User blog:NikkieJay/what comes from an idea

So I turned that dream into an idea and though I'm just starting it I think I've got some good stuff so far.

It was greatest black out of our time or so it had seemed. In 2090 A huge thunderstorm had whipped out all things electronic in the world. Everyone was in panic our world of technology had crash and we were left to die at the hands of nature. One Company had their own back up that some how made it through the thunderstorm, but by the time they could get themselves up and running it was too late. Many people had already died from the causes of nature. In this new world those without families had to work in the factories that were built to keep our world in order. Over time if you were not born into a family with money you were force to work in a factory if caught outside of the factory and not working you were taken away to meet your fate...death.

Born in this terrible world Kallen and her friends are all orphans and have been working in a factory for as long as they can remember. They watch from Camp C as a new kid has joined the group, he looks to be 17 and its said he has no record of any family. His dark brown hair that appears black covers his face as his blue eyes are glued to the ground. The men in suits with their sunglasses don't say a word as the drag the boy into Camp D. Camp D is the one place you don't want to get set in as the factory is broken up into 4 sections. Camp A the people on the Northern side of the factory, Camp B the Eastern, Camp C the Southern, but camp D is western, the most open landed factory area. If you go there you can plan on getting beat every second you look out at the open land. Though everyone dreams to see that open land, the price to see it is one not many are willing to pay. Yeah you could make a break for it, but the second you step out of the factory gate you'd die from Mother Natures cruelty or so it is said.

Kallen watches the Camp D doors shut as the others go back to work. "Kallen you'd better get back to work, break isn't till another hour" one of the orphans whispers. "Oh..right" Kallen whispers with her eyes still glued on the door.

So what do you think so far? I don't have a name for it yet..I was never good at naming.