Talk:Sonicboom (Broken Emeralds)/@comment-25083225-20180329175615/@comment-25083225-20180329210646

Ok, so first off, this page doesn't meet the standards of the wiki, so I'm guessing that the mods will delete it soon anyway, but

1. The idea isn't original. You just took the transformers concept and added a Sonic head.

2.  There's not much on the page, and 3/4 of whatever's there doesn't even have to do with the "original" character itself, as you outline which robots match up with other sonic characters.

3. There's zilch about what's important in a character: personality, backstory, physical appearance, abilities/powers, etc. Since there's no main page that encompasses the plot and explains everything, this tels me that this was just a half-baked idea.

4. There's not really any plot information about the project itself, it simply says that Ivobots are bad and Desegacons are good and they fight.

5. The grammar and page formatting is atrocious. Why do you have paragraphs written in a header format? Why is Tails/Laserbeak  bolded and in a header when everyone else isn't? Half of Shadow's name is in allcaps. Broken Emerald should be italicized because it is the name of a fictional series. Many sentences don't have their first letter capitalized.