that?

Sonic: Sounded like a cat.

Burst: I still support my last statement. You're an idiot, Rocky. Cammie will never like you.

Rocky: I didn't hear a cat, and how did you know my name?

Burst: I just guessed.

Sonic: This guy's cool. I say we take him back to Mobius with us.

Luna: That's a good idea.

Burst: (mind) Good thing they can't read my thoughts.

Sonic: I heard a cat... I'll go check it out. Burst, Rocky, Cammie, you guys stay behind.

Burst: Got it, Sonic.

Cammie: There is no cat. Me and Sammy keep hearing a cat meowed, but there isn't.

Sammy: That's how he say something in spanish.

Sonic: Hmm.

Burst: At least you didn't get to stay behind with Rocky, Cammie. Why exactly is he obsessed with you?

Cammie: I don't know. Because of my moves or his dad is the shop owner.

Burst: No matter what it is, he's got a real problem. No offense, Rocky.

Cammie: So I heard you were in a comet. Well, new people are new people. I'll show you around, just like I did to Sonic. Come on.

Burst: Ok. (Follows Cammie)

Sammy: Hey! Wait up! (Runs after Cammie)

Sonic: (Follows Sammy)

Luna:(Follows Sonic)

(Cammie shows Burst the cities in Lunatea: The Priestess Castle, The Night Carnival, Workers Town, Snowy Mountain, Hope Island, and Wish Tree)

Cammie: So? What did you think?

Burst: Cool city.

Sonic: Ya got that right.

Sammy: Glad you like it, Burst.

Chapter 3: Rocky's jealousy
Burst: (Mind) ''Cammie's a cool girl. I wonder why Rocky is obsessed with her. ''

Cammie: If you want to come here anytime, Sammy will get his plane and fly you over there.

Burst: OK.

Rocky:(Sees Cammie with Burst, got furious)

Sonic: Uh-oh. Look's like Rocky's jealous.

Burst: Hmm?

Sammy: I think he's becoming like Amy.

Sonic: Oh, tell me about it.

Burst: This isn't gonna end well.

Cammie: Ah.. Ignore the rat. He doesn't have a hammer. In fact, he doesn't know how to use a hammer.

Luna: She's got a point.

Burst: Eh. You're right. Besides, I can easily outmatch him.

Rocky: (Stops being furious) Uh... I'm a lover. Not a fighter.

Burst: Why are you even jealous?

Rocky: Cause I don't like guys being with Sweetie Pie like you.

Burst: (Flame appears in hand) What's that supposed to mean? There's nothing going on between Cammie and I.

Rocky: Yikes!

Luna: Wow. Your hand is in flames.

Burst: That happens a lot. (Puts fire out) As I said, Cammie and I are not in love. I'm actually in love with someone else.

Rocky: Oh good.

Cammie: And there is no way I'm Rocky's girlfriend. I'm 14 years old and his 22.

Sammy: And...... uh....... I'm...... uh..... kinda shy around girls.

Luna: Sometimes Rocky and Cammie argue about some weapons they wanted to use.

Sammy: And it drives me crazy.

Rocky: She will be my!

Burst: I don't remember how old I am. I think I'm 15.

Luna: You don't remember?

Burst: Not really.

Sonic: Rocky, you need to back off. Burst is in love with someone else.

Rocky: Yeah, I heard.

Sammy: I wonder who?

Burst: I don't think you wanna know. It's someone you guys know.

Sonic: Who is it, dude?

Luna: Come on, you can tell us.

Burst: (Mind) I can't let Luna know yet.

Sonic: He's thinking. Can anyone read minds?

Rocky: Nope.

Cammie; Not really.

Sammy: I don't think so.

Luna: Not at all.

Silver: I can. (Reads Burst's mind) Got it! He's in love with L--

Burst: (Stops Silver from talking)

Sonic: Is it Lizzy?

Knuckles: Is it Lou?

Sonic: Is it Luna?

Rocky: Maybe it's not an L word. Maybe it's pie.

Cammie:(Facepalms, shakes her head)

Burst: (Also facepalms) Are you some kind of idiot, Rocky? I am in love with someone whose first name begins with an "L". Chaos Control! (Disappears)

Sammy: He was born in a comet, has flames in his hands, and he can learn Chaos Control?

Rocky: Geez, that guy is really mysterious. I wonder what else he can do?

Chapter 4: The Love Mystery
Burst: (Appears in Downtown Lunetea) They won't find me here. (has photo of Luna) She must not know. Not yet.

(Back at hospital...)

Sonic: I wonder where he went.

Silver: (Searches for Burst) He's in downtown Lunatea.

Sonic: Let's get over there.

Knuckles: Yeah. I wonder who Burst is in love with. It better not be Rouge.

(Back with Burst)

Burst: The guys won't find me unless Silver is with them. They can't know that I love Luna.

Suize: Where is it? *Searches for Phantom Emerald*

Burst: (Sees Suzie) Hmm? Who's that?

Suize: That could tell the secerets to my past! Oh, where is it?

Burst: (sees a black Emerald nearby, picks it up.) Hey, is this what you're looking for?

Suize: Oh yes thank you!

Burst: Hey, it's no problem.

Suize: Hey, I was wondering what you were talking about eariler.

Burst: (blushes) It's nothing.

Suize: Oh really.......

Knuckles: Hey, Burst! Where are you, man?

Burst: It's Knuckles. Aw jeez.

Suize: The protecter of the Master Emerald.....Maybe I can sneak....Phantom Control!!!! *disappears*

Burst: Wow. That girl is mysterious... just like me. Gotta focus. Must keep secret love interest inside.

Suize: *Returns* I have alot power inside me now!

(The tree rustles)

Emily:(Pops up behind Burst) Hi.

Burst: Hey.

Suize: *A forgotten mermroy pops in Suize's mind* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!

Burst: What's up with Suzie?

Emily: Oops... Sorry. I didn't mean to scary your friend.

Suize: Patch......

Emily:(Gets down from the tree, to Suize) No. I'm Emily. I'm 11 years old.

Suize: Oh. im sorry. Anyway was saying something eariler........

Emily: Oh.. I thought you just got scared because I popped out of that tree.

(Back with the Others...)

Sonic: So... should we look for Burst? Silver found him with his mind.

Shadow: I heard what happened. Looks like that hedgehog doesn't want to you guys know who he likes.

Brittney: (flies around and sees the commotion) Huh?

Luna: Thanks, Shadow.

Silver: We should look for him. He's in downtown Lunatea now.

Brittney: (flies down) What's up?

Shadow: A friend of ours is somewhere in Lunatea, and he won't tell us who he loves.

Brittney: I see....

Sonic: It's someone who's name starts with "L".

Brittney: Hmm....

Joseph: (runs up) hey, Britt! What's up?

Brittney: Oh, hi Joey!

Shadow: That must be Brittney's boyfriend. Silver!

Silver: What's up?

Shadow: Can you get us to Burst?

Silver: I can only telelport you one at a time.

Joseph: (blushing a lot) Whoa whoa whoa! Back up! Whoever said I was her boyfriend?

(Back with Burst, Suize and Emily)

Burst: (sees Hospital) Looks like Brittney and Joesph joined the party. They are probably gonna make me talk, too.

Emily: Well, if you like Luna so much, why won't you just tell her?

Burst: How did you know I liked Luna? (Whispers:) Don't tell Suize, though.

Emily: I heard you up in the tree.

Burst: I see. I have got to learn to be more discreet.

???????: I feel the pain in your heart, kiddo.

Burst: Huh?

(a shadow sneaks in the place and a solid form is taken in a sexually attractive, yet dark female)

Fetalia: I'm in your shoes, in some sort of way, too.

Burst: Hmm... I wonder how. I'm Burst the Hedgehog.

Fetalia: I'm Fetalia...Fetalia the Dark....

Burst: Sounds mysterious. How are you in my shoes, Fetalia?

Fetalia: Because I feel something my own favor was unable to feel: love. And I don't understand it all. I can't comprehend why I feel these feelings--especially towards that boy....the boy who's the only one close enough to be considered...a friend. And I don't know how to tell him, or what the aftermath of the truth would bring. You seem to be in that same situation. You like that girl....but you can't tell her....because you're as afraid as I am.

Burst: I see.

Silver: (Appears) All right, Burst. You need to come back to the hospital. Luna is worried about you.

Burst: No way, Silver.

Fetalia: Huh?

Silver: Why? Luna's worried that something happened to you, Burst.

Fetalia: (This hedgehog....he looks very much like Shine.....I wonder if he's...)

Shadow: (Appears) Aren't you coming, Burst? (Looks at Fetalia) This looks like the daughter of Mephiles the Dark... Burst, let's go.

(Back at the Hospital...)

Joseph: Man....what's taking them so long?

Sonic: (Taps his foot impatiently) I'm getting a chili dog. (Walks down the hall.)

Brittney: (yawns)

Burst: (Appears in hospital) Looks like I beat Shadow and Silver here.

Sonic: (Eats the chili dog.) 'Bout time ya came back, Burst.

Brittney: I was getting kind of bored...

Burst: (Scratches his quills.) Sorry, everyone... something came up.

Joseph: Oh? Like what?

Burst: Argh. Do you really wanna know, or do you wanna know who I like?

JosepH: Well....kind of.

Brittney: i already know, dude, so don't bother.

Jospeh: Really? How?

Brittney: A girl's instinct! (winks)

Burst: How do you really know?

Brittney: I'm just that smart!

Joseph: (shrugs)

Cammie: Just tell us who you like!

Silver: Uh oh... is this gonna end well?

Shadow: I dont know.

Brittney: Relax, it'll be fine!

Burst: Uh... uh... Chaos Control! (Disappears)

Sonic: Aw, man! Where'd he go this time?

Shadow: I don't know but we're going after him!

Amy: Hey Guys!

Sonic: Oh no.

Shadow: Hi, Amy. We need your help.

Amy: Why? What's up?

Joseph: I'll find him! (runs out to try to find him)

Brittney: there goes my hero....he's so modest....(sighs happily)

Sonic: I'll help too! (Zooms off)

Amy: There goes my Sonic... (Sighs lovingly)

Cammie: Hey! You can't leave me here with the rat! (Chases after Sonic and Josh)

Sammy: And there goes our heroine

?????: (overhearing this).......if this happens, history'll be more corrupted than ever....and I'll dissengrate.....

(Really hope I spelled that right....)

Shadow: (hears) Show yourself.

?????: GAAAH!!!! (reveals himself) How'd you know I was there?!

Shadow: I have supersonic hearing.

?????: (sighs) Great.....sometimes, I just gotta keep my mouth shut!

Silver: Who are you?

?????: I'm Shine the Hedgehog. (This guy looks alot like me....what is up with that?)

Burst: Since you guys want to know... fine. Everyone, (except Luna) grab hands.

Sonic: Where are you taking us?

Burst: I'm telling you guys who I like. You wanna know or what?

Joseph: Yeah, I do.

Burst: Then join hands.

Joseph & Brittney: (look at each oher, blushing a bit, but hold hands)

Sonic: (Holds Amy's hand)

Burst: Chaos........CONTROL!

(Everyone except Luna and Rocky disappear)

Joseph: Whoaa.....what a rush! (dizzy)

Brittney: (almost as dizzy as Joseph)

Burst: This is a good place to tell everyone...

Silver: C'mon, dude. Spit it out.

{C Sonic: Come on, Burst.

Shine: You can trust us!

Burst: All right everyone, prepare yourself... I'm in love with Luna the Hedgehog.

Sonic: No way!

Shadow: What a shocker.

Brittney: I...knew it....(snaps out of her dizzyness)

Joseph: (does the same)

Knuckles: Cool.

Shine: (silent for a minute)

Silver: I knew it!

Joseph: (Now if only I were that brave....)

(Back with Luna and Rocky)

Chapter 5: Luna's Confession
Luna: Hey Rocky, can you keep a secret for me.

Rocky: Sure, what's the secret?

Luna: I think I'm falling in love with Burst.

Rocky: Really?

Luna: Yeah.

Rocky: That's pretty cool Luna.

Luna: Please don't tell everybody, including Burst.

Rocky: Secret safe with me.

Luna: Thanks Rocky. (Hugs Rocky)

???????: But are you sure he loves you too?

Burst: (Appears back at hospital) Hey, Rocky.

Sonic: (Has a chili dog) I followed him here.

Fetalia: Hmm?

Shadow: (Appears) Yo.

Fetalia: Huh? (gasps) Y-You!

Shadow: (Looks at Burst) What's up with her?

Burst: I don't know.

Shadow: Answer me this, hedgehog; why do you look like me?

Burst: I don't know. What's wrong, Fetalia?

Fetalia: My future....ruined....my dad....dead....and it's all thanks to you! (gets angered, and dark energy is sythoned from her hands)

Shadow: What? (Gasps) Mephiles... You're his daughter!

Burst: Hold on! Who is this "Mephiles" character?

Shadow: Her father. He killed Sonic 5 years ago and almost plunged the world into chaos!

Burst: Fetalia... is this true?

Fetalia: My father was Mephiles....and he's dead...you killed him. So now I'll RETURN THE FAVOR!!!! (shoots a beam of dark energy at Shadow)

Shadow: (Dodges the beam) Burst, do something!

Burst: I can't! I don't know who to believe!

Fetalia: (shoots a sphere of dark energy at Shadow) DIE!!!

Burst: (has a sudden thought) Ah! Wait!

Shadow: What?

Burst: I have a confession... its about your father, Fetalia.

Fetalia: What is it?

Burst: In the future that I came from, Mephiles is still alive. Shadow doesn't kill him.

Shadow: What--!?

Burst: And Sonic doesn't die, either. I can bring your father here. He's still alive...

Fetalia: In the future I'm from, Nazo and his army of Uber-Seedrians are near unstoppable and practically everyone and everthing is destroyed, including my father! How do I know I can trust you?

Burst: Because i'm not like him. (points at Shadow)

Shadow: Hmph. I'm outta here. (Teleports far away)

Fetalia: Prove it!

Burst: I'm not dark and brooding, I don't side with evil and I don't say "hmph." Your father exists in my time and he is a hero. Nazo doesn't exist, either. Is that proof enough?

Fetalia: Show me then!

Chapter 6: The REAL Truth
Burst: (Goes to his future)

Mephiles:... Hello Burst.

Burst: Sir Mephiles. Come with me, please.

Mephiles: Ok.

Burst: (returns)

Mephiles: Fetaila? Is that you?

Fetalia: (gasps) Father? (slowly approaches him)

Sonic: (eats chili dog) So, that's Mephiles, huh?

Burst: Yeah.

Fetalia: (tpouches Mephiles' face, to make sure he's not a ghost)

Burst: So ya see, Shadow didn't kill him. Mephiles is very much alive.

Fetalia: (teary-eyes and she gives her father a great hug)